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Shaky Ground by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Shaky Ground

Dr. Edward Masen lived a lonely, miserable existence as an emergency room attending at Harborview Medical Center. He ate, breathed and lived for his job. He refused to even think about women. To him, they were only distractions and he didn't trust anyone, except his mother. 

Dr. Isabella Swan just moved to Seattle, after completing her residency in Chicago. She was hired as a pediatrician at Harborview, becoming a pediatric emergency room fellow. She was not looking for a relationship, only focusing on her job. It was hate at first sight for both. Or was it? But, their attraction could not be denied. 

Unfortunately, a natural disaster rattles their lives ... the world was turned upside down when escalating earthquakes plagued the Seattle area. Will they able to survive the danger of being on 
Shaky Ground

 

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 Banner by Clo

 

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Banner by 67Original_1901 from Wattpad!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120201 Read Count: 123856
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2017 Updated: 01 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I love it and hate it. I hope Edward is ok. Oh god he's going to have amnesia and forget about Bella. Oh please don't be that evil lol. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 02 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bow could you do that to me........poor jake ever so not patiently waiting for an update

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

LOVE how it ended perfect!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Amazing Chapter 

Summary:

Banner

Earthquakes so rarely occur in the Pacific Northwest that the phenomenon causes the members of the Quileute tribe to investigate. They never would have expected to find her. She is stubborn, wild, and fiercely independent, and she willfully goes against everything they try to teach her. Especially when it comes to staying away from vampires. AU/Supernatural


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84901 Read Count: 40204
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2017 Updated: 30 Aug 2019
Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Amazing as always!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Love love love.



Author's Response:

 Thanks, love. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I DO! OMG OMG! Waiting a week is too much! And all because they were going to be married right! 



Author's Response:

You'll have to wait for the reason why!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

I love Sue too. 



Author's Response:

I like her character as a surrogate mother.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I really wish I knew what was going on with Charlie. I love the confrontation. 



Author's Response:

He's holding in hurt and anger, but that outburst really helped.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I love how different this story is yet I love how you incorporated some things from the original 



Author's Response:

 I try to incorporate enough canon to recognize it. Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor bella. I feel for being trapped.



Author's Response:

 She is very trapped, for now. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Love Love this chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Alyscia!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I am interested to see if this Bella will have the canon Bella shielding power...mmmm



Author's Response:

She's practicing with it.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Karma is a bitch. God I cant wait for  Edward and Bella to be in the open screw everyone. Hmph! Awesome chapter!!



Author's Response:

Soon, but not too soon.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Typical family drama with a little supernatural thrown in. Love it!



Author's Response:

Lol, Leah is always going to be Leah.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

AWEEEEEE I was wondering if it was imprinting. 



Author's Response:

 As far as they know, yes. It's their only reference. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Oh oh oh!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Omg I am in love already a nd excited to read what happens next



Author's Response:

Thank you! I love this one so much. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am so happy for the surprise.  Love how Bella handled him they are going to be interesting together



Author's Response:

Thank you! I was too excited to share their meeting. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love that she can talk to Edward and he gets what she is saying. Love it!!



Author's Response:

They're two of a kind!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG!!!!!! I need more. They are so cute and I want them together right now. lol



Author's Response:

 Lol, they'll be moving forward faster than the canon couple, I promise. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Awe Im glad she is going to be ok with new friends. If i remeber Edward furnished it right?



Author's Response:

Edward made sure it was furnished, yeah. She needed girlfriends!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

What!!



Author's Response:

Lol

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Omg....that was...sooo cool. I just..amazing



Author's Response:

Thank you! Action is hard to write!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

I can't wait. :) Love this chapter!!



Author's Response:

 Thank you! Edward is a romantic. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

I am guessing "Air. I need air, or I would never stop kissing you."

But i still dont feel right but its a guess lol. I feel that Edward might have wanted to eat the cockblocking kitten lol. Love the chapter I am so happy that they are together again. 



Author's Response:

Lol, the kitten is safe. The quote starts with A thousand different possibilities ran through my mind in an instant. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Love the lemony goodness. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I originally only wrote one and then went back and added the other. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

Love the reactions of Ang and Jess. Amazing as always



Author's Response:

Dazzled by Edward. Lol. Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love your writting I can just feel everything great chapter cant wait for the next one



Author's Response:

 That's a huge compliment! Thanks. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh no. I think that the council will see that she imprinted. Im hoping anyway. I jope Edward doesnt get hurt. Amazing chapter. I read the snip it. Im not patiently waiting lol.



Author's Response:

Lol. I wanted to give her the whole chapter, but it would have been so long. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh you better Carlisle. Poor Edward and Bella.



Author's Response:

:) Carlisle is great.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2017 Title: Seismic Shift

I love it. These two are too cute



Author's Response:

Thank you! I love them. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

My family cant do laundry on new years day either lol very bad luck if we do.

I am very worried about Charlie I hope he doesnt turn against Bella turning her into to volturi so him and his wife can escape.



Author's Response:

That would be dastardly!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

And im off to the blog lol Awesome chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

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Date: 08 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Awe I love the name! Amazing chapter, I was at teh edge of my seat the whole time. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! It was hard to write.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I thought the same as Edward tbat she cause the quake. Cant wait for next chapter



Author's Response:

And now we have to find out how that's possible!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OMG! My heart is pumping! I cant wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Cool! Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMG! That is just...not at all what I was thinking. Awesome!



Author's Response:

LOL!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I just love this chapter. I hope Charlie comes to his senses!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Oh wow! This chapter was just as amazing as the last. 



Author's Response:

 Thank you! Hopefully Edward cleared everything up. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 41: Epilogue

Such a beautiful ending love it!



Author's Response:

Than you so much Alyscia!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

OMG! I am going to be honest, I prefer your description of the volturi coming than SM



Author's Response:

Thank you! Holy cow.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I am so happy for Bella and Edward. And that Charlie said he loves her. 



Author's Response:

He needed to grow that pair and say it out loud.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

OMG I just want it to happen the suspense is killing me lol



Author's Response:

Next week!

Summary:

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Follow Emmett's story from arrest to exoneration and beyond. An outtake of Perdition.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Emmett/None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5012 Read Count: 775
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2017 Updated: 25 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love the ending ita perfect 😁



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow just crazy and I cant wait for morw



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm feeling Team Emmett.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow poor Emmett



Author's Response:

I feel so bad for him!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary:

 

Summary: Parenting can be a hard job to tackle, but it can be harder when you are parallel parenting between twins. Whatever will these two do with the girls they love corrupting their lives?
Banner by: HeartForTwilight Productions 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212062 Read Count: 63412
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2017 Updated: 31 May 2018
Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Freaking Perfect honestly would love to see these guys more!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Amazing as always!!!!

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Date: 29 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Amazing chapter! I hope they dont lose the baby. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think it might be a shit storm lol but i wish i didnt have to wait till monday to find out

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love love it cant wait for more

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love love it so muchch. I want more!!!!!! LOL I guess I wait till next week ugh

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I am thankful for Mike. I hopw Edward snaps out of the guilt he has no reason to feel 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I didi not see that comin at all. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I want to punch the man in the face. I cant believe it

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OMG!!!!!! I am readiing scared for what yo hae instore...I love how you guys write these amazing things but i also know how evil you can be lol. Cant wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Amazing. I think they are trying and hopefully everything works out

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Date: 15 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love the competitive between the two. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh, I think I might have acted like Edward...I have a temper that way lol. Amazing chapter as always. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love this so much. I think Edward is having naughty dreams while he slept with Bella. I can't wait for them to see they are perfect for eachother. I love the girls they are so cute. Kassie is the best. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh oh oh. Hot in here, so hot in so hot in here. LOVE THESE TWO SO MUCH!!!!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

It was so0 adorable and perfect. I can't wait or the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

WOW! Just amazing chapter!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Freaking amazing story I love it so much.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I love this entire chapter so worth the wait :)

Summary:

change

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a very secluded life. After her father's death, she decides to make a change. With a map, dart, and life insurance money to fuel the trip, she is off on an adventure. On this trip with her, we will see things through her eyes, and maybe find a new friend or two as well. AH. No heavy drama planned, but may change as the characters grow and talk to me.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56350 Read Count: 48433
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2017 Updated: 30 Nov 2018
Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I think it perfect for bella, she needs more company. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Amazing! Love this story it was so sweet and perfect!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

😁😁

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I love their first time it was perfrect. I love this story. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like how this beging cant wait for more

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I love this chapter

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

LOVE IT!!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Love how cute these two are :)

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I love how things are progessing slowly. They are just so cute together. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

AWE!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

:) Love this chapter

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

:) so excited there are going to be roomies. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

:) so excited there are going to be roomies. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh no poor Edward, amazing chapter I hope Bella is ready!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

AWEEEEEEEEEEE!

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Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I love how these two are soo sweet together! Love the chapter

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

THey are sooo cute omg! This story makes me so happy while I am dealling with all the stress I am. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

AWE!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Amazing

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Just such a cute couple. Love love it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Story cover

 

A group of college students with clashing personalities win an all-expense paid weeklong vacation at a luxury resort in the Caribbean, thinking it will be spent on the beach in glorious sunshine. However, after landing it becomes very apparent that all is not as it should when the students find themselves alone on the island with only their pilot and one guide. Or are they..?

2nd Place in Favorite Undiscovered Gem category of Twific Fandom Awards 2017

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Mystery, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: Read & Enjoyed, El Jardín Trilogy
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85312 Read Count: 31086
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2017 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow. I just keep getting more and more...wth is going on lol

Summary:

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Bella is an exotic dancer, and she loves her job. Edward is a millionaire with a savior complex who needs to rescue Bella. She doesn’t want to be rescued, but she does want Edward for the things he does to her body. When she discovers his issues run deeper than she ever thought, will she accept him for what he can offer, or will she walk away? Drabble. Olderward.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25351 Read Count: 79279
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I love it. Prove to him that he deosnt need to protect her, just enjoy her. 



Author's Response:

That's her line of thinking, yeah!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh I cant wait for monday. Love the conversations between these two.



Author's Response:

I love them, they're so funny!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

 

 

Oh, poor Edward. Bella is correct. He didn’t abandon her at all. 



Author's Response:

 Certainly not, but he had a bad role model.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

My mouth is dry oh lord. So happy but you are also evil lol



Author's Response:

Lol, maybe tomorrow (today) you'll be drooling.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I think she can if she has patience and he wants to of course lol. 



Author's Response:

 The best laid plans...

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Aweeee I love how Edward is helping. 



Author's Response:

He's such a good man.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow....amazung chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweetie!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ohhhh poor kid lol. Love the dance studio idea



Author's Response:

It seems to suit her. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I hope he does considering that he sought her out. And she is going  to give up the strip joint basically for him cocky good looking asshat 



Author's Response:

 Lol, cocky good looking asshat.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh poor Edward, I think Bella is just the girl to prove that you arent your father. 



Author's Response:

That could be true!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ohhhh. There are other establishments that can let her dance lol amazing chapter as always



Author's Response:

She certainly has options!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Not yet anyway..maybe lust right now. 



Author's Response:

I agree with you!

You are my 100th review here on STARS!