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The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

I am so disappointed in Edward.  What a man-whore.  Just a new freshies club for him.  I hope Bella gives some serious ass kicking to him and cuts him off from sex.  I hope he suffers greatly.  I don't like this Edward at all.

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40836
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Initiation

Poor Eddie.  What is he thinking not safewording earlier? I'm excited to read about their first interaction as B/E

Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The ER

Does Edward have a wife already and that's why he's so anti-marriage with Bella?  An entire family?  Sounds to me like he's cheating...hotel charges, odd phone calls, odd behavior...hmmm.  Please hurry and get more plot out.  I really hope Bella doesn't wind up too broken because of whatever he's doing.



Author's Response:

The next chapter isn't far away, I promise and it's very BUSY! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: What He Said

I have to say, I don't think Bella and Edward should be together.  He clearly didn't tell her all about him in the 9 years they were together.  Then he cheats on her with someone like Tanya?  They deserve each other.  What could Edward possibly have to say to Bella to make this all okay?  I'm not to sure I trust James either.  Poor Bella, my heart breaks right along with hers.

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Eyewall

Ok, first of all, did Bella even look at the child to see if it resembled Edward?  And Edward?! WTF was he thinking taking the girl he cheated on Bella with to the wedding? Why does Tanya think this is her business, and Edward is adament it's not?  If he can spout to Bella how he still wants her in front on Tanya, then I doubt they are together.  Maybe they became friends and Tanya needed to talk to James??  I'm pulling at straws here.  Bella needs to leave the hospital and take a road trip by herself.  Take some time away from men and just enjoy life for a while.  Screw everyone else.

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Family Consensus

I'm glad Bella got her point across in the email.  She needed to ask why.  Why did he even cheat?  Why did he bring Tanya and baby to the wedding?  So it seems Parker is Eddie's baby.  I wouldn't even consider getting back with him.  It would crush me everytime I had to see him and be reminded of the affair. 

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Confessions

I can't believe he has the nerve to ask her to give him another chance! WTF Edward?! What a fucking coward, instead of talking to her, he fucks the skank?  I wouldn't take him back.  I don't think Bella could handle seeing Parker being reminded that he cheated on her and hurt her so much.  He made his bed, it's time for him to lay in it.  I'm glad he's miserable. 

Barely Breathing by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A love taken for granted, we don't always realize what we have until it's gone. "They say bad things happen for a reason and I'd like to believe that's true." A story about realizing what's important. Edward & Bella AH


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7720 Read Count: 2620
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 09 Oct 2010
Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm glad you wrote a story where Edward pulls his head out of his ass, instead of cheating or just ignoring it.  I realy liked this story



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Thanks so much for taking the time to read! I really wanted a story where they were adults acting like adults.

xo
Jaime

Parasite by fallanydeeper Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a young woman who has struggled living through her world of drug abuse. This one shot shows the struggles and heartache she has faced over the past two years.

This is an intense and quite upsetting story, so please be warned before you read.

Rated for language, lemons and suggestion of rape.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8322 Read Count: 265
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

1st review! This story was so sad, but really well written and great concept!  It sucks reading a story without EXB HEA but, I really did love this.  Shows what drugs to do you. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm sorry there was no HEA but then again, life doesn't always have a happy ending and I wanted to write something that was real. I'm glad you liked it.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389628
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

Great chapter! So glad to see the scene finally! Loved the lemons!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

What's even worse, is that Jacob was there documenting him that night! What an ass, feeling sorry for himself, stroking his ego.  All because his girlfriend was sick! Ass, he doesn't deserve her, and he just ruined everything.  I feel sick thinking about how this will hurt Bella.  Manwhore, drug addict, asshole



Author's Response:

Such strong feelings and words for my poor Edward ;) hahaha

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Looking over the summary, and how Edward's life is ruined, it makes me wonder....does Tanya wind up pregnant?  That would definitely ruin his life.  Still not sure how her career is ruined, but I guess we'll see. 

Oh Edward...what are we going to do with you?  Thinking no one will ever find out.  Such a fool



Author's Response:

Hmm..interesting theories.  We shall find out soon ;)

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Edward....you silly boy.  Do you really think you got away with it?  We have yet to hear from Jacob; and Bella's a pretty bright girl, already questioning the drugs.  I can't wait to read how far Edward will go before the truth comes out.  I can honestly say, I don't see a HEA in this.  Maybe 5 yrs. down the road, but I couldn't forgive him for all he's done.



Author's Response:

I love your observations!  Jacob was actually going to be my next chapter :)  I won't tell you if you're right or not with the HEA b/c I don't think you were asking for the spoiler - but I will say you make a valid point about making it hard to forgive him.  If you do want to know if its a HEA just let me know :)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh Edward! You are such a fool! I hope she breaks up with him over this, and then finds out the truth about him and Tanya. I really don't want her and Jacob together either. I hope she shows how independent and strong she really is and moves on. Then maybe down the road after his life has fallen apart they get to know e/o again.

Author's Response:

Well the good thing is you do eventually want them to get back together :)

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well, that's not good.  How old are they again?  Bella is coming across as very immature during this part.  I get that Edward is trying to make his wrong a right, but he did say some pretty hurtful things about her.  Keep em coming!



Author's Response:

Bella's 24yrs old - but you're absolutely right, she was very immature in this chapter.  When all is said and done, she'll have to take responsibility for her actions as well.

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

He may be depressed, but he really hasn't learned shit.  Good for Bella, stay strong! I absolutely LOVE this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  Within the next two chapters things will begin to turn around for Edward.  Bella's POV will be next.

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Finally, she finds out the truth!  And it's so much worse that it wasn't from Doucheward!  The story is only halfway done?  Oh boy, Edward hasn't hit rock bottom yet, has he?  Still trying to figure out how his life is ruined....still praying T doesn't wind up preggo.  What a terrible set of parents they would be, lol.  Overdose maybe?



Author's Response:

I think Edward is already ruining his life with the choices and actions he's taking...but you are on the right track with one of those guesses ;)

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This is for Ch. 19....I really hope that he OD's and learns the hard way how to climb back up.  Him having a baby with Skankya, may not ruin his life, per se, but at least the next 18 years.  At the rate he's hitting those drugs, an OD may not be too far off in the future for him. 

How many more chappies until his rock bottom?? 



Author's Response:

Hmm maybe 3-4?  Next chapter is all Bella's POV with the confrontation (I'm already halfway through writing that - it's so easy to write an angry Bella haha!).  Edward's will be after that.  I'll probably focus a little less on Edward after that while I show Bella struggling to find her indentity without Edward and gain her own independence.  There's only so much self-hating, guilty, drunk Edward you can write until something big happens to him to change that ;)  I definitely want to get Carlisle and Esme in there at some point kicking some ass too haha.

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Love it!! I am so glad to see her standing up for herself and being strong.  Her heart is breaking but she still stands strong.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I definitely couldn't let her forgive him.  That wouldn't do justice to either of their characters.  Bella deserves her integrity and a chance to stand on her own.  And Edward needs to get back on his feet and admit he has a problem.

Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Has Edward really gone back to womanizing?  Ugh, not the way to win her back.

It's good to see Bella trying to be strong.  It took so much strength to cut all ties with him, especially with those messages he left. 

 



Author's Response:

You'll find out in the next chapter if he really has or not ;)

Summary:

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After years away, Bella is returning to a place she thought she'd left behind and a man she thought never wanted to see her again. Love often comes when you least expect it. There are lies that need to be confessed and secrets to reveal.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146616 Read Count: 43647
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 Jun 2011
Reviewer: sun_lover Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I just started reading this and I love it!  I can't understand why you have such few reviews.  Keep up the great work!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I've only had it posted here at TWCS for about a week. I had only been posting on ffn before, so that's part of the reason, I guess. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

 

Thanks for the review.