Membership status: Member
Bio:
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514864
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4
Good story but I kind of take issue with Carlisle constantly yelling. The kind of Dom who can make thousands per student at a school like this would never have to raise his voice even with the most unruly of trainees. If she had even a submissive bone in her body all he would have to do is use "The tone" of voice that will just make her bend. Don't get me wrong I get that unlike others here she didn't know what she was getting into, because James is a total douchebag and didn't give her a choice. But I take a small bit of offense at howw you are writing these supposidly professional Dominant/submissive trainers. Other then that it is an awesome story that I wish I could actually make myself get into reading, but I just get mad everytime you have Carlisle yell at her.
What if the Cullens made the treaty and then stayed? What if the wolves kept phasing? And what is Bella walking into?
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/OC
Genre: Drama, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 172013 Read Count: 23816
Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
This chapter inparticular reminded me very much of The Midwich Cookoos/The Village of the Damned... like your take on it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review darkmoonsfalcon :)
It is no surprise that it does as that was the germ of my idea in the first place... the otherwordliness of the Cullen's eyes and the idea that maybe they and theirs could be sinister rather than friendly and how would that look.