Reviews by longtobeme
Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

What a great story! I found this 2 days ago and now I am addicted to your creative and descriptive storytelling powers. Please update soon!

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Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great chapter!
I think James is closer than Edward realizes. I can't wait to read more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Realizations and Regrets

Great chapter. I can't wait to find out who is behind Bella's death threats. Please update soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One

Wow! I only hope that Edward and Bella manage to survive this torture and escape. I am surprised that Jacob was electrocuting Bella...he doesn't seem smart enough to come up with that idea!
Please update soon, I have this story on my Favorites!

Author's Response:

thank you very much, and dont worry they shall survive, they need to for the sequel haha, and Jacob has brainy people to give him ideas :) he seems dumb but well he is rather clever, but only because of influence and having the vast mind of a shapeshifter :)

thank you very much for the mugs and i shall be updating when i can :) xx

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two

I cannot imagine what else Bella can endure at this point. I am surprised that she has not bled to death from the screws that Jacob inserted into her body. I think Edward realizes that Aro senses Bella's vampire potential as a shield and if so, Aro will do whatever to get Bella changed into a vampire to join his coven.
Please update soon because I am so impatient to read what happens to Bella and the Cullens.

Author's Response:

Well she wont have much more torture, so dont worry about that :) and Aro would never allow her to die, and she is gonna be much more than just a shield :) yup he wants her as a vampire, but needs to break her spirit and ties to the cullens :) dont worry i will be updating soon :) xx thanks for the mugs and the support :) xx

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: New Home

I am so happy for the update! Once again, this is an excellent chapter that is clearly setting the stage for a huge confrontation among the Volturi, werewolves and Cullens. I hope Edward destroys Tanya. Please update soon! I am so curious to see what happens next to Bella!

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Voluri

I loved this chapter! I am so happy to see the Volturi pulling Jacob away. Let's hope that Tanya and Jacob are executed! I can't wait for the next installment. Now that everyone is in Aro's castle, the tension and plots are going to really erupt!:)

Author's Response:

thank you very much, and yeah Aro doesnt want Jacob messing with Bella too much :) and Tanya and jake shall have rather short lives in my story :)  the next installment shouldnt take too long :) xx

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Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Mute

Great chapter!:)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much xx

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Isabella's Ball

Great chapter! Let's kill Jacob and the dogs!

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Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Gratitude

Great chapter! I am so happy that your beta and you are working on this story again!:)

Author's Response:

Aw thank you sweetie :] Thanks for th mugs xx

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Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Saving Grace

I loved this story and I will miss reading updates. Do you plan to include an epilogue of Bella and Edward after the newborn year?:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50129
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Could the Volturi be visiting Bella?

Author's Response:

Hmmm good question!  All will be known soon :)

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Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love this crazy story! This story should win a fanfic award for originality if nothing else!

Author's Response:

:) Thank you so much!  I definitely thing Smugs and his Bella are an original pair but it's nice to hear!  So happy you're enjoying them along with me.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I loved this chapter and I am so relieved that Bella was overwhelmingly convinced of Edward's love for her by his many actions on her behalf, especially providing her with a means to contact Charlie by phone.
I wanted to laugh at the idea of Willow being the witness to E and B's wedding. I suppose E's inner voice could deliver the vows! I love the bizarre humor in this story.

Author's Response:

Haha Bizarre humor is probably true!  I have no idea where it comes from but it works for me! 

So glad you liked it!  Bella definitely knew he cared but him giving her back her father was the best way for him to show her that he truly loved her.  It drove the point home.

Willow would be the maid of honor. hehe Don't you know?  :)  What an image that is!  IMF would no doubt be in attendance, probably crying and yelling at Edward at the same time.

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I can't wait for Bella to confront Victoria because I am sure that it will be hilarious. Let's hope that Victoria stays away from Willow and does not damage Bella's DVD collection of vampire shows! I am looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response:

Haha yes, she better not damage the vamp DVDs or the vamp pet!  That would not go over well at all :)  I can't wait to see those two meet either.  Should be fun!  Thanks for the review :)

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Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 School Daze

Hilarious!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I think it is funny that Bella threw Edward beside Willow while fighting Victoria. I love the humor and wit you use to capture Edward's POV in this story. I am going to miss this adventure when it concludes! Please write another adventure soon and I will place it on my favorites list, too!:)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I had a good time writing that scene and had to bring Ms. Willow into it a little bit!  The humor is just who I am I guess, love that you love it!

I already have a second story currently underway, First & Ten, and another one that I'm uploading currently that is complete, Sacrificial Lamb.  Plus I have another cooking that I'll do after First is done :)  Plenty to read, if you like!

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 84834
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I found this story yesterday and I read straight thru to the current chapter. I love this story and I am so impatient for the next update. :)Of course, this story is now on my favorites list!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Great chapter! Please update soon...this is one of my favorite stories!:)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I wonder if the stalker made an after hours visit to Bella's shop or vandalized her car? I think Alice is correct in her concern that Bella will miss out on Black Friday sales with her. :)

Author's Response:

Hmmm, you'll find out next chapter!  :)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

The weird vagrant pervert has returned!

Author's Response:

Favorite. Review. Ever! lol

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I can't wait to read Laurant's confession and reasoning behind his actions. This is such an entertaining mix of depravity, humor and adrenaline!
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  That may be an outtake I post later.  I've got 2 more chapters written and off to beta, and it wouldn't flow right with that. ;)

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Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Epilogue

I loved this story and now that it is over, I will miss the updates! Please continue writing more stories.

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you!  :)  I have one well on the way to being completed that I will post soon, I promise!

Summary:

Sometimes the answers were right in front of you all along. Bella/Edward. Rated M for language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3930 Read Count: 397
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2010
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Hidden In Plain Sight

LOVE IT!
I added this story to my FAVORITES list and I am eager to see where this story goes.
Update soon!

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the R&R! :)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Falling For You

Poor Bella can't get a break from tripping on sidewalks. Luckily, Edward seems to be a perfect companion for their first date. I can't wait to read what happens on the date.
Update soon!

Author's Response:

It can be tricky to navigate those sidewalks sometimes, but I don't think Bella cares with Edward around. ;) Thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Go check out my blog for teasers, outfits, pictures and more!
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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

I am so happy that Edward gets the girl!

Chances by AmoreBella88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

Bella Swan lives a dull life, but when a trip to the emergency room brings her to the Cullens, everything changes. Things are not all roses and sunshine though, there are attacks on women at the local campus of UW and it's got everyone worried. Everyone needs chances, but what happens when someone chooses the wrong one...?

 

(AU-AH, OOC for Bella's vocabulary)

 

Rated NC-17 for language, mature sexual content, and violence.

 

On temporary hiatus, 12/19/11Chances Banner by Sarah Elizabeth


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100701 Read Count: 5338
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: About Time

I found this story and could not stop reading until I finished your latest installment... basically, I did nothing except read today. Your story is a great mix of comedy, romance and angst. I am so happy that Bella has a tough girl attitude and speaks up for herself and her friends. I am curious about the underlying crime story involving the UW student assaults. When will we learn more about this aspect of the adventure?
I am so excited to read about Alice's Halloween party!

Author's Response: Wow, that's quite the compliment, reading all day. Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. More will be explained concerning the attacks in the next chapter. It'll be a doozy to write Halloween!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

This is a perfect conclusion to the story!
I can't wait for the epilogue!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Working on the epi now.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I am so happy with the way you pulled Andy back into Bella's life and used Andy as a means for Edward's redemption. I think you resolved the family balance for the Cullen's in the best possible way. Both Alice and Edward found true happiness and contentment after losing their "gifts" and learning to trust, communicate and take chances.
I will miss your characters and this story, but no sequel is needed. This has been a great adventure!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked the Andy and Edward twist.  I thought everyone deserved a happy ending!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

 

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297704
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife

I just discovered this story today and I am hooked. I can't wait to see where the adventure will take EandB. I am impatient for the next chapter!

I've added this story to my favorites!



Author's Response:

Wow, I'm really happy about your review, it made me smile big time! : )

The update will be on Sunday!

Thank you so much for your review,

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Wedding

Please don't delay posting the next chapter! I love your storytelling powers.

Author's Response:

I won't delay it. It will be posted on Wednesday just as promised :)

Thank you for your words, they mean so much!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye

Thank you for such an original story! I love how you are revealing important aspects of character for Bella and Edward. You insert details without slowing or confusing the adventure.
I am so impatient for June 16th!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

It's just a few more days ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

After reading Chpt 9, which left me so curious about the direction of this adventure, I became obsessed with checking your story for Chpt 10. I began checking shortly after 12:01am this morning!
Your chapter was wonderful in light of the relationship that is growing between Edward and Bella. I enjoyed learning more about the dark shadows in Bella's past. I think it is funny that Jessica not only works as a clerk at a package store, but flips burgers at the local McDonald's! Talk about Karma kicking someone in the rear! Love your humor...can't wait for chapter 11.

Author's Response:

Wow, I'm so happy to have such a escited reader! :)

THANK YOU!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday

No, Rob will not be in Britain...
Thanks for the great chapter, I think E and B are too funny recognizing their jealous tendencies for each other. I love the slow development of EandB's love story.

Author's Response:

Bummer. I can't believe my luck ^^

THANK YOU! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

Wait! How can you leave us hanging with Edward's statement? I loved reading about the increasing intimacy between EandB. Please let us know where Bella went for the year that she left college and how she coped with her emotional breakdown while away.
I am eager to read Chpt. 13!
Enjoy watching ECLIPSE, I plan to see the movie on Wednesday.

Author's Response:

Because it gets more exciting that way :)

I will tell Bella's story eventually, I promise!

I will technically see the movie on Wednesday too, since they won't be showing it until 1 minute past midnight ;)

Enjoy it you too!

xx
Gelix

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Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane

I am so happy that Bella finally said the three words that matter most. I just hate that Edward did not hear it. I am curious about Edward's visit with Aro...could it have something to do with Bella? Thanks for writing such a great adventure for EandB's characters.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

Great chapter!
Let's hope Bella can say the magic three words in the next chapter. When Edward returns home,I hope that Bella plans a special DATE NIGHT that includes a romantic bath.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

And we'll see what will happen when he gets home!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

I am so happy that Edward surprised Bella by returning home 3 days earlier than planned. Bella's opportunity to say I LOVE YOU was perfectly timed. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

I'll see you on Sunday for the next chapter!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date

Wow!Bella has really made progress with communicating her feelings to Edward.I love the matching hearts and the romantic boating in the park. Update soon because I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

You'll get to read a lot more on Wednesday!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

Bella and Edward's first sexual experience was fun to read, but I hope that BandE progress with their sexual intimacy. It seems as if Bella needs someone to talk with about her self-esteem issues as related to sexual intimacy. Rose is helpful, but Bella needs professional help.
I feel sorry for Edward when Bella confronts him about Thanksgiving at the Cullens! Bella is not accustomed to large, extended family gatherings and she may freak out. Let's hope that Edward and his parents can help Bella to relax and enjoy her first "Cullen" holiday party as a member of the family!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and your thought on my story. We'll see how Thanksgiving will go for the lovebirds, hopefully pretty smooth, but you never know! ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vegas

I loved this chapter! I think it is great that Edward answered and spoke to Alice from Bella's phone,letting Alice hear Bella's flirty teasing in the background.
It is time for Bella to put quality time with Edward first and she is letting her friends understand this, too. E and B are overdue to spend a hooky day together in bed!
Update soon!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

I did not realize that my review was submitted under the first chapter! Anyway, EandB should have an easier time planning for Christmas with the families now that they have discussed some issues, shared secrets and cleared the air for the November holidays.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving

I think Bella may surprise Edward when they return to Cullen's house after the bonfire! She is awaking her inner sex beast! I am relieved that Esme and Edward witnessed the tension and anger that happens when Bella's parents are in the same room. I feel more hopeful that the Christmas season will be less stressful.
Please have a safe trip and update when you can!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter

Edward and Bella are creating relationship memories for the holidays and I love it! Bella even suggested they buy a house so that Edward could have a piano to play for her. Another point that Edward noticed was Bella's reference to future Christmases together and their future children!
Great chapter and I am impatient for the next update!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

I think they would have a beautiful baby, but I am worried about Bella's health. There may be some other reason for her to not have her period.

Author's Response:

Yes, there are a few reasons. We'll just have to wait and see what could have caused it!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas

Chapters 14 and 15 were great. I think Bella wanted Edward to know that she chose to live with him in a trial marriage shortly after Vegas, but she knew the annulment was a legal option. She indicated her feelings for Edward even at the beginning of the marriage in her confession.
I can't wait for New Year's.
Update soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

Great chapter!
I think Bella is pregnant!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve

I want to know why Edward is behaving really weird to Bella. Also, what the hell is happening with Edward's facebook account? I hope that he is behaving himself.
Something seems off about Edward in the last couple of chapters. Bella's statement about going out on dates shows her own insecurity about their daily routine of hanging out in the living room and watching TV. I think Edward's weekend habit of working out in the gym most of the day while Bella is doing laundry is going to become a problem...Edward's thoughts to himself about how much they stay home may plant seeds of trouble.

Author's Response:

That will be explained in the next chapter! :)

As for the rest, all I can say is that it will all work out and be dealt with in future chapters! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital

I am so excited for EandB to be pregnant and looking for a house. They have so many changes to face.
Love the story!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Surprise

I love this story! Bella's dream is a little scary, especially since she is experiencing so much stress from this recurring dream. Hopefully, Edward can help her to remain calm.
Renee's visit should be interesting. I can't wait to read Edward's POV!:)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :)

Renee's coming up soon! ^^

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Babysitting

I remember how nervous my husband and I were when we asked our close friends to be our child's godparents. Of course, they were ecstatic to be godparents!:)

Author's Response:

Yeah, it always has a way to work out in the end. I would be thrilled if I was asked too! :)

xx
Gelix

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45-Aftermath

I am really enjoying this story. Edward is truly obsessed with his feelings for Bella. Thankfully, Edward has finally offered the one gift that Bella wanted...to be changed. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying it.  I think the over all theme of the story is Edward will do ANYTHING for his Bella...lol

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46-Bad Company

I absolutely love reading each chapter of this story! You bring out such humor from Edward's sincere attempts to woo and seduce Bella. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad y ou have enjoyed it.  The new outtake was just posted if you're interested...

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I can't believe how many things are occurring at once! The next chapter should be really entertaining!

Author's Response:

YAY!!!!!! thanks for reviewing, it makes up for the coal I got in my stocking hehehehe, MWAH

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

Let's hope Irina's head gets ripped from her torso, too.

Author's Response:

hehehehehee, do you doubt me my dear one, Irina will not get away with what touching Bella hehehehehe.... MWAH thanks soooooo much for your review

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Never Say Never

NASTY!...if Irina is inside Bella now and is controlling her, this is going to be a nightmare for the Cullens. I hope that Elizabeth helped Bella to overcome Irina's struggle to control her before Bella and Edward left the forest!

Author's Response:

hahahahaha, MWAH!!!!

Just a quick reply to get you on the right track.... Irina is dead, this curse/demon is a million year old succubus spirit that enbeds herself in strong willed women, all will be well, in fact, better than well, this spirit hasn't lived inside someone so pure of heart so wait to see what happens hehehehe...

thanks for reviewing

Exclusively by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

242964471

WINNER - TEXTS FROM LAST NIGHT CONTEST - hosted on Fanfiction.net

 

Edward was a sexual predator. The bars and clubs of Manhattan were his hunting ground. Would he let the ultimate prize slip through his fingers?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 2971
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Epilogue

I found this little story today, read it and loved it! I plan to read it again and again. Of course, this story is on my favorites list!

Summary:

mtte

This is the outtakes from my story 'Married to the enemy.' Please read that story before reading the outtakes!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6428 Read Count: 2011
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakdown

Great POV for Bella's breakdown. I would love to read an outtake in Edward's point of view during Jake and Leah's wedding reception when he is speaking with Charlie and dealing with Bella's disappearance and aftermath.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'll keep that in mind and I'll see what I can do! :)

xx
Gelix

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/23069/images/MafiaPrincess.jpg

Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter! I wonder who the mysterious "hate texter" could be?

Author's Response:

He/she will be revealed soon, don't worry. =)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I loved this chapter and I am glad that Emmett and Edward are getting along better. It will take them working together for the destruction of Black. I think Black will be difficult to finally kill and it will be fun following your chain of events leading up to Black's well deserved end!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked this chapter. Thank you. =)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think that Bella needs to let her family know that Edward was the cause of her suicide attempt. Also, I hope that she resists E's dominant and ego-centric attitude. I already hate Alice and this is only the beginning of the story! Bella should return to Seattle and purchase a different bridal gown and wear it to clue Alice in that Bella is no wimpy pushover!
Update soon because I am so curious to see what direction this story moves!

Author's Response:

Bella has already committed to her dead father so she has to go through with the marriage.

Also, Rosalie was the one who had the idea of buying a gown in New York. Alice, being her usual perky self, just so happen to strategically be there when they came.

Anyway, thanks for your thoughts on the story. 

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella needs to clear the air with Edward about their past issues.
Update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, she really needs to do that and she would. Soon, don't worry. ;) See yah next update. Thanks.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella needs to slap the crap out of the skank in black. Also, she needs to maintain her own means of self protection. No matter what Edward may intend or feel for her, she needs to remember what happened to Charlie and rely on herself...not E.

Author's Response:

Yes, definitely. In their situation, she needs to protect herself even around Edward. ;)

As for slappin' the skank.....hmmmm....you're giving me ideas here. ;) lol.

Anyway, thanks for this review. Really appreciated it!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Disappointing!!!!!!!!!!! Bella should have kicked his ass!!!!!!!!!!! Maybe in the next chapter, you will let Bella release her inner Bitch!!!!!!!!! His excuse was pathetic.........typical loser male stereotype........

Author's Response:

So sorry to hear that this chapter disappointed you. :(

I'll see what I can do in the future chapters, though I can't promise anything. ;) 

Anyway, thanks for your thoughts. It shows me your view of the story. Until next update. :)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm waiting for this story to ignite...please hurry.

Author's Response:

hey. what kind of ignition do you mean hon? PM me so we could discuss further. Thanks! =)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter! Karma is a cruel witch!:)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Thank you! =) Happy New Year!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Edward should be proud that Bella has excellent stealth skills...these are important for self-defense. Just wait until he learns about the hotel incident!

Author's Response:

The chase was fun, but it was risky....everybody knew that. He had good reasons to be angry. And yeah, when he learns about Mike, he will be livid....but I'll tell him to calm down a bit. Lol!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Let's hope the shot works...they aren't ready for little EandBs! Jasper is too creepy for words!

Author's Response:

lol! yes, Jasper is creepy but in a funny kind of way. ;) Don't worry, Bella will not be pregnant any time soon.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope that Emmett gets a chance to weigh in on Edward's attempted "HIT".

Author's Response:

Yes. Emmett's reaction will be the one to wait for.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Eddie now gets to learn that all of his actions/inactions DO have consequences!:)

Author's Response:

Edward making that promise was stupid. Now he has to find a way to make amends. 

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow! Bella is her own undercover operative! Thank goodness, Edward waited in the truck and everything went off as planned. I can't wait for the next update. I hope we get to find out more about Snake's plans and who is behind the plot to destroy Bella's family.

Author's Response:

Yes, you will, don't worry. You'll have your answers in the next few chapters. Thanks. =)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I can't wait to find out what information Snake has on who or what group is after the Swan family.

Author's Response:

Next chapter will answer some of your questions. Thanks. =)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Thank goodness!I love how Jacob died!

Author's Response:

*grins* Thank you. =)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Bella is going to kick Edward's butt!

Author's Response:

lol. Yes, she might. =D Thanks.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Of course, Edward will have a coronary when Bella tells him she is flying to Seattle!

Author's Response:

Yes that might actually happen. lol

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

This is hilarious! Edward is truly paying a penance for his bad behavior! I wonder how much longer Bella will punish him?

Author's Response:

We'll see. They'll have their talk next chap and they'll sort things out their way. 

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Thank goodness Bella and Edward are working things out and the baby is still alive.

Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Ringtones & The Prodigal Son

I can't wait to find out what happens next! Emmett should let loose a lethal fart on Jonelle! :)

Author's Response:

That is a brilliant idea!  He hasn't farted in ages.  If I work a fart into the next chapter, i will sure to give you the credit!  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Boxer Shorts & Serenades

I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens during Emmett's wedding in the Seattle Cathedral! Between Emmett and Bella, I suspect that this will be a wedding that fanfic readers won't soon forget! :)

Author's Response:

maybe booger fingers can be the ring bearer.  lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake: The April Fool

You came up with some great pranks for Emmett to pull on those nearest and dearest to his heart ...along with a sneaky fart attack on Jonelle. EXCELLENT!:)

Author's Response:

Emmett, thankfully has left me alone for a week.  No doubt he was basking in the glory of his successful pranking.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Wookies & Good Friday

I bet Edward wishes he drove any car other than his dad's Mercedes to Forks! I think it is hilarious that he was freaking out in the coffee shop. I can't wait to get Edward's POV! I hope for Edward's sake that Emmett does not learn of Edward's Christmas escapade.:)

Author's Response:

haha.  Yes.  The dummy shouldn't have shoved the receipt in the glove compartment, or better yet...maybe he should have told Bella what he did a long time ago.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

Of course, I loved this chapter! The characters' dialogue in this story is hilarious! I love the mental image of Bella dancing in her red underwear on Skype for Edward! :)

Author's Response:

I had fun writing it also.  I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Lap Dances & Abstinence

I love the last line spoken by Emmett in this chapter! Father Pat will probably be frightened to christen Emmett and Rosalie's future children. Please update soon!:)

Author's Response:

Father should probably brush up on his exorcism skills because aside from being full of sh*t...Emmett is also full of the devil.  haha  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Pool Tables & Revelations

Well, there are no secrets in the Swan household! Just wait until the Little Mermaid panties are discovered!:)

Author's Response:

that is still to come..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Outtake: Ode to The Arse

Could that photo be of a certain vampire wearing a red swimsuit near a waterfall in Brazil? If so, I completely understand the inspiration! I laughed reading Bella's reaction to the movie's steamy scenes. It makes Bella's embarassing comments about September's End even more funny when she is talking to Edward.

Author's Response:

Exactly the photo I was referring to!    Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out how the golf tournament plays.:)

Author's Response:

let's just hope he doesn't pull a 'braveheart' and flash anyone.... Thanks!

tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

WOW! I just began this story and it is now on my favorites list. I would have reviewed earlier in Chpts. 1-6, but I couldn't stop reading until I reached the end of the most recent chapter!
I like this Bella and how she is making Jasper crazy!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading hun!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh,no! Who are the attackers that are approaching Bella and unconscious Jasper? :)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think Jasper is officially enrolled in Dummies for Vampire Mates! I hope that vampire Bella gets the opportunity to kick Alice's butt six ways into Sunday! :)

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I can't wait to find out what happens when Jasper confronts Jane.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am so impatient for the next chapter. Alice is going to implode when she realizes that Jasper and Bella are truly mated!

Author's Response:

The next chapter is currently in the hands of my beta's. Patience hun! LOL

 

Thanks for reading.

 

T

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am so excited that Bella took matters into her own hands and went after Alice to kick her butt! I laughed when Bella showed Jasper her duct tape. The lighter cracked me up.

Author's Response:

Glad that you liked the duct tape! LOL

 

Thanks for reading hun.

 

T

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow! I hope Jasper gets to rip Edward into pieces and create a mosaic birthday card for Bella before he turns E into ash!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading hun, and that's a great idea!

LOL

 

T

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I loved this chapter. I meant to review, but I was reading on my phone and I did not have a chance to comment. I think Jasper's restoration of Bella's truck spoke volumes of how important Bella is to him. Actions scream so much louder than mere words! Edward is such an ass!

Author's Response:

Thanks for coming back to review hun.

Yeah, Jasper is head over heels for his Bella.

A lot more screaming in the next chapter. lol

 

T

 

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I wish I had a yurt! This is a perfect final "human adventure" for Bella and Jasper before her change. I loved Bella's threat to the tour guide and the older couple's appreciation of Bella's attitude. Thank goodness, Jasper and Bella are communicating about marriage. This should help Bella understand that Jasper's feelings for her are sincere.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I want a yurt just like Esme's too!

Thanks for reading hun. And I'm sure that Bella is gonna get her feelings together soon.

 

T

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

A perfect Valentine's Day chapter!

Author's Response:

I wish I had a naked Jasper to look at the stars with! lOl

 

Thanks for reading hun.

 

T

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I wonder who is about to visit?

Author's Response:

Stay tuned for more! LOL

 

Thanks for reading.

 


T

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I wonder if Bella is the one who kills Aro. Hopefully, Bella will get to kick Edward's butt!

Author's Response:

We shall see!

Thanks for reading.

 

t