Reviews by beeMcVee
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752851
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel

Holy crap this story is amazing.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Pixies, Porsches and Promises

LOL. Alice is hilarious, her poor Chanel :(  I love that you add humor into the mix, always a plus. I'm loving this so far!

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: My List

I ignored my very full bladder to finish this chapter, even though the bathroom is right next to me... I'm an addict :(

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Same In The End

Carlisle took that way better than I expected. Eh, Alice will get over it. Super long chapter, I have to pee again. I share too much... But I love your story if that makes it any less awkward.

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sin

I'm tired, but staying up to read this was so worth it.



Author's Response:

:-) Thanks! I feel bad about you missing out on sleep though! Thanks for the review and the coffee cups!!! I love those things!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Broken

Oh my god, I've been reading this story with a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. I don't know if this is just PMS, but you're story is getting to me. Lol, it's heartbreakingly good and I should totally be sleeping right now.

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

CRAP. What the heck are they going to do? Why are you doing this to me? Don't you know I have a job?!

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Consequences

Holy crap... They can fake her death now. I'm going to say this again, I SHOULD BE SLEEPING. But you... you're sucking me in. I might as well catch up.

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Cain

Bella is way more mature than anyone I know. I would so let Jake and Edward murder that guy. The word great is an understatement for this story and I can't think of a better word because of sleep deprivation. Ahem... Thanks for that.

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You

Omg, I can tell I'm going to stay up far too late reading this tonight. Loving it already.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you enjoyed the rest of the chapters :) I look forward to hearing what you think of Chapter 11 it will be out hopefully by Wednesday!

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Blackdog

Finally had time to catch up with this. I love it still. I'll have to google a dermal by someone's eye. The thought kinda makes me cringe. Whatev, another great chapter :)

Exchange by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

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Bella has a Third Date Rule. Would it delude her into continuing with the not so perfect date? Sometimes fate intervenes to correct an imbalance. Not even the location can deter frenzied would-be soul mates. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6345 Read Count: 691
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 15 May 2010
Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Exchange

This was sooooo good! I loved it! I totally didn't notice that it was complete until the end note :( But either way, it was great.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?

Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.

 

All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse. 

 

 I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 23163
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Experiencing that Cullen Temper

Boooo, Carlisle is being gay. I always feel like I spell his name wrong... And Bella's a freak. But I'm definitely ready for more. Still loving it, despite the stress it causes in my life.



Author's Response:

lol...well bad boys have bad tempers. Boy if your upset now ....lol...j/k....thank you so much bee.....later, Diane

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LMAO. Hilarious. This is so weird, but I like it.



Author's Response:

I know I go from serious to silly. I guess that is kind of wierd.....Diane

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Carlisle's memories Good and Bad

Okay, I'm hooked.



Author's Response:

Well I'm glad to hear that.....it's great newa!......Diane

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Surprise, we're here!

I agree with the lemon writing. I hate writing them, actually. You did really well though, if that makes you feel any more confident. Loved the new chapter!



Author's Response:

It actually does make me feel more confident, thank you. I spent hours writting this chapter and I was drained whenever it was finished. Now that I know you write on here as well, I'll have to check your stories. Thanks for the coffee cups, I just love those little suckers.

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Caveman Carlisle

Good chapter, have fun on your vacation!



Author's Response:

Thank you Bee, and I had a great vacation! Diane

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh I can tell I'll like this... What a freaking dick.

Fracture by KatieJane4815 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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What are the chances of meeting your soulmate? What if you meet them at the age of 4? Edward and Bella have known each other since kindergarten. A fateful late night call opens their eyes to potentials they never thought of. AU, B/E, A/J, R/Em. Lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62958 Read Count: 27936
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Oct 2010
Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Beautiful Insanity

LOL oh my god. This is great. Edward's such a dick, and Bella's hilarious. Loving this.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like my characterization of E and B! I really like your reviews ;)

 

Thanks,

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Addiction

Agh, I hate to be annoying and say 'update omg asap', BUT I REALLY WANT TO. It's so weird seeing Alice as the bitch. I have half a mind to find this on whatever site you said it was on. But it's late anyway. Yeah, I love this, to say the least.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review! I will be updating rather frequently on this site, hoping to get it up to date with what's on fanfiction much faster than on twilighted, due to their validation system and things like that. Last week I think I updated almost every day, and I hope to stick with that schedule!

 

Thanks so much!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: In my Arms

Heck yes I'll leave you a review. What are you, crazy? I almost peed when I saw you updated already. I'm so into this story, if you couldn't tell. I'm pretty sure I'll be hooked for life.



Author's Response:

Ahhh, so happy I finally get to respond to this review! Just to let you know, when I first read this in my email, I almost peed myself laughing. I think I'm hooked to your reviews

 

Thanks!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Battlefield

LOL. Hilarious chapter. I love Bella's skewed version of the conversation. And I'm pretty sure even if you never reply to me, you'll still continue to rock my world.



Author's Response:

Bella's skewed version of the conversation was actually inspired by this episode of this British sitcom that I watch--it's called Coupling, and the episode is absolutely hilarious, and I thought to myself, "I just HAVE to work that into the next chapter", so I did!

See, I replied to you, since your reviews rock my world ;)

Thanks so much!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Sign

Wtf, how did I get so behind? You're such a speedy poster. Not that I'm complaining.



Author's Response:

Hahahaha, well if you don't log on tonight, you'll be even more behind! I'm going to upload two new chapters tonight :)

 

Thanks so much for the review!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Use Somebody

Oh my god! Seriously? Angela and Jacob.... Wtf. I feel like I'm saying that so much more as I read this. It's getting a little juicier now. Despite the asshole friends of Bella's, I'm still loving this and I'm wholeheartedly trusting you. And I tried to think of something funny to leave you, but I'm not delirious enough.



Author's Response:

LOL, well hmm...maybe I could bring back shirtless Edward in a few chapters. Would that make you delirious?

Thanks for the trust, I assure you things will work out...eventually ;)

Thanks so much for the review!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Appeler

Aw, so sweet. I don't hate Alice anymore, at least. It's kind of crazy how Edward's liked Bella for so freakin long. Shorter chapters are better, I agree. But you can't make everyone happy, so just you can just settle for making me happy ;) Bring on the updates, I'm keeping up now!



Author's Response:

LOL, it's so hard for people to hate Alice for very long! Edward has liked Bella for such a long time that if he didn't do something about it soon, his balls may have actually fallen off.

I'm happy to continue making you happy lol ;)

Thanks so much for the review!

KatieJane4815

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Don't Trust Me

Oh. My. God. Did you really just do that?

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: It's Going Down Tonight

Aw man. I feel bad for Edward. I think I'm supposed to dislike him right now... AND I GOT BEHIND, AGAIN. You're too fast for me, woman.

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: It Complicates Everything

Was Edward a virgin, too?

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: We all Learn to Make Mistakes

Whew, caught up. I'm still loving this story immensely. No clue if I spelled that right, and I'm not gonna spellcheck it. Keep on keepin on.