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Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145605
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

great

Summary: Past Featured Story

My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant

My story has language throughout and some sexual content.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49077
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Moving Day

great story

Summary:

This is my sequel to my first 50 Shades story (I am so cool, I make my own sequels).... The kids are 6 and 4. Ana is 28 and Christian is 34. This story contains characters from my first story. The original was moved from Fanfiction.net

This is rated NC-17 for language and sexual content


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29860 Read Count: 44098
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue: The Big 4-0

great story

Summary:

This is my take on Ana and Christian as they prepare for their wedding. Wedding Fun, 50 Shades style...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29972 Read Count: 19103
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: I love you forever

great stoty

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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

so sweet

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

Omg How sweet and loving  Please dont wait to long to update!!  This made my day!!!!

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Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

great chapter Please don't wait to long to update love your story!!!!!

Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

I LOVE ... LOVE YOUR STORY!!! It is how i picture Ana and Christian life together would be. JUST enought dram. I started your story on fanfiction and then I  read your bio to read it on this site to get more lemons. Pleasee udate soon!

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Date: 29 Jun 2015 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

love your writing Please update soon  !!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

great chapter! LOVE LITTLE Grace! what a wonderful STORy please update soon

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Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

please update soon love your story .  

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Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159

wow what agreat chapter.  Please dont wait to long to update

Phoebe's Wedding by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

A big secret comes to light the night before Phoebe's Wedding that changes everything...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44944 Read Count: 20852
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Sep 2012
Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue: The Little Frog Part 2

good 

Phoebe's Babies by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

... and more unanswered questions! My sequel to Phoebe's Wedding (read that first!). I wanted to wrap things up from my first story!


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116370 Read Count: 24949
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2014
Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 40: A Second Chance

WOWGreat story!!!  Thank you 

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Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 43: White Trash Wedding

omg wonderful story. please give Phoebe her day with Christian walking her down the aisle. please

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Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Epilogue 2

love it dont stop writing your story!!!

Baby Girl Grey by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

The Untold Story of when the Grey's had a daughter


Categories: Canon, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22961 Read Count: 9226
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2014
Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Hints

good story

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stories/113273/images/Grace Trilogy(1).jpgFollowing her divorce from her abusive ex-husband, Olivia Grace is building a new life for herself in her beloved Seattle.  Broken and wary, she longs for a relationship with a man who will love and cherish her the way she deserves to be, but will she be able to overcome her fears of abuse and let someone in?

Xander Wade is a young, powerful, self made man who uses women only for his pleasure.  A shattered past relationship has left him unwilling and unable to trust any woman enough to let her close to his heart.  His brief, dominating dalliances with countless women have left him jaded and cynical.  Will he let down his guard and open his heart to the lovely Olivia?

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Categories: Original Fiction, Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204303 Read Count: 20313
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2015 Updated: 13 Jan 2015
Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

wow really good story

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Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 58

omg when r u posting the new story.  I have two new favorite charactors Please start your story this is not fair you leaving your loyal reading hanging.  How could you!!!!   PLEASE 

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/113273/images/Grace Trilogy(1).jpgDevastated by the accident that took his memory of her, Olivia tries to pick up the pieces and build a new life without Xander.  But her heart refuses to give up hope that someday they'll find each other once more.

Xander is told he opened his steely heart and fell in love, but all remembrance of her, and the life he led before his accident elude him.  As memories surface, images of a dark haired beauty haunt him.  Will he find her again, and reclaim the life he's lost?

 

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Categories: Erotica, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 303810 Read Count: 21436
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2015 Updated: 04 Apr 2015
Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

omg 

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Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

what a wonderful chapter  Love your writing!!!!

Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Love this chapter how sweet Don't keep your reader long to update !!!

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

wow Love these two And Your story is really great  Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

omg what a chapter love these two!!  Great story  update SOON!!!!!!

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Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

WOW LOVING IT

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Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

LOVE IT

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Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

GREAT CHAPTER

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Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

WOW CRAZY BUT LOVING IT

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

MORE PLEASE I NEED MORE OF XANDER AND OLIVIA.  GREAT START TO YOUR STORY.  

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Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

more please keep updating

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Date: 28 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Wow love these two update now please I can't get enough of your story

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Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

SO HAPPY YOU STARTED THE 2ND PART. I JUST FINISHED THE FIRST PART YESTERDAY.  I WAS HAVING WITHDRAWAL FROM XANDER AND OLIVIA.  THANK YOU LOVE YOUR STORY AND HOW YOU WRITE!  

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

good

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow

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Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wow sweet

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Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

good

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

love how your story is going especially how you put in some things about fifty shades of grey

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

loving it

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

WONDERFUL CHAPTER 

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

omg loving it

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

wow

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Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

what a great chapter! love your story

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Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

hurry and update please

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Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

omg wonderful chapter just love these twp

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Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

greaT  chapters please hurry and update. LOve your writing

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Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

love your story! update soon

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Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

wow great keep these wonderful chapters coming!!

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Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

wonderful story  Love these 2 !!! Hurry and update!!!!!!!!

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Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

wow

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Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

wow

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Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

omg what a chapter love it

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Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

wonderful

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Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

please update soon .   love these 2.  can't wait fore more!!!!

Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

more please more

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Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

wow what an emotional chapter.  This chapter could not have been written any better!!!!!  Love it

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Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Great chapter

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Date: 24 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

wonderful chapter great story

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Date: 27 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Omg could it be any better loving your story. Please update NOW!!!!!

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

omg omg omg  that all i could say!     please update soon   love your story!!!!!!!

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Date: 08 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

great chapter cant wait to read whats going to happen

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Date: 08 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

omg how sweet please update soon love these two  great story

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Date: 11 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

hurry and update !!!!!!!!

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Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

LOVING your story! hurry and update

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Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

what a wonderful reunion love ypur story

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Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

wow love it

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Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

omg  Beyond Great chapter  Loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!! 10********** stars



Author's Response:

I'm blushing to my roots!  Thank you so much; you've made my day!

Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

good chapter

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Date: 26 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

great chapter 

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Date: 27 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

great chapter hurry and update I wanted what Xander is doing to Olivia!!!!

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Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

please hurry and update love:LOVE  Your story,,!!!!!!!""

Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

OMG

Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

WOW I JUST CAN'T see Xander getting over whats happening to Olivia the guilt will eat at him.  How will Xander and Olivia get pasted the rape and other things. 

Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

wow hurry update

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Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

let it end 

Reviewer: macera Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

good so happy its almost over but it it 

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Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

omg this horrible please let this end

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Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue

please dont take to long starting your new book. your writing is wonderful . hurry up  i am going to miss Xander and Olivia

Summary:

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Barely back from their romantic wedding and honeymoon in Greece, Olivia and Xander Wade should have a happy life ahead.  But Olivia's past comes back to haunt her, and she's been brutally attacked by her ex-husband Caleb. Battered and broken, she works to rebuild her shattered life with Xander, but she has many hurdles to overcome.  Will Xander be able to deal with the aftermath of her attack and the emotional difficulties that it brings for Olivia?  Will their love be strong enough to keep them together, or will they be torn apart?


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 353918 Read Count: 15125
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2015 Updated: 18 Oct 2015
Reviewer: macera Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

omg Please I need to know how Olivia and Xander  resolve this.  Can't wait Hurry and Update

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Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

What a great Chapter So very happy Olivia and Xander are finding there way back to eachother!  Can't wait hopefully soon!!!!

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Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

alittle drama is always good love there thanksgiving very sweet

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Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

LOVED this chapter update soon  Please  Can't wait for the New years Eve party!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 20 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

CAN'T WAIT- HURRY UPDATE LOVE-- LOVE THIS CHAPTER BUT THEN AGAIN I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!

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Date: 22 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

wow why??  hurry and update please.  

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Date: 11 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Congratulations on kindle direct publishing.So happy for you. Love your writing and your story is 5 stars so you will do great. Hurry and update can't wait for New Year's eve With Olivia and Xander . Can't wait to read your stories on the kindle direct publishing Good Luck. Keep us posted on it.

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Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Great chapter so very happy Tess is ok 

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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Thanks for a chapter so soon  LOVE Hunter!!!!!   I am fine with the spacing JUST keep updating!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 22 May 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Please update soon can't wait to read more

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Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

LOVE THIS CHAPTER

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Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wow great chapter I am so happy XANDER  has cleared up the mess at his company.  Now he and Olivia could really considerate on eachother yes I would visit u  and chat with you please let me know the site.

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Date: 04 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

great chapter 

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Date: 10 May 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Love this chapter. What a love Xander has for Olivia. Hurry update

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

love this chapter update soon Can't wait for New Years Eve!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 04 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Wow

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Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Hurry and update please don't let us wait can't wait to hear about Christmas and New year eve please update now!!!

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Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

No not getting bored  LOVE your story and Xander and Olivia!!!!!!!!!  update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

How wonderful they found each other Great chapter 

 

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Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

GREAT chapter!!! They are both finding their way back  to eachother.  Hurry I cant wait to read how you let them be together!!! Love your writing!!!!!!!!

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Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Good

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Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

How wonderful Olivia is finding her way back to Xander- Thank god I miss the love between these two But a little dram is always good!!!!