Penname: QuietMari [Contact] Real name: Mauri
Member Since: 25 Nov 2014
Membership status: Member

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Bella and Alice are best friends trying to make the best of their situations. Alice has Edward and Bella has her teacher, Jasper, who has a few secrets of his own.

Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118047 Read Count: 32830
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: QuietMari Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I absolutely LOVE this story I've read it now three or four times and each time its amazing. I think the reason I love it so much is because it hits very much close to home for me and my situtations in the past but even still its amazing. One thing I will say, You should go back and edit through your chapters. You've made a number of spelling/grammer errors but the story is so good you really don't pay attention to them. Still, its always best to edit. That being said, I look forward to many more of your stories :)