Reviews by magick23
Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 122]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141812
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So glad I'm getting to read this story. 2 chapters in, and I'm already hooked.

Summary:

Feeling unsure about her wedding night, Bella Swan seeks out world reknowned sex therapist and hands on instructor Dr. Edward Cullen. Things start to change during the course of their sessions, leaving them both unsettled. OOC/AH/LANGUAGE/LEMONS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18511 Read Count: 10088
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 Oct 2010
Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a great chapter. I like how Edward is always a gentleman, but has done things that don't seem totally professional. Like answering the door in his undies (which I'm sure he looks fuckhot in). I was curious as to what all is under the sink. Is it just bath and body stuff, or more risque things? Can't wait to read more chappys.

Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Please tell me you are more chapters. Love where this story is going.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

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Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Love your story. It made me laugh, almost made cry, and I defintely the sexy times with Daddyward.

Summary:

Bella is popular Edward is not. Let's see what happens, shall we?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12917 Read Count: 6796
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2012 Updated: 09 Sep 2014
Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Edward.

Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What an adorable story. What a creative last chapter lol.

Puzzle of my Heart by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella leads a promiscuous life: no relationships, no last names, no numbers. After meeting a certain green-eyed man, she begins to break her carefully set up rules. In a steamy friendship both their pasts and insecurities will be revealed. Will Bella give in to love? And what will happen when the past catches up to her? A story about lust, love and trust. AH, rated NC-17 for a reason

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122361 Read Count: 106077
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2014
Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Outtake - Photo Session

Amazing chapter, as always. So wicked of you to back track, so your readers have to wait to get to Edward coming back from his trip. Nice touch. Always great to build anticipation.



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I loved this chapter and it was hard for me to take it out of the main story but it slowed the plot down. That's why reading it feels like I'm tracking you back.

Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us

I love your writing, and this story, but this chappy makes me GROWL. Sorry. I will continue to read, becaue I predict E/B will have HEA...eventually.



Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yeah, that chapter was hard to write, too. I had a lump in my throat the whole time. But I'm glad you read on.

Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 33 - A New Beginning

This story was highly recommended on some of the fb fic pages I follow. Glad I finally decided to read it.



Author's Response: Thanks again. I'm also glad you gave it a try. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142597
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Outtake

Cute story, liked it a lot.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Love where this going.

Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Yay Edward! So happy he took over for her toy. Toys are never as good as the real thing.

Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I like dominant Edward. You made him sooo talented and sexy.

Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Very hot desk foreplay

Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

I think Bella is just in denial. She doesn't want to fall for Edward, so she doesn't about it. The fact that she already misses sleeping next to him says something. Plus in her fantasy she wants no barriers, and she wants that fantasy with Edward. He's too perfect not to fall. I love how he always hold her close while she comes down from her orgasms.

Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

OMG...So HOTTT

Summary: Past Featured Story

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She's haunted daily, but learns to deal with her gift, helping those in need. He hides behind his opinions, seeking closure, barely living. When their worlds collide, can they help each other? A story of loss, love, and betryal with a supernatual twist.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43076 Read Count: 10308
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2014 Updated: 04 Jul 2014
Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Not Alone

Great story so far. Glad I started reading it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

The Mother of Books

 

Summary: A/H: Mature: Supernatural/Drama: Canon to a point: Bella and Edward are in training in the School of Alexandria when events that would shape history begin to occur. Esme, The High Priestess and Head of the School takes Bella as her student to train to become the next High Priestess.   

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14741 Read Count: 4602
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2014 Updated: 06 Mar 2015
Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

I like this. I'm interested in paranormal/supernatural things, so this story really fascinates me. Can't wait to see what happens, especially when Edward and Bella meet. I have to wonder if he wasn't the one who took her virginty.

Summary:

Bella works for a wealthy CEO, Edward Cullen, but her first job isn't what she wanted to be when she grew up

 

Author is www.fanfiction.net/u/4985819/bonadea777


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Get Your Southern On Contest
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3336 Read Count: 583
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2014 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: magick23 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love this! The storyline is awesome, and very inventive of Bella to promote her company in her stories.