Penname: Milk40 [Contact] Real name: Pascale P.
Member Since: 02 Mar 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

When I don't have to take my daughters to their dance classes and my son to his karate lessons, I write and I translate.


Bonjour mes amies francophones qui avez pris le temps de vous inscrire comme membres :0)


Hi my friends, if you try to contact me here and for some reason it doesn't work, you can pm me on FanFiction.net


Bonjour chères amies, si vous tentez de me contacter et que pour une quelconque raison ça ne fonctionne pas, n'oubliez pas que vous pouvez toujours le faire via FF.


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Reviews by Milk40
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 304685
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

Jeez, that fiction and TTS are due for updates. Hurry up girls!

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

Oh my Gosh! Footroza and you don't live on the same continent?

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

Ha ha! I loved your little intermission in the middle, lol. Well this ended better than it started. There is hope after all.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

How long before she hits 16?

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

Very instructive chapter. Are you having your stories translated in other languages?

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

Holy Jesus! Have Charlie come arrest this crazy man very quick!

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

Hope that Felix will think twice and tell everything to Charlie.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Oh my gosh, the poor girl will really not be able to use her hand anymore... 

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 ĖEyes Upon Us

I can't believe Carlisle is willing to offer his daughter to that pedophile Aro!

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

I'm glad Bella realized she is being manipulated. Poor Alice, what a horrible ordeal she went through.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

That's creepier by the minute.



Author's Response:

Tick Tock... It is getting wild.. and we love it.  Thanks for the review.. I hope you have a wonderful weekend.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

The note better be helpful or I want that Felix dead as well.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

Carlisle seems to be intelligent and sensible. What the hell is he doing in this place to begin with? And will Edward save the day?

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

That makes just for one more shitty bastard I want to see dead.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

Poor Carlisle, his past is such a tragedy, but it seems he's headed towards yet more drama... I hope Elizabeth won't live hell on earth.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

Hasn't it been one week since she disappear, then?

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Hurry up, Charlie and Felix, before it's too late!

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Oh my that was horrible! Speaking of stopping reading this story, my dear Footroza, I hope you're still reading mine, I wouldn't know because you haven't left any comment since July. Anyway, I wanted to tell you that in a few chapters my Bella will get beat up by Aro and I don't want you to think I stole your idea. I wrote the chapter I'm talking about last May in French and only at the end of this month will I post it in English here, so...

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Well at least if they die, they die together...

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

I hope the update comes soon. Thank God Felix was there to stop Charlie. And I hope you read the last chapter of my story that I published 2 weeks ago and which was pretty creepy...

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

i mean it was not the last chapter, but the last chapter so far...

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

A conversation in the dark between Bella and Edward... very comforting but very distressing at the same time. Have a very merry Christmas.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

Ha ha, I like the way you wish us a Happy New Year after dropping that bomb of a chapter, lol.

Happy New Year to you too, Mandy and Jenny. All the best for 2011.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

Well this chapter has me wondering: how old is Edward if Charlie is considering a foster home for him ? I thought, since he was attributed a "wife" before, that he was a couple of years older than Bella... 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1449477
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

See, that is why I don't write smut in english...

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Hey girls! 69 is my fave number as well. I was born that year! lol

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Jeez, Fleur told me it was coming, but I am still in shock (and obviously I saw it coming ever since Victoria was chipped). Please, no more torture for Bella, or Victoria for that matter...

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Well, one thing is for sure, James can't go a long way like this. Hell, with Laurent dead, he just made it even worse for him.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

I have to ask, when are you going to update your story? You can't leave us like that!

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

I don't want to seem mean, but Heidi deserves all the shit she got. She is the one responsible for Bella's ordeal. And ladies, don't type too quick, take a deep breath...

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Thank God you are not done with it yet!

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

What a nice wrap up!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3519]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1564636
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Wow, good to see that Edward has a conscience.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Ah, the epiphany, at last...

Someone should tell Edward that making love has nothing to do with penetration in itself. You can make love to someone even without penetration. It's the feelings involved in the act that make it sex or love.



Author's Response:

Edward still has a lot to learn about love and about Bella.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Just so you know, every time I put a review it means your French translator is going to post the chapter. I think last time was in January.

I liked Bella's reflections all along the chapter. She's very smart and it's too bad if she doesn't attend college. Well, maybe she will at some point later on, but since I'm not compelled to read further more until I have to edit your translator's chapters, I shall see only in due time...

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Hi dear friend, as I told you once, if I'm reviewing your story, it means Sonia has resumed the translation (after more then 14 months on hiatus) and I needed to know the content of the chapter before editing it. What I loved about it is the role played by Jasper, who, in my opinion, is Bella's real guardian angel.

As for me, I will soon start the translation of my friend Cris's wonderful story Wisp that you're reading on FF. 

Hugs



Author's Response:

Hey! I'm glad she picked it up again so everyone can continue reading. Do you by chance have her penname or contact (I've lost it) so I can get in touch with her?

Jasper is the true hero in this story because he was the first make the choice to break the cycle. Emmett and Edward followed after with the example and hints that Jasper made.

I'm reading Wisp and absolutely love it! Its such a heartbreaking story, but I cheer with every step towards healing she makes.

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

That Esme is truly a saint...

Summary:

Bella got dragged out to a bar one night. Subsequently drinking, she decided to let her old persona float away, and took opportunities that she normally wouldn't have. It was one of the best nights of her life.

Smut, dirty, plain and simple.

AU-AH, OOC, rated NC-17 for language and adult sexual situations.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8035 Read Count: 765
[Report This] Published: 06 May 2010 Updated: 06 May 2010
Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lose Yourself - One Shot

You put a lot of work in that one shot. The context is déjà vu but the way you put it together is awsome. Great job.



Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment, and for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by JavaMasta

Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 120260
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I just wanted to see your banner and you're right, it is very nicely done :-)



Author's Response:

Hi Milk! Isn't JavaMasta incredible? The lady has skillz!

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes she has indeed, but what do you think of my banners? My husband made them for me. I think he's as good as RoseArcadia, lol.

Sunburn by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Lemony oneshot.  Bella lets her soon-to-be sisters talk her into sunning in the back yard, with citrusy results. Originally written as a trivia prize for bloftus, for guessing where the title of "As Children After Play" came from.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4093 Read Count: 2181
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Incredible, especially coming from someone who never read the books. I'm in awe (I think it's the tenth time I say this)

That Derby Fic by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Edward is dragged unwillingly to witness his first roller derby bout when his little sister Alice joins the league.  He's uncomfortable in the dense crowd until a star rollergirl takes notice of him and he's positive he just lost his heart. 1st person EPOV.

Lemony AH oneshot written originally for Hev99 for general awesomeness.  Title comes from some late-night IM razzing from college buddies ;-) 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12115 Read Count: 1415
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hate that you don't have more reviews for your stories in general, and your one shots in particular. This Derby fic deserves way more than a fistful of reviews. It's amazing.

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1097]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 208526
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

Very interesting beginning :0) i'm glad I will catch up quickly on this one!

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

Hi Michele, been trying to review on FF yesterday, but there's a malfunction with the review button, for a change, but I wanted to let you know that I stayed awake until 1 am to read the chapter even though I vowed to myself I was going to bed early. Yep, that's how enthralled I was with the chapter :0)

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

Here I am again, because FF is glitching... AGAIN!

I mean, it's bad enough that I can't review your out of this world frigging good story, but I can't publish mine either... oh hell. (and by that I also mean People like us in French, of course, which has almost 1500 reviews!)

PLEASE, UPDATE SOON, I'M DYING TO LEARN ABOUT BELLA'S PAST!

 

Reviewer: Milk40 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - One step forward...

Dear Michele, I needed to say more on my review so I came here to complete it. I just want to tell you that it is an honnor for me to be your translator because you are a hell of a talented author and a very smart person; I'm in awe and I commend you :0)

Thank you for writing amazing stories for us.