Reviews by Miss G
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1081949
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

Wow I'm depressed! Why damage beautiful Edward? Good story! 😉

 

 

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

I know this is late but I am so sorry to hear of your Mom's passing. I know this loss and my heart and thoughts are with you and yours.

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 164: Chapter 164

Wow,so much angst in this story. So much sadness. I wasn't expecting it all the way towards the end here. Whew!

Summary:

I was content in the limelight until a coffee girl flipped my world upside down. Titles like 'Academy Award Winner' and the 'People's Choice' used to mean everything, but it's my newest title that I cherish the most...the Hollywood Dad.

 

*The True Confessions of a Coffee Girl Sequel*

 

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*Banner by Mina*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52074 Read Count: 39331
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2014 Updated: 13 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two

I love your stories and this was great. I love Eddie and Coffee Girl! You could do a short Epi wrapping up his issues with his family and call it complete. As far as the characters go you've given them closure minus that one aspect. There life so to speak will go on right? Bravo btw!

Getting Blitzed by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

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The continuing adventures of Cockyback and Reed Girl. College is over and real life awaits. How will they handle the ups and downs thrown their way as Edward enters the NFL and Bella approaches graduation? Rated R for Rainbow. Sequel to Sideline Collision

 

Accidentally deleted and reposted on 2/7/16


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 299975 Read Count: 38949
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 08 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I’ve been in an awful accidental angst/drama cycle. God how I missed this, him and Reed Girl and of course Miss Rainbow. But mostly Edward Fucking Cullen. Bring it! :-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

A cocky Edward is far from canon so it a sweet spot for me. I love cockyback! His self love is most entertaining. I find myself laughing out loud often.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I always love when writers have and Edwards POV story but yours is so much fun. His ego has no equal and that’s is the best part and how he really feels about Bella how she has no match and Rainbow of course.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I love love his relationship with both his girls. He has come so far managing to be cockyward always and then sweetward behind closed doors of course. He’s a man damn it not a girl. Hehe

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I know Jasper is jealous but I love the friendship Edward has with Sammy. It actually feels more natural then his with Jasper. Sorry Jaspy I do love you! And watching an Edward change and grow in fan fiction is always wonderful when it’s organic because canon Edward didn’t in his vampire form. And this one is my favorite of all times. Sexy cocky bastard. ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So glad Sammy has his own Reed Girl he deserves it! And I feel that a good cry is an ablution for the soul. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

You are the best! I love this story it’s my happy place. I can’t wait for time to pass so I can read it and Sideline again. Be well in all things and thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113790
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay I know Tanya will be history at some point but jeezus the way she neglects and speaks of her baby is abusive and I agree with another reviewer...private plane must go down in flames or found in a hotel room in Vegas, Thunder from down under strippers and coke scandal but something soon she is as per use awful. thanks for the fantastic updates! Hope Edward gets his sexy ass in gear soon. He just won an Oscar now is the time to make major changes. Everyone know relationships fail after actors win. true story! ;-D

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Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 16 Part 5

Thank you! Updates, updates, updates!!!

Its a shame outsiders never overhear the shit Tanya says. You know, YouTube her ass. Also are you going to give us a Rose/Tanya smack down? Excited for what's next.

 

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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*banner by MagTwi78

It's the summer before college, and what better way to spend it than with friends on the beach. Love, sand, and the ocean is what awaits them. Can two people with difficult pasts move on? A birthday fic for Kyla713

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42099 Read Count: 11037
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2015 Updated: 31 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Okay...first Bella sometime a house full of shitting and puking boys is just that. Angela breaking Bella's confidence to tell Alec instead of Edward was so very wrong. Then Alec not using that information to help his cousin understand is wrong. Bella being willing to sleep with Edward but not tell him what has made her not trust is sad and wrong. Alec's reaction to Edward when he questions Peter's presence is fucked because he KNOWS Edward doesn't know the whole story so...wtf Alec now you are the beacon of the group? Then Alec telling a room full of guys Bella's greatest humiliation is fucked!  JS

Summary: Past Featured Story

SYTYCD

 

The competition is fierce. Dreams are at stake and a budding romance between All-Star, Edward and contestant, Bella are the talk to of the competition. Not to mention jealousy and bitterness from fellow contestants. Will Bella's dream become a reality or will her dreams be dashed before she even gets a chance to compete? Will Edward open his heart to the sweet brunette who captured his attention at the auditions?

 

"And America's Favorite Dancer is..."

 

 

Banner by the talented Mina Rivera

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209773 Read Count: 45853
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2015 Updated: 30 Nov 2016
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 4: New York Minute

I love freaking it!!  Peter is Alice. Alice is Tanya. Tanya is gone? Emmett and Rosalie hip hop dancers. Jasper a tapper? To quote Ertha Kitt...puurrfect! Good job staying true to the show and true to you as well. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 5: California Dreamin'

Alice is the perfect villain because her enthusisiam and controlling tendencies are hard to deal with when she's out for good. *two snaps up*

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Hip, Hip, Chin, Chin - The Rhythm Section

I love Rosalie having teenage headgear and a whitening tray. Malice god I hate that gurl! Since I am a major fan of the show I am enjoying the " real" connected with your storyline. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Time

Honestly between Tyler and Edward (especially Edward because she knows Malice is no good) Bella should take her own sage advice and BUILD A BRIDGE and get over it! JSYK

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Fuego

You are serving up "drama real-ness" to quote RuPaul. Jeebus Bella has a smorgasbord of shit coming from all directions poor girl. But please also change her bc before her and Edward get to lemon land because the tears...are a plenty. I'm enjoying what you're doing. BTW JS *winks& smirks*

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Kiss of the Spider Woman

I agree with your a/n about the last season with the kids. Pervy indeed! I miss the old days with Bold Mia and Loud Mary and Wade's killer openers.

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Final Four

So are Alice and Renee assuming Bella and Edward a having sex and Alice switched out her pills? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Nightmare Come to Life

Wow you really gave Bella the angst to grow on but nothing and I mean nothing I've read of yours compares the poor, sweet, amazing Edward's pain and angst in Buying Love. Shit that still gives me the shivers.  I don't know if the villans ever quite get what they deserve. Sad chappy! I am so enjoying this on my snowy day. Thanks!!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 24: The Rocky Road

As dancers Rose and Jake being mad at Edward was lame. Bella has always been emotional and its deserved this time and expected when rehabbing like this. Everybody is raw. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 27: So You Think You Can Dance: An Epilogue

Very very good! Thank you. 

Tie the Knot by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 372]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Banner made by heartfortwilight

 

 

 


Statistics say arranged marriages have a better chance at lasting. Is that still true if the couple is chosen by a group of experts and married on TV with at least one partner in it for the wrong reasons?

 


A lost bet, the promise of money and a stranger for a bride. Will confirmed bachelor Edward Masen find a match made in heaven or hell?

 


~Inspired by the show Married at First Sight~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117195 Read Count: 55452
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Debts of Honor

Really Bella no kiss that seems ridiculous when you have friends and family there and you agreed to make this work. A peck wouldn't have killed you and now you've set the tone sweetie. And Edward its beyond immature and skanky to sleep with your FB 2 days before even if you view this as a fake marriage. Also girls are possessive even FBs. Then you invite her friend or not to your wedding. She probably still smells like you (I kid). Either way that's gross dear and not cool. JS 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Wedding Nights and Other Disasters

Is Bella being steadfast though? I mean okay he came off cocky but she came off pretentious. And why not at least talk a bit to get to know each other. It was awkward but that was the point so...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

No doubt Edwards intentions are not noble here but Bella is coming off all Mom to his childish cocky. They both need a wake up call. I'm sure you've got goodies planned ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Bipolar

I don't think Bella should roll over easily especially since we know Edwards motives but sometimes it doesn't feel like she trying to push through his cocky to see him clearly either. This isn't a date they got MARRIED so the same dating rules don't apply. The Bella before the wedding felt more open then the post wedding Bella. Ah growing pains ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The Honeymoon Is Over

Oye these two kids! Edward must grow up. I see this more and a growth journey for him. He's 28 it's time. Bella was right to be pissed this time with the trash in the living room and going through her things. Tsk tsk. I do hope they find a medium soon if nothing else...friendship?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

Between her shrill and his immaturity it's hard to like them or wish hem HEA but I have faith so I press on. ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

Some happy progress indeed!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Changing My Course

Yeah so Emmett the voice of reason says tell Bella he's right because when someone else does she will rightfully be pissed and no doubt run. But we love our E&B drama so bring it on. Good chapter though. ;-)

Summary:

LMDC

 

They met at Emerson University, fell in love and began their journey. Four years after the release of their first single, Edward and Bella Cullen are still going strong and happy with their lives. Breaking Midnight, the band that had brought them together is on top of the music charts, winning numerous accolades and awards.

Nothing can stop them.

Or so it would seem …

Ghosts from their past rear their ugly heads and will it be too much for this couple? Will their fairy tale happily ever after crumble? Only time will tell, but one thing is steadfast...

Sequel to La Cantante

Banner by Clo Rodeffer

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 208407 Read Count: 33672
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2016 Updated: 30 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Well done my darling girl. Well done indeed!! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Nugget

Give them a boy first and then two girls. :-) 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Questions Asked and Answered

Boo hoo and cry me a river Max and James you know who also had it  tough? Alice was born addicted to coke and is bi-polar, Bella had an abusive boyfriend who later stalked her, kidnapped her twice and tried to rape her, Rosalie was brutally raped by her ex and 4 other guys stealing her innocence, Edward lost his mom at 9 and was ignored and abandoned by his father and was found malnourished by his aunt now mom. My point is they didn't feel the need to make people pay. That's the difference between people who want a better life and  sociopaths . Nuff said! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Fame Whore

This is the second time Bella being pregnant by her older brother was mentioned as a rumor.  Eww and oh NO! You don't even hear the shit in real scandal. I like Sexy Rob making an entrance. I don't often say poor Rosalie but...poor Rosalie. Emmett is a bit of a skank.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: And the Grammy Goes to ...

Not surprised Emmett is a fame whore since he contributed the least to the band. Rose should leave him after her assault in college she does need peace. This jasper and Alice are meant to be apart. It's funny when they are with new non canon people they tend to fade into the woodwork. Bella and Edward more tats, hotter sex and still with the sex in public. James watching wasn't enough back in college. exhibitionism  and fame do not mix love birds. Glad they are going strong. Excited to read. Oh and when I heard Adele's sons names I thought of the old dudes on the balcony in muppets. Hehe

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 3: One Step Forward ...

Trust is hard to win back Rosalie already suffered from someone destroying her trust. Not having baby mama drama doesn't make it better. And if you need a babysitter it definitely won't work. I bet it's the end of them. Sad! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 4: ... Two Steps Back

How her mind didn't go straight to james is beyond me. Jake is dead so...what a loser get a life and deal with the consequences of YOUR actions. Creeper!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Canada, Eh?

Edward seems to play down his relationship with Carlisle and Esme in this chapter. He seemed so much closer to them to me anyway in the first story.  This life isn't for Emmett if he's an addict he needs a safe environment. Shame., prostitutes? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Regret, Remorse and ...

The music foundation for Elizabeth is sweet. They also have the Ovarian cancer foundation too? James was in Edwards parents backyard? How do they not know, I could be wrong but his note to Bella screamed creeper James. Maybe it's because he really didn't get to let his freak flag fly last time. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Rock and Roll ... of Fame

What's up with Maex's clenching jaw? What's his issue with Edward?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Escalating Tension

Okay I'm a little confused. Is this Rolling Stone Angela the same Angela from chapter 10 at Edwards birthday party that was heavily pregnant with her second set of twins? Or a different Angela and Ben ? Also, if we all just sexed our fears and sadness away like Edward and  Bella we'd be a lot happier I think. ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Interview with a Pair of Rock Stars

Yeah senior I know Edward is moving forward but I'm not sure I am. I hope Edward doesn't say I love you just because senior does. Hehe hat sounds weird. I mean when Edward told Bella his past in the first story he said senior never showed him love or affection and that he was closest to Elizabeth. So his selfish cruel behavior when she died seemed to fit. I guess I'm still cynical. *shrugs and rolls eyes* ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 15: The Friendly Confines, Graceland and Hotlanta

Now senior is dad? Oh well. So Bella is stressed herself to sickness? Yes of course Bella is stressed but I think Edward's super sperm got in there. All that bunny sexing will do it depo or not. Also bomb treats are huge James and Vic are pulling the A game. Someone has to be working on the inside. Rosalie and Emmett should call it quits. Everyone else's significant other tours with them making it work and trusting again won't happen with this distance. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Mother Dearest ... Brother Mine

Renee is cray but she usually is, just varying degrees. Rosalie handled that kind of shitty. If your seeing someone it's over don't show up and lead the dummy on. You never get trust back and you just end up shutting down or punishing the other person. Both are wrong regardless. Sad!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Invasion of Privacy

Why is it that no one is feeling Edwards violation just Bella's? Excuse you Nia it happened to him too. Bella's classic walking away from her husband is childish and wrong it WAS her idea. On that note how stupid are these rock star adults having sex in public while you have a stalker with means and dive to destroy you and that doesn't include the paps. It didn't work out well for you in Cantante when James watched you on the piano so why would it work here. Stupid really!!'

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Happy Anniversary?

I don't know I think she's pregnant. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 20: All Quiet on the Stalker Front

Kellen loves everyone like a brother or sister. Hehe! I still think Bella is pregnant. I know I know blood test said no. Glad her and Nia made up it was silly. I think James has inside help and I believe it's Max from Pandora. He is attitude central since the beginning for no reason. I honestly don't know why people want fame it makes you so exposed. Good chappy though. :-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 21: America's Heartland

Seriously james is a sicko! I hope he's lying about Rosalie. No one deserves that. Well maybe Renee. *shakes head*

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Darkness Shatters

I get Barbie's coldness but Rosalie is friends with everyone and for her to not call to see everyone was okay. They didn't cheat on her or betray her they sided with her actually. It just goes to prove my point canon or not Rosalie will be Rosalie. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Moving Forward

Bella better be pregnant because she makes Edward work overtime. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 24: What Happens in Vegas ...

I smell stalker escalation. I mean after all this time they leave without security. I mean come on guys. Also Emmett yelling? Get you giant ass in gear and go with them sheesh! And that lemon was so very hot! I squeaked out when he went from point B to point A bareback. Condoms are your friend in this instance. JS but still very hot. *blushes*

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 25: ... Doesn't Necessarily STAY in Vegas

Yay on two counts James 's death and creation of their nugget. Perfect!

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

chimera

 

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 332956
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So what lizzy said about Edward is reflected in his not trusting Bella with the baby at the beginning? So Bella has never had a break its a wonder she is so lovely. I mean Jake was a bastard to her. Alice an Angela are said girls and vendictive too. Hang on Bella, hang on. Hey what's Renee's deal? Is she abused too?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What the ever loving...was Bella given the date rape drug. Was she raped? This chapter was too much. Alice, Angela, Uley, Benjermin. It seems like James is cool but shit what was all the Edward is a whore with men and women talk? What was this party? You are really making this poor girl go through it. I like Tanya to cool gay running mate. Nice switch all the canon goods are bad and all the canon bads are good. Jasper is a pussy! JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Bella one thing she isn't in your stories is a lying bitch so that means this Edward begins as a douche. You ladies are gonna make us work for this HEA right? :-) That was a sad beginning. Carry on...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This Bella is breaking me like Bella in Meeting Her Needs. It's nice not to hate Lauren and Jessica right off the bat but Charlie is a freak in this fic right? Edward? Is he a player? Why do I have a feeling Bella is gonna be the recipient of all the angst. It won't stop me from soaking it all in though. *winks*

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So Edward isn't a player but Emmett's whole take care of my bro speech was interesting...Alice will probably be controling and manipulative as per use but hopefully not bitchy about it. I'm on high alert for Bella haha

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

If  Benjamin is Angela's Ben then he gave me the creeps especially about the one drink comment. Charlie is a dick. Nuff said! This Bella needs a true and honest friend. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Who the heck is watching Bella? Creepy. Angela is a little off too.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Okay it's hard to have an opinion on Alice since we've had two sentences from her but the idea is she is controling Alice right? That's never good! Jessica and Lauren are being good friends and the advice Jessica gave Bella was really good. I just have this feeling a shit storm is coming for Bella I mean, creepy Benjermin, creepy and cray parentals, jealous Angela and dominate sadistic professor Uley. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

And there's Alice ladies and gentlemen. And Angela is a hot mess! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Okay Charlie string him up!! And Bella Jesus this poor girl. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

So Edward and his Pops are the only sensible Cullen's? What the hell is up wit catlisle and Esme's? Is there future hope for Emmett? Edward is pissing me off talk to fuckong Bella you know Alice is a  liar and has it out for Bella why trust her at all. What is Uley's deal we KNOW Bella would never sleep win him shes afraid of him. Cleatly Charlie told him about the birthmark. Is Lauren still screwing him that's why he was there. Jesus!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Definitive answer? She was raped and please don't describe it. What is is girl not going to go through? Is she going to get a break soon? Thank god for Jess and Lauren do don't ever say that. After the first chapter and the conception timing screw up I hope it's Edwards baby really. This is intense for sweet Bella. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Definitive answer? She was raped and please don't describe it. What is is girl not going to go through? Is she going to get a break soon? Thank god for Jess and Lauren do don't ever say that. After the first chapter and the conception timing screw up I hope it's Edwards baby really. This is intense for sweet Bella. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Outside of Pops, Lauren, Jessica and Tanya I hate them all (well done on the angst *winks*) Edward is an asshole and as of this chapter he dosent deserve an HEA with Bella. There I ve said the unthinkable in my book. 

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Okay so when this turns around for sweet Bella and I have faith ladies that it will; I want Edward to beg for forgiveness so hard my head spins. He is an asshole in this chapter but I am so loving Jess and Lauren they are honest and true friends. I have to say this angst is making me want to punch something. ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Riddle me this...when Edward stalked Bella for 6 weeks did he see her dating, whoring, drinking? Because she only went  to school, work then the dorms. Also, miscommunication? Sure shit tons of it but also Edward is a right bastard. The way things are going I see how grandma Lizzy's prediction is correct. He's not ready for Bella or that baby. The prologue makes perfect sense now. Sad but true.

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Way to go Bella! Take charge babes. Edward is still a clueless spineless idiot. I love my Edwards but this OCC Edward is giving my patience a work out. Ahh the angst of it all. I can't wait for the prologue to catch up when Bella is rid of these mean people and maybe has a chance at a real life. When is she going to realize she was raped? That's gonna wreck me. Carry on lovelies. Mooches!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That was a sad chappy. I feel for them all. Where are Lauren and Jessica??

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I almost feel like this was the exhale chapter. Thank you for giving her that family of support. She's right her and Edward never stood a chance. Are you going to bring Emmett back? I hope he's nicer than that lot. Again miscommunication? You betcha but Edward was a grown man in his twenties listening to lies and seeing the hate first hand and Bella a teenager under her parents care not the same right?  You all wrecked me in this chapter I felt it all. Phew...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Going 15 months without your son is punishment but Bella is a different story. Being raped and Edward hurting her will make it difficult for him anyway. What a mess. See Benjermin was a creep! That's for keeping Emmett cool. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

And deep cleansing breath....phew!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

No don't let him hug her it's too soon but  contrition looks so much better on Edward than asshole thank the lord! So glad Bella's family is letting them sort through this but support her first. I don't trust Carlisle and Esme not to put their little girl the spawn first but I don't think they are bad people. Jesus was Angela the  videographer during the rapes? I hope not. So much nuance that it warrants a second read at a later date. This was a really good chapter.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 May 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

It's nice to be proud of Edward for a change.  His understanding of his faults and wrongs to Bella is clear. He was smart to go to therapy. Not pushing her and acknowledging her pace is what I wanted. Well done ladies!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 May 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am feeling good about Edwards road to forgiveness with Bella. Well done chicas!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 May 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Damn!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 May 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow these chapters are jammed packed with intense drama. We are working for that HEA ladies ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 May 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow Angela and Ben are cray! This chapter was full of answers and I hope in prison they experience much  reciprocity. I am glad you didn't get to deep with the trial. I've gone through some tissue in this story ;-) I am also glad I didn't read it before bed like I planned. Thank you!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 May 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

First Edward  & Garrett mentioned in the trial chapter that they wanted to know why Bella's rape was the most vicious? But they didn't take the stand. Are we going to know that motivation? Seeing Jasper like this is sad really. Nice twist. Carlisle and his little girl issues is...I don't know really. Alice is vile in this story. 25 years is a cake walk. Stories that have abuse and rape in them are never my go to stories. I don't do well with them but you have been good at emoting just enough of everything to make me happy, angry, sad, sick, a bloody mess and most importantly moving to the next chapter. Carry on lovelies.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 May 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Of course victims want answers like why me. The only problem is when dealing with sadistic monsters the answer often isn't enough. Book? Tacky and yes some place would publish it and sickos would read it in detail. Sue? I would organize a class action civil suit absolutely. Alice's therapist should bunk with her. Bella pregnancy mini breakdown had me remembering how much I hated Edward at the beginning. Redemption is good! Hard earned HEA rules! So that little family of 4 has some gene pool. It's like Chinatown.  I had to create an org chart. Haha well done. ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 May 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

So Angela's letter just, well...no words for the cray. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 May 2017 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I think a female prison is to nice for Angela. The small minded people of forks will likely be small minded and mean. Closure is important. Seeing how this all came together I think the Cullen's were to surrounded by crazy and so was Bella that it's a small miracle they survived it. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 May 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Well I can only say thank you! It was so difficult reading through Bella's struggle and all the horrible things in the beginning but being a fan of your stories I had faith even while yelling at my iPad in early Edward bashing chapters *blushes*.  Tanks for having him get his shit together. This story spoke to me and moved me and I thank you. Finishing the Epi just now was great because it felt like real closure to the lives affected. I will always have you on alert and look forward to what's next. Carry on lovelies. ;-D

 

Summary:

OOTD

 

Edward Cullen is a fallen angel, living among humans. He’s dark, snarky, tattooed and a total badass. However, he still has his wings and angelic powers because the ‘powers that be’ believe that he is capable of redemption, despite being cast out of heaven. His exile was due to the fact that he was interacting with an unknown evil that tempted him over sixty years ago. Because of his mistake, he’s resigned to live out his immortal existence as a bitter angel, caught in limbo.

 

Isabella Swan, a human, is in the wrong place at the wrong time. In her innocence, she manages to worm her way into his heart, bringing him back into the light and out of the darkness.

Banner by Clo Rodeffer

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Gelesen, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108687 Read Count: 68029
[Report This] Published: 03 Dec 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I loves me some sweet fatherly Carlisle.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Sorry about Jasper but he was ripe for evil and the name Colton is hot for a cowboy. Yehaw Alice! Alice won’t have to wait too long. Rose evil, no surprise there or Emmett being along for the ride ;-) Also, that was a nice first date flying and all. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Oh sweet girl I know the devil is afoot and world is in peril...again but you need a good therapist love. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Esme the dominion precognitive nice! I’m with Edward why were they calling him old. I mean he is but surely he doesn’t look it.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

I understand writers block but you always take on so much and you always get there too. Bella is going to make one kick ass angel for surviving this life of hers. I’m sure we’ll get a big battle towards the end will Gabriel be there? He’s my fav arch angel ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

So I can see the story weaving even though you say you’re blocked. Edward was a rising star angel then Lucifer used him, tricked him to kick off one of the worst times in our history. Bella born to a drug addicted whore and fatherless endures atrocities no one should as a child or as a woman but she still loves and gives to children. They are the perfect match to bring about a time of peace  through their charges. Edward with the bruised and broken and Bella with children. No wonder Lucifer wants to destroy them both...fear. Also, I just know Bella’s father is important otherwise someone would have mentioned him...right?blah blah blah I leave hype storytelling to you ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

So Riley is either a minion or Lucifer right? If Bella’s important Like Alice says why wouldnt  he try to break her. I hate a broken Bella everyone wants to break her in fanfic but I jadore you and your fab stories. JS

So carry on I shall. Hopefully we won’t have to hear descriptions of her horrific experiences *bows head and prays*

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Okay Bella is important so says Alice. Edward a fallen angel is working hard to protect his mate against what we now know is Lucifer and he’s powerful. Riddle me this... where are the other angels. Him even? Technically Edward is a fallen and she, Bella that is, is the best of the good. This poor sweet long freaking suffering girl should have a kick ass guardian angel. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Thank goodness and jasper hon if He can forgive as god surely you can as a angel dear. So was edward from Ancient Greece? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Non consensual? Raped! Thanks for the lack of detail because that was fucked with a capital UCK!  So Renee was a crack whore? Hmm...but Charlie where the heck is he because his where abouts and lineage are key to why she is so important. No? Yes? Also, Heidi gets to be a newborn. Lucky bitch! JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

He really dropped the ball on sweet Bella. I mean foster care REALLY sucks on an average day but her experience even in fiction is god awful (pun intended). They owe her big time. Eternal life with sexy black winged Edward would do. *winks* BTW excellent choice giving him black wings. *le sigh*

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Goodness give this poor girl a break. Please!!  haven’t felt this bad for a Bella or Edward since Buying Love and that Edward broke me. I took an angst, drama break for a good while after that. So finally someone says the dreaded S word=Satan and I want to know why we have bitter jasper but zero dominion or arch angels? I know, I know... patience my child ;-) Okay but only because I believe.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Yeah girl! Bad ass Angels! Hello papa Carlisle. And jazzy recycling is good for the environment love.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Yes!! Yes! Freaking YES! Charles you naughty dominion you. Knowing Renee slept with him the arch angels should have kept an eye on her and perhaps protected her against drugs and Bella against every-freaking-thing. Also, if Heidi was such a slacker for so long how did she even get new charges. So many questions.