Reviews by 30olives
I'm A Professional by Tbird1965 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Ray bailed on his client Molly right after meeting her, well after some soul searching and a stern lecture from his pimp, he decides to step and do his job.  Very adult content.


Categories: Hung
Characters: Ray/Molly
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2546 Read Count: 228
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jun 2012
Reviewer: 30olives Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I could use one of those!

Summary: Past Featured Story

My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant

My story has language throughout and some sexual content.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49077
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: 30olives Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Love you, Mean it.

So sweet!

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Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Cranky in Seattle

Anna has learned some skills

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Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Coming Home Early

Sneeky...sneeky Ana!

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Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Yellow Trench Coat

So nice to see a plan well exicuted

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Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: High School Ana

The Green Gealous Giant roars

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: 30olives Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

Love! LOVE this Christian& Anna! The thank you note is hilarious!!!

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Look at how far Ana & Christian have come together. My heart is connected to them.

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Date: 24 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Heart strings are being pulled!

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Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

Maybe Anna can be a volunteer at hospital? Kids, kids, and more kids!

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Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

Ingenious

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Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

Beautifully arranged memories

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
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Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Bird

I like that this is about Edward. He is human, with issues that puts layers to the character

Summary:

She's been trying to hold onto her sacred vow. But will he be the reason she comes undone? 


Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2036 Read Count: 276
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2013 Updated: 30 Mar 2013
Reviewer: 30olives Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Would you like to be my Sandman?

All's Fair by Greytosteele Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 161]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Christian Grey has proven himself in the business world. At thirty-one, he finds himself bored with life. The world of mergers and acquisitions no longer holds the same thrill. He wants more. Frustrated with government red tape and corrupt politicians, he decides to run for the Senate. Enter Anastasia Steele, an up and coming star in the political arena. AU fanfic.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134692 Read Count: 26481
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 10 Mar 2021
Reviewer: 30olives Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Strong hook, line, and sinker to continue reading. I like to see how these powerful positions gets Mr Grey gets himself into!

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Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Interview

The hook is out...the line is cast.....!

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Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Taking Flight and Letting Go

Your style of writing fluid, smooth, easy to read. As the POV's change, I can follow easily. Ana should at least get some back ground on Christian. Fair is fair. They do still want to work together.

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Date: 25 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - She's gone

Relationship development learning! What a concept! ;)
Lemons are fresh but needs more details......*cough* smut.....!

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Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Mending Fences

Defiantly Hearts & Flowers!!!