Hopefully you will let Jasper kill Eddie,screw what Daddy C has to say or think about his Golden Boy

I know he won'tlet it happen to his Golden Boy,but Eddie needs to be put downlike a rabid dog.

curious how she killed those vamps.

since you have both guys there maybe they need to experiment with different sun screens and see if any can stop the discoball effect.so she doesn't need to walk around looking like a discoball after her change.

It is hung out with them. she needs to get Jasper and Em toplay tug of war with Eddie and see which arm comes off first.don't hate me just trying to help you write better.;) kevin

It's rapid snow accumulation not rapped.

So when will Bella be meeting her obsession? will she be his mate or just another meal?

Fantastic story.wouldhave liked to see Eddie and Daddy dismembered and burned before Aro left.

crappy writing i am done,bye.

It's tear,bury.i am throughly enjoying this story,but you could have used a Betato crrect spelling errors

you need to flesh this story out and expand it so they can get their revenge against the men that hurt them.

It's heels not heals.latter not ladder,feat not feet,it's moved her hair not her hear behind her ear.thought you had a beta,if not you sure needed one.i like your version it is different,andi can'twait to see how Vicky meets her end or what kind of demon Bella makes or what befalls the wannabe humons the Cullens.

forgotten i(have) is that maybe what you ment to say?.. such a wonder,beautiful and strong daughter. you need to stop dropping word if you want your story to make since.

whether not weather,watch it in front of not in from of me.meeting the future mother in law for the first time.

I had no part in it not i had not part in it.oh yeah it is into not in to, vain bitch not vain butch ,within not with in.

FYI.it is wonder not wander. yup, he will have his hands full with his mate and she will own his ballsmore then Maria or Alice did.should be fun.now we just need to find out what happened to her after they left.

It's captain not caption and against not ageist.will we learn why she was in Texas sometime soon? what happened after they left her?

scars not scares,basis not bases,another not a nether,whether not weather.barely not barley.looks like Maria really does not have control of her army or her Major. i  don't know why he doesn't just leave he doesn't have to be a nomad.i am pretty sure he is rich enough he couldlive any where and now he has a mate he doesn't need to stay with Maria.

shaking not shacking.so they go to Paris and never come back,there is no reason for them to come back.

scent not sent.this is like an arranged marriage she was forced (into) with an arrogant prick. guess this will be the Cullen's they are meeting. wonder if Eddie will have a hissy fit when he sees his pet with Jasper?

quiet not quite.can't wait to see what other adventures they get into while on their vacation

It's wandering around not wondering,bored not board.... Jasper is one major,no pun intended,dickheaded piece of shit asshole treating her like property.what is Jasper planning? is he gettinghis coven together and thentake out Maria then use her armyalong with the newborns to take down Aro and friends????

Now that he has found out that she is as smart or smarter then him will he stop treating her like shit????

How (are) you feeling now not how you feeling now.beta would help.it seems things are getting better for her.just wonder when the shit is going to hit the fan and they are going after Aro and friends? like to hear from daddy C and how he and mommy feel about losing the "children".

Is the fun about ready to start?

Like i have said before he is an asshole and a selfish one to boot.

Good for Peter the ass hat needed a reality check and i believe he just gave it to him.wonder what kind of car she is going to get from daddy.on a side note where are the Cullens why weren't they there to fight with Aro????

nice.

Liar, scent,whether,against.feet OFF the floor.you seem to have a problem with the word against,you have spelt it three ways so far.

Stealing glances.captain.her prey.another not nether.he wasn't the most dominate for the sixth years Alice had his balls in her purse.

Looking forward to reading the rest if it all is as good as this.

I have looked very hard but I can't find the plot anywhere..

She is here to help Peter. finish this story some time ,K?

I imagine she won't be seeing Jasper until she goes back to her own times once she is through turning  and saving Peter from his nightmares.this will so be finished ,right?

I wonder how far along she is in her change? when she comes back will Eddie still be in pieces or did daddy send him to Alaska instead of doing his duty as coven leader and have him dismembered and burned?

After reading that i am surprised that Esme didn't drop a match on Eddi's worthless ass.of course they would send him to be baby sat by the Denalis instead of just shoving his parts in a box and sticking him in the basement until Bella finished changing soshe could take care of him.

Happy that she has found the family she has been wishing for.even better then the one she thought she had found already.

I wonder if they will throw him on the same pyre as the one Maria is burning on?

I guess she won't be sucking down Bambi anytime soon? i enjoyed her little speech she gave Carlisle.

so who will Peter be calling?i would guess the girls will probably like to join the fight especially Kate since i don't think there is any love lost between her and Eddie .

Rose is such a clueless bitch.

Just the quiet before the storm.just soldiers before the battle trying to think of other things but that.

Looks like Bella won't be a virgin for very much longer.

Capt's a dick

All ways love it when Eddie boy gets his.

Okay,so when will you be finishing this? i am probably not the only reader out there that hates to be left hanging.

Finish please.

Please finish this.thanks.

So looking forward to the rest of this series.

So looking forward to the rest of this story,soon hopefully.

You really need to finish this so we know what in the Hell is going on and who some of these players are like the dark lady and this mordred guy and what they want.