Reviews by RoryCullen2
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Young women can act silly, but men... Men make bold gestures." I opened the trunk for Bella. The man inside ended up on the pavement. Bella's eyes widened, and she covered her mouth.

 

* Period fic. Takes place in 1958/GangsterWard. 

 

*Not so canon couples, but a few are. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115343 Read Count: 76968
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2013 Updated: 20 Sep 2013
Reviewer: RoryCullen2 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow! Just wow. 

Reviewer: RoryCullen2 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was a sweet chapter. I really can't imagine his parents being ok with him hooking up with Bella before being married to each other first and also so soon after Aro's death making it even worse. Oh well. I guess they are engaged now. I think Edward needs to buy her a ring and they need to get married ASAP. They can tell her parents about the baby and the marriage. They can get married again, for everyone else, in the spring.

Reviewer: RoryCullen2 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I love the humor thrown in, in places. I'm glad Charlie wasn't behind Aro trying to kill Edward. I'm also glad the two young girls seem to be getting along well with Edward and Bella. I hope everything goes well with Frannie too, although I rather doubt it.