Reviews by Miss G
Summary: Past Featured Story

blessing

After his brother dies in a car accident, Edward returns to his hometown to raise the little boy that was left behind. But raising a baby alone isn't easy, especially for a man who has spent the last few years partying and avoiding responsibilities. Can his beautiful bookworm neighbor be his saving grace? Daddyward. Lemons. Paige Edwards Sherry Neal

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 171760 Read Count: 102779
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2017 Updated: 28 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63: New Year and New Beginnings

My kind of new year. Great idea for this year I just need a well hung Edward ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Esme

I know it was information overload but I wish he could have avoided that drink. Carlisle really fuck up that poor boy lacked love from a mother because what? A shame really. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41: Therapy

Seriously Carlisle left that poor boy in that shit situation while he was off working. Why was he raising him and not Esme? Poor Edward didn't stand a chance. At least now he has one. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Shopping

First of all I freaking love Iris and second this chapter was one of my favorites of Edward's thoughts. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Liam

Don't these poor kids have enough drama to make the story amazing Bella doesn't need a stalker too. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: Confrontations

Can Liam be gone now? I mean why come back now it's been years. Please don't let him get edward in trouble again these kids deserve a break. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49: Good Riddance

Well Elizabeth is no peach and was horrible to edward but Carlisle and Esme screwed the pooch on is one. Carlisle has a lot of explaining to do. 

 

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: Esme's Story

Good grief what a mess huh? Better late than never I suppose. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: Opening Up

Actually there is Charlie Swan, Charles (Esme's husband) and Charles who is a nomad vampire mate of Mackenna in Breaking Dawn II so you are okay naming the the cutie Charlie;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53: Looking Ahead

It must be such a huge relief to have some answers and understanding.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59: Old Friends

What's Paul's guilt about? What's going on there?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: Reaching Out

Now I think I understand Paul's guilt. He's the hit and runner right? That would explain his distance from his godson. Hmmm..

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62: Charlie's First Birthday

Okay didn't Edward take Bella to Elizabeth's birthday party in chapter 19 when he got Charlie's benefit paperwork from his dad? So Bella has seen his mom. Also Elizabeth had a shit situation sure. Husband in love with someone else and cheats but fuck Edward was a baby. Also Carlisle was the weak one here. He dumped off his child and expected his wife to love the object of his betrayal. Bringing Edward home meant life changes. He should have made them. Also he should have told Edward at 16 maybe saved him pain and self destruction. A mess all around. However, Bravo Bella. Bravo!!!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66: Hurt

Thanks for having him call his therapist and going deep into a bottle or buy drugs. I knew Paul was a part of this but why seek out the family? Stupid. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67: Redemption

Now that is a twist of a tale. Nicely done! I'm even willing to bet on some level Seth knew Paul loved him. Unrequited love always shows itself in small ways. Now Edward is shot? Give this sweetheart a break please. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70: A Beautiful Future

I loved this story and the richness of Edward's journey to redemption. Well done!

Summary:

 

Summary: Parenting can be a hard job to tackle, but it can be harder when you are parallel parenting between twins. Whatever will these two do with the girls they love corrupting their lives?
Banner by: HeartForTwilight Productions 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212062 Read Count: 63532
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2017 Updated: 31 May 2018
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So Mike and Maggie know to move on. We’ll see *smirk* Also I hope Mike isn’t the bio dad or knew the Bio mom but it sounds like you’re leading us that way based on his comments. Is it?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What is Maggie using this Charlotte for I wonder? What’s she plotting? Mr. Buckley is in government ? So he’s going to get revenge? Aren’t the Cullen’s crazy powerful in his story. Let’s start doling out some Justice Cullen Style! Hehe I’m glad we are approaching the end of the friends with bene phase. No good comes from that at all.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Okay arrogant enemies so far are...Maggie, Mr. Buckley and mysterious Charlotte. Also I’m still not sure about Mike thinking the girls remind him of someone he knew or the fact that someone was looking into the girls file according to Tia the social worker. If Mr. Buckley is single and wealthy Maggie should go after him and they can be cray, cray together. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I’m glad Mike is a good guy but I am not surprised about this Charlotte person. I can’t imagine a court taking those girls. An aunt doesn’t have the same rights as parents and it’s her word only her druggie brother gave her the girls. The drama is good though and it got them to engagement and ‘I love you’s’

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I like Jakes ritual in the ceremony and what they said to the kids so sweet.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yay Mike! Edward’s right he does need a nice girl (not vapid Jessica ). And justice needs to be served to Maggie, her Dad and Angela. And what’s the final word on Buckley. I hope they have a boy. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow this is the first time Forks was written as some sort of utopia. I understand Bella’s fear. My family had a similar accident except the driver that hit us on he bridge was in a semi and fell asleep not a crazy chick that can’t take a hint. Getting back in the game takes time.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

That’s an exciting way to enter the world. That little Kassie is a hoot.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I can always count on you both for an interesting twist in your stories and you never disappoint. This epi was the perfect example of that extra added twist. Thank you again. Hugs. Later...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, I am so happy you ladies have finished this story. I didn’t want to read it as an WIP because I love your shit so much I always power through fast and joyfully. Anyway, very good start and I’m all in. Side note I love that your subsequently de-fanged and de-clawed Tanya and Jacob respectively. Hehe. Kudos!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That Kassie is a little Emmett! Hehe It’s to bad Edward jumps to conclusions and Bella has the level head. But it’s always enjoyable to watch it unfold. Slimy Mike! I’m with Kassie. She can do better.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Kassie is a handful. And Jessica is a Skankica for sure. Was she saying all of that in front of the kids? Now Edward should want her fired! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great Edward mellowed because hea is more fun when he’s on board. I love the nick name Teddy for Edward. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Are you sure Cordie is only 6 1/2? ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Maggie is surely cray cray. That entire dialogue at the party was odd. She’s got stalker written all over her. The comfy day was sweet.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

These 6year olds are awfully precocious. Planning a wedding wow. And we know what Maggie and Buckley are playing at although Maggie’s is misguided because Edward will never want her. But Charlotte is after what? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This bet of flirting should be interesting. I hope it doesn’t lead to this fight they seem to be anticipating. Girls are plotting which is cute and Maggie is still stalking which is creeptacular! She is an odd duck that one.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Okay this arrangement isn’t good for Co-parenting. But at least they fought and worked it out towards resolution. And Rosalie is annoying on a regular but she bugged me here.I dont know why.  And why do these adults need a 6 year old to protect them from cray cray Maggie and gross Mike. Hehe! I agree with the 6 year old you need to tell them NO I’M NOT INTERESTED! Why are Edward and Bella playing nice with these two? 

Summary:

change

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a very secluded life. After her father's death, she decides to make a change. With a map, dart, and life insurance money to fuel the trip, she is off on an adventure. On this trip with her, we will see things through her eyes, and maybe find a new friend or two as well. AH. No heavy drama planned, but may change as the characters grow and talk to me.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56350 Read Count: 48588
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2017 Updated: 30 Nov 2018
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Okay, I’m enjoying their journey. The places they visit and especially the food. I wish I had a Fred! I love a gay Jake. I just do. But I am curious how my sweet duo is going to earn that NC-17 rating. I respect the no sex thing but I can’t believe no on curses. Like I said curious...

Lately I’ve read so much angst, crime and drama that this is perfect for chill holiday reading. Thank you.

Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84373
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery

So Edward has not lost his leg at this point and we are quite far from the prologue?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare

Thank you Charlie because yuck! Considering Charlie has three wives that's pretty amazing he knew this was wrong. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected

So based on timelines is Edward going to meet Bella years from now? She's been gone four years from the cult. They are both entering the community separately and he hasn't had his accident yet right?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - And So it Begins

I guess Garrett is way better than James or Jacob but I thought this was a B/E story. Sigh.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Sore but Satisfied

I was hoping this Jessica was not the Jessica from his tattoo parlor. That could be sticky no pun intended 😉 So I guess we e met their first Dom/sub? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Life Changing

So was James driving the Jeep? Jessica she be cray.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Good advice from Eleazer on how to be there for Edward and not neglect themselves.  

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Aro is more of a charlatan then psychotic so I don't believe he locked himself in that temple. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Well at least he's not closed off to everyone. That's progress. And bless Carmen for getting out most women and children never do.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 ~ Not as it Seems

Of course in this case Aro is a Sadist and not in the ways of the community. I mean he was just creating rules as he went. Cray! What's with all the wives and kids if he just wanted to inflect pain, rape and steal. What's fucked is he's probably alive and Edward lost his leg. So did James try to kill Edward or was it a true accident? Hmm...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I knew that creepy fucker was coming back. Now where are Charlie and Renee?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 ~ Texas Sizzle

We're almost at the end and I hope Aro meets his end. We find out if Charlie and Renee are alive and will Edward Fire Tonya?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 ~ Passion

Aro what a loser. 5 years and still lusting? Why? How did he find her? And why does she keep her curtains open? How does she not feel the creeper watching her?  I hope Edward and his sexy brothers a gun toting Texans. So many questions.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 ~ When The Nightmares Come True

Duh Alice yeah her shit is in the middle of the street something definitely happened.

;-)Hey there Charlie we missed you. Good timing btw.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three ~ Faith For The Future

I like your story and the Cullen Brothers and Carmen was a cool addition. I do have a question, Charlie's other wives and kids what was the deal with that? Did he feel they were too far gone to save? Anyway, thanks for the dedication to storytelling. Read you soon...;-)

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39692
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

A true sicpx degrees of separation. In a way Carlisle is there for Edward by being there for Bella. Im sure Edward won't see it that way though. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Will he feel guilty, angry, fear at her having his wife's heart? I mean we all know the heart is a muscle with nerve endings but we like to believe it's the center of our soul. I'm curious to his response.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I guess Bella and Alice have the cock up/down on lock. ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Why are Carlisle and Esme cockblocking? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Lovely. Lovely. Lovely. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hockey Pucks and Library Luck

Meet Edward Cullen, aka The Great Eight. He's the Captain of the Washington Capitals. He's one of the highest paid hockey players in the NHL but he's a little lonely. He fell in love once and thought she was the one. Until she broke his heart and walked away. Since then he's concentrated on getting his franchise a Stanley Cup.

Then Bella happens. She's quiet, intelligent, funny and beautiful. She knows nothing about hockey, and could care less that Edward is famous. She invites him into her apartment for a dinner, and eventually that blossoms into a relationship. She has goals of her own. International travel, keeping her family members safe, and excelling at her job as a research librarian.

She's independent and doesn't like to be controlled. He's a superstar who likes to spoil the women he falls in love with.

This story is rate R for adult themes and graphic language.

 

Banner made by HeartForTwilight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49639 Read Count: 27426
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Moving In

Darn it! Antibiotics and birth control failure strike again? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Hockey in England, what?

Bella is a cool chick. Very understanding. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Roadtrippin’

So this lie is going to backfire. And what is with Jasper, Emmett and his mom? Bella has a career and life she doesn’t have to follow around her boyfriend in hockey gear. Oye. Oxford is a big freaking deal. However,these two should talk since all they do is quiet nights he should have known about the potential of Oxford and he needs to come clean.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Roadtrippin’

So is Bella embarrassed about being Amish? Edward doesn’t seem like he’d be upser or judge her. Also, why is Edward misssing a tooth as trainer? Trying to take down the hotness factor? :-) They are cute if not awkward.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 8: We Have a Cup to Celebrate

The last two chapters were a big change for Dr. Bella. Sex, drinking, tattoos and letting Edward buy something for her without complaining. Don’t change her into a shopping and drinking WAG please. I like her smarts and quirky personality. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 10: Let the Truth be Told

Got to love those Cullen’s! ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Social Media is the Devil

I love the ending of this chapter. Very heartfelt. Will Esme and hot Doc foster the twins? Either way I’m glad Bella has some family now.

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65970
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow what an intro. Carlisle and Esme dead. Angela to raise Edward. How many of Aro's men were killed I wonder. Off we go...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - June 27, 2017

Well that's a nice twist. I guess Aro didn't know about Italy? That's a big loose end. And Jessica really blaming others for your failings because they work hard and live their lives? I guess she going to help Aro and Tonya really? You send the mob after a famous writer? Not cool. We just went from zero to sixty in one chapter flat. 😉

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ July 12, 2017

That's a good way to build loyalty through mutual hate. So whats the name of the female bomb specialist? I don't believe you mentioned it.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That was a sexy save there Edward. 😉 So when Charlie said he was working his way up the ranks was he a made guy or a cop and is he dead or alive? I wonder what's Renee's story. I bet she was running from someone huh? I guess we'll see.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~ July 15, 2017

Hot. Hot. Hot.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yeah just call Bella the honey badger. She takes what she wants. Especially his cobra. Hehe Jeeze to albe to say ready the plane. Hot. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017

Sorry for Alice's story but I hope the come to blows and Bella lays her out. That will be fun. Mostly because I think they are underestimating her. It's usually Rosalie who's hostile.Whats the deal with Bella's Dad? Is he alive will he make an appearance? Also is James Hunter who is Aro's second the same James Volturi who Rosalie is hiding from?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017

I love the mystery in this chapter. And hope they fix up the house and enjoy many happy years there. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries

Nice! A conclave of mafia elders. Let the tribunal begin...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures

Yeah so are you going to tell us what has crawled up Alice's ass? I mean there are things we don't know about Bella's past sure like her dad, where her deadbeat mom is but otherwise she's a public open book. I am surprised Jenks hasn't done a background search on her yet. Oh well the ring is spectacular btw.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ July 18, 2017

The dining room sex was hot but what about her broken ribs? ;-) Is Alice going to find her place or will Edward have to correct her?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 July 18, 2017

Okay I get Alice's fear but Jesus girl use your words. She could have shared her fear with Edward. He doesn't need to be a rabid dog to get revenge. Actually the more he has to fight for the better.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen ~ July 19, 2017

Poor Gina. And yes a powerful man is very sexy.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen ~ Not so hidden

Yeah I'm curious about the envelope too.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Father of the Bride

I love Edwrad's instinct about the perverted Bishop and Bens orders. Can't wait for the Conclave. And I really love the convo with Charlie how he's bad ass and Edward was fuckhot in control. Smexy!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Time For a Wedding

Go figure the little dress maker had the final piece of information needed. Aro the bishops son. Funny.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty One ~ Oh What a Night

I adore the little dress maker Aurora and her endless innocent information. Now it made since that Renee said she was living a lie. Wonder why she was crying that day in the diner when they met?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty Two - A New Leader

Wow, we are right at end here. That is going to be one hell of a chapter. Lots to find out and lots to do.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three - Justice Finally Served

The Conclave is cool right down to the badass phone tree. At in the tan suit and bow tie? Perfect! So Edward will clean Volturi house right? Including killing James?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Well done and thank you for the creativity. Be well and stay safe out there.

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68147
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen ~ Blood Plans

Jesus that family is nuts. I love Esme. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen ~ Blood Joining

So Mark is suspicious of Royce I hope he tells Edward. I hope they don't actually kidnap her and I hope she doesn't lose the babies. How is Carlisle's rehab going?

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen ~ Cold Blooded Deception

To many distractions to see. Carlisle hit, Bella pregnant with twins, meeting Rosalie and Alice, planning a wedding, renovating an apartment and regular everyday shit Royce snuck through. Charlie is cray. So many in this story. I love it!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Broken and Bloody

Badass Esme, I'm just saying. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Blood Will Flow

With such calm Skipper. Bye Royce.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One ~ Blood Flowing Like a River

There will be loud baby.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two ~ Blood Family

Yay Carlisle and yay Esme too. Haha well done. Another mob story to love.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven ~ Blood Desire

I'm not sure what Elezar is thinking encouraging his cray daughter to pursue Edward. I doubt Carlisle would let his son marry her. It seems he would prefer an Irish bride. Is Bella Irish? That was Irina across the street right?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve ~ Blood Confessions

Royce can't be good news he rarely is like James. I mentioned him because besides Phil you mentioned his name here. Hmm...Again Elezar and Irina are both cray. He thinks Edward is weak and tried to kill Carlisle why would he want his daughter to have Edward's baby?  Hope they don't let their guard down. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen ~ Blood Proposal

Royce is the mole and Elezar is going to give her back to Charlie? Oh shit! I thought she was dead to him. Oh boy.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen ~ Blood Annoucements

So stupid Bree is gossiping with Royce. I wish they weren't so distracted so they could see what's happening around them but maybe they are and you are planning something amazing. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Okay that slap was necessary although not very elegant. ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six ~ Blood Ties

He knew she was a virgin good girl he had the blood on his dick so why is he being one? I was hoping he would act better than this. *sad face*

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten ~ Blood Promises

Good we seem on track for love and family. I love Esme btw. I hope Carlisle defies odds and at least walks with a cane. I love a sexy Papa Don/Captain Carlisle.  

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress

Wow a paralyzed Carlisle I've only seen that once before and never at the beginning of the story. This is an interesting twist. I love how you bitch slap Aro around in your mob tales will he be trustworthy here? Can't wait to see.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Blood Bonds

She's surrounded by Edward's people but no Edward. At the gala maybe. I mean 6 months and he hasn't tried to find her? Will he see any of Bella while pregnant? I'm glad she's not alone. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two ~ Low Blood Pressure

I'm not sure what either of them were thinking. He doesn't need Illegitimate children and she is just starting out. Also in all their 'spill' debriefing did the girls ask about protection? I love that she is on the floor with Garret and I think her dark prince has the penthouse hmm...Hey is Rose's Dad connected? Perhaps ' A Frind Of Theirs'?  Good stuff as always. I love your stories. I'm in my mob part of the year for reading and you provide the goods. ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One ~ First Blood

He could have woken her up. She was a virgin and she would have understood the emergency but this will make her feel used. Also she's not going to be knocked up from a one night stand will she? I hope savvy Alice and Rose have her on the shot. *fingers crossed*