Reviews by Rosiemama
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I followed you here from FF and I'm glad you are going to keep the story going.  When will you update?

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank goodness you finally updated!  I went on here everyday hoping you would and you did!  I loved the chapter.  Seems he's feeling a little guilty about the way he's treating her.  Hopefully she doesn't try to kill herself, that would suck!  Please update soon!

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Good chapter!  I can't wait to find out what is wrong with her.  Will this be a HEA story? I just want to be prepared if it is not.

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh no! Please tell me you're not going to kill her character so that I can stop reading now.  It's nothing personal, i just don't like reading stories where the characters die.

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

The fact that this entire story was fiction written by Bella was friggen brilliant. You pulled what Stephanie Meyers wanted to do with the original version of New Moon, making it all a dream instead of reality. It's good to know that the real Edward wasn't anything like the monster in that story who would spend the rest of his days alone with the memories of how he tortured the only person he had ever loved. It's sad, but I'm also glad that they weren't real individuals.

Great job! Thank you for finishing this story and truly enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Your review has made my day. Thank you.  I'm glad you liked it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

I reserved my judgment of Bella because I realized that she has serious psychological problems, but you as a writer really made her look extremely pathetic then used your other characters to justify her bad behavior. No matter how you try to spin it, it just didn't work in my opinion.  She was just plain wrong.  She even accused Edward of having a doctored photo, someone who she has known for years and questioned his meticulousness and his integrity. Wow. 

 

 

Dark Lies by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 603]
Summary:

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Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?

Sequel to Dark Velvet

Banner by AnaRodFranco 

Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Another great chapter.  I have truly enjoyed this story.  I don't know how I feel about Eddie's death though.  Although I understand Edward's anger,  I feel really bad for Eddie.  His life was sad and tragic. The only person who loved him was a pedophile and he never fit in anywhere.  Ronnie's death hurt quite a bit too, but overall I love this.  Can't wait to see where this goes. 

Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126086
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 20 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That SOB Peter! He needs a special cocktail of fresh squeezed lemon juice(with the pulp), Cheyenne pepper,  salt,  and black pepper distributed evenly over the open wounds that i would carve on his useless penis. I would make sure that the mixture gets inside of his pee-hole as well and let it get infected. 

 

Let me know if you need any ideas for this aholes torture scene.  I've got plenty. Lolololol

 

By the way,  this was a great chapter! 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 31 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

The conversation with Edward  and  his father was hilarious!  It almost  made  me  laugh  as  hard as I did when Carlisle  announced to Edward  that he  needed  to  take  a  dump. Can't  wait  to  see  where  this  goes. 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I feel  sick  right  now.  If this  is  a  story  with  rape  in it please  tell  me  so  that  I  can  stop  reading  this. I seriously  can't  deal. 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 27 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow! I can't  believe Edward's Dad  hit his  wife  like  that  in  front  of his  new  daughter  in  law; even  though  she was kind of asking  for  it. I hope  that  Bella doesn't  fear Edward  even  more  after  seeing  that. 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love  these  crazy  kids!  Good  to  read  a BPOV. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601744
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I must say that I love your version of Bella!  She's a frigging bad ass! Loving this story so far. 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm glad that James is dead,  but how did they know that he would choose Bella out of the line up?  Was there a plan B if she wasn't chosen?

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This chapter is great! I laughed my ass off at Edward’s doped up performance. Keep up the good work! 

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Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126007
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I for one find this story very well done so far. I'm not upset with you guys for the turn that this story has taken.  It's complicated and I was prepared for what was coming based on the title of the story. I'm writing a very complicated story myself so I know that things aren't always black and white.  I'm amazed that Bella didn't blow Emmett's cover to for the sake of her own needs. I hope that she understands Edward’s thought process in the end and that she tries to be patient with him since she knows the entire situation.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  Keep up the good work! 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow! This entire situation is a mess! I wonder if Emmett knows who the real father is. His comment towards the end of the chapter leads me to believe so.

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This story is truly amazing!  I love how everything connects. Can't wait for the next chapter! 

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 229369
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't begin to tell you how much I heart Bella in this story! I loved that she fired that gun to get everyone's asses in line! I also see that Jacob is begging for a bullet in his family jewels just as James received.  I can't believe that he would have the audacity to flirt with Bella in front of her husband on their wedding day! I'm curious about Alec. I'm curious to see if his protective side will come out as the wolves descend. I hope to see more of the crime side of the family in this sequel. I have nothing against fluff by any means and I'm glad that your characters  have some moral decency.  But I felt that it kind of overshadowed the  fact that they are in essence criminals.

 

Please don't take this as a diss to this story by any means,  it's just when I see such great potential in a story,  I tend to get opinionated. Lol Very intriguing start so far. 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Omg! I can't believe that Jacob had the balls to mouth off that way to a Don and Donna! Clearly he is nuts and he has no sense of self preservation at all.  Apart from Aro's death, Jacob’s death will be a pleasure to read.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

GGlad that sick fuck is gone.  I figured that he had some sort of plan to take Bella at some point. Great chapter! 

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I can't believe that Bella’s  whore Aunt admitted to screwing her ex-husband!  Good chapter! 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Oh this is going to be interesting.  I'm sure that Esme will hate not having Edward on deck for her own disgusting reasons. 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This story reminds me  a lot of a story called  The Red Line that I read on fanfiction.net, and just like that story, this one is getting harder and harder to read. You are a very good writer,  but I don't think that I have the patience for a story like this right now.  So I have to stop reading.  Maybe, I might be able to bring myself to come back to this in the future. Good luck with this. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

ttb

 

Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 171243
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When I read reviews for stories,  I am  continually amazed at how much slack the readers  cut Bella even when  she is clearly an asshole in a story. Yet every little thing that Edward does gets slammed far worse. "Oh he shouldn't have left her that way!" Lol It's total bullshit! Sometimes walking away is best. It keeps heads from getting cracked open in the heat of passion.  Lol  Honestly, if i were him, I would have had  that marriage annulled no matter what anyone had to say. She has done nothing but make these already horrible  situations worse. Everything has to be her way all the time,  and as much as I hate the fact that her dog died, I'm glad that it happened because she needs to learn that her actions have consequences. Poor Marcus could have been killed, because she couldn't improvise and roll up some toilet paper and use it as a pad like other people do when they are without. People are trying to kill you but you don't keep the gun you were given nearby. LoL

 

I really hope that she gets a fucking clue before someone else dies trying to protect her. Your writing is awesome by the way. Can't wait for the next chapter! 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I understand Bella’s anger, I really do. But it's really starting to get old. Talking to mob guys and making scenes in front of possible enemies while dressed provocatively? She’s not at all acting smart.  Hell, at this point, I wouldn't tell her anything either because she acts like a child. It's clear that something more is going on,  yet she is too busy acting out to get a clue. 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I guess Bella didn't think about the fact that she would have to mingle amongst criminals and stuck up mob wives in that dress. Lol I understand her anger,  but she is only making herself look bad. I wonder how many men are going to proposition her on her own wedding day?  Lololol

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I can understand Edward’s anger to a certain degree.  He loves her, but it is  impossible for her to keep her promises to him even to save her own life. If I were in his position. I would be scared to death of getting more attached to someone that I might lose. Although I get why Bella did what she did,  she could have died.  He’s running scared because and fears that he will lose her because she is ruled by her emotions,  and that is a death sentence in that business.  She ran out in the middle of a gunfight with zero regard for her safety.  How do you trust someone fully who you know will behave wrecklessly? Regardless of how he feels,  he will need to find a better way to deal with these situations.  I get needing to calm down,  but he's barely spoken to her in weeks. That is not okay.  They both have growing up to do. Great story. 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow! This is crazy!  I feel really badly for Bella and Kate,. I can't imagine losing parents in such a horrible way. Can't wait to find out more about the situation and for Edward and Bella's relationship to further  develop. 

Danger In New York by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 536]
Summary: Past Featured Story

danger

 

A Corrupt district attorney and his daughter who pays the ultimate price for her father's betrayal. Two brothers at war and a family divided.

Twins Edward/Anthony. Mature content, mention of rape, abuse, drug use, prostitution, human trafficking, crime.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90965 Read Count: 84407
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's funny that he thought that with a mafia family after you that one squad car would be enough protection. They might as well have just left the front door open for these guys.  I'll be interested to see where this goes. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

TOTGA

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280777
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can't wait for the next chapter! 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

How horrible of Tanya to abandon her family that way. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A very interesting start.  Eager to see where this goes.