Thanks...Beth's transformation wasn't originally planned it was born out of going crazy trying to write an entire story with an angry toddler!  As for Leah, that poor girl needed some closure so I had to give it to her.  Normally I don't go all anti-jake, but in this story he had to be the bad guy and I'm enjoying writing that side of him becasue it isn't cartoonish or 1dimensional, he has reasons for doing it.  Like my notes hint I'm a Tolkein fiend and that was my fantasy squee-worthy series pre-twilight, so that was perfect and it will serve a greater purpose.  I'll see what I can do about getting you one...maybe if you're good we can swing one for your birthday! ;}