Reviews by rbsschess
Saving Bella by Mynxi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 330]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89650
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Nov 2010
Reviewer: rbsschess Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I think Bella's reaction to Esme is understandable.  Esme has always told Bella she is a daughter to her.  Parents aren't suppose to choose one child over the other and definitely not leave one alone and in danger.  When you abdandon your child like that you shouldn't expect to step back into their life like it never happened.

Love this story!!



Author's Response:

EXACTLY!!! What you said *giggles* Yes, they did choose one child over the other and abdandoned Bella...*wags finger* Bad Cullens very very bad Cullens. I'm so glad you understand Bella's side and thank you for that!

Also thank you for the review and I'm happy you are loving the story!

xoxoxoxoxo
Mynxi & Jasper

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40825
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: rbsschess Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club

I really like this story and want it to continue.  If hope at some point Tanya is called out for hte shit she is doing.  Violating a hard limit like that and forcing him to leave her should get her thrown out of the community.

I know Carlisle made her change the scene - I shudder to think how bad it could have gotten and I find myself hoping he didn't know how bad it would get.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing and for moving your review to the right chapter ;-)

And acts like Tanya's should indeed have consequenses, we'll have to wait and see how that goes.

Thanks for reading!