Reviews by Miss G
La Cantante by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 625]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a freshman in college studying to be a music teacher. Edward is a pre-med student at the same school but secretly wants to be a musician. They both meet and sparks fly. However, Bella's past may make it difficult. ExB, AH EDITED and REPOSTED!

La Cantante

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 100 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 594750 Read Count: 327899
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

I get it! Why go into music without your education we know not everyone makes it past demos. Also record companies always screw you over. Plus they've had stalkers as high school and college students imagine them as rock stars. No and thank you! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Again cynical me but did that seem all to hmm, fun and collaborative and exciting? Way to keep your head about you Edward. We already know jazz and Emmett are not the Mensa club in this story so they need you. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Regular wedding for Esme, Carlisle and Charlie. Even thy imagined and dreamed the day. I understand though they have constant crazy drama that gets in the way. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Excuse me Bella your man stood up for you AGAIN to your childish and selfish mother she's pissed at him and you are too? What is wrong with these people? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

What happened with Victoria? That's not sorted right? Also is Sue going to address the elephant in the room. It seems odd that Charlie hasn't. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Yay someone else with drama.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Oh Alice selfish doesn't cover it but Jasper guys should never put their birth control in the hands of their partner if they don't want kids. Be responsible. Bailing on your best friends wedding, your friendship, the band, potential record deal and your school of choice not cool. At least give it time dude. It's early June. Things can and do change. JS also what the heck is going on with that Victoria mess?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Yay for Emmett and Rosalie. Poor Tyler. Alice, BP disorder is hard even with mesds because often people stop taking their meds because of how they make them feel. Tough road to follow. I don't think Alice and jasper should get back together for a few years. Let her get regulated on meds and give him time to sort himself out. In other words epilogue reunion? But he should come back to Emerson just get an apartment off campus. Girls lie all the time unfortunately. Don't let it alter everything in your life. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Into everyone's life a little drama must fall. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Sorry everyone making Edward feel like an ass for having a feeling of being left out of his band and making a face is bullshit. BTW Meghan and Nessie are a tad annoying and over kill. The band should make choices about lead singers. Not these chicks and copyright laws are shit protect the music Edward. Don't trust their motives or record companies they do this to groups all the time. I have Edwards side on this one and Bella's tears don't work on me. I mean all the guy does is give to her. Bella, Bella, Bella! Hehe

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Fame over education is a choice a lot make but not always the smart thing. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

I can see jasper living in a pool house being single and all but Rosalie comes from money and is engaged shouldn't she want her own home? I guess they're still all college kids. It's funny they are leaving their education behind to tour college campuses.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

The letters from Elizabeth to Edward on special days? Tears!! So senior is welcomed into the fold and Renee is ousted. M'kay. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Well now we know where James and Victoria are. Idiots like they had no part in their obsessions and actions.  Congrats even though I've read your other fabulous stories before your first. Keep writing I truly enjoy what you do. Thank you. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've read and loved so many of your stories I didn't know this was the first. I'm in. Are you going to kill off Charlie? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Green eyed freak? I think not you bossy crazy short round. She's gonna be one of those Alice's right? Oye!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Giving Alice that background and ADHD assures her annoyances will be allowed because...damn! Skank Tanya, oh Edward. I hope you always gloved up with your own condoms chicks like this plot to deceive. I love both songs profiled nice choice.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So Is james gearing up to be a creeper stalker like Jake. I hope not one is enough! I think Bella could use a break. I mean to roid-rage like that in front of her dad means he's gonna be trouble. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So James is definitely a creeper but I hope hearing about poor Rose's assault is the only one in the story. Bella gets that fanfic treatment an awful lot. 

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Jesus is Alice annoying in his chapter or what? Bella should tell her no or smack her soon I think. Clubs are always a hot bed for assholes. In real life and FanFiction ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So with the trust fund I don't understand Carlisle's argument and knowing his son is miserable. It's seems pretty selfish. Medical school is hard enough if you want it forget if you don't. Shame. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I just realized that his story is 100 chapters and we are only after Halloween before thanksgiving in the school year. Are you going to cover all the way to hea graduation, marriage and children like 10 years late?  I thought it would originally be more drably but you are indeed writing beast chappy' s. Just curious. ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So how did Jacob get her number? Steal Charlie's phone? It's either him or creeper TA James who would have access to get her number. Stalkers always freak me out. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

So that's how indeed Jake got her number from Charlie's phone. I thought Bella would draw that conclusion when she asked. Oh well...Why would Charlie want to be friends with billy if billy takes the side of his abusive son who stalking his daughter. Confuse me?!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I mean is this Jacob because he comes off more like a box of rocks or is this James? The email sounds like creeper James. Why must she attract the weirdos. Can't Alice ever have a creeper? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Sexy! A man with that kind of sexual dominance is hot! And you made me want chili. Haha!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Trigger warning for the rape dreams maybe? Why did the girls leave Bella asleep in the dorm with the door unlocked? Or did they? Obviously this other person is the one taking pictures right? Also it's so clear to see how much you love music in this chapter. I felt the love and knowledge. ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

So glad Bella didn't run but she went from badass to baby. Getting pissed about Tanya? Sure  be upset but you weren't in a relationship the day you met and pulling all your friends into your drama is well...Bella. Also Emmett knew this why is he pissed. Cray, anyway nice make up. Also Bella sweetie pot meet kettle your ex is a violent stalker who sent photos of you two around campus so outdoor sex...not wise babes. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Okay elephant in the room Seth the photography minor is an hour away and believes Jake is a saint and Bella is a whore? Um discuss? Does Charlie know any of these new developments? So get the sex haze but come on prople!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Okay enough kids are you talking to Charlie? Does he know what's going on? If so why the hell would you go home for Christmas when the stalker who gives you sick violent dreams is a few miles away. These asshole never care about restraining orders. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

At least Larry was on to creeptastic james and his weird behavior. Okay Jake isn't in Hawaii is he? Toronto means a break from the Mexican jumping bean. Score!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Okay I'm confused did you change some things? First where did the panic attacks come from? All this stuff happening and not one until now. Also when did she get on Ativan? How did Emmett know when he just found out about Jake a few chapters back. Only Charlie knew. Now she tired to hurt herself and was diagnosed with depression? Maybe you changed chapters around. Anyway...? Also kids  (Edward & Bella)when you don't know where your cray, cray stalker is stop having public sex. JS ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I can't believe this is only chapter 35. This was a nice chapter I love this Esme and it's nice to see Carlisle this way. Nice background on Elisabeth and Edward. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So let's back track all the way back to chapter one where Charlie didn't look so good and was really tired and pale and when Bella went to ask about it she got side tracked. Now cut to chapter 37 (2 1/2 months into the school year) and Carlisle is doing a clinical trial for testicular and prostate cancer. Hmmm...Is this a coincidence? Curious minds. I like the shorter chapters I think if I read it WIP I would have loved them long but reading it complete makes me anxious for certain drama resolutions and wondering how much will be covered since we have yet to finish a semester yet. Also I hope Charlie doesn't end up with a Sue. That will be all kinds of  awkward with Seth and Leah and their Jake obsession. ;-D Again curious. Carrying on...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

So I was wrong about the type but he does have cancer. So sad hope he stays okay. I realize that news over shadows the dating Sue for a year thing. But they started school 4 months ago and in that time both of Sue's kids have been involved with Bella's stalking by Jake. Is that drama going to come up? Charlie is aware right so how does hat work? As I said before how awkward and not cool. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

So all the three men in her life one licensed to carry let Bella go out in FORKS alone after dark? With her cray cray stalker on the run.  Confuse me!!!!???

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I send you much love and mucho respect but that chapter riled me up. I thought Jake descended from wolves what's up with the nine lives? WTFWT?!  I can only guess with his giant ass cliff diving at night means he'll be back to further torture Bella and Edward. Those cops, seriously were they going to do their job? If I was Bella I would NEVER set foot back in forks. Charlie would have to visit me wherever. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Charlie should go back to the force he's the chief not P.I. Charlie. Chief sounds better.  Jacob isn't dead because the cliffhanger (no pun intended) left things too open. Besides I really want him dead but drama/angst says he's not done. *le sigh* The cds of Edward with his mom was a great gift! I do think the angst could be spread around because Bella is getting her share and so is Edward. Jasper seems to be just chilling and we know he has the calm to handle a storm. Share the love. Final thought clearly they should stop having public sex because one of Bella's creeptastic stalkers is always watching. Lesson learned??;-) JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Just wondering who is funding Jacob's stalking efforts. He's younger than Bella if I recall sonata limits successful career. I know he used both of Sue's kids but...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Everyone on that Rez is crazy. I don't understand this loyalty. And Bella not pressing charges? When she described it at beginning of the story she said Jacob hit her. When he actually tried to rape her. Why didn't Charlie insist this is crazy. Cray! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285489
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - just dessert

Yuck he should have washed his hands first. Good chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334486
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

You women wreck me in the most delightful and delicious ways with this story. It is an all time favorite that I can't help but read again and again. Thank you! Love. Love. Love. If you ever think 'hey let's pull this story' please don't or at least give your loyal readers a pdf option. You rock! Off to my other all time favorite This Thing of Ours. ;-D X

Summary: Past Featured Story

Detectives Edward, Emmett and Jasper are on the case of a serial killer roaming the U-Dub campus. With their sisters on campus, can they keep them safe and do their jobs effectively? What happens when feelings begin to change for Edward and Jasper? Will they be too late to save the girls they love? And who is that Killer in the Shadows? AH, canon couples.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, G8or Favor8s Read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26659 Read Count: 45594
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2013 Updated: 21 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Thank you Emoward because I didn’t understand her drama at all! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Okay its either Marcus from PA police their old boss or Sam Uley Edwards old partner from the same. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Emoward is exhausting! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

If creepy Sam knew Bella and Edward slept together the night before he took her and knew James was about to get some and Jake just talked to her how is Tyler still alive when he took her virginity and hurt her?

A Healing Touch by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Roughly six months after Bella and Edward meet at Cook County Hospital, their relationship is moving along and life couldn’t be better. However, one frightened child, two parents, one doctor and one nurse are presented with an illness that baffles them all. What will happen and will our favorite doctor and nurse be able to figure out the medical mystery before it’s too late?

Written for Fandom4LLS

Outtake for A Prescription for Love 

A Healing Touch


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9012 Read Count: 3444
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2013 Updated: 04 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay the squishy sex twins are back and with a lovely outtake too. ;-)

Day to Day by Runs with Vampires Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

When Edward's older brother Emmett decides it time for Edward to come out of his OCD shell, Edward will find himself doing something he never imagined he would. Falling in love. A story about truly finding yourself and living your life for you.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137033 Read Count: 38095
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2013 Updated: 28 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

God I love this story and I love, love these two. Thank you!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I love this Edward and Bella and I love reading this story. I've read it t often. ;-)

Summary:

When Edward fell for Bella he knew his life would change forever, watch as he navigates this life with just love and a plan. Love, laughs, a crazy cat and some unexpected twists, he's ready to live his life, are you ready to read it? Day to Day Sequel *Must read DTD first* R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189986 Read Count: 29935
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2013 Updated: 29 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Never changes I still love this series every time I come back to it. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

My god that fucking Angela is an annoying, nosy, bully. I hope it's just the hormones. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

The four of them were great in this chapter. ;-D

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142597
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I'm hooked reel me in...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is the unacknowledged grandson of Harry Houdini from whom he’s inherited strong psychic abilities. Together with his closest friends: a Hoodoo man, two Witches from the Louisiana Swamps and an honest to God Guardian Angel, they work to solve crimes that ordinary law enforcement is unable to solve.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44432 Read Count: 31370
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 21 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Hello LA Times I have a successful arrest record as one of two ranking female detectives on the force and I have just been put on leave because I haven't solved a case in a week that was assigned to me as well as others involved. Hmm...



Author's Response:

You really are an LA police detective?  Oh my.  Well, just remember, please - this is a fictional tale.  Even though my first husband was a small town cop and a CHP later.  I know only what I've seen on tv  LOL.  You're a woman and as you know women have to work twice as hard for half the pay at any job.  I'm 73 years old now and finally retired, but I've worked almost all of my life.  Everyone goes through "dry spells" in their lives.  But it's hard to believe they'd put you on leave for have a week of dry spells.

Looking forward to your comments on coming chapters.

Thank you!  From the bottom of my heart.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Jeeze this poor Bella. She gets gang raped at a high school football game that girls actually initiate, her best and only friend gets raped and murdered in college and her she cheats with her married partner who she truly loves and he gets killed on the job and she can't publicly grieve him at work. Do you not like Bella? Wow! How are she and Edward ever going to get together with all their shit?



Author's Response:

Yes I like Bella.  BUT I don't keep to the canon all the time.  This is not a story where they fall into bed together upon first meeting.  It's a slow burn.  There is an HEA though.  :)  Dispare not. Thank you for reading.  This is a supernatural mystery with a little love thrown in - eventually.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I hope to be hearing more from you soon.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wait so Riley used Bella and Sara cheated on Edward with Jacob. We do tend to put the dead on high. I've done it myself. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

PUTP

Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101885
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Author's Note

I am so sorry for your loss and your pain I wish it was something none of us had to endure or experience. Please accept my thoughts and prayers for healing and balance in your life and those of your family. We will miss your writing but you being in a place of peace is more important. Be well...hope to read you soon you are too good at this ;-)

The Red Coats by ericastwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She loves the holidays. He loathes them. As new neighbors, they have to learn to tolerate each other. The problem for Edward is that she’s irresistible in red. Can she bring the Grinch around in time to save him from a lonely New Year?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43311 Read Count: 14170
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2014 Updated: 14 May 2014
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Future Take

To me this story is like warm fires, hot chocolate, peppermint bark, trees with warm lights, a glass of red and something delicious roasting in the oven. It’s the sweetest Christmas treat and I love,love it was still here for me to enjoy again. Thank you! Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Summary:

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Being a single mother is hard, but dating as one is much harder. I'm just so grateful that mom didn't give up. Based on the Brad Paisley song of the same title.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme
Genre: Family, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7436 Read Count: 1539
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2014 Updated: 14 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 1: He Didn't Have To Be

Oh my goodness a five year old Edward? So adorable. I loved this little nod to love and parenting. Thank you!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 1: He Didn't Have To Be

Oh my goodness a five year old Edward? So adorable. I loved this little nod to love and parenting. Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5222 Read Count: 100405
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2014 Updated: 15 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)

When I bookmarked this story to read a while ago it was a full story not out takes. Did you pull it? I'm confused. Will you repost?

Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478645
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

God I forgot how much I love the nick names. Enjoying this so much on my rainy Sunday afternoon. Cheers! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I love you girls keep up the amazing work. I say there is nothing you can't do! Thank you thank you! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Thank you ladies I always enjoy revisiting this story. ;-) 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201888
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love

So glad they found their way it took so long to get here. They are cute together.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

Congrats I know how hard it is to finish a story and to hear all of our thoughts. Thank you for sharing your story. Be well.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter- 43: Mine, Bitch!

James lust for Edward was a good switch in his usual obsessions.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter- 41: Move Into My Heart

Okay what is Charlie's damage?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter-36: My Vampire Girl

Thud! Yeah they got off too easy. Bella and Edward were harder on each other at the bar when they first met. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter-34: Thanks For Fucking With My Life

LONG OVER DUE! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter-33: Halloween Horror Stories

Good progress with trust kids. Now we know that the harpy and the dog will show up later right?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter-31: Who the Fuck is Ian?

Usually in fandom Edward is the mercurial one but throughout this whole story Bella is the mercurial one. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter-30: What? How? WOW!

It's funny the family aspect of this chapter. Well confusing I guess. Renee is provocative and modern enough to ask if Bella had it rough or slow in bed with Edward in front of her father but antiquated/patriarchal enough to marry her off with a stranger to Bella anyway. Why did they go though all of that with the Cullen's visit and then not stay together as husband and wife. Why is Charlie acting like they shouldn't show affection. It was a little confusing. Edward's gift was so freaking sweet but so is he. I'm glad they are falling for each other.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter-29: A Little Piece of Me

Seriously, Charlie protective and possessive dad mode? For kissing your daughter his wife. Who you married off like Forks is in the Victorian era. Yeah the kids need to blast the parents big time. Put Bella's bitchy snark to good use. It would satisfy the parch throat of the slow burn.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter-28: The Geek and His Nerd

This is a modern story right? What did Alice mean about ancient times? How old could the Cullen's or Swan's be 45-55? And the birthday rules don't apply to these two they don't even know each other how can Edward magically buy Bella the perfect gift without asking someone like Rose or Jasper. I am happy the finally have found a rhythm . I hope they fall in love before the last chapter.

But most importantly I'm waiting for the blow up they layout on their parents it's long over due. Just saying. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Whom Exactly Are You Deceiving?

Yeah I wish she unleashed her bitch on Esme. Well deserved I say. But if you're  starting to have the feels have them. It's 20+ chapters deep. Let's not wait until the epi to figure it the fuck out kids. That would be sad.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Decepticons Prepare for Battle

Two steps forward and...

why is where they sleep any of the Cullen's business?  They didn't care about the kids emotional well being with this plan. And and yes they did make a mistake they should know what these kids have been through and it's not remotely perfect. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Tentative Friendships

23 chapters and we have friendship lift off, thank fuck! ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Eruption of Bella-vius

 Oh these two can work a nerve. All this assumption, guessing, conjecture and no facts. When has the guy had a chance to have an affair Bella? You are on the same team and live together.  I hope they have a real talk soon it's long overdue. The kissing is a waste without knowing what's what. Question do they even wear wedding rings? Seems odd no one has noticed.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Time for Drunken Dancing!

*sigh*

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter-21: Back to Square One

I don't care if we redeem Alice. Sorry. She's not the main concern because Bella and Edward are drowning in this mess their parents created. Bella and Edward are both shy and apparently not very communicative outside their college educated brains. They save all the best talking for themselves. And they are supported by knuckleheads. How hard would it have been for Alice to tell Bella what sweet and sad thing Edward said the night before? All the family and friends do is meddle, push, threaten, act childish and plot. Be helpful, sit them on the sofa and make them a Hendricks and tonic and make them talk damnit!  Mean really Emmett you are the 'older brother' you show up to dinner every night watch the childish display and even participate in it? Come on dude! Maybe they should annul this marriage. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Truce?

These two should stop having these in-depth internal conversations and talk to each other instead.  Because snarky internal Bella wants Edward to do all the work why can't she ask him out? The shy leading the shy.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Nosey Pantoprazole Lover

Are you going to explain the Papa Mase thing Emmett mentioned? And these two are exhausting. 🤣hehe I rarely agree with Emmett because he's usually immature in fanfic but he's right they need to go at it hard over the sofa or in the supply closet because it will occupy there mouths and give them a good dose of happy with some natural dopamine release. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Strike Two

Oh my god take it down a thousand Bella. I'm routing for Edward to put something big in her mouth to shut her up. There I said it! Sorry but shouldn't she try to be nice. It's like all she wants to do is be mad. And why does she keep asking if he has women? Bella you did this because you trusted your dad so trust. They are a mess. I'm running my hand through my hair like Edward waiting for them to click. Please click kids and stop being assholes. Carrying on...😉

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Grocery Shopping and Cereal Boxes

Jesus these two. They are both so defensive. And that grocery shopping trip was like watching two fourteen year olds or as if they split a blunt in the car. 🤣 Well work is going to be awkward right?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter-15: Who The Hell Doesn’t Like Coffee?

Men. Buying hot water. Haha He doesn't have a kettle that's not very English. I agree with Bella they should have met prior to the wedding at least they could have avoided the first meeting mess. And they still haven't discussed work. Odd.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Step Into My Life

Okay Bella girl time for a chat, you weren't strapped with a bomb when you married Edward so you had pleanty of opportunity to back out but you didn't. So what I'm saying is forgive the first meeting and stop being bitchy. The guy is trying here. If you don't you make it hard to cheer you on. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter-13: Seriously… who are you?

Seriously what do Charlie and Billy do on those fishing trips that makes him have Billy around at inappropriate times. This was not the event to invite him to. At least when the kids look back they would have had a lovely wedding. Also given the extent how long had Renee and Esme been planning this because it wasn't thrown together. Those meddling mommies.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter-12: Married to… who, now?

Well he may have been rude at the bar and he was but Bella was bat shit crazy here. She had ample opportunity to say no to this wedding up until I do so...you're in it so be in it. Wipe the slate clean.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Haunted

The subconscious is amazing right?! Okay buckle up kiddies it's about to get real. I always find little Bella and Edwards so cute.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Strike One

Well that sucked. So they are physically attracted to each other but hate each other. Bummer separate bedrooms for sure now.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Preparations for Doomsday!

Sorry but their parents are setting them up to look like idiots right? I mean she is going to be partnering with her husband per her boss and she doesn't know it. Why not tell them they work at the same hospital? Why the secrecy? And if what Esme said to Bella is true how has she never met them since they moved to England? I'm overthinking I know sorry but I feel bad for the kids.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Emergency Best Friend News Alert

So will he and Emmett meet Bella and Rosalie when the go to Joe's on Wednesday. Also I love that they both hate blondes. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition

This is so odd how everyone is okay with this. And Bella girl it seems you are getting romance regency style anyway. Arranged marriages were the rage after all. So Edward is obviously the doctor Jasper was ranting about right? And Rosalie is gonna flip I'm sure. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Meet the In-Laws

Yay the Cullen's are awesome and not weird even though this arrangement is odd. So how come Bella didn't know they were her parents best friends? So do I understand correctly, Jasper dumb in this or is this just Bella's blonde theory? Hilarious! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Resigned Acceptance

Why are his parents so desperate?  I hope for their HEA but they are both young and both parents are showing an incredible lack of faith in their kids. It's kind of sad. Edward and Bella both have just taken a hit to confidence.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Temper Tantrums

Poor Bella. Charlie and Renee are awful. She's only 23. Why are they so desperate? 

Buried by ericastwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 75]
Summary: Past Featured Story

buried

His reality was made of nightmares. Hers were plagued by them. Can she conquer her fears in time? Can he protect her?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72544 Read Count: 27017
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2014 Updated: 02 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

FFS this is THE BEST shit I have read in ages. Bloody brilliant! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Officially one of my ALL time favorites. Thank you!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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She's haunted daily, but learns to deal with her gift, helping those in need. He hides behind his opinions, seeking closure, barely living. When their worlds collide, can they help each other? A story of loss, love, and betryal with a supernatual twist.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43076 Read Count: 10308
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2014 Updated: 04 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: The Denver Paranormal Society

Fucking riveting! Sorry to curse but that was so good! I enjoyed the story so. Dry much. Do. Not. Kill. Edward!!!! Please.