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IMMERSION by katmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

...Immersion... 

 

Suppose that vampires "imprint" based on smell and the connection is immediate and irresistible. What will happen when vampire Bella Swan meets her mate at Forks High? 

 

 

Immersion: involvement in something that occupies all the time and energy available. AU...Canon Couples

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46809 Read Count: 6132
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Browsed your stories after reading Guarding Edward (a fav of mine) and I agree it's nice to read stories where they can just BE. Thank you for that gem of wisdom. ;-)

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3962]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 969091
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

the Cullen's sure eat a lot of lamb. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I call bullshit! If Rosalie isn't getting charged after James died from a gsw then Bella is fine and frankly Bella should be laughing her ass off at the utter absurdity of this mess. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

I think for the first time Edward finally gave Bella a punishment that met her offenses. It was all within the boundaries of "their" limits. But what bothered me more was the happy, happy Forks trip. All the sweet pea and daddy stuff hit a nerve I guess . 4 months seems a little soon for all he happy sparks. That town and that house represent so much pain and loss for Bella and paint and new rooms don't change the neglect and abuse that happened there. Plus while she was struggling to eat and be cared for while Charlie drank the grocery money away his mom left him money he managed to invest well while being the town drunk. Also he had time to be a father figure to Seth while ignoring his blood. It left a a sad bad taste in my mouth and that closure bow isn't fully tied fic or not. But I will say you make us feel so much each chapter. Thank you so much!! 😉

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

God I love this freaking story so much! Final word Alicia's off to easily. She's a selfish bitch isn't she. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

So in the best case it never occurred to Sue while Charlie was helping her with her child that maybe his daughter abandoned by her mother needed some female support too? I call selfish bullshit!!! She's worse because she knew Charlie was a drunk and she knew that girl was alone. So much fuckery and Edward was a champ in this long chapter in my book even through the LA bullshit. I mean Bella is 23 almost 24 raised herself how could she not know how to basic tip or book fights. They met in Italy after all. That confused me. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

I am so confused did I miss a chapter? In 74 mid way Rose gave birth on August 1st to Jonathan McCarthy Cullen 9.2 lbs and then when E&B move to St. Helena in chapter 75 Rose gives birth to Jared Emmett Cullen 9.7lbs. Did a time jump happen?? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Jeebus! I know Bella is learning, has issues (Renee & Charlie are arseholes) and needs love but fuckall she bloody worked my last nerve in this chapter FFS! 

 

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm getting more of a bratty Bella more than natural submissive Bella. She is gonna work his nerves I sho can tell...okay! I love this story! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Okay... I know it's fic but birth control and sti/std testing is important in the community. Also as an rich actor wouldn't he want her on bc since condoms are absent. More importantly that last night with Jake did he rape her and beat her? Was that her only sexual experience that night. Are you going to explain more later? Plus Bella has as Edward put it a temper perhaps submissive material she is not. Her mood swings and bratty behavour gives me whiplash. She needs a submissive mentor and hyper Alice is not it. I have a feeling Alice will get her into more trouble than help her really. Loving the story. Thanks!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Playroom while drunk...NEVER! Punishment when angry....NOT on your life. I knew Alice would get her in trouble. Shitty mentor indeed!!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So Kate Damon is the same as Kate Nomad? Sometimes writers double up just checking. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So Edward has been a Dom for 10 years? WTF? Hot fucking mess!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

A: dump Angela she has shown her colors.

B: avoid creepy 1 Vikki and creepier 2 Jim. I sense greater trouble with those freaks as per use.

C: Riley is rich and a playboy and likes the chase so he will no doubt be annoying but in what fan fic does Edward not win out. I tell where NONE that I read. JS

 

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG Bella broke my heart in his chapter. I hope you have a good future demise for Jake and James. Hmm...

Charlie what a douche!

 

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

James was disowned for being a rapist that seems fair. NOT!  Jim and James are the same yes?? Jacob is certifiable and I mean cray. Bella that sweet bratty girl I love her. Poor thing! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I love all of your little British-isms woven into the story. ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I'm sorry who here thinks Charlie deserves to have the typical fan fic nervous to meet you respect? FFS Where was your fatherly care while you were passed out drunk and your innocent daughter, your baby girl was tied up, gaged, violated and beaten in her room upstairs under your watch. Fuck respect he's lucky Edward dosent beat his ass. Actually I pray that's coming! JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Why the photos all,of a sudden since 56? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Jeebus Alice was ridiculous. Carlisle punching Jasper for having sex with his wife...cray! How can Bella keep thinking she can be like the sociopath Renee when there was no nature or nurture involved at all. Bella is amazing despite her fathers Dna and her shitty neglectful upbringing. God bless Alexis. That's where she got the art talent right? I am not a fan of Charlie in is story. JS Also in the beginning you said Kate and Garrett could not have kids even though they tried and tried hence the fur babies. Right??

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Okay Bella's hormonal temper tantrum was hesterical and sad and Edwards response to it was brilliant! Esme is tripping...really! No more Renee comparisons *holds hands in prayer position* I am so glad Edward took his hand to her ass on that. To quote Cher 'snap out of it!' Bella and Edward have so much fucking drama that I love the quieter moments of just being. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

What's the big twin mystery didn't you say a few chaps back that Elisabeth Edward's mother had a twin that died at birth? It would be something Carlise should remember no? Yes Charlie is my least favorite character you are supposed to like. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I love Edward & Bella.  Bravo and much success on the sequel I just don't love reading about their grown kids sex lives or lives period the original 8 canon are my favs but you did really well with this I don't feel like I need more. You rock. Big hugs!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Can you fall in love in 10 days? Can you push someone to the edge of insanity in 10 days? Edward is a bachelor risking fifty grand on the line and Bella is a writer for a prominent woman’s magazine. Loosely based on How To Lose A Guy In Ten Days. AU, AH, & OOC. Canon pairings.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyer. I own nothing.

Banner by: moonlit-wishes

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86564 Read Count: 10268
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2010 Updated: 24 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think Rose, Alice and Esme are creepy and controlling. I agree with Edward that's why he's single. Who needs that mess. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

The problem here is even in fiction HEA is a no go from here. Lies, using and embarrassment galore. Shame really. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is stalking him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  

She's also a 110 year old vampire.

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  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200652 Read Count: 29251
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Gone...Just Gone

I am loving this story so much! Team Jacob lovers wrong story and yuck on top of that. I prefer him as the gay best friend or the dead first husband even. Or mostly just the family dog minus the mythical roid rage. But the biggest upset is that Bella will have to change the company name from Elite Guardians to WTF Protection??because Edward not being secured by someone at intermission was beyond a rookie mistake. Even Carlisle should have been his escort. Shame really. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 48: The Final Epilogue

I love,love, loved this story. Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella becomes Edward's personal assistant. He is the chief-editor of EMC, the best fashion magazine, run by a man. And what secret does Edward have? Will Bella's past come to bite her? The movie, The Devil Wears Prada inspired this one. AH. AU.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185532 Read Count: 38653
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Edward's story EPOV

Just because he is a male character does not mean that should not have had a rape warning that was not a lemon. I'm not sure the mafia and a death contract fits with ALL the other elements. Hmm...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Happy times over the years

I always thank writers because it's hard to write these stories and then release them to the public and then ask them to review. That's why I try to always stick to the end. Truly thank you. You had the potential of good story bones but your characters and story archs need meat. Unfortunately, this Edward and Bella are hard to like and often times understand their motivations. Maybe it's just too much non-directional drama/angst (Manwhore, romance, break up, adoption, child abuser, assult, dying mother, family dynamics, past lover angst, friends, jealous co-workers, misunderstandings, mafia, sexually assulting doms, wedding, pregnancy...) all of these things make good stories maybe not all together when not flushed out. With a really good beta and tightening of your outline you could turn this out solid. Many have done it before. Fiction should always have depth, character layers and be believable in our imaginations. That's why fanfiction is so successful it's mostly based originally on really good fiction. Good luck and never give up. Carry on...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 62481
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17

Surprise surprise Rosalie is a judgemental bitch and it took Alice way to long to defend him and she did it lamely and can she disappear instead of Jake? Also hello Bella you are damaged too dear. Shit we all are right. Again love lil bell! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19

Tanya and Rosalie should go fuck each other. Excuse my French! 🙏

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12, Pt. II

So much to say: first Carlisle is shit sorry who abandones their twin sisters only child after she dies. You don't see bruises so that's your excuse!  A 7 year old is good at hiding things? You're a family doctor FFS you know the signs. Rosalie is just as annoying as ever. It's so rare I tolerate her anway. I love Jasper in this story so far. Edward and Bella are two broken halves of a whole who settled in life to feel something...anything. So Jake and Tanya poof be gone! And more lil bell she is he sweetest! Good writing! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

I'm not mad at Bella disappointed in how she handled it yes but she and Edward have been eating shit sandwiches for years and I thinks these babies need a break on the angst train. JS

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

Oh poor Emmett. Grew up wiwith two loving parents (wealth)with no death, abuse, neglect or homelessness or stage III cancer. By all means let's celebrate you as the victim. Jesus he and Rosalie deserve each other. Bravo Pixie way to serve up the truth. I'm so glad Bella called I hope Lil Bell forgives her Ewoord.so freaking cute!

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2

Such a good. Good. Good story. Thank you!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsou

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 394303
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 25: I'm too sexy

So how do two medical professionals make so many mistakes? 1. Unprotected sex without the "talk" 2. Unprotected sex after being pumped with antibiotics after surgery and clearly missing at least a weeks worth of pills 3. Not seeing the symptoms of pregnancy i.e. Mood swings, sex drive, glowing? It seems Renee is the smart school teacher. ;-D hehe

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 28574
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love gay bestie Jacob. He shouldn't be written any other way. Prudish Bella really needs fuckawesome Edward. I love the "fucking" Cullen's. And who the heck is following Bella?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yeah she was taking that need some space thing too far. Not so much angst as annoying. Now on to the good ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Its it Sam the cook?

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 44205
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

Yeah Bella girl is all a mess poor thing. She didn't even give aftercare post punishment and we know that's a no no. Too bad her confidant is big mouth Rose. Hehe

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy

So sorry about reviewing I read in reader view on my iPad and it doesn't give a review option all the time. Anyway, I think Edward's inner voice is the shiz for real! This is so funny and often so sweet in their cray.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4195]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1208303
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please please please finish this amazing story. Amen! *wink*

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 May 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I cannot believe this is your first fic! It is so detailed and well written and erotic with depth. I love this Edward and Bella...thank you! 

I am reading this very slowly because I see it isn't complete and while you have over 100 chapters, I am a very voracious reader. Seeing all the little clues such as almost being run down in the alley, light shining in her living room window, utility van on her street (as seen by Edward) and Seth's collar, it is my most profound wish that your Bella not suffer anymore pain and abuse outside of flashbacks, dreams and sharing. How much can she take. Even I want to shield her from that. Please...😉 Finally, the way you wrote Edward's punishments for the phone, food and sleep were creative and not cruel due to the fact that an impact instrument would have normally been used.

I look forward to journeying through the pages. Please complete this. Thank you for you creativity and hard work. 

 

Miss G

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The White Swan Lodge by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16653
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I am enjoying your story. Especially nice that 30 something E&B find each other. Oh and Jake can he be a footnote? Please! Hey I've known you for 0.03 seconds but please give me a nick name (Bells hate it). Oh and put on some pants you giant. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Yeah book the flight because weeks of being angry and sorting your shit out without the full story from the man himself is stupid! She should have at least talked to him. Like my mom always said 'use your words.' But now a great review equals a conversation...oh Bella. Ridic!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

 Just lovely! Thank you for your creative work and sharing it with us. 

Summary:

Bella is divorced and heartbroken. Lonely and broken four years later she is in a tragic accident. Can her Greek god heal ALL of her wounds? OOC/Cannon pairings. Rated M for lemons! Lots of lemons...

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 111950 Read Count: 46096
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I don't think Edward was a jackass at all. She should have told him the truth. This is on her. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So those therapist and psychiatrist in Forks were hacks. Bella truly needs help and it feels beyond your teenage husband leaving you, much more. Perhaps it was the catalyst to something greater. Beyond Edward's kindess and affection he should ask his dad for a referral. Co-dependency is not a good way to find love. Who knew Jake had this kind of power? is this a HEA in the end?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

If Carlisle was 15 when Esme got pregnant and 16 he was born is Emmett really the older brother? I'm a timeline freak sorry. ;-) these two a pretty mess btw.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well Bella is judgemental and rude in is chapter. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I find Bella confusing and exhausting but I am curious to the end. Also I hope to read what happened to Edward who has been hurt as well. Since Bella over heard that why doesn't she seek to know? She's a little like Renee no?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So will her panties still be wet from Carlise *shakes head* or will she compare Edward to teenage husband Jacob again?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

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Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 191654
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I loved, loved reading this story again. It was just what the fic-doc ordered after the ridiculous angst I got sucked into prior. You are a good writer. You took Moving Forward down?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan's life changed the day she found her husband in bed with another woman.  A chance meeting at the gym changes her life forever. This is the journey of how Bella ugly duckling became a Swan. AH

First few chapters need beta'd but later chapters are beta'd, still working on the beginning. 

 

image from gossipteen.com no infringement intended.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, To Read, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120408 Read Count: 130873
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2011 Updated: 20 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Daughters, Mothers, and a Playroom

Yeah ne got off way to easy with that giant ass secret. How could the entire family not mentioned Edwards daughter. Odd.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Okay that was way to calm. Forget the teenage sex if you want it happens. But the adult training your minor child on sex and using a dominants playroom without his permission? The punishment is not matching the ick factor. 

Witch Way by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
Summary:

I was a normal girl, living a normal life. Never did I expect to thrust into a world where the supernatural ruled. Vampires, Demons, Werewolves and Witches? ExB, AU

 

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Thank you, Sephrenia for the beautiful banner!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136619 Read Count: 77175
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Jasper and John Barleycorn

Genius having Esme the ability to physically shield because of her maternal love is BRILLIANT! And Carlisle actually healing without medicine is so appropriate. And also, why didn’t he do that in canon. Shh...I love it! I love all the powers. Well done!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 82955
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Peepshow

Why does Renee care about Bella forgiving Jacob? It seems like she should see how this has hurt her child badly.  Edwards right what he did ruined everything and he lost nothing as a result. He even has Renee as his agent in forgiveness. Sad.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - The Play Date Part Two

That was a freaking HOT shower scene. When does he plan to humiliate Bella at the wedding? This is gonna be a Humpty Dumpty mess. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Proof

I loves me some baby and sugar! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two

Okay they are both awesome in his chapter but you mistress are the best. I love lemons. I mean come on its fanfic right? But I love lyrical sexy writing more *hand to heart*and in this chapter between you describing Edwards walk to Bella prior to the reception and Bella's walk to Edward declaring her love...fucking lyrically sexy! *fans face like southern bell* JS. Oh and that lemon was divine. Full stop!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Progression Part Two

Is Carlise not his bio dad or something? I can't think of a worse lie cheating on Esme maybe? These two and this lust. Also, if Rose doesn't like carrot cake she could have stayed home. Not a fan. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Post Coital

Ugh I could have done without the Tanya bits but I understand fully. I like this Edward sweet, tortured and smart. Bella clearly has a lot of defrosting to do. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Ploy

Oh Mistress, Bella deserves to be screwed after what she shared this chapter. Unnecessary cruelty, manipulation, withholding someone's prosperity and dream for your own selfish reasons. When Edward finds out she better hope love will save the day because this information is mean. Shame on her and Alice but not surprised Alice is into manipulation. Also B put on your big girl panties and tell your parents 'if I have a mortgage, pay taxes and have success I can handle the rest please and thank you.'

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Prepared

Unclinch FFS Bella it's really hard to like you. How is she going to prevent Jessica from getting pissed off and spilling the beans or Aro for that matter? I love it in this story Bella and Alice are Lucy and Ethel with this scheme. That always worked...right? ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Parents Part One

Mistress, why would Renee bring that up? What purpose does it serve to open your only child's wounds at the dinner table? Also, Edward knows something or found out something he is pissed but showed up anyway? I guess messing with her life is payback for all she's done? And are we going to find out why she is so boring and tight and not in a good way. JS

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The Player

Oh these two kiddos! *shakes head* this is gonna be good. I love the way you write Edward addressing us with his internal monologue. Genius! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Prick

Okay Renee that ritual is sweet when Bella was little but creeping into her bed with knowledge that her man is in there and maybe naked is creeptacular full stop!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - The Parting

Who cares if the chapter was shorter it was bloody brilliant love! ;-D

 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Prowling

This chapter ran all the emotions with very satisfying *que blush*results. Bravo on the storytelling!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Past Part One

You are the shit! JS I love your Edward so much!!! Foot fear, Pringle eating, kindle loving, sexy man. The nick names he has are fantastic. I think Angela had like six and my favorite was Coffee Colored Hulk. I mean genius. That was fun. Thank you!!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Proposal

While I appreciate all types of fic that keep Bella and Edward together sometimes the angst can get me down. Not because of triggers but because Iam often floored how many people want them stalked, raped, beaten, battered, kidnapped and tortured. It's quite lovely and very enjoyable to read a story where the characters we know and love have layers and depth and even with drama and angst there is flow to the story that pulls you deep within it. I simply want to say "thank you" for providing me this outlet of escape and enjoyment. Carry on... 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - OUTTAKE

I'm going to miss that romantic fucker. ;-)

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 76394
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Fucking hot lemon/ evening who cares if is real. It's hot! 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

So we have things that appear random but aren't! Law suit from jail bird negligent uncle. Homeless dude in front of shop, creepy dirty/religious dude at grocery store, guy lurking in alley, car following Edward home, vandalized sex machine, creepy waitress, 3 missing items from grandparents ( cuff links, earrings, pen)  upcoming trust fund for Edward they are all connected some how. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Don't worry your prideful self Bella he won't have much left after buying beach front proprrty in SD California real estate is expensive ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Nothing about Jacob the douch or Bella. I do have something to say about Leah getting a beat down alone at the beach the same morning homeless Jimmy is it, is fuck up in front of the studio. WTF? 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Fucking fabulous all around! Big thanks for all of the creative goodness. ;-D

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 129152
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64: Mister and Mis(s)Communication

Why is Bella always running? Your a big girl use your word even the bad ones if want.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: Emergency Contact

Fuck yeah we have lift off! Nice chapter all around. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Interested Parties

Alice is like an over excited jack Russel in this chapter. Jeebus!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Allie and Jazz and Rosie and Em

Alice could attempt to big a good sister instead of sniping harpy. You married the douche just love your brother flaws and all. Next...

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Discussion and Dissection

Is this story going to time advance or is it just going to be the first week? Also are they going to get together slow slow burn style? Curious reader.



Author's Response:

Hi Miss G

Thank you for your reviews! This story is a slow burn but things will advance quickly between the characters given the time frame and there will be a HEA. If you're waiting for lemons though, that will take a while. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

-bannerday

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Angela Weber and the Mexican Mandate

So Angela is yet another self righteous judgemental bizzy body.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Do the (After)Math

Why do I get the feeling they won't get together until like chapter 50 or something ?

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much

Oh Alice Pa-lease!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces

If Edward was my brother and I loved him I would not tell his business to a stranger. But we all know Alice can't mind her own business. Slow burn? Jeebus!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Into the Lair

I love how Bella manages to be self-righteous, opinionated, judgemental and yet turned on all while completely invading Edwards privacy. Ha!

Summary:

Sequel to Taking Chances. Finding the family they didn't realize they needed, they thought they had everything. Now Bella and Edward, along with Alex and Anthony, are in for the wildest adventure yet. AH & NC-17 for language and other things. Canon coupling.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94877 Read Count: 76554
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Yeah, bloody fantastic indeed! ;-)

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I think beyond my love for your E&B relationship, I adore your Charlie. He is ever present, funny, strong and sweet and I know you can write him dark. Couldn’t finish that one. Anyway, I love the interaction between him and Bella it’s like my relationship with my Dad. Cheers and thank you!

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 540]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 98345
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Crying

Edward is an asshole. He has been having sex how long and Carlisle had to teach him foreplay? Also slapping a small woman on the day of corrination not expecting to mark her? Plus the pleasure he just gave her could have been given on the wedding night instead of tearing her inside and out. Thank god for Emmett because that poor girl is fucked. Henry in Tudors was nicer and that's saying something. I am always an Edward and Bella fan only but I can't stand behind this git historical or not. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Failing

Is this a fic where you want is to not like Edward? 

Summary: Past Featured Story

bsnnr

 

Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 29684
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

Look I know Edward has every right to be pissed but he was a dick to Bella. Rose was...typical. Can't stand her! Esme should receive the brunt because she was about to set him up with yet another gold digger. Genius! This is one time I'm in favor of Bella running. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 160176
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 41: 41 End of the Line

Bloody brilliant chapter and about bloody time too ;-D 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 22: 22 Came With Cape

Love. Lovely. Loverly ladies!

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: 21 Are We There Yet

So much good progress with just enough drama to keep you all in. BTW you win the 'Best Jasper Award' for your Whit in my book. I love that fucking nudger. Also I was trying to remember where the 'I want more' ' more with you' thing was similar to and I realized Snowqueen Ice Dragon and the famous 50. I love your Mase (Edward) complicated and sexy. Carry on...



Author's Response:

Not familiar with those stories. We'll have to look into them.  We accept that award! We have loved the nudger ourselves! Most days we agreed with you on Masen and then he'd get quite and not want to tell us what was next! LOL

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 20: 20 Sunken Shark & Parachute Jump

Oh yeah that's the stuff. Working through the issues one by one. ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: 19 Diving Deep

You had me nervous towards the end. 20 chapters to get together let them grow from here. Pretty please! Really good chapter and I like the way the story goes from third party to individual perspective. ;-D

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: 6 Hot & Cold

For such a small crew doing potentially dangerous work Bella should at least tell Esme or Edward of her fear. That would be a professional curtesy and I'm surprised Carlise advised her against it. Also do they all own this company or just Edward and Esme?



Author's Response:

They all own a stake in the company with Edward having the majority shares since he put up the initial funding to get them going.

 

With Bella, it was Edward and Esme who decided they didn't need specifics. They felt knowing she was afraid of sharks was enough informationt to start things and then once they'd built trust with her, they'd get the details.

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 48: 48 The Iceman Cometh

I hope Mase makes Carlise jump through verbal hoops when he ask Esme to marry him. It seems more than fair actually. 

Reviewer: Miss G Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: 9 Tempest In Me

So is Lee (Rosalie) gonna blow when she isn't number one anymore where Mase is concerned and that he will give Bella what he would not, could not give to her.  I like your Bella she is strong so let her set her straight if she does because I dont know how Gopher stands it.