Reviews by Sunshine-Sue
Semper Fidelis by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has a great life but she's missing something...Will the new Marine in town be that something? Will she be able to handle the life that a Marine leads or will it all be too much?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93026 Read Count: 23398
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch 12 I Want You

well yyeah it sucks they only got a week but at least it was smething, and not them figuring shit out after he left...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch 13 Day Old Blues

oh god what have you done?!? tell me he is just hurt and now gets to come home early...please. no lost limbs or comas, or life threatening injuries.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 14 Cold Desert

i hope that jasper is gonna be ok. glad to see that eddie is ok and off to have bella 'take care' of him.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch 15 Trunk

yeah they are back together and rose and em and the baby. everything is going great... except for jasper. maybe he will meet a cute little nurse named alice?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Ch 16 McFearless

glad to see edward opening up about himself, even if it was a disater. so happy that bella through that shit in his parents' faces

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ch 17 The Runner

look at that alice! i wonder what made a-j blush? maybe she is helping him with stress?



Author's Response:

I've been thinking about writing an outtake for when Jasper was in the hospital :o)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch18 Be Somebody

the t-shirt was so cute

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch 19 Use Somebody

yay they have made it! and the sequel is comming!

thank you for writting, and for showing a little of what this life is like.

My Mia by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]
Summary:

 

Bella's tortured...body, mind, and soul. Can Edward save her from herself? Sensitive topic dealing with relationships and struggles. ALL B/E POV'S


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126768 Read Count: 15706
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 30 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 Skinny

poor bella! my heart aches for people who can not see the beauty of themselves.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2 Creep

it is ok to take a chance and it might even work out for you in the end.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 3 Secretly

Amazing how the signs are all there andhe doesn't know what is right in front of him.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 4 Morning Light

and it begins! the eye opening and the healing .... hopefully. i wonder if anyone else sees there is something not right with bella?



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading <3

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5 The Pretender

so cute and so sad! poor bella is trying to make the right decisions here but eddie will help honny!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch 6 True

nice to see that everone else has seen what e&b have been too blind to see. and bella's family is ok with it all. one hurdle down! and bella is willing to give things a try... kind of

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Ch 7 The Reason

*hugs*   heehee

so glad bella is trying to give it a go. and eddie is so sweet in waiting for her. and if that is your mom bella, hang up! then call eddie to sing you to sleep!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch 8 Because of You

oh shit ! i guess the cat is outta the bag now. i wonder how this little chat is gonna go?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch 9 Fall to Pieces

well i am glad that eddie at least kinda laid into charlie! i can not imagine hubbie letting girl-child get away with that shit without doing something!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 10 For You I Will (Confidence)

time to start getting better bella! just think of eddie neked and waiting to ravish you! that right there is some damn good motivation!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ch 11 Perfect

things seem to be going well and bella is 'ready'!!!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ch 12 Open Arms

yeah eddie made her feel beautiful! that is so what she needs. the big reveal is coming up. how will everyone take it?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 Drive

well she told everyone and em's reaction, while it may be 'normal' was still pretty shitty! i wonder who she wants to do the group session with? my guess is edward.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch 14 We Are Broken

so what the hell else happened to bella? and whose ass is dead when eddie and em and jasper find out!



Author's Response:

you'll see!!! thanks so much for all the great reviews!! I've come so far in real life since writing this story.  All yur reviews make me want to read it LOL

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 15 Never Say Never

ok gotta say it the an was corny but funny! glad to see they are kinda sorta starting to talk and get things out.



Author's Response:

that AN was for my bestie, who's ring tone was that song for a while LOL thanks so much for reading

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch 16 Wonderwall

well shit it just can't go all good can it? charlie is being an asshole! i don't really care if he is unsure - he needs to finally do what is best for bella not what is easy for charlie! and renee? what can you say?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Ch 17 Bother

well shit! bella was well in her rights to say what she did to her mom, maybe it could have been said nicer but the anger gave it added effect. maybe it will help renee see things avoidance didn't, help her want to get better.

as for bella pushing eddie away, it was bound to happen. recovery like hers is not easy when surrounded by 'perfect' people. and lack of self worth is part of the bulemia.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ch 18 Without You

poor eddie he is so a 15 year old girl! getting all emo about not getting his bella fix! heehee! good for him for talking some sence into charlie. time to see how bella is doing.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 19 Last Stand

and finally we have the whole story! no question to us how eddie will respond to this new information, pretty sure he has some kinda idea, em too cause he saw a night terror. question is what will eddie and the gang do?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch 20 No Air

wow eddie rage much?!?!?! not that i blame you but wow! the trueth is out there now and the real healing can begin so the real happy life can begin!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Ch 21 Daughters

stop waiting for the bad to come bella! life is good enjoy it. the bumps come and you live through them and keep going. living happy with your eddie is what you need to think about - not the next bump or corner in the road of life.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Ch 22 The Man in Love with You

YAY he is finally gonna pop the question! it is eddie's turn to have a 'talk' that he finds hard. bella has been doing it all through the story. at least eddie's talk is all about good stuff!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Ch 23 Just Say Yes

the proposal was perfect and so sweet!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Love

sounds like it was as perfect a wedding as these two un-perfect people could have.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Loss

so sad! i do not know what i would do without my mommy.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Life

perfect ending. everything may not always be sunshine and roses inlife but when you find your happiness, your home, your loves it makes everyday a little better and gives a bigger reason to keep moving down the bumpy, twisty, crazy road we call life.

wow look at me getting all profound and deep! scary shit! heehee

thank you for sharing your story.

suzie :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for all the amazing reviews and reading my little story!!!!

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

Banner by IllicitWriter

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Better Than Expected

eddie sure does seem to have lucked out with his new roomie.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 2: React now, think later

oh boy it is beginning already?!? this is gonna be a wild ride

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Baby Steps

and so the game begins. kinda funny how they are getting off on hearing the other get off.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Happy Birthday Eeyore!

um that was looking a whole lot like non consentual sex to me....



Author's Response:

You know, you're the first person to ever actually say it in a review, but yes, that is definitely non-consentual sex and is the basis of the rest of the story. thanks for taking the time to review this as you go along~

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Breaking Point

so glad she decided to do something about jake even if it is just a baby step. and happy to see daddy c took good care of b while she took the steps needed. tanya is a smart girl and it is good she seems to have got out now instead of hanging around trying to change his mind, no one is worth your happiness and trying to be someone your not or hold on to something that is not yours.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Everything Falls Apart

well at least bella will be getting the help she needs and eddie will be taking care of her while she does it. what the hell is up with em?!? and what is gonna happen when they find jake?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Returning to the Scene of the Crime

looks like bella and eddie need to have a talk and get some things straightened out.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Understanding Nila's Reasons

i like the idea of the bongo therapy.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Severus Snape reflects on the loss of his new love. (Companion Piece to First Love Lost:  The Lioness’ Tale)

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Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3267 Read Count: 147
[Report This] Published: 06 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so sad, i almost had a tear! he was always so misunderstood.



Author's Response:

Severus was one of my favorite HP characters, and you're right he was always very misunderstood.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review my stories.

 

Dazz

Summary:

 

Hermione Granger reflects on the loss of her first love. (Companion Piece to New Love Lost: The Serpent’s Tale)

 


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2568 Read Count: 147
[Report This] Published: 06 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so sweet!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Dazz

Summary:

To keep Edward--a freshly graduated police officer--from getting underfoot in a break in, Charlie sends him to 'baby sit' a barely legal Bella. Love ensues. Lemons. Lots and lots of lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130777 Read Count: 21103
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well that ws fun. and something tells me bella now has full time police protection...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow eddie really seems to be right into bella! he seems very serious already. wonder how long he's wanted this?

Summary:

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Banner by rpattz1990

Rockstar Isabella Whitlock seems to have everything but after an altercation with her agent, she realizes she needs to find her music again. So she goes back home and finds exactly what, or who, she needs. The question now is, will she let them in? NC-17 for lemons & language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91606 Read Count: 117425
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 May 2010
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wonder what charlie is gonna say about all of this?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

but if she sings won't that give her away? at least raise suspicions?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well that was kinda forward of edward.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i wonder how long until hher secret gets out?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

so does that mean that rock star bella is still a card carrying member of the V club?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

uh oh what is the big 'talk' gonna be about?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

looks like bella is definately gonna have to start letting them in. at least edward.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

well hot damn. first she holds it in and then she just blurts it out. i wonder what eddie's gonna say?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so she was a virgin! wonder what eddie is gonna think of that? she's 24 and a rock star for goodness sake!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well it looks like bella doesn't need to tell the gang, they already know. now we just have to wait and see the reactions.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

heehee! wonder why charlie doesn't seem surprised?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

looks like it is gonna be a busy night!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

sounds like bella is gonna hook everyone up!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

what's up with eddie? this is sounding like a pretty awesome day all in all.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well  it seems that bella managed to find some good friends while living in the shark tank that is LA.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

i guess it would be pretty amazing for her friends to see her 'real life' but add in they too could get there... just wow for each of them!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

ok why has edward not brought up bella being a virgin? she again pointed to it this chapter saying she only had one relatioship before e and that ended because she was not ready for sex. you'd think they would talk about it, it is a big deal.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

well it looks like it is time for the fun to begin

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow looks like their heads are spinning. it is a lot to take in.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

we have the new look now it will be the sound and new music. life in LA is gonna be a wild ride for these guys. it is cool that your bella is the 'old pro' at this and is so confident and take charge.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

yeah rose good question.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

silly girl it is called a distraction...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

dun dun dun!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

well hopefully the interview looks good on paper as well.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

looks like we have a song wonder what aro and the others will think?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

everyone seems to be settling in well.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

because you will be a member of the family, more than you already are.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

yay charlie and renee are back together. and bella has her mom back.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

steadily moving down the road to happiness

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

the article was great!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

well the return of james... i wondered how long till he came back into the picture.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

uh oh

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

well at least alice is ok and now bella just has to wake up and get better. with the broken bones i wonder what that means for the tour?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

eddie's trip down memory lane... wonder how bella is doing?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

and still there is no mention of b being a virgin. i'm sorry but it seems like a big deal to me and something that would have been talked about. especially since he admitted he was one too..

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

dreams do come true...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

love the constant hard-on. too funny!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

now we just need her to wake up

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

everyone comming together to form the complete family.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

yay she's awake!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

well everyone can breate easier now that she is awake and doing good

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

home and on the wayto 'normal' life

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

wow mood swing?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

all that fame and fortune and still so insecure...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

/oooo the big question has been popped! wonder what she'll say? heehee

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

oh boy outta retirement

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

oh boy. lookd like we are winding this one doen,

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

glad to see the leg is getting better and will not effect the tour.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

on her lat tour, silly.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

i wonder if bella is gonna give tyler an exclusive on the wedding?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

almost time for the wedding!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

the surprise is gonna be awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

so sweet. glad everyone was cool with the surprise.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

honeymoon time! wonder how long till the world finds out and how they will.