Reviews by 1PETRALOUISE
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 15: The Modern Fairytale Part I

loved the reference to the princess bride

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389383
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Oh my goodness I was so excited to see your post it's been to long and the end was awesome.

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44756
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This is a great story 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 05 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Just read what you have and loving it I hope you post soon

Summary:

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The scene takes place during Eclipse, prior to the impending battle. Bella lays freezing unable to generate enough heat to sustain her survival, Edward looks on helpless and desperate.

Can Edward and Jacob form an unlikely alliance to give Bella what she needs to see her through the night?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4115 Read Count: 2205
[Report This] Published: 12 Sep 2011 Updated: 12 Sep 2011
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story would love to read more of the three of them 

The Purfect Mate by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A dirty little one shot....

Bella, a  frustrated veterinary student takes matters into her own hands whilst observing her feline subjects, enter Edward just as things are coming to a climax.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4622 Read Count: 2754
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2011 Updated: 29 Oct 2011
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh you should add to this story

Summary:

KC - Let the Rain Come Down

Summary: Rejected by the world around them, they lead lonely, isolated lives, focusing solely on basic survival. All it takes is one single act of kindness to open the door to their new tomorrow... together. 

WARNING - Adult themes

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 121309 Read Count: 8314
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I hope that you keep writing this story, would love to read more

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Happy happy to see this new chapter can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think esme has something up her sleeve

Summary:

KC - All I Want to Hear 2

 

Summary: A voice can change everything; it can consume your waking hours and weave its way into your dreams. In the end, what happens when it's all you want to hear?

 

WARNING - Adult themes

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Carlisle (Slash)
Genre: Angst, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61556 Read Count: 6257
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 09 Oct 2018
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I do hope you post soon

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 922818
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 81

It was so great to see your story posted again I hope you post soon

The Follower by MareyahJ Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Bella is a stripper that has a stalker.  One night the stalker followed her home.  That was a night he will never forget.

This story was a one-shot but I have dedcided to add to it.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Bella/OC
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3029 Read Count: 4740
[Report This] Published: 13 Oct 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So dam hot I need to be fucked after that

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So ready for more

Visually Challenged by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyone in town views Bella as the perfect teenager. She never gets into trouble and always seems to do the right thing. What happens when she starts falling for the towns visually challenged recluse? How will her strict parents react?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51475 Read Count: 24098
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Just finished the last chapter this has been a great read can't wait to see what happens next

Relentless by StillDreaming85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 575]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185496
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2014 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2015 Title: Relentless

It was a great ride loved every chapter

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146662
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - Fever

Oh happy happy day 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, happy day indeed ;). Next chapter you'll learn if he made them or broke them, but don't be too scared. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 - Accidentally on Purpose

That was awesome come on Bella just kiss him



Author's Response: Thanks! Well, I'm torn here between saying too much and letting you hang. Okay, I'll give you a hint: go back and read the teaser again and think about what could have Edward ball his fists on Bella's back. Why are his hands even there ;). See you next chapter. I'm sure you'll love it.

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Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue

Its been a great ride looking forward to seeing what you do next



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuous support. It means so much that you took this ride with me. All loose ends have been tied up and everyone got their HEA. It's sad to say goodbye but we're leaving them in a good place. Now, I hope you'll be back with me once my next project begins to post. See you then.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 - The Prodigal Mother

Great chapter



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. See you Monday.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 - Labor Day

Such a great chapter 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked it. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 - We Are Family

Can't wait to see who's behind the door and please give a peek on rose and Emmet 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Chapter 26 will almost completely be dedicated to Rose and Emmett and another surprise ;). See you next chapter.

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72830
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So did not see that ... that was great

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Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Sweet

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Date: 05 May 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Welcome back as always a great chapter

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 07 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So confused love it please post soon

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

never saw that coming that was awesome😆

Burn Notice by ifyouweremine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The last days of summer. Two weeks of freedom. One lie. What could possibly go wrong? BxE, canon couples, AH-OOC. M-RATING for lemons

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25364 Read Count: 13458
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So glad to see this back hope you post soon this is a great story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

<3 Jenn

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love that your back please post soon



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Jenn

Summary:

Bella is leery of falling in love. She soon learns that life is filled with countless forms and degrees of emotions. There is love, loss, healing, and everything in between. BxE. Canon couples. AH-OOC. HEAVY ANGST in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10590 Read Count: 3211
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2014 Updated: 24 Nov 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Please post soon

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mister Fancy Pants and Busy Bee are like oil and water, they do not mix. They're competing for top academic spot at Forks HS when fate intervenes. Busy Bee has a secret and when it comes to light it changes everything. Bee's been doing it tough but this girl is no push over. Omniscient 3rd person (wtf that means). There's some humour in here too. AH, HEA, mostly canon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102709 Read Count: 39946
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2020
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Phenomenal

Great ending👐👐👐👐

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- a long day

😱😱😱😱😱

Summary: Past Featured Story

I was irredeemable. I was lost, and then ... she found me. A story of discovering yourself ... a story of resumption. OOC vampires, Canon couples. Edward x Bella. Rated for language and adult situations.

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74961 Read Count: 22725
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2015 Updated: 09 Oct 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter-23: Realization

So sweet

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter-19: Take A Chance on Me

Last two chapters were great I loved the time he had with esma and that he called her mom. Then the talk I the medow 



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

I hope you're enjoying the ride.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter-26: Trouble In Sight

Can't wait to see who was I. Bella's  room

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Date: 01 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter-17: Memoirs of Days Gone By

👐👐👐👐👐 I like that she needed time rather then being ok with the whole thing

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Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter-28: A Forgotten Dream

Such a twist

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Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating

Talk about mood swings

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Date: 29 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter-14: A Vision of Hope

Mean lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Painful 

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Date: 21 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Oh boy what have you planned for us



Author's Response:

I think you'll find tomorrow's chapter exciting.  That's all I have to say about that.  ;)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

👐👐👐



Author's Response:

Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Love that this chapter we got to see just a little more of who Edward is 



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for saying hello!  We're learning a little more each chapter, I hope.  All his secrets will be revealed eventually.  I promise!  :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

So so excited😱😱😱😱😱



Author's Response:

Heehee!  And I LOVE that you're excited!  :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Great song choice thats an all time faviorit of mine a line i love is " a garden bursting into life" 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Isn't it a fantastic fit for this story?  The first time I really listened to the words with this story in mind, it brought me to tears.  So perfect!  :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I can't believe that's how their date ended as always such the tease



Author's Response:

LOL!  Well it was how their day ended!  I guess it was sort of a tease, but I promise never to end on a true cliffhanger.  I hate that.  ;)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 08 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Wow rough chapter but written great



Author's Response:

I know, this was a tough one.  Thank you for the lovely compliment, though!  :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

the dinner between Alice and Bella made me a little tear eyed you have done a great job with this story I'm going to hate when it's done. 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed their time together--there will be more to come!  I'm happy you're enjoying the story, and you have a while yet to do so.  I won't post the last chapter until October or November.  ;)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

😢😢d84;a039;😛👏🏻👏🏻



Author's Response:

Is that a flaily review?  ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113225
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
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Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 19 part 16

Omg 

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Date: 05 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 19 Part 15

Ohhhhhh yea work that ass

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Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

Glad that's out now he just needs to kick Tanya out and all will be right in the world

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Date: 11 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 10 Part 4

Poor guy

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Date: 25 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 19 Part 11

🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 12 Part 5

About time 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻😘

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Date: 14 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 17 Part 11

😊😊😊😊😆😆😆😆

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Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 19 Part 14

Awesome 

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Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 12 part 6

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 12 Part 3

Poor Edward when is he kicking her out

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Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 15 Part 1

Happy to see you brought rose in

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Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 12 Part 4

She has got to go come on Edward man up

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Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Gotta love Emmett 

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Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 10 Part 5

It was great to get two chapters

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Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

Carp she's back not for to long I hope 

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Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 11 Part 2

Nothing like a bucket of ice water being dumped on you

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Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 11 Part 3

Shoot its a little chilly

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Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 11 Part 6

To funny 

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Date: 18 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 13 part 3

Feelings are out can't wait to see what happens

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Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 17 Part 5

happy happy dance

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Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 17 Part 8

👐👐👐

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Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 17 Part 4

yippy about time👐👐👐👐

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Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 15 part 7

Oh please let them be over

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Date: 27 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 16 Part 4

So ready for Tanya to go

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Date: 30 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

👐👐👐👐 oh that was awesome the four of them looking like a real family

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Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Oh would you get a pair

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Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 18 Part 5

yippy yippy Tanya is gone for now

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Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 18 Part 6

👐👐👐👐

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Date: 09 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 19 Part 3

Oh yes 

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Date: 18 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 19 Part 6

All three chapters were great worth the wait ... Looking forward to date night 

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Date: 28 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 19 Part 7

Go Bella take what you want

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Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 19 Part 8

Mmmmmmn

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan, newly divorced (again) finds that life has changed since she was younger. A/H B+E   Contest entry for: The May to December Romance Contest

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26369 Read Count: 13393
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2015 Updated: 27 Jul 2016
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 29 May 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You're a mean person post soon🌹



Author's Response:

Yeah but you love me anyway!  XOXOX  See you in two weeks with the next update.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 17 May 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Lost Love?

Loving it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Reunion

Nice can't wait for ur next post



Author's Response:

Thank you.  As soon as my Beta gives me her ideas for chapters, I'll get them written.  Right now, I'm tapped out.  I had it written and ending with chapter 13 and my beta didn't want it to end.  She's never asked me to continue with a story line before, so I decided to listen to her.  :D

See you next chapter

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Unexpected Meeting

You mean mean women such a tease love it



Author's Response:

I know.  I'm just so evil.  I'm very pleased you like being abused in this way.  *grinning*

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

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A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601044
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Once again amazing

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Grandpa is a hoot glad you brought him in... the end was also great to get a small look into rose and Emmet can't wait for the party .....

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh my gosh so hot

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

So happy that will get more to the story

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Sad that this story will be ending but I know you will soon gift us with something new. This has been a great story each chapter has been great the added pictures fit the telling of the story.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

To funny lmaof I hope you care Edwards druggy state to the next chapter at least for the first part gotta hear Bella's take of this side of Edward great chapter all the way around

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Another great chapter as always.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

As always great chapter full of surprises

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 08 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love this story



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I hope you will continue to read my story. 

Summary:

Isabella, desperate for a job after college agrees to move across the country to apply to be governess for two young children. She soon finds out that the Cullen Estate and the Master that resides within are dark and frightening. For the sake of her charges, she must attempt to find a way to reach the heart of the man who looks at her as no more than a servant. Read warning!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81972 Read Count: 47997
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Jun 2018
Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

He would have me all over the place to Love It

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What in the world 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

My my great chapter

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love the heat between them it just seems to grow

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That was an amazing crazy chapter 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

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