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Edward Cullen is a fallen angel, living among humans. He’s dark, snarky, tattooed and a total badass. However, he still has his wings and angelic powers because the ‘powers that be’ believe that he is capable of redemption, despite being cast out of heaven. His exile was due to the fact that he was interacting with an unknown evil that tempted him over sixty years ago. Because of his mistake, he’s resigned to live out his immortal existence as a bitter angel, caught in limbo.
Isabella Swan, a human, is in the wrong place at the wrong time. In her innocence, she manages to worm her way into his heart, bringing him back into the light and out of the darkness.
Banner by Clo Rodeffer
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Gelesen, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108687 Read Count: 68108
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
Okay I figured Bella’s anger was a summoning for Lucifer so that fits. Don’t hate me folks but I think everyone is overreacting slightly to Carsile. NOT Bella of course but her anger and saddness as Esme mentioned was necessary to break through he final wall and yes summon this war that must happen so she can be tested by Lucifer and then become an angel with Edward or live out life with many children on earth with him as human. Either way HEA. Also, Carsile didn’t display feelings he should have but he did not drop the ball just on her care his betters did. He just really sucks at delivering shitty news.
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
I think this was sweet and Edward is delicious. Period! Also, I think the mating and coming together will fortify Bella in what is definitely coming with Lucifer.
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31
No offense to angels but what the ever loving fuck people. Where were you all. Was NO one watching? Argh! Please don’t let Riley violate her I cannot handle that and neither can she...okrr!
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33
She better be an angel ;-) so did Riley die because Bella blocked Rosalie’s arrow? Or did someone sneak up on him? See Gabriel was as stoic as Carsile. Safrice noted? M’kay.
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35
Are you going to time advance so we can see Colton and Thomas reunite with their mates?
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue
Nice touch with Esme and Emmet. Well done I really enjoyed this delicious plot bunny. Thank you!
Isabella Marie Cullen the only child of Carlisle Cullen Don of the Cullen Crime family, born with an infinity symbol birthmark. Tragedy hits and Isabella and her mother are killed, or are they? How far will one brother go to take control of the family?
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48278 Read Count: 91379
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh I love Carlisle as Capo di Tutti Capi and for this story to work Aro has to hurt him? Sad really but...I can't wait to continue.
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Yeah Carlisle instinct is a powerful tool. Use it my friend. Wonder who the twin boys will be? Creepy James and Creepy Felix?
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Isn't Aro being followed? It's a shame Edwards dad is dead but I guess it will open the door for Esme? So Lizzy Belle is going to be Bree Tanner? That will be interesting.
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Honestly, I would immediately put Aro on lock because this all too convenient. Poor Elizabeth. The only way Aro can become boss is to kill Carlisle he's still quite young to make plentiful children right?
Date: 03 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Best laid plans Aro. Don't forget Lizzie Belle is very smart. Poor little girl.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
8 pack. Well done Don Carlisle well done. Little Edward is a sweetie.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I'm with Brad I would have looked into everything too. So I guess Lizzie Belle will be raised by Rosalie and Emmett?
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Emma Rose? Well that's vain Rosalie. Why not just call her Bella, Belle or Izzy? The poor girl is going to have an identity crisis. How many names does she need. And will Rosalie really give her back when the time comes? She seems too attached already. This poor little girl. All these adults are making very bad and selfish decisions on her behalf.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Honestly what Emmett and Rosalie did was fucked up. They know that girl wasn't theirs and kept her from her father. Lied to her and hid her. Not cool.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
It's weird to think of Bella as Emma Rose. It just doesn't fit. It here she s all grown up but she is a horny bad ass and that's cool. I love a confident Bella. I guess part of her is seeking her true self. Donna Cullen.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Yeah I'm curious how Bella is going to take this. She's strong so it can go multiple ways,
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
It got confusing for a minute switching from Emma Rose, Bella but in the end I'm happy she has her Dada back nd getting married. She's also going to have to come back from the grave legal like. I mean Carlisle did bury her after all. I can't wait to see what they do to Aro and Caius.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I'm surprised Carlisle didn't do regular sweeps for bugs. Yes justice is near my friends.
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Yeah the demise was worth it. Didn't James have a twin? Was he involved?
Date: 04 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
It's always so sad when they die even when they are old. Thank you for another story. Be well and stay safe out there .
Summary: After hearing her son’s birthday wish, Bella decides to contact her ex-boss whom she had a short affair with before quitting, to let him know that he has a son. Edward loved Bella since the first moment he saw her, despite her young age and position he sought her out on many occasions, to merely be rejected in turn. Now that she has returned he hopes they can make things work and finally be together.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151416 Read Count: 127183
Date: 14 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Your first story? You say you know it's not perfect. Well first bravo to you for putting yourself out there. Second no ones story is perfect so you are in good company and I am enjoying your story.;-) and while lemons aren't the bones of any story just the juice, I will say you have good juice.
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Oh my goodness adore all three of them so hard. :-)
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Olympic Part II
That Anthony and Edward are so sweet together. Did Bella name Anthony for his father or coincidence? Will edward ask? I never thought Esme would be that far from her grandkids. Anyway I'm enjoying the ride.
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Flashbacks
I know they had sex first in his office before the hotel but how does victoria know? Will you tell us in the story and I'm assuming she did that to Lola from jealousy with Creeper James?
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
Them waiting was important because the Anthony/Edward bond was the priority and then the reconnection with each other. Nice connecting btw.
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 31: First Night Together
It sucks she got robbbed but it is the perfect way to kick in Edwards protective instincts and move them forward too. Was the break in personal? You ended on a lovely note.
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 36: Meet the Parents
Agreed Esme and Carlisle are the best!
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 40: A Proposal Part II
I have to tell you your little Anthony wears me out and he's fictional. But so cute!
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 41: Another Surprise
With all the being tired I figured and Edward will be happy. He's 40 and he missed everything with Anthony so drumroll...
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 44
I like the zoo idea as well as the bday party idea. Cute! They need to stop Anthony from sleeping with them. He wants to be a big boy use that bit to motivate him. Sad part he grow up. Catch 22.
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 47: Unpleasant Memories
Honestly I just read some serious angst so I love the ease of family and love on this snowy Friday. Also #metoo would totally take James and Victoria down. Just saying.
Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 51: Wedding Planning
A small wedding at their gorgeous home for just friends and family they can do in a month. Edward would hire her a planner. Hell even though I enjoy a less intense Alice I'm sure she would help. Easy peasy!
Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 56: Honeymoon Part II
Goodness. Love them!
Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 66: Blast from the Past
Since james is no longer in a power position I don't know why she even spoke to him at all. He sexually harassed her so all bets are off.
Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 68: Weird Happenings
I hope you're going to explain Edwards behavior because that's cheating behavior and I know he didn't so...also victoria and james are up to no good. Stalking??
Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 69: Bella's Scare
Still doesn't explain that night he came home quickly showered, avoided her and Anthony and claimed he was too tired for sex. What was that?
Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 70: Moving Forward
Thanks for breaking that down.
Summary: Antique or Ikea, Beautiful inside or out, maim or kill, he had decisions to make today that would change his life.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 75 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 214108 Read Count: 157705
Date: 24 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
I keep coming back. I do Mobward every year at this time. All of it everywhere. I love it. It seems fitting somehow. Halloween and The holiday season (family haha) anyway, this story is still the shit. I love it! Thank you for keeping it here for me to return to it. See you perhaps sooner than expected. Have a happy holiday season. Be safe and healthy.
Author's Response:
So glad you still enjoy it. I'm trying so hard to come up with a sequel but I haven't written anything since I finished this .
Who knows one day . Your support means everything thank you xx
Date: 28 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
So are you planning for Edward to have a heart attack, aneurysm or stroke because he will with his lack of cool and all the yelling. ;-) I like Jasper and agree he is probably a better second. Emmett is sweet but seems distracted. Time will tell on all I guess.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I love all of the British colloquialisms you use in your writing. Takes me back.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Not upset about the antiques Edward had a valid point to make to Tanya. But there's something about Bella I can't connect with yet. I'm not sure why but I will because I'm all about E/B HEA. I like this Jasper too. So the two older gentleman one was Carlisle correct? Where are Esme and Alice?
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Your right Bella he needs to get laid because he's a heart attack waiting to happen also he has an accent? What kind? I like the Bella handled him in the end there. I feel sorry for Emmett but I have a feeling it will get better for him.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Obviously because she's a spitfire and she's a daddy's girl who happens to be a cop the woo will be difficult. However, a sad lonely and horny Edward/Boss is breaking my heart. He should sell the house and buy the penthouse. That would please Bella and feed Bella perhaps score some points there. JS
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Bella and her epic gas? Nobody needed to hear that. Haha
And in the states the first place robbers look is the icebox. Who is this Mr. Jarvis? One of Edward's, his enemy or FBI?
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I liked Emmett POV I hope Bella helps Edward chill out on him. And if Rosie is Emmett's girl and he loves her she should NOT be working at that club. The guys and especially Edward won't respect her in that life. He is a Cullen even if he isnt in charge.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Okay Rosalie is average? Brilliant! And Emmett letting her tell Edwards business not so brilliant. This Jarvis is he your character because James is dead otherwise I would have said him. Also why can't they get him on cctv and run facial rec?
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I want to be on Edward's side even in a mob fic but he needs to chill the yelling and a screaming tantrums and embrace a more suave demeanor. It's getting old and we have a ways to go. i think Bella would be more responsiveif he did. At least for Emmett she left him aroused, 😉.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I guess we finally get to meet Esme. I have a feeling she will be interesting. I wonder how hard it was for Edward to be that chill or maybe defeated/ desperate. And Bella in a carb coma we have lift off. In the end Charlie will never approve of him so how will that work for Bella? And Edward is 'The Boss' of the family and a grown man why are they still picking his women? Odd.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Leave it to Bella to have an epic stalker. In this instance I suppose having 'Boss Edward Cullen' desire you is a good thing.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Jarvis is a government identity maybe. And I'm sad, I have a feeling I'm not going to like Esme. I hate when that happens. But major happy points for Edward when he's smooth and in control at work. Hot. Hot. Hot.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Yeah I definitely don't like Ms. Esme. Women like that are gross. At the end of the day your old money and breeding bullshit is moot. You married a gangster doll face, not a senator so why the nonsense with you children? So respectfully tell mummy to welll...fuck off. ;-D
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Hey how old is Edward anyway?
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Counterfeit is a crime Miss Swan. I hope you let Edward buy you nice things eventually because fake Louboutins isn't Kosher doll. The real deal is heaven just saying.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Where was Quil? And if this Jarvis has a carefully guarded background that Alec recognizes then perhaps he's a hack as epwell and is following Bella via cctv.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I still have too many questions and no not more confused but you definitely added multiple layers. Here's the big question though...based on your in previous chapters timelines Mr. Jarvis was in place well before Edward entered Bella's life that day in the penthouse. So is this about her not him? So like Edward said Jenks should dig deeper into her, her father and honestly, where fuck is Renee?
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
So who's the master planner? The one that told Tanya to be at Edward's office. That something big is going down. Quil bring taken. Jarvis. Renee missing. Charlie unusually silent. Esme's overbearing involvement in Edward's wifely choices. Where is Carlisle? Yeah more freaking thoughts/questions. I just hope the answers flow and we dont have to wait for the last chapter. That always feels anticlimactic.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I love how you gave Edward an average dick even though having a big cock is the fantasy we are here for. We tend to have average dicks in real life. A solid thick 8 isnt porn star but definitely worth a great lemon. Just saying...
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
So Tanya cheats on their son and they are divorced but they enjoy lunch together? People that operate at this level kill me with all the pretenses. So is Esme going to join forces with Tanya? And yeah Bella is right edward did sound like his mom. Never a good thing.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Lemon. Lemon. Lemonade. Don't you know it's where all a stories juicy bits are
made. ;-)
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Carlisle seems cool. Let's have more of him and less of snobby, bitchy Esme. That makes me a little sad to say really. I'm glad Edward stood up to her.
Date: 29 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Several chapters and reviews ago I had a feeling I wouldn't like Esme. Ding. Ding. Is Edward Denali stupid? How does he think Tanya will get Edward Cullen back? Cray.ive never been more glad this Bella has a backbone.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Lots and lots of excitement here. It seems like they are test Edward's security on Bella. I guess I don't understand why Esme feels she has so much say in her Mob bosses life.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I thought Bella hadn't seen or heard from her mother since she left her and Charlie. I do believe this is a high level op and Esme is a larger problem then being an annoyingly overbearing society mom. That comment about being head of the family is no slip of the tongue. Maybe she and Edward Denali are up to something because there is no way her so called friends wouldn't gossip with her being around her cheating thieving ex daughter in law. Right? Hmm...
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I actually think when we've seen Edward in boss mode like when dealing with James or his cool bad ass edge with Caius. But his story has been dominated by dealing with his cheating wife, meeting Bella and subsequently dealing with Bella's military level stalker. I personally want to see him find a balance between I'm the fucking boss and I'm a man in love.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
This seems a little more intensity organized for an FBI investigation into Edward's crime family. Also, why are they showing their hand by taking her in for questioning now? Oh sure I 'll leave my security and get into a car with 5 armed men that claim they are police. NOT!
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
WTF!? Charlie isn't dead but he might be helping them to get his daughter out of that situation. or maybe they just stole or borrowed his items for the crime phot shoot.Thanks for touching on Charlie knowing about Edward. I was wondering about that. Now not letting her leave and not letting her call a lawyer as we all know is violating her rights. In this case silence is golden Miss Bella. I hope she's smart enough to keep quiet and not believe is Aro/Jarvis asshole.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
So is Aro/Jarvis Voltori Caius father? Thank god Bella's is seeing through Denali he's acting like he's working for Aro. This is all wonky.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Why would Bella fly to Forks? How are they going to get Bella out of there. She's already slipped up. And I had a feeling Esme and Denali were up to something.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
Aro and Denali and so sad. M'kay Agent Call how do you not know an Elder in your own tribe if you grew up there. Yay, Bella is a tough smart cookie. Thank fuck. A solid match for Edward instead of slicone antique collecting Barbie.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Smart girl. And clearly Esme wants the business and Denili is texting her. Why would rich society mommy want a mob family? Odd.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
All normal reactions. What's next?
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Well Bella wasn't so breakable so I guess Rosalie would be next.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
I think Esme has another lover. The question is who? Denali is a means to an end not her forever.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
So is Tanya her lover? if not she is definitely her partner. This is NO society mom folks. Bella's right Edward you're classy so make the proposal classy too sweetheart.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
If Esme is old money as you mentioned in the beginning why be so duplicitous with her family? And a female lover? Boo ya! Tanya for the win!
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
I thought Edward said he wasn't in the slave trade. Just curious. When Jarvis mentioned that at the warehouse I knew he was lying because Edward said he wouldn't do that but he did everything else.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
Sad Denali so sad. Esme is diabolical. I hope carlie can finally be happy with Liz when mommy Cullen is gone.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
Things are cooking with gas now folks. So Esme has been plotting this for 20 years. Frame her lover, kill her son and husband, send another son to jail all so she can chill in Mexico with her female lover...Tanya? And how Tanya treated her mom. Jesus the end should be creative for all parties.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
I liked the light yet serious moment with Alice and Bella. I also agree Jasper needs to get in or out. I hope Emmett and Edward become close. Like Bella said they are all the future.
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Okay the Tanya thing does confuse me.
So she married Edward but doesn't love him but wants him back because daddy said so? She's sleeping with Esme? At least this is my theory.
Tanya knows about Esme and her father and taunted her mother with it?
Esme wants to whisk her away? Again my theory and I'm sticking to it?
James was the love of Tanya's life but she had other lovers?
Now because Bella is NO mistress she wants Bella out of the way?
Date: 31 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
They are both so sad thinking they are out witting everyone and each other. I hope Edward did change his will. I love how Esme is underestimating Emmett and Jasper. That's what happens when you plot in a bubble you tend to not really see people or the treats.
Date: 31 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
They way Edward handled his mom was sexy. He put her in her place. Boom! I like the way Edward, Emmett and Jasper are working together. This lunch should be interesting.
Date: 31 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
Esme being handled by the cartel is not a good thing for her.
Date: 31 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
I liked his chapter. They really did earn he break. ;-)
Date: 31 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
I wish I had a seat at the horribly fantastic luncheon. Cheers!
Date: 31 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
They will search for her remains right? Confirmation is key.
Date: 31 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
I guess I can't believe she's dead because she masterminded quite a bit of shit under their noses for years all to achieve this new life. So when she saw her maid leave with Raul how could her instincts not kick in. If Raul is a fuck up then yes I don't believe. But in a perfect world for the Cullens yes she's dead.
Date: 31 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
We are reading a mob fic right? So what I say next should not be surprising, Emmett man the fuck up dude. This is the life. Esme planned to kill your father, brother and frame you for it. It would have meant your possible death but definitely life in prison. What about Rosie then? I was a little disappointed that a man who carries tools for torture abandoned his post with the family for months and even left his little sister to deal while he pussied out. It was nice to hear Edward knew what his mom had been up too. Perhaps Alice should step up. Now she has a backbone.
Author's Response:
I have absolutely loved watching you read this story. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave your thoughts it makes my day to see someone enjoying my story.
I have left this open to a sequel who knows maybe we will find out if Esme was a under the debris or not . I'm desperately awaiting the return of my muse as I have a story three chapters in and unfinished at the moment .
Date: 31 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
Well you weaved a good tale I enjoyed the chase to the end. However, you left some open ended questions. Are you planning a sequel? Either way good luck and the best in 2020.
After his brother dies in a car accident, Edward returns to his hometown to raise the little boy that was left behind. But raising a baby alone isn't easy, especially for a man who has spent the last few years partying and avoiding responsibilities. Can his beautiful bookworm neighbor be his saving grace? Daddyward. Lemons. Paige Edwards Sherry Neal
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 171760 Read Count: 102779
Date: 10 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Apartment Hunting
I am loving this redeemable and sweet Edward and this loving Carlisle. Little Charlie is definitely going to help keep Edward in the light. Now with the stress of everything and Edward is recovering he needs a meeting for additional support. I have feeling Bella is going to be amazing. *fingers crossed-* also my final thought if Seth was the responsible son and a college educated fire fighter with a new baby wouldn't he and his wife have had life insurance for their baby at least or for his wife if he died on the job? Curious!
Date: 10 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Bella Swan
We are all broken in some fashion. No life is without pain Edward.
Date: 10 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Birthday Party
I don't know about all of you but I don't think Edward is hers. Elizabeth based on Edward's flashbacks and her utter lack of maternal energy says he s adopted or...? But Edward is not hers she almost resents or hates him even when he was 4. So drugs is not the reason. If this were a mobster fic which I've been reading like crazy, I would say she is Carlisle's goomah's/mot kid. Just saying ;-)
Date: 10 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Meeting The Family
God Edward's drinking, fighting and drugs was all because he lacked love and affection in the home. It's amazing how we can damage our children all while not taking the blame. I know Carlisle traveled for work but did he really JUST notice how cold and mean Elizabeth was? Come on!!! I want this Edward to succeed so bad. HEA all the way!
Date: 10 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Morning After
Sweet date, hot night both responsible and sexy. He morning after...pull out doesn't work Edward I hope Bella's got the back up. I love him and Charlie together.
Date: 10 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Halloween
What's up with Paul guilt? Also, where is Carlisle?
Date: 10 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Road Trip
I don't want you to be down on your self either sweetheart. Bless Bella and Charlie
Date: 10 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Coming Clean
I know her parents are grieving and they are older but they could have made an effort too. Also, no need to be rude. I'm glad they said 'I love you.' I loved vet this little family. Again where the heck is Carlisle and where did Elizabeth disappear too?
Date: 10 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Return Home
The woman is Esme right? I mean Elizabeth is a lost cause. Yes I vote Esme. I love Edwards open heart so hard right now ;-)