Reviews by rachelcullen77
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

*sobs*

I am going to be tearing up for the rest of this story, I can tell. It was brilliantly written...so horrific, but you write fantastically together...brilliant!

 

So sad though....It's unbelieveable what she's going through!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

*gulps* I am in tears here. She is so broken, and so lost, and I wish I could go and just hug her.

 

Gah, you write her pain so well, I feel it as if it was my own. I can't believe how well written this, it was so good, so painful and sad to read. Well done.

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

oh thank god he helped her a bit...thankyouthankyouthankyou....Poor poor Bella.

 

Scary chapter guys, but I loved it. I love how you have me sitting on the edge of my seat all the time.

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

Great chapter. I loved the insight into his mind. I'm surprised, if he loved her so much, that he was able to do that....It would kill me to do that to someone I love. But I am glad that he managed to sneak her food etc.

 

Thank you for writing guys. Another brilliantly written chapter.

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

Great chapter. Poor poor poor Bella. I feel so so sorry for her. She's lost herself now too. I can't wait to see where you take this.

 

Thanks for writing, it was brilliant as usual.

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

Wow....you were right, that was extremely creepy!

 

I seriously hope all his plans for Bella do not go through like that! She doesn't deserve it at all.

So, Edward is his son? Interesting twist. I'm looking forward to where this goes.

 

I GOT MY ALERT!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

It IS getting crazy, thats right! It makes my heart hurt with every chapter. I just want to help her!!! She deserves so much better! I hope Esme and Bella get a sort of closerish relationship. Bella seems to trust her quite a bit.

 

Aro is acting very hypocriticalish to me. He's yelling at Bella for something that is no fault of her own. I seriously hate him...you've created a very powerful character with him though.

 

great chapter, well done guys!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

So we finally meet Edward....I quite like him, I'm interested to see more of him, and how like Aro he is. I can't wait for more. Well done!

 

xx

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

I love Edward...that scene was amazing from his POV. Aro....*sighs* I hope he doesn't do anything too terrible to them both, but I feel like he will...Great chapter. Loved it XD

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

I love Edward...that scene was amazing from his POV. Aro....*sighs* I hope he doesn't do anything too terrible to them both, but I feel like he will...Great chapter. Loved it XD

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

Oooo, creepy. I love Esme....and her cookies! I'm glad "Elizabeth" can be shown a little bit of compassion from them.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

I cannot believe I didn't have this on alert....I have LOTS to catch up on now!

 

It was great guys! I loved all of Carlisle's frustration and anger, and am so glad that Aro is finally getting back to them....so scared for where James is though!! She's still chipped! They can't run!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

Great chapter!!! I loved it!

Jacob is growing on me...generally, I hear his name aand freak out, but he's alright I suppose...LOL

Ugh...Laurent....he had to ruin it all, such an ass!!!! I can't believe he did that to Leah, he is just as bad as James! Except, he appears to be more of a coward at the moment!

xoxo

 

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

*SCREAMS* thud.....thud....thud....thud...thud...thud.....thud....thud....I'm going to crazy here.....thud...thud....thud....thud....thud.

 

Oh no oh no oh no....why is he back?!?! Ahhhh!!! I cannot wait unitl the next update....I am so scared now...please nothing bad happen...please don't hurt her!!!!

 

Awesome chapter, loved the tension and fear at the end....

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

No no no no no no no....Panicking wildly here!!!!!

They can't be found! Edward has no way of getting to them! No no no no!

 

It was a great chapter guys, seriously scary and tense and terrifying to read. I was on the edge of my seat the whole way through.

*dies* I can't believe he got them out.....ahhhhhhhhhhhhh....

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

Oh no...poor poor Edward....He sounded so lost at the end.

 

I loved the chapter, I'm glad that Aro wasn't just ignoring everything. I hope they are able to get Bella and Victoria back, and that James doesn't do anything awful to them.....

 

Thanks for writing!

 

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

w.o.w...I loved it, love love love it! It was honestly amazing! I like collapsed with relief when I realized they had the tracking device. But you guys are so not finished playing with us! haha!

 

Great chapter! Love it!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

Please please please say thats all the others coming to help them!!!! And I hope James stays out cold. He doesn't deserve to live after everything he has done to them. And Heidi was awful to, she helped James.

 

Great chapter guys!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Love it! Thank GOD they are okay! I am so happy now! I can't wait for the published result, it will be amazing. I think having Bella's POV before James is a great idea too!

 

 

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Wow....so powerfully written. He's finally getting what he deserves!

 

I can't wait till this is in print...I loved the journey, well done to you both! :D

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

LOVED IT! It has been an amazing ride, and I have enoyed it all! Brilliant ending!

Summary:

There has been a murder at the Cullen Manor. Can you help discover and uncover who the murderer is?  A collaboration from The Writer's Coffee Shop written for OhThoseCullenBoys for winning us in the FGB Auction.

 

Banner by mkystich72  .. Thank you so much.. It is wonderful.

 

 

Flash Avi

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Mystery
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15452 Read Count: 5695
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Mar 2010
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter!

 

I actually have not a clue! I am so bad when it comes to working things like this out!

 

 

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved the chapter!

 

I want him Mom...she's so goddamn cool! Hehe! And seriously, I think Charlie is taking it a TAD over the top.....LOL

 

Great chapter though, I was so excited to see this updated!

Summary:

Bella and Edward had been together since the first day of school. Jasper also had his sights set on Bella since he first laid eyes on her in 7th grade.  Constant flirtation over the years has brought Jasper to a climax. Is Bella going to feel the aftereffects?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4294 Read Count: 2960
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2010
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story! I loved it, and I LOVE the Jasper you created! So hot!!

Summary:

Bella's parents died just before her 18th birthday. She's devastated and doesn't know how to move forward. She meets a handsome man one night.  Could he be the best or the worst thing that's ever happened to her?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2591 Read Count: 410
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow....it was amazing....I was all excited cause it looked like it would be a really happy cheerful oneshot....and then it wasn't! haha! But it was brilliant!

You captured her grief perfectly, " I felt like my entire world had been pulled from under my feet" I loved that line!

 

The time went by really well, and it was really really well written! I loved reading it....can yu believe when I heard the words blonde handsome guy, I thought Jasper??? I thought you may have decided to bring him into a story....but no...LOL...I'll do the Jasper for both of us!

 

It was wonderful bb! Really great! One of the best one shots I've read in a while!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The ER

Love it wifey! You have done a great job! I am so intriqued and cannot wait to read more! xxx



Author's Response:

Aww thanks wifey!!!! (Oh and the banner is just a place holder until you do your fab job with it!)

Love you!