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High Noon by RiaMaria Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Set 5 years after Breaking Dawn, the Cullens leave Forks for a new life. However, one of them lapses, putting the entire family at risk. This is not a Jake and Nessie story, and gets quite dark in places. Contains vampire violence.

 

I was rooted to the spot. I had been a vampire for five years, but I had never taken a human life, nor seen one taken. In the instant it took me to take in the broken form in his lap, I finally understood what I was, what we all were. I could smell the blood from the lifeless body in front of me, and it smelled good. My throat burned and my mouth filled with venom.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83172 Read Count: 4853
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Orange11 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Revelations

this chapter gave me a feeling that carlisle uses edward a lot more than any one else in the family, that he has edward to pose and listen and that if he wernt that he would have to be gone.  I also got the feeling that they were trying to control bella and edward theough nessie.  Im not sure that in continuring the twilight saga that this would be true but i will read more to see where this goes.

Reviewer: Orange11 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 11: 11. Jubilee

ok so they want to abanden their 5 year old?  i think that you want to make a bella and edward based story but perhapse you should of placed this story a little more in the future and then their getaway would of been more resonable.