Reviews by MyWindowIsOpen
Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87100
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: MyWindowIsOpen Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice

I had read this over on FFN, but I wanted to read the full version, so I came over here to check it out. This has been good so far. I know I'm going to regret reading this one because it isn't complete. 

One Night by chiqalinda Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 70]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Jasper meets Edward at a club in Seattle. He quickly falls for the innocent blond blue eyed kid; Jasper knows that as beautiful as Edward is there is something dark about him. Jacob, Jaspers long time crush comes to visit and reveal a secret. Jasper doesn't know that Edward is the most dangerous mob boss Seattle has ever known.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Rich & Notorious
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 123819 Read Count: 12414
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2014 Updated: 20 Oct 2017
Reviewer: MyWindowIsOpen Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, this is Sue, or CSG. I didn't know you had another story? I usually don't read over here, but someone recommended this story in my Facebook group & I was like, what, she has another story? I sent you another friend request, Facebook unfriended us before. I'm going to read this ASAP. IM GLAD TO SEE YOU ARE STILL WRITING. I have been trying my hand at it, too. This pen name is my author account. 



Author's Response:

Hi Sue, sorry to disapoint but it's just the same old stuff. I do have some new stuff but its a disaster right now because of grammer or lack there of. but i reeeeeeeealy do want to post but i would hate to put out there and then people will be like "What the?" so yeah. its just the same ol'same ol. Sorry:(

As for face book, yeah i'm not the best with passwords, so that went up in smoke pretty quick, plus i suck at learning new things. I'm still stuck on myspace. I'm like an old dog that cant learn new tricks.

I'm going to post a new story here soon i just need a title for it. i have three others but the problem is i cant come up with a title and grammer, too. I'm going to keep the chapters real short so i can make sure the spelling and grammer is as good as i can get it, because there is nothing like reading a story with sentences that make no sense. if it wasnt for the two miracle workers that polished "One Night" and "My Friend"  they most likely woudn not have gotten the responce they did.

I'm glad to hear you'r writting too, i'm going to follow you. And i'm going to try fb again. if i have to make a new one i'll send you a friend request so we can kink up. Just dont hate me for not posting or getting on there too much its kind of intimidating. Don't even get me started on instagram or snap chat, Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!

So yeah, its me and please tell who ever it was that recomended this story that i realy appreate it.

And now that i have written a whole story i say good night and TTYL...i just learned what that means from my 13 year old daughter;) ,chiqalinda

 

 

 

Reviewer: MyWindowIsOpen Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So, Edward is interested in Jasper, huh. Will Jasper be able to resist?

Summary: Past Featured Story

lucky Charm

Edward Cullen's mother taught him that storms are beautiful. They make the air feel clean, while the day is refreshed, and it produces some of the loveliest of rainbows. He will find out they can also bring out your Lucky Charm.    

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10815 Read Count: 16688
[Report This] Published: 01 Oct 2015 Updated: 29 Dec 2015
Reviewer: MyWindowIsOpen Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It sure is! Thanks for the comments! 

Reviewer: MyWindowIsOpen Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Summary:

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Changes occur in your life every day. No one knows that better than Bella. Her life will be forever changed after today. They all will. Warning - this story is about 9/11 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34421 Read Count: 32844
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2015 Updated: 11 Dec 2017
Reviewer: MyWindowIsOpen Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

k1942, I deleted you review for chapter 36 by accident. I'm SO SO sorry. I was trying to delete  what I wrote because I forgot to write Thank You & I deleted the whole thing. I'm SO sorry! :(  



Author's Response:

I'm not used to this site as you can tell?! 

Rogue by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary:

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Meet Masen.

He is not just any thug growing up in a family of organized crime. He is a man who has changed the way families do business.

Masen is in line to be the next "Boss" for his well connected family, and in one night there is a massacre and all his rivals and their families are wiped out leaving no one left behind. The authorities have no clues as to who, why or how someone could pull off a mass murder of this scale. 

Meet Charlie.

A soldier turned businessman who will stop at nothing to give his little girl whatever her heart desires, and what she wants is something no mafia family has ever been able to stake a claim on...the city of Angels.  

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42527 Read Count: 22440
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2016 Updated: 16 Jun 2016
Reviewer: MyWindowIsOpen Signed
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Looks & skill... this is Sue, btw!