Reviews by hihotintin
Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: hihotintin Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip

I'm enjoying this story so far! I just wanted to nit-pick for a quick second. I have several tattoos and you mentioned above that bella re-bandaged her tattoo which you are not supposed to do. Sorry it just bugged me. Can't wait to see what she got. I hope we find out more about Bella and why she was crying that day.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

I think that's different depending on where you get it, but I don't have any so I can't say. It was just important that she had it covered ^^

xx
Gelix

Isabella by Velley Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

Isabella had to deal with her overbearing mother all her life. What happens when Isabella meets Renee's new mysterious boyfriend? Will he change everything? What will happen to her relationship with her mother?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61364 Read Count: 19809
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 18 Apr 2013
Reviewer: hihotintin Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm intrigued so far and can't wait to see where this goes!!

Reviewer: hihotintin Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like where this is heading and can't wait to read more, though Renee is aweful!

Summary:

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“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135546
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2012 Updated: 15 Jun 2013
Reviewer: hihotintin Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love the build up while still giving us a lime :)  So excited to see how the relationship grows and matures. Will be get a Isa POV? I'm really loving this story right now and can't wait to see more!



Author's Response:

I have no plans as of right now to do an Isa POV, but you never know

Reviewer: hihotintin Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved the chapter, and I can't wait to see them explore more of this side of themselves. I'm curious as to why Edward wouldnt invite Isa to the Gala, I know you told us he wouldnt prob because she is playing it. Does he know that she will be playing at the Gala? I kinda like the idea of him keeping tabs on her :) As for part ideas, depends on your sister and where you are at. I know bar crawl is always fun, espcially if you go to a bar with a mechanical bull :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334740
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: hihotintin Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i'm really liking this so far, who doesn't love a dominant edward? Feel so bad for bella because her parents treat her like a black sheep. My only issue with this fic is that Edward says her name pretty much everytime he talks to her. It doesn't come off real as the majority of conversations I have noone says my name every time. It just bugs me sorry, but just my opinion 



Author's Response:

Hello everyone!  Thanks for all your kind words.  We want to start off by addressing some of the frequent questions.  This quote (“I know they love me, really ... I know but, it’s strange, maybe it’s just me. You know that I see and hear things differently from the rest of the world, but thank you for doing this and answering my questions.”) from chapter five had someone ask, what Bella meant.   Bella is referring to how she perceives her family versus the way others do.  Jacob is not a card we are showing yet, you’ll have to be patient to see what he has up his sleeve.  Did Bella hear him in the shower?  We have yet to hear that answer from Bella ourselves, but in my thoughts she surely did.  Will there be any chapters in Bella’s POV?  She is talking a little here and there, but nothing’s set in stone as of yet.  Shouldn’t Edward as a good Dom cancel the scene?  The scene is not canceled, but it has been modified from the original way it was written.  This was for several reasons.  We have sixteen chapters written, yet we still continue to makes tweaks and changes here and there before posting.  When we started making him have hard feelings about the upcoming scene, or feel nervous about it, we started discussing it more.  We found a way to appease us, our readers and yet still show what we wanted to show.  So trust us—please.  I’m glad we haven’t fallen into the pleads for more chapters to post faster, because in the last week we haven’t gotten another one done.  Of course WeeKittyAndTAT, JessAndTAT and TeamAllTwilight all submitted pieces of work into the Fandom Fights LLS.  WeeKittyAndTAT did an Epilogue of sorts for Ropin’ A Sitter.  JessAndTAT did a future take on Bases Loaded.  I wrote a new fan fiction novella, it’s called, The Things That Make You Click.  All of these will post to our FFN and TWCS accounts, but not until after December first.  Watch for two one-shots to post soon to our account, the winners will be announced tomorrow in the More is MORE contest.  Think that brings you all up to speed.  Feel free to PM us and ask questions if you have them.  Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  “Felix, my father is coming in tonight. Please have him come straight to my office.  Keep everyone else out until I’m done. If there are any problems, I trust you to deal with them accordingly.”

Felix nods at me, but doesn’t say anything. I carry on, walking toward Jenks, when I’m stopped by Tanya.

“Sir, I have some news that I would like to share with you.”

I turn and face Tanya who looks like the cat who got the cream. “Tanya, I’m very busy, it’ll have to wait until tomorrow.” 

I move away from her, but she grabs my wrist pulling me back. “It’s very important, Sir.”

I yank my arm away from her, turning to face her once more. “Tanya, don’t you tell me when I will speak with you. I’m busy, so unless you’re going to die in the next five minutes and need me to call an EMT for you, I don’t want to know. And never touch me again without my consent!”

I walk away without waiting for her response. As I approach Jenks, he shakes his head, looking behind me at Tanya.

“Ah, still trying to get your attention then?”

I nod at him, opening up my office.

“I’d stay away from that one; she’s clearly after money, fame and quite frankly, has ‘whore’ written all over her.”

I chuckle a little at his quite accurate synopsis of Tanya. “Yes, I know. Those are the main reasons I have always refused her, that, and she makes me lose brain cells every time she opens her mouth. But enough about her, what did you find out.”

Jenks looks at me sadly and I can clearly see the worry on his face. “This is not going to be easy to read. Even harder for you I’d say, because you’ve become somewhat involved with the girl.”

I nod at him in understanding. “Just show me.”