Reviews by rmcrms5
The Faith by TwilightDramaTeach Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

The Faith BannerThe Faith BannerIsabella Swan lives a solitary existence.  She is the only child of a single parent father.  Bella is also a daughter of The Faith.  She is isolated and segregated, but all that is about to change.  Today is September 13.  It’s Bella’s sixteenth birthday, and at 11:58 pm, the time of her birth, things will never be the same.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8920 Read Count: 2579
[Report This] Published: 16 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Faith

Good, but I would be mortified.  so is this just a o/s?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing.  I am kind of overwhelmed, because am such a fan of your stories.  The whole idea was supposed to be mortifying.  The fact that these three men can get people to let them watch such intimate moments is rather insane.  I am considering making this into a full length story, but it will probably not happen until summer, once school is out.  Again, thanks for the review.

TDT

Summary:

Edward has a hot date with the campus good-time girl. Will the end result be enough to keep him from falling for someone else? Rated M for mature content, including slash. AH, E/J.

This story was originally written for the FML Contest hosted by Fanfiction.net.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6596 Read Count: 285
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2010 Updated: 24 Mar 2010
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LMAO!!!!  That has got to be the funniest thing I've read in a long time!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  Writing this little one-shot was a lot of fun, though I had a bit of a hard time figuring out how to slash my prompt.  I definitely wanted to give Edward a chance at little loving with Dr. Whitlock after subjecting him to sex with Rosalie *shudder* and pulling the rug out from under him.

Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.  It's appreciated :)

To Keep You Safe by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 223]
Summary: Past Featured Story

safe

Brilliant scientist Bella McCarty has been getting life threatening letters: someone wants her dead. Jasper Whitlock is determined to do anything to keep her safe.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 223472 Read Count: 16456
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I agree, Eclipse was wonderful!  I love your story and flip each time there's an update.  I can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Rose has to be the one with Emmett.  Tanya wouldn't say anything nice about Bella & Jasper.  Can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Hmmm...you may be right. But may be Tanya's act around her brother and Edward is an act??? :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hmm, I hadn't thought of Edward & Rose possibly being together?  Her comment about needing to keep what she found for later has me over thinking things now.  Can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sticking with me!

I believe there's some action on the horizon, so stay tuned! :)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh shit!  Not fair!!!  Please update soon.  I love how overprotective Emmett is being.  It's perfectly natural for his personality, the fact that he raised her and he knows someone is out to kill her.  Anything less and I'd be disappointed in him.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for loving my Emmy (I'll share him with you for your continued support)! :)

More action on the horizon, so stay tuned!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Freaking love this story!  I love how easy you make it to hate Edward, no redeeming quailities at all.  My only complaint is there aren't enough breadcrumbs for me to figure out the ending...lol!  That's what makes it so great!

Can't wait til the next chapter to see some lovin' and what Edward is up to, because you just know he isn't going to let it go that easy.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for keeping up with my little fic.

Lemons coming up. It's only the beginning! :)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Probably one of the best first times I've read in a while. So mean to leave it on a cliffy though.  :)



Author's Response:

I love me some evil cliffies!

Glad you liked my lemon!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh shit!  Well we knew it was coming some time.  And now Alice is in the mix.  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Thanks for keeping up with the story!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh shit!  Edward is pissed.  Jasper and Emmett are going to go crazy



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and your support!

Here’s a little teaser for the next chappy:

 

 

Emmett dropped his head with his own guilt.  “You’re right, I didn’t even think about it. I thought she was safe with the new fence....”

 

“Em, I c-can’t live without her, I can’t…“

 

“I know…I know,” he said, tears in his own eyes. “We’ll find her. We have to.”

 

My phone chirped indicating a message and something told me that I needed to check it. It was from Edward.

 

I have taken back what is rightfully mine. Her body will belong to me. - - EAM

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

You have so many possible suspects it's hard to figure out who is after them... or her... or him...



Author's Response:

Mwuhahahahha!

That's the entire point bb!

 

Thanks so much for reading! Glad you like it!

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Its your story so whatever you decide, I'll read.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can't wait to hear Bella's story



Author's Response:

 

I don't think my Bella's angsty story will come anywhere near your in depth, emotional roller coaster that your Bella went through! I am honored that you are keeping up with my story and I thank you again for your support.

 

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: To Keep You Safe

very good!



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks! That means a lot!  :)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

So which one is pregnant or are they both?



Author's Response:

Hehehehehe!

You'll just have to stay tuned to find out! LOL ;)

 

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I need to know...is Bella pregnant?????  Am I wrong to hope so?

I squealed when I saw the update!  I'm so hooked!



Author's Response:

All will be revealed in the next chapter bb! It's in the hands of my beta's as we speak.

Thanks for reading!

 

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm bummed about the baby, but you're right about the timing.  Can't wait to see when Emmett finds out Rose is pregnant.  Oh and I sense trouble with Edward showing up.  He's got to be pissed and ready to issue some serious ultimatums



Author's Response:

Who knows, maybe Bella and Jasper will get thier little bundle of joy one day!

 

Thanks for reading!

 

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Yeah an update!  I know you won't tell me, but is the 'other woman' Jasper's mother? She has a vindeta against Bella that goes far enough back.



Author's Response: You're right, I'm not telling who the other woman is! LOL Working on the next chapter now. Thanks for reading hun!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well at least we know why Jasper's mother hates Bella.  Bitch!  This is going to be interesting



Author's Response:

I smell a cat fight brewing!

Thanks for reading bb!

 

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I cannot get over Jasper's mother.  What a bitch!  And the plot thickens with James in the old picture.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Jasper's mother reminds me of my EX Monster in law! haha

 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh shit!  That means someone is following them also to know where the car was to tamper with it.  Poor Jasper, trying to propose to Bella.  And I wish Rose would just tell Emmett already about the baby.



Author's Response:

Something or someone is always happening to Bella! LOL

Rose is gonna fess up soon, promise.

 

Thanks again for sticking with my story!

 

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Love it but my fingernails are almost to the nub.  I keep trying to guess who teamed up with Rose, because you almost make James look like the smoke screen.  Is this deliberate or am I trying to make more out of what I'm reading than there really is?



Author's Response:

Stop biting those nails hun!

All will be revealed about Alice and James and everyone else in due time. Thanks for reading!

 

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'm almost thinking James was a set up based on Alice's conversation.  I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me on this one!

 

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Kick his ass Jasper!  Hmm, who is she?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and sticking with me hun!

Stay tuned to find out who 'she' is! :)

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

You scared me at the beginning of this chapter. I actually went back and reread the last one trying to figure out when Jasper died. Not nice!  I'm glad he's alive and yeah, Bella's pregnant!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading hun.

When I did my re-read of the chapter before publishing it, I actually scared myself with the funeral scene! lol

 

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

 

T

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

not fair!



Author's Response:

He he he.

Thanks for reading hun!

 

t

Love and Obsession by michelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 284]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner1-1.jpg picture by michellychell

Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.

Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.

B/Jms at first then B/E


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 36371
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Sounds like there may be a little inside job going on?



Author's Response:

I"m debating how I want this to play out;.

Summary: Past Featured Story

ut

 

How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37452
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Weird

:)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Signature

Hmmm

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Aftermath

So will James come in and be her knight in shining armour?  Edward is an idiot!



Author's Response:

Lol. I don't usually like to give things away but yes, it was with a woman. My Edward isn't gay!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Surprises

I'm cautiously wondering if James is going to be the good guy in this story...



Author's Response:

That seems to be everyone's concern, considering James is never a good guy in anyone's stories.  Thanks for reading hun!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Unexpected Turn

I can't wait to start getting pieces to the puzzle of why Edward cheated

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: What She Said

Oh shit!  I know he cheated, but please tell me Tanya is not pregnant with his baby!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Eyewall

Please tell me this is going to have a happy ending somewhere?  And is Tanya's baby really Edwards?

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Phoenix

I'm glad she left town and is going to take time for herself.  I can't wait to see her become stronger.  I still would like to know what Edward wants to say to her.  James is just an ass, plain and simple.

Please send me the interview.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Music

Glad to see her getting her life together.  I'd love for her to talk to Edward just because I want to hear what he has to say.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my little story.  Here is the James interview.  Enjoy!

docs(.)google(.)com/fileview?id=0B1g9WHUcp1A9ZDQ2MWNhMzgtZjdiNC00YjFlLWI3ZGUtMzA1YmE4N2M0MDhh&hl=en&authkey=COfs5ZMO

Summary:

I have consolidated the out takes of People like us into one place!  These are the sub stories born out of the pages of PLU. 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54321 Read Count: 224127
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Carlisle & Esme

This had me smiling the whole time. I kept remembering a comment my father-in-law made one time about my mother-in-law. He said "It may be like dead meat but it still puts a smile on her face."  My sisters-in-law have learned never to talk sex when he could come in the room.  We don't want to know!



Author's Response:

yeah, we all think like that and then one day our kids are saying something like "THAT IS DISGUSTING!!! Can't you two BEHAVE yourselves?????" as they apologise for our hand holding or some other form of PDA

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Emmett & Rosalie

I actually think they are by far the hottest couple!!!



Author's Response:

hmmm, there is something about them isn't there!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251278
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Fantastic!  Can I kick this Teresa's ass?  I'm so glad Charles showed up and is finally willing to apologize.  It had to take him a while to overcome his pride and I'm glad he did.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...

Absolutely beautiful! 

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: EPOV with Caleb

That was one of the most beautiful things I've read in a while!  Wonderful!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

:)  I'll be sad to see the story end.  It's one of the better 'Bella gets pregnant/Edward's and ass' stories I've read.  I truly enjoyed it.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

:)

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Extra (takeout)

Aw! Loved it.

Taking the Fork by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

One tragic night, the world changes for Edward and Bella Cullen.  The life they've struggle to build over the last decade is threatened and Edward is left with nothing but his memories as he tries to will his love back to him.  This couple has handled a decade of lifes bumps, but can they survive a fork in the road?

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13987 Read Count: 1723
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2011
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: An Unexpected Triple

So where is Bella's family?



Author's Response:

It all gets explained next chapter, but Renee and Phil have been on vacation and out of touch, and Charlie was there but had to go home.  Edward's only been awake for 3 days remember, so it hasn't been that long.  Thanks for the review and all will be explained soon, i promise!

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45257
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

Well this could be good for Edward if she admits she wants him for more than just a sub.  Or this could be bad if she decides to cut him loose because she can't face what she feels.

Exclusively by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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WINNER - TEXTS FROM LAST NIGHT CONTEST - hosted on Fanfiction.net

 

Edward was a sexual predator. The bars and clubs of Manhattan were his hunting ground. Would he let the ultimate prize slip through his fingers?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 2969
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Exclusively Bella's POV

I like both povs, but possessive sounds better in Edwards. 



Author's Response:

It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)

http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617

Luv BBxx

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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stories/186/images/DIAMONDINTHEROUGHBestLemon-300x237.png    stories/186/images/DIAMONDINTHEROUGHBestJacob-300x237.png   


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254395
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

The moment between Bella & Esme made me cry.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Happy Easter to you and yours as well! Loved it! I'm very curious what surprised Edward at the end. Can't wait til next week!



Author's Response:

maybe it wasn't what Edward SAW -- Maybe it was more what he DIDN'T see....thanks for reading ...louise

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Love it! I'm glad Bella and Leah cleared the air. So do her friends not know what really went on between her and James or am I oversimplifying the end?

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

In all the craziness of Thanksgiving, Black Friday and decorating a cake for my mother-in-law's 70th birthday here it is almost midnight and I FINALLY get to read my chapter.  I'm glad I waited until I could relax and enjoy it.  I love that she has Jane to help her thru some of her doubts.  Did Leah take the pictures home with her?



Author's Response:

I will answer your question... no Leah did not take the pictures, she put them away ....

Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm ready for my reward of another update!  I love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, here’s your treat

     a little teaser

 

“Baby, I’m going to have to hear all your shit. I need to know. Because I need to be able to know what’s ok and what’s not. I need to know how far to push you, without causing damage either physically or emotionally and I don’t ever want to hurt you. You are going to have to trust me with everything you have in you. It’s a process, we start out slow, when I can trust you, and you can trust me, without any doubt” He smiled “Baby, that’s when we made it to the top. But it’s a long way up there. There’s going to be lots of tears and letting go.” He took a deep breath, glanced around the street then looked back into my eyes “My question for you is, do you want to climb up that ladder with me?”

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I'm so excited and can't wait!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm really loving this story.  I wonder if Edward will walk her home?

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I absolutely love it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a review...lml

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I liked the meaning behing Bella's tatoo. Maybe I'm paranoid waiting for the other shoe to drop, but is James watching Edward's house as well? Is that why Seth was staring out the window? I told you, I keep waiting for him to show up.  :)



Author's Response:

I can't confirm or deny James being there...sorry, guess you just have to wait and see...Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh yummy!  I cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review...lml

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm glad they went over the rules and cannot wait to get to the "good" stuff!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a review, here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

“What are you thinking about?” I turned to face his voice; he was sitting in one of the chairs, watching me. His face was relaxed but he had an intense look in his eyes. I released the lip I didn’t realize I was biting “I was just imagining being restrained and blindfolded”

 

He didn’t say anything at first, he just shifted in the chair, before asking “What was happening to you?”

 

“Mmm...”I hummed “....nameless, faceless people were sitting in those chairs, watching me struggle not to cum.” I blushed with the last word.

 

“Ahhh... and that would be something you would enjoy?”

 

 I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, I didn’t realize before but the room had a smell of Jasmine and Lavender. “Yes...I think I would enjoy that very much.”

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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

love it!



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Thanks ...lml

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I absolutely loved it!  I can't wait for more Thurs!

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Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I'm staying home to work on my novel and ff stories...don't know how 'safe' that is. lol  I hope you feel better and have a wonderful New Year's as well.

If James was in Forks, then obviously it wasn't him. I think there's something wrong with Heather, but can't decide if she's tied to James or someone else. I don't think Officer Hawk is a bad guy. I think he's just a jerk cop or like she said, maybe he was part of her original investigation.

I think one of the installers of the alarm system broke in. They would know the company default code to punch in.

There are just too many bad guys to choose from and each have different agendas with Bella & Edward. I think that's part of why I love this story so much.

I have another rec for you to try if you haven't already. It takes a bit to get thru the first couple of chapters, but after that you're hooked. I actually spend HOURS discussing and figuring out the puzzle pieces trying to guess 'who done it'.

The Geheime Vernietiging by amoredjenaue here on twcs.



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I put that stoy on my to-read list and it is my next one, soooo... give me a week or so and I should be all caught up...in my story you are right there are alot to choose from and there are still a few more bits of info that need to be given ,,,I just like to see who is on the right track ...lol..Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

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Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved seeing them with Jacob & Leah.  I'm betting James is stalking her and knows about Edward.  I can't wait til the club!!!



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            “Hello.”

 

             “Hello to you how is your day?” Alice was loading the dishwasher.

 

            “Good, I had my last class today, and now I am at your sisters.” Alice looked up “Hello Edward, I stole your girrrllfriend.” she yelled stretching out the girl. He chuckled, but didn’t reply to her comment.  

 

            “Good, I’m glad you’re having a nice day. Did you sleep well?” I could hear the amusement in his voice, and I narrowed my eyes speaking softly “Once I got to sleep, I did”

 

            “Why couldn’t you sleep?” I could feel the heat in my face from the blush “Because somebody was being mean.” He chuckled. I looked at Alice; she smiled and winked at me.

 

            “Well if it’s any consolation, I’m sorry I was mean.”

 

            “Liar!” He laughed “Ah, my Bella, you know me already.”

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Anytime Bella can't be there I volunteer to take her place!  More!  More!

James was a bastard!  I feel so sorry for her and what we're learning she went thru with him.

Loved the chapter!



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Thanks...I'm glad you liked it, and you would have to stand behind me to get into that playroom...lol

 

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Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

I love how we get to see Edward and Bella's feelings and motivations over situations that come up. I've been married almost 29 years and I still remember the hell years! LOL!

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Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm a good girl and a greedy bitch! LOL  I'm leaving my review so I get my reward.  I love seeing Edward & Bella's relationship blossom and grow as she begins to learn to trust him.

I just know James is going to rear his ugly head and try something to hurt her.  Can't wait til next update!



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Well because you were such a good girl, here's your reward...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...

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“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” the other end of the phone was completly quiet.

 

“Edward you still there?”

 

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

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Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This chapter really made me smile.  I'm rubbing my hands together in anticipation of the next!



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yummy - yummy stuff is right around the corner...lml

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Our family works the same way.  It's a revolving door.

Absolutely loved his test of her control!  I did feel bad for her though that she didn't get to spend the night tied up in his bed. :(  Maybe tomorrow night.  Can't wait for the club and the rest of their weekend!



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My family too (like I said)

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Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

 

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

 

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placing his hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

 

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

 

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

 

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

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Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

As always ... Fantastic!

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Thanks...glad you liked it...lml

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I mark my calendar for your updates. I'm that hooked!

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Wow!! Thanks...BTW I would have chosen 'You Lost That Lov'n Feeling' for the men to sing...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment I have a teaser for you...lml

I stood in front of Edward’s door waiting for him to answer. The eleven o’clock appointment with Mr. Tanner gave me an extra hour. The door opened to a confused Edward

 

“Isabella?” I couldn’t help myself he was so handsome standing there and I was so gitty that I threw my arms around his neck and practically jumped in his arms, kissing his surprised lips.

 

            It only took him a second to respond as he held me closer to him. When he pulled away he had a smirk on his face.

 

 “What was that for?” I kissed him again “Thank you for the roses, they are beautiful”

 

           

“Is that all it takes to get you to jump me?” I giggled “Oh, I don’t need a reason to jump you”

 

            I was going to kiss him again, but a loud throat clearing from our left caught my attention. Edward patted my bottom, setting me down. When I looked over his shoulder I saw four sets of curious eyes watching me, and a woman on her knees looking at the floor. Oh my god, I can’t believe I just threw myself at him in front of his company, of course my face heated up with my embarrassment causing Edward to chuckle.

 

 “Come on I’ll introduce you” he said as his arm wrapped around my waist guiding me into the room.

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Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Caius and Irena are complete assholes!  I loved the song the girls did and Carlisle's response was great!  I can almost feel the tension building with the disappearance of the dog collar



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Oh good I'm glad..i want the tension to build ...slowly ... :) thanks for reading ...lml

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Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

I left my review on ff, but wanted to tell you Happy Mother's Day!

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ok mystery solved on the collar. No evil James yet. I sense more trouble coming with Caius & Irena. I love Jane and thought it was funny that she wanted to eat McDonalds

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Hey there are times when you just need a BigMac...lol

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The quick shower I took felt amazing, and if I had time I would have stayed in there longer and let the water wash away all the stress from the day along with the grunge. Edward was sitting on the bed when I came out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel.

 

“Where are we going?” I wanted to know what to wear. I was hoping for casual, I just didn’t feel like dressing up.

 

 “No where fancy, just a quick bite to eat and then we have somewhere else I want to stop at.”

 

            I pulled my bra and panties out of the drawer along with a pair of dark blue skinny jeans. When I came out of the closet holding a red fitted t-shirt Edward had my hair brush in his hand.

 

“Come here” he motioned to the bed,

 

 I got a tight feeling in my stomach and my girly parts practically begged me to hurry to him. He sat back spreading his legs pulling me onto the bed so I sat between his thighs. Edward unraveled the towel on my head and began running the brush through my hair

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved Jane's conversation with Bella.  I would love to see an outtake between Jane/Aro.

Bella's response to the bitch at the tattoo parlour was priceless!

Thursday is so far away!



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An OT with Jane and Aro? hmmm that's an idea. I'm kicking around an OT from Esme at the moment but that won't get posted until after chapter 25? Thanks for the comment ...lml

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Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ok, so there was something devious going on with the collar. I know James is behind it, but he's very sneaky.

I want some pie! I love lemon.



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Because it's thursday i do have a teaser for you...thanks for the comment...lmlx8


I listened to what he said and then a thought occured to me. “You know what I think?”

He raised his eyebrows, “No I don’t, but I would love to hear it.”

“I think you are wrong…” Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned, but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.”

Edward got that perplexed look on his face again.

“Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.”

Edward nodded, “You’re right I was. Aro doesn’t give them out.”

I went on with my theory while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom. “Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week you and I got together, and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now, in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright, but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you.”

“Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?”

I nodded.

“And it’s working.”

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I cannot imagine the sick twisted mind of her abuser. I'm glad she has Edward.

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hmmm....I would like to say something here, but ...I can't...you will have to find out later...lml

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

You had me scared for a minute! I thought James had already gotten to her. I know that's what Seth was barking.  James is stalking her.  I'm so glad she and Edward are beginning to really communicate.  And yummy stuff next chapter?  Yeah!



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Bella hopes for some yummy stuff...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

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Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I laughed so hard I choked over the banana.  I know you won't tell me, but does James have any ties to Caius or is he just another asshole?



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They are all assholes...and i hope you didn't gag or Bella and Rose might come and give you some lessons.((lol))...thanks ...lml

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I think Bella would have rather taken a beating from James then have Edward's name written on the bottom of her foot. Every time I read an update I'm worrying about when James is going to make an appearance.



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You and everyone else...lol ...personally I would rather have had a spanking myself,,,thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I think having Jane as a mentor and friend is going to be a huge help for Bella.



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yes,  it will help her..thanks for reading and leaving a comment ...lml

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Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I'm glad he gave her a reward for trying hard to improve. The dream scares the crap out of me. I know it means James is coming soon.



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i would have liked that reward ...lol ...see you thursday ..lml

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wonderful as usual.  Leah is really getting on my nerves. I know she's being protective, but she's still kind of a bitch.



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She is annoying and for someone who kept telling bella that she needed hot sex and then when she gets it, Leah is still kind of weird,,,well I guess eventually she will tell why...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml

While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.

 

“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.

 

“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”

 

“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”

 

I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.

 

“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.

 

“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.

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Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I read this at work and had to pinch my lips to keep from laughing out loud at the end.  That one would have been a little hard to explain.

Can't wait for Monday to find out what he put on her.



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Next chapter you will know and I will have a link for a picture,,,or maybe put in on the extra's page ...Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

 

 

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

 

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

 

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

 

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

 

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

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Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wonderful as always!



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Thank you.. have a great week ...lml

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Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I'm so glad she made it to the end and gets a reward. The whole time I kept thinking 'this is one time I'm thankful its not me'. I would have lost it!  LOL



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Me too,,, I think I lost it while I was writing it ...lol ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, i have a teaser for you...lml

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Yeah, I see Edward's canes growing a lot of dust. 



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I foresee a bon-fire...lol ...

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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Fantastic! I figured that's what the sound was she was remembering. It made sense that James would use a belt to beat her.  I loved their time back at the house.



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It was yummy goodness ...M told me that I should have put out a wet panty alert ...lol .....Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment ...I have a teaser for you....lml

After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

 

Fucking great…

 

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

 

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

 

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

 

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”

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Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

I'm missing your story, but won't ask when the next update is because I know it'll happen when it happens. Hope life is treating you well!

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I'm waiting to hear if her flat tire is innocent or was helped.  Good for her telling off Tanya. I'm proud of Sally!



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You will see in the next chapter...and I don't think that Bella has heard the last from tanya ...lml

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I'm terrified that next week is Thanksgiving. That means Black Friday is next week as well.  No sleep and standing in line outside in the dark cold air waiting for a sale on something my family doesn't need.  Could you send Edward (or Emmett, or Jasper or even Carlisle) to keep me company? :P

I would love 10 minutes with any of the above!  I'm not greedy.



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I'll be standing in line too...our stores uopen at 3am, so after cooking all day ((becasue I am the woman)) then dinking wine all night (hey you have to drink something while watching football) ...I'll sleep for three hours then shop until I'm broke ...lol that's what Thanksgiving is all about...and nope, I only want Edward, I'm an all or nothing kind of girl...lol ...and it better be more then ten minutes ...lol ....usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I think Bella was finally able to have her meltdown because of the way Edward handled himself in the fight. She was egging him on trying to see if he would break his word and hit her. Just my thoughts.

I personally think Leah is a world class bitch and would love to know what crawled up her ass and for Jacob to help her pull the stick out of her ass.

Yeah update on Thurs! I'll be at my in-laws all day so I'm going to need it!  Have a happy Thanksgiving and succesfull Black Friday!



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Leah has some issues...sighs and wishes you luck at the in-laws..i always find that a few beers helps me to deal with mine....lol

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Fantastic!  I'm glad they helped each other thru it. They're learning to trust deeper.



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They are and the weekend is coming and then they go away together, to build some more before they go to Forks...becasue something tells be they are going to need to be strong for that ....

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Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

A very pleasant chapter!  However it does keep my mind in the gutter at times. We were discussing ordering hot fudge sundaes with lunch at the office and I mentioned I don't like cherries. Another girl said she did so I told her 'if she wanted to eat my cherry it was fine with me'. We both started laughing because our minds went somewhere other than fruit.  :)



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Personally I've never had the desire for someone elses cherry ...lol .....thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

It was nice to see Bella's playful nature come out & tease Edward. She has so much baggage from the past, she needed to be able to laugh a little.

Oh and the usual is coming next!  Yeah!



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She is loosing up around him, being herself and comfortable doing it ... and they do need some happy times ...and yes their usual is right around the corner...

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Oh my! My inner Southern Bell is fanning herself and in need of a strong drink.  While you're baking and making jam, I'll be sewing. Can't wait for Monday!



Author's Response:

Are you sewing while drinking Mimosa's or are you a southern belle who only drinks tea with some Jack hidden inside to give it some kick ,,,lol ,,, my nana would put a shot of Shenley's in her tea, as I grew older and had my own children she explain that it was a "Mother's Retreat' ...lol...I'm, not kidding, she told me that was why tea time was at 3 because that's when the children are taking their nap so that the women could have peace an quiet and enjoy themselves ...lol ... ok enough personal history  what are you sewing? I quilt.....  anyway thanks for reading, here is your teaser...

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

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Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I laughed so hard at the banter on the beach! My heart was breaking for Edward's method of discipline and how much it hurt Bella. To me there's nothing worse than being denied by someone you love. I caught that Rose was wearing her collar that night. I'd love to see an outtake in how they deal with their 'usual' as well. I can't wait to read Esme's. I guess it's easy to see I absolutely loved this chapter!

As for strangest thing I've ever called my husband - I don't have an unusual name. Ours is a gesture. We call it the "Bird of Love". Our normal banter is giving each other a hard time and picking on each other. When we're laughing and joking around I'll shoot the finger at him. It's not a derogatory gesture...it's the bird of love. He's the only person I ever give this gesture to so the meaning behind it can't be confused.



Author's Response:

"Bird of Love" it sounds like the title of a Romance Novel...lol...there was a small glimpse of Em/Rose in the one OT,,, right now I'm working on Esme's and have a few request for Alice/Jaz...sometimes I think this story will never end...lol...

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

When you're used to doing things on your own, you don't ask for help. This should be interesting.  I wish Leah would get the stick out of her butt. She probably feels like she's losing her sister to Edward's family. Bella is always busy with Edward or Edward's family so she acts like a bitch, but get over it already.  Bella finally has someone in her life who treats her well and loves her.



Author's Response:

that's part of the problem, she is use to doing things on her own, and believe me it is difficult  to ask and wait for help...

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I don't know if you're just teasing us or giving us a clue, but Heather sounds like she might have a problem with Bella. She knows personal things about her and wanted her to handle the counseling.

As much as I would never let my husband dream of 'putting me in the corner', I do like the creativity of Edward's punishments. He swore he'd never use corporal punishment so has found an effective alternative method. She knows she'll be punished, but doesn't have to fear his hand.

Have a Merry Christmas!  Mic



Author's Response:

Sometimes (ok.. actually all the time,,,lol) mental punishments are worse then a spanking,,,,he spanks her for fun and she likes it, it;s the anger that is associated with the punishment that would cause her trauma, and something tells me that she will have to come up with a few more ,,,lol ,,,,Anyway... Have a Merry Christmas...louise

Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit