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Bio:
A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366578
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island
I really enjoyed the update. Curious as to why she didn't follow through with letting Edward know about her infertility? Does she think it won't last so why tell? Or is it because she is afraid it could be a reason for him to leave? If she thinks it is a valid point for any man to maybe not want to date her, why not tell him and find out if he's worthy of your love? Waiting and telling him will make it harder for both parties involved in my opinion. I will be interested to see how it plays out from here.
Author's Response:
Bella didn't discuss it because she honestly believes the dating is not going to last. She doesn't open up her wounds for just anyone and if she's going to open that one, then she wants to know the person deserves that kind of trust being put into them. Knowing Edward, it won't be long at all before he convinces her.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Why Can't You Stay
The way Bree was introduced as being a guy was super confusing, at least from a reader's POV. In my opinion, I get you wanting to maybe shock Edward with this knowledge, but I was utterly dumbfounded at first. Wondering if it was a typo error when you refered to Bree as a he! I was like, I don't ever remember anything being mentioned about that. Then I kept thinking, what is the deal with Jake? Did I miss that too? I kept thinking, do I have to go back to see if I missed something in the earlier chapters?
Hoping next chapter answers some of these question!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Walk Away
So glad you posted this early. Really helped to clear the air. So to speak. I truly like how much Edward in general rocks Bella. She questions and concerns herself with his feelings. I think she is use to caring for herself and then has a fuck it attitude, but with him...she worries non stop. She tries to deny it, but he's already made a huge impact on her life. No turning back now!! Good chapter!
Author's Response:
NO! Absolutely no turning back. It's one of those things she realizes, but is too chicken to really admit out loud.
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Moment of Perfection
She is opening herself up to him, almost all of her. I think she will eventually let him into the secrets. Like the one she shared with Jasper. Curious about that. I'm a little nervous about Edward. Headache? Another heart racing incident. Did he have stage fright in bed too? Is he anxiety ridden?
Can't wait for more!! Great update!
Author's Response:
Anxiety ridden? I don't know about that one. I'll see if I can get him to tell me. As for Jasper, he got to hear a little bit of the Mike story. We are not that lucky just yet.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Angry Men and Farfegnugen
Another great chapter. Although, Im going nuts with all these hints about Bella's past yet no insight into it. We know it was pretty messed up, but to what extent? I liked the drinking game and wonder what Emmett's deal is with guys in general? Can he not be friends with them? I mean I kind of understand Embry, but why Edward too? Man needs to grow up. Or maybe Bella should shout in his ear and bounce on his chest during his hangover until he gives. Just a thought!
Author's Response:
Much of her past will be revealed soon. Bella isn't going to just open up and talk about her scars to just anyone. She needs to feel that she can truly trust Edward to understand. She will get there, but it will be a few more chapters before it happens. Emmett just likes who he likes - like Jasper. Eventually though, things will ease up between Edward and Emmett.
Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?
Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue
And so begins the drama!! Yay
Author's Response:
Yes it does. Any idea what is in store for our favorite couple?
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Disabled List
Jacob Black will be a royal pain in my side. OR thorn. At least we have the Cullen boys to entertain us. Bella not a baseball fan? Hmmm. :)
Author's Response:
Yes the dog needs to be nuetered!! I think Bella wi change her tune about baseball real quick. :)
Your the best!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Foul Ball
Dun, dun, dun. Who got hit by a foul ball? Non other then Bella Freaking Swan!! LOL IF we all could be so lucky. Will he autograph it for her? She should at least get that out of the deal, rather then a concussion and a bump
Author's Response:
Oh, I think she will end up with a lot more than a bump on the head. Maybe some other kind of bump.LOL
Muah!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 The Visiting Team
He's such a sweet guy. Going to check up on Bella. A concussion and a Cullen, not bad in a days' work.
Author's Response:
Thats the kind of job I want!! How about you? ;)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Passed Ball
The tension is building between the two. Rose and Em have a baby boy. Ahhh. Edward sent flowers. Ahhh. Bella is listening to baseball. What???
Author's Response:
Seems, little Ms. Swan is quite smitten with a certain baseball player and can't stop thinking about him.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 First Base
First she knocks his socks off with the good looks. He is dreamy as well, then he smooches her in the doorway at the end of the night. Swoon worthy I tell you!
Author's Response:
Ahh yes swooning we all would be if we could have our very own Cullen!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 All Star Break
I loved how he was shocked to see her with his family. She is blending nicely. Now a couple of innocent dates...could there be more in the future? Hmmm
Author's Response:
Yes she is fitting in quite well. As long as niether one of them do anything stupid like climb a tree I think they might just have an intersting future.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Overtime
Such a gentleman. She saw his house and spent the night. Yay!
Author's Response:
Yes if only we all could be so lucky!! Thanks BB
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rounding The Bases
uh oh...eddie's hurt. Brook is in town. Yay me. And they hit a home run. I'm exhausted, anyone else? Checks around the room.
Author's Response:
Hmm, That Brook friend of Bella's is something else isn't she!! Yes home run, Edward scored!! Geez I think I'm exhausted now too. Nap anyone?
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Down and Out
Rundown...Eddie is injured. (yes I know he hates the nickname, but he can't hear me.) :) Bella talks smack to the nurse. Should have stabbed her with a needle. Then takes Eddie home to coddle him. He gets an ingrown hair in his ass, over reacts...takes it out on Bella and she is now pedal to the metal gone! Wowza
Author's Response:
Yes he does hate that nickname. but I won't tell him you said it. LOL Oh stabbing th enurse with a needle, ythat coul dhave been fun. Hmm, yes he did get a wild hair up his ass, remind you of anyone you know? Hint, I think he lives with you. LOL
Muah!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The Rules Of The Game
Halloween party on the horizon. Visiting gun toting Charlie fast approaching...let the games begin. LOL
Author's Response:
Think we should all run and hide now, before Emmett finds us!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Trick Or Treat
Love the prank. However, I love Superman better!! Red cape and all.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella is a very lucky girl to have a red cape wearing Edward to save the day!! She is lucky that someone I know was brilliant enough to come up with that idea!! ;)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Singing In The Rain
Love me some singing time. Good song pics. Bonding with the tikes was too cute.
Author's Response:
Lets not forget that extra special shower that Max gave Uncle Eddie!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Parents and Babies
Renee is a tiger. Trying to get Edward to sink his claws, um sperm into her daughter. LMAO. Renee is funny. Looks like Cam hit the target twice. He shoots and he scores!!
Author's Response:
Oh yes, poor Bella, momma bear wants a grand cub to spoil. I don't think it will be long before Edward's little swimmers make it to the goal line. LOL
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Options
Poor Bella...all stressed out. Edward has some tough decisions ahead. Good luck padre
Author's Response:
Yes he does, and in the end it won't even matter.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Christmas And The Unexpected
I remember this chapter well. Thank god it was a one time occurance for you. However, it ended up turning out great. Even with Tanya thrown in. But that wasn't as bad as we thought. Whew, dodged another foul ball. LOL
Author's Response:
I bet you do remember this chapter. What language was it I tried to write it in? Maybe it was Ewok or somthing. LOL It wouldn't have turned out nearly as great if you hadn't been able to decipher my chicken scratch. Hee Hee we are the only ones who know whose little test that was. LOL
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 It's Me!
Yummy...a little Edward and Jimmy time! My engine is roaring at the thought. LOL Poor Eddie...wanting a bambino of his own. Just keep swimming, swimming, swimming.
Author's Response:
Yes Jimmie is quite yummy, but we both know that it's Mr Kasey and his candy Kahne that gets your motor running. Oh they are swimmimg, swimming, swimming!!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Come Sail Away
The vacation was awesome. Can I go next time. A little fun in the sun is just what the doctor ordered...Carlisle that is. :)
Author's Response:
Yes next time we are both going!!! Greece here we come!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Let It Be Me
Here comes the drama!!! Besides poor Lilly breaking her arm. But love the cast, way to make Alice proud!
Author's Response:
Yes Auntie Alice will love the cast. Drama is knocking on their front door. Yikes!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 What Hurts The Most
Can we say...lack of communication!! Uh oh. What have they done?
Author's Response:
They opened that door an dlet drama move right in. I tired to warm them , but they just wouldn't listen. Stubborn!!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Used To Have It All Figured Out
Can I just say...Brook and Alice ROCK. They have to, to deal with those two ra-tards. Morons, idiotis...the list will go on.
Author's Response:
They do rock, although I have to say of the two, Brook i smy favorite!! She will help Alice whip their asses into shape.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Taking You Home
Thank goodness she got her shit together. Him too. We can't have two dumbasses trying to raise a baby. Just wouldn't work.
They got engaged! Yay
Author's Response:
No we can't have that, we'd have to raise it for them, and we have enough on our hands with the dumbasses we already are trying to raise. Not talking about our kids either. LOL
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Moving On And Reconnecting
Esme is here and the big showdown is next!! Woot woot
Author's Response:
Yup, Esme is gonna figure out all their little secrets. Can't hide anything from her. I wanna go house shopping with them.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Spilling The Beans
Looks like they are moving on up!! Did I mention I bought the house next to them. I'll invite you over when I can. LOL
Great update...again, but then again they all rock
Author's Response:
They rock caus eI got you to help me through it!!!n Hey you got everything unpacked yet? I wanna come over with my binoculars and spiy on Eddie while he is out at the pool. You can look too!! Yummy huh!!
OK, all caught up on your reviews here my dear. I can't thank you enough for taking the time to do that for me.!!!! You are the best!!
Muah!!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Running Towards The Finish Line
So we named slugger Zach. Cute name, plus I like his initials. We had things finalized Jake's behavior. Time to drop him back to the playground with the toddlers, where he belongs. I loved the shower, and the donating of gifts. Those that have the resources to give, definitely should. Especially in this economy!!
Awesome job as always. Excited for the upcoming nuptials!
Author's Response:
Hey BB, you know it wouldn't be nearly as awesome withot your help!! Yes Jake needs to go back to the playground and learn how to play nicely. I thinkthe donation idea is good too!! I think that is going to be how Edward arranges that big surporise at the reception involing one of our favorite bands and songs. He will make a huge donation to that person's favorite charity to get him to partake inthe surprise. Sound good?
I'm about 3/4 of the way done with the chapter, you might just have it waiting in your mailbox when you get home from the animal hose today.
Muah, love ya BB!!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Our Time Begins Now
Another great chapter. I loved the wedding (in person), and meeting Steve. You know that was a dream of mine. LOL No incidents and Alice wasn't her normal demanding self. Let's keep that girl knocked up. I like it.
So when are we leaving for Greece? I mean the bridal party is included too, right? LOL
Great job...loved it as always.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Greece Is The Word
Even though this chapter is written, I still believe 'actual' research is a must. I've never seen a retractable roof. So how much does a villa like that cost? Could we swing it? LOL Not from it though. :)
Awesome as always. Love this and sad to think it's almost over.