Reviews by NewMoonlover16
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: NewMoonlover16 Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

that was GOOD! can't wait for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

Bella

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68969
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: NewMoonlover16 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Bella

yes i so want a preview



Author's Response:

Great!  Here you go:

 

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“Wh-Where are we?”  I opened my eyes slowly and took in my surroundings.  We were in another hotel, this time a classy one.  The bed was a queen-size and smelled of clean sheets.  There was a couch in the corner and the television was facing it.  There was a figure standing in front of the window.

“Alaska,” the soft voice said.  I smiled.  Jasper had said he was going to take me to Iceland with a few stops on the way.  I asked why Iceland and he replied simply “I’ve always wanted to go there.”

“That’s nice,” I replied.  He moved from his spot and stood in front of me.  His cool hand brushed against my forehead gently.  Since we left, I’ve gotten to know Jasper better.  He really is wonderful and has been great to me.  And I can’t stop looking at him.  I’ve seen him without his shirt twice.  Nice, firm abs, toned arms and low-slung pants that only enhance my imagination.

I closed my eyes.  I have to stop thinking this way.  It’s Jasper.  Alice’s Jasper.  She would kill me if she knew I was having sexual thoughts about her husband...if she was still alive.  I don't even want to think about what it would have done to Edward.  Edward.  Jasper told me very little about the battle that ensued; just that everyone of the Cullens was dead, minus him.

“Are you okay?” he asked quietly.  He was still stroking my forehead but saw my eyes were closed.  I opened them and nodded.  He smiled.  “Lie with me?” I asked.

He did.  He was very cautious, very hesitant.  He slowly removed his hand and unbuttoned his shirt.  His muscles stretched his tee shirt tight against him and he crawled into bed next to me.  After a moment, he put an arm around me.

I snuggled back into his chest.  I craved contact.  We had been gone eight weeks and I was desperate for a man’s touch.  I shouldn’t be thinking of him this way, but I couldn’t help it.  I knew he was attractive, but he had never held so much desire in me as he did now.  I wanted him.  All of him.

I sighed.  He shifted so he was hovering over me, his weight on one arm.  I knew that wasn’t painful at all for him, being the vampire that he is.  I slowly brought my hand up, careful to not make any sudden moves, and ran it down his arm, feeling his skin warm at my touch.  His eyes, consistently black these days, closed and he moaned softly.

“That feels amazing,” he whispered.  I continued the movement.  He opened his eyes.  The blackness was still there, of course, but something else as well.  They were full of depth, passion.  Desire.  I could only stare into the black void.  I was lost, mesmerized by the passion I saw there, the beauty.  I could not look away.  Nor did I want to.

Then, very gently, he lowered his lips to mine.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A one night stand she can't remember is the perfect kind of one night stand in the eyes of 23 old cleaning lady Bella Swan, but when she falls pregnant she will begin a life journey she never expected to take. But hold on, what does her boss Mr. Sex on Legs Cullen have to do with all of this????????

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159830 Read Count: 58916
[Report This] Published: 24 Apr 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: NewMoonlover16 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Realisation

that was really good. good job. can't wait for more.