I love the fact that the playroom has a veiwing room off of it. I have never thought about that before. It's intriguing.

Thank you for the wonderful update. It was great as usual. I look forward to the next update. They're all so amazing!

I love the way you think. It's amazingly twisted, in a good way, that fits along with me. I always love to see what you came up with next. You amaze me.

You're making us wait? You're killing me with anticipation and suspense! I can't wait for your update, but I will...eagerly, without a pout.  :)

Amazing update. You're writing is like a fine wine...or Georgy Clooney, it just gets better with age. The more you write, the better it semes. Keep up the great work!

I want someone to give me a bath. I'm a very dirty gurl! It seems so sentual and caring. How do I sign up?

Wonderful as always. Keep up the stellar work! I look forward to each and every update you give us!

I think the addition of the photos adds a visual aspect to the story that is prceless.  Keep it up, please.

The way you started this chapter was different than the others and I like slight the change up. It keeps the reader interested and allows different styles of writing to emerge from you, the writer. Bravo.

Perfect chapter. Thanks for the update! :)

I don't know if I would physically be able to get into the inspection pose above. My body just doesn't bend that way. :)

I loved the chapter. It was informative yet kept the readers undivided attention.

Thank you! Off to read the next chapter!

Please tell me you're going to be updating again today? Please? With a cherry on top? You don't understand! I NEED more!!!!!

I never would have thought of the nipple jewelry as being the gold earring things from last chapter. Good job at confusing me. :)

I loved the chapter.

Can I have some? I'll be a very good girl. Please?

I'll be patiently awaiting your next chapter. I can't wait to see what Sir does to Butterfly next. Oh, the possibilities.

Thank you so much for the update! I LOVED it.

Wonderful chapter. I'm so happy you updated. I was getting worried since you hadn't done it yet. Everything okay?

The writing is amazing and the flow of the chapter is perfect. Well done! Keep it up, please?

I keep wanting to tell you and forgetting, that I have a google doc now. I don't know how to work it and don't know what kind of information you need from me to find mine or something, but just let me know and I'll learn. Just for you. :) I'm technologically unsavy, but I'll figure things out if you want them, just let me know!

Update soon, please? I love you long time!

Hey! I'm still reading and I still love it! Keep up the good work.I like the various different perspectives on the situations.

Great writing as usual. and the visuals were unexpected, but very much appreciated. Thank you!

Good advice, Carlisle. On your pet, not in a scratchy, unfeeling tissue. :)

And thank you for making me join the wreck room. It's freaking amazing. My jaw still hasn't been picked up from the floor yet. I don't know what I was expecting, but it wasn't that.

Thank you for the update. I look forward to each and every one!

Go Daddy Carlisle! I freaking loved it! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! You just made my crappy day so much better!

Thank you!

You always leave off at the best parts! Urgh! Frustrating! You have to stop doing that!   :) Such a tease!

Thanks for the update! I can't wait until he finally gets his mouth on her!

So he finally did it! And he didn't bte her. They say we learn something new every day and well, Edward learned how to do Oral. Good for him!

When is he going to figure out she is his mate? I want to see his reaction!

Thank you for the update. It's great. Onto the next chapter!

Thank you! So freaking hot. This is what I had been waiting for since the beginning. You did a wonderful job with it too. It went way beyond my expectations.

The banner is flipping awesome too.

Thank you for the update. Did you do it just because I asked?    :)

Thank you for the update. I like the new POV. It's new and exciting and refreshing.

I havent checked my email just yet this morning, but i hope there's another update waiting for me in there.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Oh! Emmy Bear, what did you get yourself into now? Does Rose need to beat some sense into you? Really? How could you let him do that to you?

Thanks for the update, it's perfect as usual. I can't wait for the next one. I want to know what Rose is going to say when she walks in there.

I hope everything's going all right with you.

FYI, fuck-hot picture of Kellan.

I hope you can get this review...have you been getting my other ones? I'm finally back at home for the holiday, (I'll be returning to my friend's house tomorrow) and using my own computer.

So much has gone on the past couple of chapters! So exciting and scary at the same time, thena gain, all change is kinda scary. I love the writing and the ideas behind each chapter. The overall layout is great and the main idea is amazing. I dont know why nobody had thoguht of this before.

Thank you for the new chapter, i'm very thankful for it. Happy thanksgiving! Gobble gobble.

Congrats on the 900K views of this story! So exciting!

Now, I REALLY need to find a desk job! Do you think they'll let me put this in my work contract to have at least twice a week? Oooooo, that would be so amazing!

Great update! Thanks!

Oh, I can't wait to see what happens. You like teasing us don't you? I was hoping it would be this chapter, but now I have to wait to read. I know I'm a greedy little heifer.

Thank you SO much for the update. I loved it!

She finally did it! He finally let her! I can't wait to see how she reacts to his cum. Will she be tired like Charlotte or will something else happen? These are the things we gots to know as readers, girlie. :)

Thanks for the wonderful update! I hadn't heard from you in a few days and I was starting to get worried. Everything okay?

How's she going to react to it? I wanna know! You can't just leave me hanging there! How evil! It's so not fair! I hate cliffies!

As for the pictures/Gif's, in the first one, holy hell! How much further down does that thing go?

please tell me you're going to update soon. I love this story. I can't wait to see the secrets Edward is keeping from her!

Definately worth elongating it. I loved it. Definately loved it. Keep it up!

I wonder if Edward's going to get his head out of his ass before Jake and Charlie come back and try and take her away. Or will that be the changing point in Edward?

Thank you for the update! I loved it!

You're right, Jake is quite the ass. He needs to be taken out back and shot for some of the things he'd said and thought.

And Charlie needs to grow up and really think about things. He wanted her to stay around for him, but Bella needs to grow up and find her own way. They way he did things and the reasons he selfishly wanted to keep her around jsut pushed her away. If he had asked her to go to Seattle for college, I'm sure she would have. She would still be around and he'd still see her, but now, he just pushed her away and there's a big chance she wont ever come back. He lost her with his actions.

GO BELLA!!! RUN BEFORE YOU GET STUCK IN THAT RICKITY OLD TOWN YOU WANT SO BAD TO GET OUT OF!!!! GO TO ALICE, SHE'LL KNOW WHAT TO DO!!!!!!

Thank you for the update! I wake up each day lookng forward to this update! I loved it!

You might also want to do a Jake POV on finding out/Charlie telling him that Bella left after the story wraps up. That would be frickin hilarious!

Thank you for the extra, bonus chapter today! I loved it. I love her attitude! I'd pat her on the back and tell her to live her life the way she wants to! You go girl!

Once I got home, I'd be packing my things and putting them out in the truck under a tarp or something and I'd out the door once Charlie got home to go to sleep. If she left earlier, she runs the risk of him catching her out there on the road and she doesnt want THAT! Just the fact that Mrs. Clearwater contacted her and booked her into this kind of thing without even talking to her, and then added a whole bunch more time to it because 'Bella will need the extra help,' is absolutely asinine! I mean really? What are all these people smoking? RUN BELLA!!!! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!!!! RUN AND DONT LOOK BACK!!!!

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I havent had someone hit on me at my place of work before, but I have had one of those bosses that no matter what you do, it's not good enough and was so vindictive that she would berate me and bitch at me for the smallest things until I went home crying my eyes out each and every day. That was the absolute worst! I'd rather fuck a duck than go back and work for that bitch.

I've never liked anyone enough to sexually harrass someone, whether it be at work or out of it.

Thank you for the update. It's amazing,just like the other chapters. Poor Bella. She's gotten the short end of the stick every single time in this story,the only upsides are: her truck made it as far as it did before it broke down, the kind people drove her straight to Alice's place without killing her, Alice let her in and let her stay with her. Poor Bella. She's got it rough, and I can only imagine it's only going to get worse before it gets better.

When might we meet Edward?

That means Edward's coming up!!!!! YAY!!!!

I think she's going to fall and bust her ass and they'll put her as a waitress or something. :) I dont know, but Bella has never been stable on her feet, so something bad's going to happen. I can feel it.

I can't wait until the next update! You've had me going all day today! If this is what it's going to be like until the entire story is posted...well, I think i need to pace myself a little bit more. Everytime i see that the story's updated, my heart starts beating rapidly!!! Oh! My heart!

My stripper name would be Furball Rockdale Dr. Weird, huh? Well, we can't all have great stripper names.

CLAWS! Here they come!

"Listen here you ass. Dont you dare think your shit dont stink. You're worse than the grinch at christmas. Pull that stick out of your ass and you may even find your head up there too. Either mind your own business or stay the fuck away from me."

Bella needs to snark at him big time. He's an ass!

Please, oh please, tell me Bella's going to tell her mom to go pound salt! Please!!!!!!

I wanted to go through the screen and strangle Renee! She's so stupid, manipulative and petty! And Phil! He's just enabling her! He needs to get his balls back from Renee's purse, reattach them and kick her to the curb, while still being there for Bella.

Make Bella choose the right one! Edward all the way! Renee is just going to destroy her while he builds her back up! There's no comparisson!!!