Reviews by Maggie Kuhn
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624991
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Maggie Kuhn Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Amazing! I love your writing style and can't believe you haven't been published sooner. I hope you are planning on finding a way to put this story to print; your world is too dark and beautiful not to share. I would be honored to follow you as you fulfill your plan to tell the backstory of 'Esme' and 'Renee', as well as any other characters you'd like to tell us about. Only request is that one femme fatale manage to kill her 'trainer' & escape, only to find out how truly encompassing is the program. I think the idea was set here, but one could only actually understand it through living



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind review. TPW took so much out of me I haven't been able to come back to their story. I did write a one shot for Esme though--The Perfect Christmas. 

I have been published since writing this story. You can find both my novels at twcs, amazon & b&n under Michael Schneider. Blind Faith was my first and a stand alone novel. The Darkness of Perfection uses an element of tpw but it is not the same story retold with new names. Assume nothing. There will be a sequel to DOP if I ever finish writing it. Hopefully soon.

 

Thanks again. Mic