Reviews by pinklady34
Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41876
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Dismal World

oh man...just foung this story anf this is so goood!  i really think if edward tells emmett and alice that he is in love with bella they may lay off and help...its not fair that they can love and he can't!  screw the money...they are friends and he helped them all before with their own problems.

Summary: Past Featured Story

botm

Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

i just found this story yesterday and i have to say that this is just so wonderful and passionate.  i have loved every single chapter that i have read.  i had a feeling that jake and victoria were going to hit it off...and i am really happy for it!  i hope alice and bella have a good pregnancy and delivary.  so is bella going to have twins or just one child.  i think they should have twins!!!!  i hope to see another update soon.  great job!

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Have You Seen My Innocence?

oh man...i love how they love each other instantly and edward is being so loving and protective.  i can't wait to read more!  i hope edward gives jacob a good ass kicking and make him drink his own blood or whatever!  that was really bad and sick but you made your point and made me feel like hugging her when she was done with her story.  man that was bad!  can't wait for more!

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

omg...that was just so sweeeet!  he desearved that so much and i am so glad that edward and jasper gave it to him personally...i love the who demon taking over edwards body situation...that was freaky.

great job!

Summary: Past Featured Story

game

Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Our Time Begins Now

this story is just so awesome and i just love it...i have not been able to stop reading this story for the past three nights.  great job and i can't wait for more.

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 No More Broken Promises

this is awesome and i love this story...can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! I am glad that you do. I am trying to get the next chapter out as fast as I can. Its giving me some trouble, but I have about 3/4 of it done.

 

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Thankful

this has been a great story and i sad to see it go but i totally understand your reasons for it!  because i definitely don't want to see drama, i love things how they are and i can't wait to read the epilogue.  i wonder what rose has been keeping from everyone and wonder how many more kids bella and edward are going to have.  i really hope edward finds a coaching job,  i think that would be awesome and very cool to have someone like him to look up to!  can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

HI, thanks for understanding why is now time to send them on to live their happy ever after.  I will definately be filling everyone in on what is up with Rose as well as what they have all done and so on. I really think you will like it.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow...that was alot to take in.  i can't believe esme is dead.  i wonder what edward is up to.  i wish alice would have explained better what was happening there, but i guess time will tell!

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LOVE THIS STORY...CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

edward and bella are getting so comfortable together and it is a beautiful thing to see!  can't wait for more!

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

on the cheeck....she should have gone for it!  i hope edward takes control soon!

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow...the last couple of chapters have been very cute of them getting to know eachother and spending time together.  but are they ever going to go for the next step in their relationship?  it usually doesn't take so long for older couples to go to the next level...it seems like they are playing it tooo safe.



Author's Response:

Well they really don't have the time to take it to the next step. The schedule of the show and stuff leaves them too busy. The cute stuff is stuff that they manage to do. Of course once the show is over... ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is stalking him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  

She's also a 110 year old vampire.

  ********

  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200652 Read Count: 30101
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Aug 2010
Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Love Letters

oh boy...the story is very intriguing and i can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, PinkLady34!

I just added the next chapter...and another one tonight...

Kathie

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Too Close to Home

wow...that was too much!  i am excited to read that edward almost got really worried thinking it was bella that was hurt in the chapter before.  i can't wait for those two to have some alone time soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Pinklady34!

They will, eventually, get some alone time...

Kathie

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Discoveries

awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks, pinklady34!

Kathie

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Before the Dawn

wow...last two updates were awesome!  he touched her cheeck and sniffed her!  freaking cute! 



Author's Response:

I loved the SNIFFING!

Glad you did too, PinkLady34!

Kathie

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Taken

wow...those two updates were awesome.  can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Two more today...and maybe three tomorrow...

Kathie

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The First question

wow...those last couple of chapters were so intense!  i can't wait to read what happens next and how edward is going to take to bella's news.



Author's Response:

Intense, yes!  And now...a bit of fluffy...

Thanks for reading!

Kathie

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Anticipation

oh i am so ecstatic to read that he told her that he loved her first.  that was awesome!  i can't wait for more and bella really needs to find out about the venom in her teeth can it do edward harm with just kissing.  she needs to ask her other friends from the denalis?



Author's Response:

I'm glad that made you happy, PinkLady34!

There will be more kissing...I promise!

Kathie

Summary:

banner

 

Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh man...what is so hard to think about?  i would jump on that band wagon quick for sure...lol!

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

awesome....freaking great!  but they are keeping their relationship private i don't think that is going to go so well!  especially on him having to go to public places with tanya and then keeping his hands to himself with bella when they go out!  not going to last at all...lol!

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

great two updates and i absolutely love those two together.  they are so hot, passionate and so funny together.  i love how they keep open communication with eachother, those 3 weeks are going to be very long.  please update soon.

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow...that was totally hot!  i really wished that they would not keep the relationship in secret!  there is nothing to hide and i really think edward should retire, he has enough money.  i would hate to see my boyfriend making out with another woman even if it was acting.



Author's Response:

Actually... retirement is a topic of conversation in a future chapter.

Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

great update and i just love these two together.  i can't wait for angela and ben to meet.  and i really think it is time for edward to step up and say that he wants their relationship to go public...and screw the media!  and bella needs to understand that the media can basically go to hell...lmao!

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh this story is just awesome!  i am so hoping for edward to get jealous and frequently!  i hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm getting a lot of requests for some jealousward!  I'll see what I can do!

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114431
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: pinklady34 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

i really hope it is esme coming to visit...but she said that she was a blonde bombshell...so i am hoping that is tanya the ex-girlfriend who turned lesbian.  can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Hey!  Good Memory.  Most readers completely forgot the mention of Tanya being his ex that left him for a girl! :)