Reviews by bnjwl
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366885
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: bnjwl Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: First Date Insanity

“Ali, sometimes, I really want to wrap my hands around your tiny neck and squeeze the shit out of it.”

 


“Somewhere, a pig just took off in flight. Bella freakin’ Swan not being in control of every single detail.”

 

“Fuck your little leprechaun self and the miniature pony you rode in on, Alice Cullen,” I hissed out between my clenched teeth.

 

Those are the funniest lines in the world, and I almost pissed my pants laughing at them.  I will say I gotta be a little angry at you for bringing me down a little with Bella's story, but the bonding was good for her and Edward.  So, all in all I am okay with it.  Scared as hell about Edward's tired thing, tho.  Ain't gonna lie about that, I have to go and read the next chapter so, hopefully, I can see what's going on! 

 

Good job as always 'my honorary' Peaches!

bnjwl 

Reviewer: bnjwl Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island

Okay, so you still didn't cover the whole is he sick or is he not thing and for that I am pissed.  Because I am that kind of person who needs to know, none of this surprise shit!  My heart can't take it, so I want to know, get to telling it, NOW!

 

Other than that I loved it, perfect.

 

bnjwl

Reviewer: bnjwl Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All I Needed

Awwwwwww!  I so loved it, and not just for the Peaches :)  I loved Edward's answers, but now I am dying to know the answers to the questions that everyone skipped.  Perhaps that could be an outtake?  Hellopants got her answers right, I think anyway!

 

I love the sappy romance and hot sexin', but I am so ready to get to the mystery and find out what Bella is keeping from Edward.  Are we close yet?

You know I love you Peaches!  Both of you, great chapter as always!

bnjwl



Author's Response:

Oooh! Skipped answers as an outtake.  I may do that!!  And do each one in that person's POV.  Thanks for the idea!!  I'll give credit if I use it!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

The Cullens left Forks so Edward could persue his dream of being a NASCAR driver. Many years later when Bella unexpectidly shows up in his life, how will they both be affected when they are magnetically drawn to each other and she is only there for one week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9128 Read Count: 1339
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: bnjwl Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved every second!  The two of you should be proud of yourselves, you have given me a new level of hotness.  And right in the middle of the afternoon;)  Good luck, you certainly have my vote! 

 

Mad love to you both, Peaches!

 

bnjwl



Author's Response:

Thanks Peaches!!