Reviews by mcanary
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: mcanary Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

This is a fantastic story!!!  So much details and emotions that really brings this story to life.  And the ending wrapped everything up so nicely but still left you wanting more.  I was so disappointed when i went to read this story, which i had saved in my favorites, on another "fanfiction" site, only to see that it had been deleted, then to stumble across it hear just made my day.  I am definitely going to have to check out your other stories.  thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

awww thank you very much.. I am glad you enjoyed it.. yeah I created this site when we were having troubles on FanFiction.net.. it has done okay for itself.. I only created it for rmcrms5 and this story.. when I was writing Volturi Order and knew if they took those off THAT WOULD PROBABLY GET ME BANNED.. but everyone else seems to like it and it has taken off.. So I am glad you have come over and I hope you stick around :) TSO xxx

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752998
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mcanary Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

What a lovely story, it has taken me 3 1/2 days to reach the end and i have enjoyed each and every chapter.  You are a wonderful writer and it is written so eloquentely.  Only thing i would wish for was perhaps a little more...action?  All the build up with the prologue for how Bella's boys would save her and it was over so quick.  Granted there was more than just one type of saving going on, but that is my only wish for this story.  Other than that...WONDERFUL, GREAT, Absolutely readable.  Thank you for sharing.