Reviews by Miss G
Summary:

Trust & Obey

 

Bella is a twenty-two-year-old college graduate and submissive whose trust in the community has been broken by a cruel Dominant. Her best friend Rose is getting married and she is coerced into attending the two weeks of pre-wedding activities. 

 

Edward is a thirty-eight-year-old billionaire Dominant. Since his younger brother, by sixteen years, is getting married, he is opening his home at the Cullen compound to the bride’s maid of honor. 

 

What happens when he learns her name and he secretly knows it? Can Bella’s trust be restored? Will she ever be able to obey a Dominant again? B/E R/E HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105111 Read Count: 119100
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2021 Updated: 21 Jan 2022
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty-One

I love your stories. Justice gets served always. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Fin and fabulous! Thank you for finishing this story. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

So the question is does Jasper know about what Peter has done if not Bella by name? And is Peter's father similar to Peter? I like this Aro. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Yeah after what she went through he probably should have alerted her to the taking of photos. That shit is never secure. And I'm glad Felix and Sam are whip smart pun intended. 🤣

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Please say that Jane is the Mistress that will teach Peter a lesson?  I'm sometimes a tradionalist but I guess Charlotte would work. Yay!!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Thirty

Go Angela go!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-six

I'm disappointed in myself I'm usually so much more on the ball of deduction than this. Peter fucking Whitlock but of course. Jasper did complain about his brother so let's hope he isn't involved well one of his birth parents is anyway. Yuck. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

You always give us a sexy commanding Edward. Thanks for that! ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Five

Okay let's do this! I wonder if James found out more information. I agreee with Edward 'he' must have done this before. This can't be new behavior. And his parents I hope Carlisle and Esme take care of them. Killing their 8mage is the worse punishment for the Uber wealthy right? Well I'll leave it to you sweets. ðŸ‘ðŸ½

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Four

Okay, I love Esme and Carlisle to pieces. And it seems like 'he's' escalating big time. Let's set Mama Cullen on them all. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I was beyond happy to see you finished this. Here we go,,,

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One

You're good but we knew that. So not Mike, Eric or Phil either. I love Jacob and James together. So let's see what the family thinks of the newlyweds. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

So many of the possibilities for 'him' are gone.  Love how you tossed us good Caius at the end there. So, Alec or Marcus maybe Liam? Anyway, I kept wanting to ask about her job offers but I got distracted by the good shit. What did she study?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

Oh my jeebus! Did Billy say he just had a face lift two months ago? Fabulous.🤣🤣🤣

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

Well I have to say when James isnt the bad guy it's usually a pleasant surprise. Cheers to you doll. I understand eloping and all these parties are a bit much but I'm sure the family will feel left out. However, given Edward's status it would have been out of control to plan a wedding.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Wow, Billy just went there. Hi I know you're with Edward but I want in. Wow. She better tell Edwrad and he better believe her too.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Excellent Edward! He gave Bella time and she came clean. Now it seems that Edward needs to get Medieval on a few asses. You don't become that wealthy without doing some unpleasant things even if all you do is order staff to do it. Let's see we have "Jason"  whoever that is, his parents, the slut sisters and Billy. Billy was oddly aggressive with Bella.  I wonder what the end game is. Clearly he doesn't  understand BDSM and the Commuication Rule. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

So Billy and he who shall not be named are both coo coo for coco pops. At least Edward is taking safety precautions.  So Billy has abused all of Edwards pasts subs how did that sneak by him? I thought Edward was going to confide in Carlisle about Billy. Oh well.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

You had me yelling at the beginning.I know you're going to make us work for it :-D but I thought to soon babes. Phew...I hope you don't let her get captured or hurt by him anymore. I also hope instinct's kick in and Edward beefs up security and show his staff this guys picture he must have it in the clubs records.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Wow Emmett must not have ever trusted his brother to go from zero to 60 on him like that or he's not that bright. I can't believe Rose hasn't sent those porcupines home after hearing what they did. And so not only is "Jason" a sadist he's now a murderer? I hope Edward is one step ahead. So where are Alice and Jasper? Wouldn't they be invited? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Um Rose your friends are skanks. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

So who else wants Jasper and Alice to be in the community too? At least maybe now Emmett more than Rose will be more respectful. And this assholr is in Boston already? Definitely Jasper's  step brother. So he's a sadist and an obsessed psycho!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

So is Jasper's step-brother Bella's sadist ex Dom? And Emmett is immature he needs to grow up. Read a book or google some shit meat head. JS. Rose is calmer than Emmett pay attention sweetie.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

I hope Edwards plan takes this family out! Who is the Sadist? Caius, Aro, James, Felix? I hope Edward protects her because these assholes always come back especially when the paps take pictures of them together. So good so far.