Reviews by acullenfan
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Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1081949
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I am also a Nikon girl. I also finally got the chance to go to the top of the Sears tower last year. It would be a great place for a date. I am sure Bella will like the rest too. By the way, I thought it was funny that edward started bouncing when he heard cheesecake. I imagine he looked like a little kid for a minute.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Glad to see that Bella is doing better. I work as an environmental educator and I agree with Edward that based on some of the questions that I get asked, I fear for our future.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Oh Edward. So sweet! Sounds like they are off to a good start which is good because I am sure some more drama is coming their way.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

I still James is alive but hopefully he is injured and suffering somewhere. This will be a tough conversation given that Edward can't talk.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

I think this is part of James's plan...to wear Bella down mentally by hitting those around her instead of just burning down her house or her office. Stay strong Bella.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Poor Bella. Unfortunately not an uncommon story. At least Bella was finally able to stand up for herself. Having the means to support herself really helped. And now she has the beginnings of a support system which will help even more. I took a class on all kinds of abuse in collage, a long time ago, and I still remember things I learned. Bella has more going for her than some victims but she still needs help. Often the mind control and emotional abuse is the worst part of it. Hang in there Bella.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Sounds like a great start to their date! I just spent a weekend in Las Vegas and I know that dressing for extremly hot weather and still looking nice is a challange. Hopefully the rest of their date goes smoothly.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

I bet it's whoever set fire to Bella's garage. The first note of being a good stalker is to establish your targets routines and who they are close to. The downside of Bella getting her grandmas house is that her mom knows where it is and since she is in collusion with James, she could tell him where Bella is living. At least Bella is getting stronger for if/when they meet.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Well at least they got a fun holiday season before the drama starts. So has nobody tried to connect these fires to James? 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Nothing like a romantic bubble bath. This Edward is so great, very patient. And it sounds like Bella is finally listening.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Hmmm I think James might have struck again... It's too big a coincidence. Plus more publicity also means that Bella will be attracting attention from the bad people as well as the good people.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Go Bella! And at least at the barbeque they will have backup for whatever comes their way. Unless of course it is internal drama.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

I thought it was appropriate for their first time, especially given Bella's issues. Since there was so much buildup to it, I'm a little surprised they didn't talk about it before hand but maybe they both felt awkward about it. Overall they had a great weekend. Hopefully this will help carry them through what is to come.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Good for Edward for standing up for himself. I think he is doing fine in the wooing dept. plus Mia's comment was great. I'm sure Bella will like all her bday presents.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Nothing like parents to break the mood, no matter how old you are. But at least they know their time is coming.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Hopefully they get some time to enjoy their engagement before more drama starts. Lords knows what James will do when he sees that ring. Also, doesn't bella have the money to rebuild the bar?

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Hmm..tough choice Edward. I could see him wanting to say yes but then also wanting to make their first time together romantic. Can't wait to see what he decides...

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Now they can both be eachother's heros since they are each getting something they needed.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

hmm...I wonder if it's Laurant? Maybe he failed James... Bella and Edward will have to make a head count. Hopefully it's nobody too close to them. We know James probably knows where Bella lives, the question is whether he knows where Edward lives. Has he been following them? It seems likely since the arsonist is attacking all the places the are secondary to their lives. Yet their homes and businesses themselves have not been attacked...yet. Hopefully everyone will stay safe.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Hopefully Bella won't let her fears stop her from having a good time but I am sure Edward can help her with that.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

You go girl! Good for you Bella. As for the return favor, I bet it is a hand job because I could see Bella wanting to take it one step at a time. But she might surprise us..

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Hmmm...I bet the arsonist strikes again. These places are all related to Bella and Edward. But I have faith in the team to put it out. I just hope everyone is ok. 

Merry Christmas everyone.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Bella and her dad, so sweet. Glad to see that Bella has added another person to her circle.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I agree that with presents it is more about the thought behind it than the price tag. I'm sure Edward will come up with something great. Something that will symbolize how he feels about her but is understated at the same time. Looking forward to their weekend away.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Maybe Bella can teach Emmett that he should not paint all women with the same brush, much in the way they are helping her learn to trust people. Hopefully Emmett will help because it sounds like they will need all they can get.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

It must be tough for Edward to be in the middle but at least Bella and Emmett cleared the air. And Bella, I have news for you, life is rarely easy but the good stuff is worth fighting for. I am sure Edward will have his own thoughts on Emmett.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I think they should do something besides the regular dinner thing. They are still trying to get to know each other so maybe something that will let them talk and bond a bit. Looking forward to it.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I think Edward might be making a bigger deal of it than needed. Yes, it was not the moral high ground but people have those kinds of arrangments all the time. And Edward made it clear to Tanya where his lines were. As I heard on the radio the other day, women, due to our hormones, have more emotions automatically involved with sex. Men are literally wired different. If anything its a lesson to us girls. But I would hope that Bella would see it for what it was, just a casual relationship. And Edward ended it before he made a move for Bella.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 12 May 2015 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

One question that has been bugging me is how does James get his victims to swallow the pill? Does he knock them unconscious and force it down their throat? I think he got away. It would be asking too much to take care of him and Renee in one fell swoop. But hopefully he didn't get away without some damage. I think they need to watch Edwards hospital room. And I love you Bella, I know you are going through a lot, but you are starting to be a bit much. Just think of your baby.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Such a nice first kiss. I totally understand the slow burn. Especially on Bella's part. With her history it would not make sense that she would immediately jump into something serious. And Edward, being the nice guy that he is, totally understands it. I would imagine Bella will not want to tell Emmett her story in the middle of a party but I'm sure they will start talking and it will be good for Bella to meet more people. Hopefully nothing crazy happens there.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

I bet Bella is warring with herself about that. Not only does she not want to inconvience Edward but I wonder if she worries that James might hurt Edward. I admire Bella for not wanting to give up her new life but she also needs to take her own safety seriously.

By the way, I am assuming that when Edward asked Bella if she wanted him to go tonight and she said yes, he really meant to ask if she wanted him to stay.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

It will be an emotional conversation but it is needed, for both of them. I'm sure Charlie feels guilty but they both got sucked into the Renee whirlwind. I'm just glad they have the chance to clear the air now.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Surprise. At least Edward gets the meeting of the dad over quickly, doesn't have time to get nervous about it. Although I am sure it will be a little awkward for all of them, since Bella and her dad are just getting to know each other also. 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Go Bella. She is making good progress with her healing and while she has a long road it's a good start, especially being able to voice her feelings. I'm sure Edwards reaction will be sweet and sexy at the same time, just like him.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

I had a feeling it was those two. Somehow they are more scary together than alone. And Renee is even more crazy than I thought. Edward and Bella better watch their back.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Hopefully Renee's visit won't cause Bella to backslide too much but at least she has a support system now.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am very intrigued.... It will be interesting to have a Bella who is independently wealthy for a change. I look forward to the rest of the story.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Ah so sweet! Good one Edward. Hang in there. Bella will get there eventually.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

There are fireman who shop at my local Safeway and I can imagine this situation happening. In fact today I saw three of them walking out of the store empty handed and soon their truck took off with its siren on. Good for Bella, especially when we know she can afford it. I agree I would also try to help out if I could.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Obviously  something really bad happened to Bella in Florida and I assume it has to do with a romantic relationship. Especially if she is having night terrors. Hopefully Edward can eventually show her that not all men are bad.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Somehow I don't see Tanya going quietly. But it's interesting that Edward has his own story. Doesn't sound quiet as bad as Bella's but they are both hurting. Edward still needs to do something for Bella. A note maybe? At least it's a start.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Nice glimpse into Edward's working life. Now that Tanya is out of the picture, the question is what is he going to do about the beatiful brunette he can't stop thinking about... I know neither of them are ready for a relationship but nobody can have too many friends.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward needs to start smacking Emmett in the head when he does something stupid. Although that might just encourage him. At least he will help keep things light for Bella and Edward since their stuff is heavy.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Sounds like it was quite the interesting night. Can't wait to hear about it.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Maybe sharing and having someone on her side would help. But right now she probably feels she can't trust anyone. But keeping their victims isolated and on edge is part of the game for stalkers. 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I used to get Charlie horses when I was a teenager. Leg cramps suck. Be thankful Bella. Not all of us have Edward to come rescue us.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

At least she let him explain. That is a good start. I think he is starting to realize that he needs to go slow with her. But they won't be able to really support her till they know what's going on. But I know trust takes time. Especially if you are not used to trusting people.

Three fireman followed me into Safeway today. None of them looked like Edward though.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I know Alice is trying to help but it sounds like Bella's issues are serious so they need to be respectful of that. Friends would be a good start so that she can start learning to trust people again.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I believe in loyalty to your friends but that is taking it too far. It sounds like rose didn't like Edward to begin with. At least Edward is able to ignore her.  

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am assuming that Bella's phone call has to do with her past. Hopefully it's nothing super bad. At least she has this new group of people to help her.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Sounds like Bella went through some serious abuse. At least she has friends now but hopefully they will convince her to also get some help because you can't work through that stuff alone. But at least talking about it is a start.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Such a cute first "date". Its nice that Bella seems relaxed around him. Although from the tone of her inner voice, she has a ways to go. But it sounds like they are off to a good start. And a person can never have too many friends.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Nice afternoon. Hopefully Bella won't get too overwhelmed at the bar. I can imagine she has not been going out much lately and we all know guys in bars are not always perfectly behaved.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Maybe since her eyes have lost a little bit of the haunted look, she is finally getting some help. While I think shutting everyone out (or almost everyone) was not nice, it is a common reaction from people who are used to having to protect themselves. Also, she shut out the guys because she has trust issues with males. Emmett's reaction was an interesting reminder that when we go through a tough situation, it is easy to make generalizations about everyone in that catagory that cause us hurt. Emmett also went through a tough situation but he probably figures he is too much of a man to get help.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I appreciate that Bella is trying to heal herself but I still disagree that she had to push edward away completly. Hopefully this talk will help them get back on track. I am sure Edward needs to meet Pam at some point. So did the fact that she still talked to Alice a sign of her issues with men or the fact that Edward is a more significant relationship to her?

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'm so glad they were able to talk. I know they have a lot to work out but it sounds like they are off to a good start. I still say i think it would be helpful for both of them for Edward to go to one of Bella's appointments. She could explain things to him and he could understand better how to help her. But first I hope they have a good first date.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I could see them having a sweet first kiss. The question is whether Bella is ready for that. But so far their first date is going really well. Nobody would say no to homemade rocky road cookies.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I think it's great that she was taking pictures during the carriage ride instead of them just trying to be cuddly and romantic. I sympathize with the thought about the "good" camera. I face the same dilemma sometimes. Tell Edward I am sure the cheesecake will be worth the wait. 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

It seems that bella is getting better since she can talk about babies and what happened without panicking but I know she still has work to do. I am glad she is getting more comfortable with Edward physically but I am sure that is also something she is working on. Meeting the parents should be interesting. Hopefully they know enough not to talk about potential grandkids. You know how some parents can get over eager about that. But it's also great that Bella does not see her potential lack of being a biological parent as a reason not to be a parent at all.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I'm glad that Bella felt able to treat herself to something nice. Hopefully she doesn't get too nervous when it's time to meet the parents.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

It's a nice change having a relaxed Carlisle and esme. Or should I say Carl and Essie. That should help Bella relax. I think this is an important step for both of them because it signals how important their relationship is, especially for Bella. She knows that Edward wants his family to know her.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

It's funny to see Jasper giving that kind of speech. It's normally the kind of thing you would expect from Emmett. But its great to see them all coming together. I think Bella's circle just got bigger, which is good. The more people she has in her corner, the better.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

It makes me feel better that Bella will be with Alice. Somehow I don't like the idea of her alone during this. And poor Edward and the crew, having to deal with such a tragedy. You know this is one day they will never forget.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I think he should mention it because if he doesn't and Bella finds out, that will be worse. Bella will think he's hiding things and that can get blown out of proportion quickly. Good comminuication is always key.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I think its good Bella was calm. It's possible that there is something else on her mind. Edward knows something is up. Hopefully Alice can get Bella calmed down. I would imagine its a trust issue for Bella, especially with her past.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Well knowing a bit about how Renee sees the world, I am sure she spun the whole thing with James to be Bella's fault. Since Charlie does not know much of her life, he would probably believe whatever Renee tells him. Sounds like it should be an interesting conversation.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I figured Renee was lying to Charlie. I can understand Charlie's position but at the same time he should have insisted that he hear it from Bella. But then Renee might have found a way to make Bella lie to him. Hopefully they will be able to repair their relationship. That would also help Bella's trust issues.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Glad they were able to talk about things. I imagine it's nice for Bella to have his company after her long day. But of course now Edward is going to want to kill her mom even more. At least they both have something good to look forward to after the talk.;)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Glad to see that Edward is not nervous about meeting her dad. Lol I can just see his cocky grin. 

I used to get awful cramps before I discovered birth control so I feel your pain Bella.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

It's interesting how scents can tie into so many things. I think because humans are so visual we sometimes forget the power of the nose.

i think Edward will be supportive as always but also sad that he can't do more for her. Maybe this would be a good time for her to take him to one of her therapy sessions.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

I would imagine it will take Bella longer but soon she will realize that Edward is not going anywhere. I hope he has some patience because I am sure that Bella's journey will be one step forward and sometimes two steps back but at least she is moving in the right direction. At least once Emmett moves, Edward will get his privacy back. ;)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Bella is moving on up in the world but that in turn might make it easier for people to get to her. And as for Edward, it's always good to follow your instincts.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Maybe Bella can give Edward a massage to help him with his back. ;)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

I think he should talk about it. I also think that Bella needs to let Edward help her with her self esteem. I know she has a ways to go but when she starts showing him more of herself and he doesn't run away, it might help. She could start small.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Glad to see that bella is expanding her business. It will help her get some balance. Also, I am sure that edward will wait for as long as it takes. And I am sure it wont be forever.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

(Raises hand) but given Edward's condition, maybe he should lay there and Bella can do the work. Hopefully the drama doesn't ruin the barbeque.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Poor Emmett. Tough decision. Sounds like he is still not ready to totally give up on her. But of course she is playing the sympathy card. However, getting a serious illness I would imagine would make you see things differently.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

You have help now Bella. Best get used to it. Somehow I don't think any of them are going to let you push them away.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Blond hair...I bet it's James. It is interesting that he would use an arsonist as a pseudonym. I guess he is sending a message, especially with what he did to Victoria. I bet he used her to get info on Bella. Although with Bella's business becoming more public, she is becoming even more of a target.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Edward is going to really be on his guard now. They should tell everyone because it's possible James will be targeting everyone around Bella now. The question is what is his ultimate motivation, besides the fact that Bella escaped his control.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Nothing like a hot firemen shoot. I am sure it will be inspiration for Bella and Edward later. And that was so sweet what Edward said about getting the chance to rescue Bella. It is handy having a fireman around.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Wow, that was some ending to the day. Maybe they should do their own private photo shoot sometime and then they could just get to it right in the middle. At least they had a fun night since it sounds like the next few weeks will be busy.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Maybe Bella subconsciously put off the shopping but she has had a lot to deal with. But you can always count on Alice to come through at the last minute.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

((hand raised)) He at least knows more than he is letting on. The question is whether he is working with James or whether he is just an extra creep for Bella to deal with. It would make sense for James to have a ringer on the inside of the firehouse. Bella should really try to figure out that puzzle. Maybe she saw him down in Florida.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

I'm glad Edward was recognized for all his hard work. But I still say there is more to Laurent's story. But now Edward and Bella can go and celebrate... 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

I still say Laurent is connected to James. Listen to your gut Bella, it's usually not wrong. In the meantime though, sounds like our couple will have some fun.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Hopefully they can get rid of Laurent before he does any damage. I can't imagine he will take the news well.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

I think there will be some backlash from the Laurent firing. Also they still have not caught the arsonist. But at least now they are back together again.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

I totally believe they are linked and I say it is James. Maybe Bella could help them reopen the bar.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Nothing like a little love to warm you up on a cold day. Such a sweet photo shoot. Now there are two engagements to celebrate.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Are we possibly going to get the POV of the arsonist? That would give us insight into motivation. They are starting to get closer to the core of Bella's life but still picking people who are on the edges of it. I guess it's can't be anyone that she would notice is missing immediatly. I also say she needs to talk to Edward about her suspisions because everyone she knows should be on notice.

But that was really sad about Clearwaters. Insurance can really suck sometimes.



Author's Response:

Friday...that's all I'm saying...You'll get you're answer Friday...

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

The fact that James thinks Renee is crazy should say it all but they are both crazy. I worry that Bella and Edward are not on guard enough. James is truly diabolical trying to ruin Christmas.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

I sense a heirloom coming. But I am sure Bella will like whatever Edward gives her. Although wait till James and Renee find out about it.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Something evil this way comes. Watch your back kids. And somehow I get a bad feeling about esme working in Edwards building....

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

I think she will say yes but my concern is the news will set James and Renee off. The only hiccup could be if Bella feels she is not ready for such a big commitment but I think she is.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Listen to your gut Bella. That's all I have to say. And watch your back.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Hopefully they can get some clues that will lead them closer to James. And I think it's good they are talking about moving in together. It makes sense to me. Maybe he should talk to someone about his nightmares.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

At least they are now on the trail of James. I hope they catch him before anyone else gets hurt but somehow I don't think it will be that simple. If only this was an episode of CSI.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121

I am sure that James is too egotistical to think he will get caught. Or just too crazy. And I am sure scaring Bella is a perk. Given what Phil does, I am sure that Renee knows. She is too cold to care. 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

I do agree that they needed a day to relax and have fun. I am sure Bella and alice will approach their weddings very differently. But I am sure the engagement announcement will cause more drama.