Reviews by marijee
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995704
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Yes! Let's hope it's over for Bella and she and Edward can move on and be happy. I am sure Bella can't totally turn her feelings off about the past...but she can let of the pain and move forward.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I understand  Carlisle's sadness. Even though Alice was an adult and not living at home...marriage makes it permanent.

So Bella seems to be doing better after her talk with Charlie. I wonder if she will ever read Renee's letter.

Yay! Bean is born!

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this first chapter. I have just started watching Dancing With the Stars this year and I like it. (Yeah, I'm a little slow to catch up on stuff! LOL!) I can't wait to see what goes on behind the scenes.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jessica cracked me up. I do hope that Bella keeps an open mind. Should be interesting.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well their first meeting went off well. They are even teasing each other. Enjoying!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella and Edward really have a lot in common. Both committed themselves to their talent at an early age. At least Edward got to experience High School and school friends. Enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Looks like Edward's family is excited about him being on the show. Where are Bella's parents? Enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am enjoying watching these two growing fonder of each other. Bella puts up a fuss, but she's liking handsome Edward.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yay! They got through their first dance. Looks like they will have to work a bit to take the lead...but third isn't bad. Enjoying your story!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward is getting into this! Enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Enjoyed.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

A little confusing with the flashbacks. But it was ok.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The red carpet was fun. Bella and Edward are both trying to figure out what they really are to each other...they need to talk!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yay, they finally kissed...blame it on the rumba! LOL! Enjoying.

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106330
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pretty hot first chapter! LOL!

I liked getting the backstory on Kate and Emma's birth. It would be a tough thing to have a child with someone you didn't love. Both were busy with medical school and someone had to take it on. Good for Edward.

Sounds like Bella's family (mother) are a bit unconventional and she has to deal with a flaky mom. Well Bella put herself right out there for Edward...and he happily accepted. I wonder how this will go. They do have distance between them. Enjoyed.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Enjoy the way you write this magnetism that Bella and Edward feel for each other. It's very physical, but I see that they are feeling a bit more for each other than just lust. Sounds like Edward will be visiting soon.

Enjoy the way you have brought the other characters into the story. Rose does seem to be a real bitch...but she loves Emma. Emmett cracks me up...loud hockey player that he is. Jasper is funny and definetely a mediator. Looking forward to reading on!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So what is Bella's relationship with Jacob...he sounds like an asshat. Bella is so good with Emma. Edward kind of freaked out when he saw Emma on the counter...but she could have fallen off. So I guess, I understand his rant. So everyone seems to see the way these two look at each other...yes the chemistry is really there! I wonder how they will deal with distance. Hopefully they will talk and start learning about each other. Enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well, I guess we knew it would be hard for these two to be parted... So is Jake married to Leah? Bella is having an affair with him? Bella does have emotional intimacy issues. Jacob can't be hers...so he's safe. Is that why she's disregarding Edward? Edward is so ready to be with Bella. But Bella is just 19 and Edward has his med schooling to complete. Oh and holy hell Kate is there. Ugh!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh damn! Why hasn't Edward listened to his phone messages? Naturally, I think that bringing Kate back into Emma's life is wrong. It's pretty obvious that Kate wants the whole 'family' deal...including Edward. I'm with Rose and Alice. Oh and why didn't Edward tell Bella about Kate last nite....gah! Bella feels betrayed. She doesn't have all the information...Edward better call!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella's relationship with Mike really sucked...he betrayed her and her freinds betrayed her. Bella closes herself off in pain...poor Bella. Yeah, Edward kind of did a thing on Bella, but I hope she eventually calls him. If she breaks it off with Edward, instead of trying to get her back he may just fall into Kate. Yuck! Enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love your Jasper...he really got Bella to make the decision to call Edward. She wanted to...but Jasper gave her that boost of confidence. I wonder when Bella will tell Edward about Mike and the abortion? Edward knows, I am glad he's waiting for her to tell him and that they are trying to take it slow. Emma is so cute! So is Kate really backing off of Edward? She wants to watch Emma...I would worry about that, I guess. Enjoying!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am glad they talked and Bella told Edward about the abortion. She was only 16...a kid having a kid...Edward is right...all that happened in the past brought them to the present. Edward said he loved Bella and she loved him. So will Edward get the internship in PA? Poor Drunkella! LOL!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope that Bella cleans up her drinking. I hope it's just the momentary depression over Edward. Edward doesn't need that, especially with the way Kate just acted. Sounds like she's back to using. I love how concerned Carlisle is about Bella and her relationship with Edward and Emma. After Kate who wouldn't be? I hope that Edward gets his internship in PA and that he and Bella keep talking. They still have a lot to go over. enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Love this twist. I briefly thought that Kate would try to take Emma when she was so pissed about Edward taking her to Philadelphia...but I thought she took the money for drugs. Way to surprise me! Oh and Bella came to support Edward. Yes! I hope they find Emma soon, Edward is already falling apart. Loved the way you wrote his emotions.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope that Riley turns Kate in. Though it has been two weeks, so it doesn't seem as though he will. I am glad Bella is there for Edward. Poor little Emma. At least Kate didn't tell her that Edward was dead. Will Emma try to escape and find her daddy? enjoying.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Kate has got to screw up some way. Poor Emma thinks her Daddy doesn't want her anymore. Sad. Bella being pregnant is so bittersweet for them. It would be hard to be happy when your first baby has been kidnapped. I hope they get her back soon.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So was it Riley that turned Kate in? If it is I hope they catch him too. I am glad they have Emma back. I hope she adjust ok to all of this.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I thought it was going to take time for Emma. Kate hurt her terribly and as a 4 year old she just doesn't understand. I am glad that Bella trys to stay positive. It's difficult when you are constantly being rejected. It's tough for all of them.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella and Edward are just not getting any breaks are they? Bella bought the dog to make Emma happy and then she won't talk to her the next day... Edward is stressed by work and money and now feeling he has to pick up even more at home because of Bella's condition. How can Bella not be stressed? This has been an awful year for them. Sigh!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Sometime we forget that Bella is only 19 yrs old....she is tempting fate with her denial. Preeclampsia can be so dangerous. To her and the baby. Damn. More problems...no insurance now. Why couldn't her parents pay the COBRA until their grandbaby was born?! They suck! I can only imagine all the stress these two are facing...I'm stressed and I'm just reading! LOL!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think mothers of preemie babies have a tendency to feel guilty because they didn't deliver a term baby. Please don't have Bella go through baby blues! I am glad that Edward came to his senses...even if it had to be yelled into him.

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am glad this story ended on such a good note. It was hard to read the last couple of chapters...I thought they would never get through it all! Bella said it right about being imperfectly perfect. I enjoyed how you wrote this last chapter through the years. I enjoyed your story overall...but got a little weighted down with all the stuff that happened to them. I'm a wuss! Thank you for writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I really enjoyed reading your story. Loved your Bella! Thank you for writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142597
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue

I enjoyed your story about Coffee Girl and Eddie. It was very sweet, and yet it had drama and tension to keep things exciting. Thank you for writing!

Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Outtake

I enjoyed getting Edward's POV of the first meeting between him and his Coffee Girl!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella Cullen is at home in Washington State. She's a middle school teacher, missing her husband, who is deployed in Afghanistan. It's been over a year since she's last seen her husband and this will be the second Christmas in a row that he will miss, with no luck in sight of his request of leave being approved. Her only wish is for her husband to be safe, in her arms, on Christmas.

Across the globe, Edward Cullen is working his hardest to grant his wife's wish of being home for Christmas. He also wants to tell her, face-to-face, that after his tour of duty is over, that Edward would be returning home. Permanently. Will he be able to make it home to his beautiful wife?

 

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Banner by Chandrakanta!! Thank you! 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Bella's Christmas Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15455 Read Count: 6336
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2013 Updated: 24 Dec 2013
Reviewer: marijee Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed your story! Perfect Christmas tale! Hope you and yours have a wonderful Christmas and a Happy New Year!