Reviews by pamhan123
Saving Her by Annieb Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
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A mysterious new girl comes to Forks High. Edward can't take his eyes off her, Bella can't take her eyes off Edward, and Alice can't see anything. What does this mean for the Cullens and Bella? Set after the Bella's birthday but Edward doesn't leave.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56613 Read Count: 3380
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2012 Updated: 19 Sep 2012
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Absolutely loved this story.  Only just found it today, l8/9/2018.   Is there any chance you will be finishing this?   I know it was written in 2012, but It has a fantastic storyline and I have no imagination myself to finish it in my head.    Please keep writing, you are very, very good.   thanks,   pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113783
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

i am still in there.  love this story and the previous one.   Pls keep writing, I need to know what happens.   love your storylines and your writing style. thanks. Pamela

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Surprise!

love your story.  wld like to read "Tequila Sunrise"  what is ffn ??  have tried a couple of sites to no avail.   wld appreciate yr help.  could you pls email me a few sites.     thanks in anticipation.    Pamela Hanley

pamjhanley@gmail.com



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm sorry, but I thought the abbreviation ffn for www.fanfiction.net was commonly known in the fandom. Shows again how little I know, lol. Anyway the link for Tequila Sunrise is https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8609638/1/Tequila-Sunrise. See you Monday with the update.

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Sequel to She Speaks Fear and Truth. Follow Edward's team, and Bella, the newest ghost-hunting member. With Bella's abilities will it only bring Edward's team to more harm? Their relationship is put to the ultimate test.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 88946 Read Count: 9436
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2014 Updated: 23 Jul 2019
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Case No. 186 Part I

loved your earlier story, thank you.   unfortunately when I tried to read this it was covered in horizontal white liines.   no words to read.    ?? could you please see if this can be rectified.  thank you, Pamela Hanley

Masquerade by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

It's only human that we build our shields up to protect us from those who wish to harm us but soon that shield becomes a mask hiding our scars from the world. If we are lucky though, we'll find the one who will see through the mask and see us for who we are, scars and all. Until then, it's just one big masquerade. 


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18980 Read Count: 4384
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2014 Updated: 04 Dec 2014
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i wrotee in an earlier review for "Regardless"  that I wld read yr other stories.  Well, I was alreaady reading them.    I love this one.    Your storylines are so different and interesting.   Please keep up the good work.   I would love to be advised of any new stories you write.    regards Pamela Hanley

pamhanley@tpg.com.au

Regardless by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
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When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15519
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love this story.   pls keep writing it.  I love the hard Edward.  Will be reading your other storiealso.   keep up the good work.   I like your writing style, it ids easy to understaqnd and follow.   thank you.   Pamela Hanley

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A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601725
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

 am absolutely in love with Edward all over again, and more deeply.   pls keep writin this one, love the storyline.   Pls keep Edward strong.   regards  Pamela

Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Absolutely love this story.   Best storyline I have read yet, and I read a lot.  Pls keep writing.   Not very good at reviewing or suggesting what y shld write.   I just love to read and enjoy.    regards,  Pamela

pamjhanley@gmail.com



Author's Response:

Pamela,

Thank you for your kind words.  It means a lot to know that people enjoy my storyline and that I am doing a good job.  I am new to writing and still feel nervous with every post.  If you are on Facebook please join my group and see what I am thinking about doing next and the fun pictures group memeber post...https://www.facebook.com/groups/heartforwtilight/

Summary: When 16-year-old Anastasia moves across the country to live with the godparents she never knew, the last thing she expected was to fall in love with angry and troubled Christian Grey. The only thing that stands in their way is a male best friend and an older woman who refuses to let go. Ana/Christian story. Forbidden Romance. HEA.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32448 Read Count: 10646
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2015 Updated: 07 Mar 2017
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2016 Title: Moving On (A Fifty Shades Fanfiction)

I LOVE THIS STORY.  WHY PEOPLE HAVE TO COMPLAIN, I DON'T KNOW.   I AGREE WITH  YOU, THEY SHOULD JUST TURN OUT AND NOT READ.   I LOVE THAT YOU INCLUDED EDWARD CULLEN IN THIS MIX.  PLEASE KEEP WRITING FROM YOUR INTERESTING MIND.   tHAT IS THE REASON EVERYONE WHO IS READING THIS, KEEPS ON READING, BECAUSE IT IS YOUR STORY AND WE ENJOY IT.  

i LOVE IT AND AM GLAD YOU HAVE DECIDED TO CONTINUE.   PLEASE KEEP WRITING AND FINISH THIS ONE.  I FOR  ONE ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT.    YOU ARE AN EXCELLENT WRITER.   THANK YOU.   PAMELA HANLEY

PAMJHANLEY@GMAIL.COM

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177659
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Suga Suga

best mafia story ever.  love strong/soft Edward and soft/strong  Bella.   Very original storyline and interesting characters.   pls make this a looooooooooooon story and update as much as possible.   thank you again for so much enjoyment in this reading. regards, Pameal Hanley      pamjhanley@gmail.com

Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Royal Dragon

Absolutely loved this last chapter.   I love every word of this story.   One of the best mobwood stories so far.   Please keep updating and make it a loooooooooooooooog story.    Thank you, Pamela Hanley    pamjhanley@gmail.com

 

 

 

 

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Date: 05 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 down to business

thank you, thank you for this update.    I check every day for an update on this story and was thrilled to receive one today.   I love this storyline, this Edward and this Bella.   This is the best Edward and Bella that I have read -- and I read a lot.   Every day.  Please keep up the good work and more updates if you can find the time.    Regards, Pamela

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Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

As always, a great chapter and great storyline, great writing and exciting to read.  I love this story and I love your writing style.   Never any mistakes in either english or punctuation etc.    I know you are updating as quickly as you can and I appreciate this.   Just please keep it coming until the end, which I hope doesn't come for a looooooong time.

Your Edward is so sexy and strong and just WOW.   Thank you again, Pamela Hanley

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Date: 18 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Bitter!

Hi - just finished my fourth read of your story to date.   Absolutely love it.   I am not going to tell you how I think the story should go, I personally love to wait until I read what you think and how it will go.   I know you like people to tell you how they want it to go etc, but that does 'nt suit me.   I love the imagination of writers.   Have been reading fan fiction stories for years, ever since Twilight came out and this is by far the best story I have read and love.   Maybe its the Edward  personality I love so much, but I also like your Bella.   She is strong and knows her Edward so well, love love love them both.  He is so strong and so "in charge" of everyone and everything he touches.   

Please keep writing this story and a follow-up would be lovely also.   I wish you lots of happiness and good health and please,  keep writing.      Regards Pamela   

pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au 

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 184166
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Absolutely love this story.  Love all mafia type stories.  Find I like this type of Edward best.   Pls update quicker if you can.   I realise how hard it must br to write and live life as well, but it is torture waiting for updates.    Love all your  stories, well written and interesting.   I am not very good at reviewing, I just know what I like.    thank you again.  Pamela Hanley

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Summary: Antique or Ikea, Beautiful inside or out, maim or kill, he had decisions to make today that would change his life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 75 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 214108 Read Count: 157705
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2017 Updated: 27 Oct 2018
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Absolutely love this story.    Not good at reviews.   I don't give advice or complain or ask for anything to be changed.   Trust the author and don't read if you do not like the story.    Again, thanks for making my day.   I love anything mafia inspired.   Pamela

pamjhanley@gmail.com

Summary: It has been two years since they parted but for Anastasia, it is like time froze. She continues to love and miss Christian every day. Finally, she is leaving for College and out of her family’s clutches. Will she find her love again? And what happens if she does? Sequel to The Runaways. Rated M for Drama and Lemons. AU.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4830 Read Count: 854
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2017 Updated: 15 May 2017
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love this story, also the first one.  Was so pleased when this posted.   There has not been any updates for a few months and I was wondering if you are going to keep updating and finish this story.    Please, please keep on with it.  I love your writing and love your Anna and Christian.    Pamela Hanley

Summary:

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Bella is an exotic dancer, and she loves her job. Edward is a millionaire with a savior complex who needs to rescue Bella. She doesn’t want to be rescued, but she does want Edward for the things he does to her body. When she discovers his issues run deeper than she ever thought, will she accept him for what he can offer, or will she walk away? Drabble. Olderward.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25351 Read Count: 79307
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love, love, love this storyline and cavemanward.  He is strong and sexy.  I love that you update regularly, but, could we have longer paragraphs??  I know it is rude of me to ask for that, but I just want more to read.   I am not good at reviewing, as I know most people comment on the storyline and how they would like it to go.   I don't do that.   If I love a story, I just read and read and thoroughly enjoy.   I rely on the author to decide what happens, afterall, it's her or his story.   Again, thank you for a truly enjoyable experience every time you update.    regards, Pamela Hanley



Author's Response:

Thank you for liking it so much! It's short becasue it's a drabble. I'm not great at long chapters at all; my other stories average 1,200-1,500 word chapters. But that's why I'm updating so frequently, to try to give you more overall. 

Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you for responding.   You are the first author who has responded to me and I have been reading fanfiction etc. for over 6 years.   I can definitely manage on 3 updates a week.   Again, thank you for your wonderful imagination.   Pamela



Author's Response:

I know of a few that do, but not many. I always do! <3

Eala by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]
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26167373-10159870349445192-1624629287814295822-nEdward Cullen and Bella Swan have an instant attraction from the first night he walks into her pub. The mob boss and the enforcer's daughter have more in common than they know. Danger is the name of the game, but they must be willing to sacrifice their love for their safety. Will their secrets stay hidden, or will they spill along with their blood?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49457 Read Count: 57010
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2017 Updated: 23 May 2018
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So far, excellent.   Look forward to reading more.   Always a sucker for a good love story with a mobward Edward.      I don't give advice on what to include in a story.   Whatever you write is fine with me,  I would not read a story I did not enjoy and I would never deem know better than the author.     regards, Pamela

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While doing fifteen years for Drug and Gun trafficking a drug lord content with his existence gets a letter from a plain jain book worm not so content with hers. They start as pen pals while he does time, but when Fast Eddie Cullen is released on a technicality. He has two goals, return his empire to what it was, and have Bella by his side. A/H Cannon Lemons Language


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 129260 Read Count: 29732
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2018 Updated: 12 Feb 2018
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thoroughly enjoyed all your stories. Would not attempt to tell you what to write.  If I had your talent, I would write myself.  I don't, so I read all you wonderful people who write for us to enjoy.    Please keep writing and I will keep reading.  Am lousy at reviewing.      Again, thank you.    Pamela Hanley     pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au

Careful Now. by StayingHidden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 77]
Summary:

Bella love her lavish life, but it doesn't all come easy. Not every Swan is pure.

Join Bella and the usual characters as they go about the life that comes with being part of one of the biggest crime families in the United States. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25096 Read Count: 10705
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2019
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

love,love,love this story.   My fav. stories are mafia ones.   please keep writing and update whenever you can.  I appreciate all the work and effort that goes into writing these stories for people like me to enjoy.   Again, thank you for the enjoyment  I receive reading your story.      Pamela  

pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au

Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love mafia stories.   enjoyed your first chapter.  can't wait for the rest. regards pamela

Summary:

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Easy breezy Bella goes to work at The Cullen Conglomerate believing she is there due to her unfortunate circumstances. Everything went according to Edward's plan except one tiny snafu. Both have secrets they must keep. Both must lie in order to keep their relationship. Dishonesty may be what gets them killed. AH HEA.Cannon. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138996 Read Count: 29208
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2018 Updated: 21 Apr 2019
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this story.   Thank you.   Cannot wait for more chapters.    Regards Pamela

pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65883
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love all your stories and have read them all.   Please continue writing, especially this one.  I love Mobward.   Your storyline is especially intriguing.   Look forward to reading more of this story.   regards, Pamela Hanley  pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au

Reviewer: pamhan123 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love all your stories and have read them all.   Please continue writing, especially this one.  I love Mobward.   Your storyline is especially intriguing.   Look forward to reading more of this story.   regards, Pamela Hanley  pamhanley7@optusnet.com.au