Penname: 1PETRALOUISE [Contact] Real name: Sahri Marshall
Member Since: 11 Apr 2015
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Reviews by 1PETRALOUISE
Summary:

Isabella, desperate for a job after college agrees to move across the country to apply to be governess for two young children. She soon finds out that the Cullen Estate and the Master that resides within are dark and frightening. For the sake of her charges, she must attempt to find a way to reach the heart of the man who looks at her as no more than a servant. Read warning!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81972 Read Count: 46050
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Jun 2018
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

👐👐👐👐👐

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Can't catch a break

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

She's going to have some good response that will throw him off

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 02 May 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

She's got fire

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 07 May 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Crazy chapter I loved it can't wait for her to be told this secret I am so lost at what it could be and I love that 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

👐👐👐👐👐

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This story always has so many great twist I never know where your going to go and I love that.

Summer Love by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 353]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella Swan’s last summer before starting college is here. Charlie Swan encourages his daughter to let loose and live. What happens when the town’s notorious bad boy comes back? Will he sweep her off her feet?

Banner by: Deebelle1

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25488 Read Count: 73658
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2015 Updated: 29 Apr 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was sweet

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet start 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LLove that you posted so soon 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

When does Jessica not want Edward

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

😍😊

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

your mean lol

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What's the age difference an bellas never had a boyfriend 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hmmmm 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Such a tease 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Last two charles were great you could go so deep with them

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Its a great read

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Crazy

SoCal by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 146]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Being with them wasn't the problem, but losing me was. A life filled with sandy beaches and sunshine, I felt safe here. Nothing bad ever happens in SoCal, except maybe bad Mexican food. Or so I thought. This isn't your everyday love story. Based on the movie Savages.

 

For Annie, an Edward, Bella, Jasper- polyfic    

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114201 Read Count: 34637
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2015 Updated: 12 Aug 2016
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This has been a great story so far can't wait for the next chapter sooooo please please post soon

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So worth the wait

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This whole chapter was just great

poision high by storm16 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

what if there was more then one supernatural creature? What if there was a school? and bella had a back bone...lemons ...slash...and more first story please be honest Paul/Bella/Jake pairing


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1712 Read Count: 122
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2015 Updated: 27 Apr 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like the twist hope to read more

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is an alcoloic who hits rock bottom. One day, his sister Alice is handed a card - Only Call if Desperate & ALL Else Has Failed. She makes the call that will change her brother's life, and a few others along the way.

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Categories: Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: mamih's favorites
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 285492 Read Count: 29711
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2015 Updated: 07 Jul 2017
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Call

Cool set up love the I don't take carp Bella looking forward to reading more soon I hope 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Summary:

There's a place in Volterra, Italy that is a castle of horrors. In this castle we will, apparently, find anything and everything we have ever looked for. Sexual deviants with fetishes, criminals who are sentenced to die a slow and torturous death, they even have an area where you could possibly find your mate, as well as human trafficking.


Categories: Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Crossover
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17804 Read Count: 2133
[Report This] Published: 20 May 2015 Updated: 22 Sep 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like that you have put together a different set of siblings great twist.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hope you are enjoying the story!!! You'll find I like to shake things up a bit!! Hope you are ready for one hell of a ride!

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I so hope you post soon this is a great story

Hungry Eyes by BelleMoon Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner of Bella and Jasper kissing with the title

 

Anyone who tells you that they talk with people whom others can't see is assumed to be insane; not so for Isabella Dwyer, a Spirit Witch. The Dwyers are one of the most powerful families of Spirit Witches left in the world after centuries of witch hunting. While it's uncommon for witches to marry and have children with normal humans, also known as Mundanes, it's very normal for witches to leave their Mundane partner if the child is a witch to protect both child and mundane. This is the case with Bella. Her mother left her mundane father when Bella's abilities began to show.

Bella grew up in Phoenix in a coven of witches with her mother...until five years ago when her mother was killed. Now she is forced to live with her mundane father after a custody battle with the leaders of the coven, the guardians as stated by Renee's will. Upon arriving in Forks things become more strange for Bella than she expected. Her nights are haunted by nightmares, leaving her screaming and confused.

What is this mystery unfolding before her? Could her life really be at stake? What part does the local vampire seethe play?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper, Edward/Alice
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7342 Read Count: 1678
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2015 Updated: 30 Aug 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--Departure

Want to see where you take this story

Love Will Find A Way by mjpilar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Can Bella moving to Seattle help her and Edward find something that neither think they good enough to have. It is a little thing called love.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25290 Read Count: 12132
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2015 Updated: 25 Sep 2017
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Glad your move went well and welcome back

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh Edward think think 



Author's Response:

He will come to his senses at some point. I just have to figure out how.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 30 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Could go deeper



Author's Response:

They will at some point I just wanted them to get the "I have feelings" out of the way

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 29 May 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Your getting a good flow keep at it



Author's Response:

Thanks again. I have been playing around with it to find a good flow hopefully I can work out the kinks

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 28 May 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Your other story I can be your daddy,daddy's sweet girl. The last two chapters were good



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my story. I hope you come back again.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Last two chapters were great you got deeper nice job

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 24 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I will be back to read I hope Edward is older and has a daddy fetish 



Author's Response:

We shall see how this plays out for our 2 love birds. If it doesn't happen in this story I have ideas for a daddy kink runnibg through my head. I will start working on that one soon. Thanks for reading my story.It is my first ever and i just hope people like it.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Sweet



Author's Response:

Thanks I  hope you  come back for the rest of the story 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 25 May 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well I did come back to read the next chapter and like what you have so far. I also hope you put that daddy kink story down for us to read looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks for comming back. As for the daddy kink I am working it out in my head and hope to have a rough draft to sort out in the next couple of days so stay tuned for that. As for this story my idea is kind of shifting on how it plays out but I will tell you there will be lemons for evryones lemonaide. thanks again and I hope you like the next chapter.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you are enjoying both my stories

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Work for it then jump him

Summary:

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48344 Read Count: 27716
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 17 Dec 2019
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Still up for the crazy ride

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 27 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

🎉🎉🎉

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The twist was great didn't see Edward and Bella married coming would have made Edward a little Older but that's just me hope you post again soon

Chocolate by vampiregirl93 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Chocolate

Twenty-three-year-old college student Bella Swan has an unhealthy obsession with the ecstasy peddler who goes to school with her. Everything about him invites her in; his voice, his face, his smell, even his drugs. This is what happens when you get caught stalking Edward Cullen.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8599 Read Count: 2556
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2015 Updated: 09 Jun 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Ride

He's toast

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Death Sentence

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Fucked

You have me interested 



Author's Response:

I'm glad :-)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chocolate Boy

Different take I like it want to read more



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. Bella's POV is very interesting for me to write ;) I've never written a character quite like her before so I hope she's somewhat enjoyable

The Body by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 336]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has a fetish that no one else in the world knows about. Except the thousands of followers on his anonymous blog. What happens when Bella works out who 'The Body ' is.

Ths was my submission to the twkink 2015 fest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121593 Read Count: 136532
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2015 Updated: 19 May 2017
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: The Body

Could see more to this story like rose and Emmet getting in on the action



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I'm concentrating on my other story at the moment but never say never x

Summary:

Rosalie Hale is a single mother trying to escape her past. After moving away and getting a fresh start she thinks she's done just that until she gets a mysterious envelope. Someone knows her secrets and is threatening to reveal them unless she does everything he says. (This story contains adult themes, and may contain rape or other forced sexual situations)


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2530 Read Count: 12246
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2015 Updated: 13 Jun 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Crazy chapters

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What's he up to

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Crazy

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

😊

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh so not the fun loving emmit that we know and love I like it please post soon

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Your a tease with these short chapters post soon



Author's Response:

I am a tease. I'll respond tomorrow with another one!

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 26741
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter looking forward to your next post again I hope this story goes on for awhile 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The story is great hope u go longer the the few chapters you have set

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love Lucy's sassyness can't wait for her to meet Edward but I hope that she and emmit become best buds 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love rose

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great job

Sharp Left Turn by fyrebyrd89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 295]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In an instant your life can take a sharp left turn. Can you find the strength to lose it all and gain the unknown? Lives will be shattered, including your own.  

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155558 Read Count: 59979
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2016
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 11: No Passing

Love the back and forth banter between them



Author's Response:

Thank you and it not sure to stop anytime soon. Edward's on a mission! See you Monday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 12: One Way

Sweet.. the substitute words are to funny



Author's Response:

Yeah, there was no wau this Edward was getting by without learning that lesson lol. Thanks so much, see you tomorrow :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Green Light

Oh yea oh yea 



Author's Response:

LOL, oh yeah, it's time ;) Thanks so much for stopping in! :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Slippery When Wet

can't wait



Author's Response:

Thank you! Up next the family descends. Let's see how that goes. Thanks so much! See you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Under Construction

This is a great story post soon



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I post every five days, so i'll be seeing you on Wednesday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

Nice



Author's Response:

Thank you! Tough times ahead, going to post new chapter now :) 

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 20: No Thru Traffic

Love hot headed Edward



Author's Response:

Mmmm hmmm. hot, angry Edward is sext smexy. Big news coming next chapter! See you then :)

Fyre

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Slow, Children Playing

Love how big daddy Charlie so protective of his family



Author's Response:

Charlie is, well, Charlie LOL. We'll get more from him later on. See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Summary:

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Edward has always wanted Jasper, but how could he ever hope to gain the attentions of such a beautiful man?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1051 Read Count: 529
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2015 Updated: 18 Jun 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Could see this story going further would love that I loved the none verbal twist and bring ASL into the mix I wish more stories world bring the deaf aspect of life into there stories would love to read a Asl story if you ever wrote one



Author's Response:

Hi 1Petralouise :) Thank you so much for your review.  I know what you mean - and though I don't have any plans to write a story based on the deaf aspect, I'd sure love to read one too. Thanks for your comments :D Lisa.

Summary:

 

Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 118944
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love it 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

👐👐👐👐 love this story

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So many choices but Tia's gotta go

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh Edward really

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh man is he in trouble

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

We need to hear what Bella is thinking in regards to Edward

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh my goodness 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This build up is killing me I Love It

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This chapter was filled with so many treats. Love it

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Who's the bear for hmmmm I wonder

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love that Emmet is Edward's son that's going to be vary funny

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Can't wait for dear old daddy Edward to meet Bella and how is Emmet going to take it... please post soon you have me on the edge

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Please be real

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter you connected most of the dots think Emmet knew his dad could only take so much.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Such a great story they have to hook up soon and Edward has to find out about rose and Emmet.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This was a great story as always I love reading your post. Looking forward to what's coming .

Renovations by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary:

Renovations

Banner by Mina! 

 

Isabella Swan, thirty-six, is reeling from her recent divorce from the man she thought she would be spending her forever. Her mind and heart shattered, Bella purchases a home, but in need of repair near Seattle. Bella hires two men, Edward and Garrett to complete the repairs of her new home. Will these men renovate Bella's new home or is more in store? AU/AH Full Summary inside.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28282 Read Count: 69764
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 30 Aug 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope Garrett is really dirty in the bedroom

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Looking forward to reading more post soon

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It's getting rather hot in the kitchen

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love the good banter between the guys.. and that Garrett says what he knows Edward is thinking but would never say

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh my gosh need a shower

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh indeed 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Mmnmm pop 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So hot can't wait for more I hope Garrett is the dirty talking kind and are both bring a deep seeding kinky side to Bella that she never knew she had... 

 

 hope for your next story you write a dirty daddy little girl with a good age difference. Just a thought

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forward to reading more post soon

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love that you posted so soon.. Can't wait to meet the boys

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I hate having to wait 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Each chapter gets better and better loving it all

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love this story

Summary:

Written for the TwiKinkFest Challenge


Prompt: #90 Bella feels bad that her father is lonely endeavours to do something about it. If he won't sleep with any of the numerous women she throws his way, perhaps he'll sleep with her? Incest. No angst. No guilt. Submitted by Anonymous.



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Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11937 Read Count: 6029
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2015 Updated: 07 Jul 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: A Step You Can't Take Back

I would love to read more of this you did a fantastic job



Author's Response:

I may be tempted to add some more to this due to how unexpectedly popular it got

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 94224
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

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Author's Response:

Saturday will be here before you know it!  Hope you liked the pictures and chapter :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Can't wait 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Hope you'll continue to like it :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Our First Christmas

Such a great chapter