Reviews by BasiaCullen
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514874
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

I dont know how I should feel about what happened to Laurent. I am intrigued to find out how this plays out for Bella and Victoria and now Heidi and what role Aro plays. I think he is the ring leader of the whole sex slave thing and I think he is going to make James pay for messing with his business. IDK maybe?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303584
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Yeah! Edward and Bella had a date night.

I felt Edward was kind of lost in this story.

I'm happy to see him finally getting some love.

Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 159067
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

“They’re going to be good dads,” whispered Claire. Quil looked away but didn’t say anything. I couldn’t imagine how hard this was for both of them.

“Thank you,” muttered Quil. “I know they can give him what we can’t right now but…”

 My heart broke for Quil in this chap. I cried for him and I cried for Claire. The whole scene was gut wrenchingly, beautifully written. Thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, that was kinda sad but hott at the same time.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I  love each and every chap and cant wait for updates. Love the hotness.

I am however interested in why you introduced a special connection between B/E and also A/J in Lustful Awakings and in earlier chaps of this story. And I only ask this because it seems pairings have mostly been B/J, B/A, E/A with the occasional J/E and J/B/E. To me it reads like in your attempt to spread their love evenly you have done the opposite and just changed the dynamics of the relationships. It seems that A shares a more intimate bond with E through physical acts, parent couplings, and now the birth of their biological child. As is the same with B and J as I am sure Jasper will be the biological father of B's baby. It honestly feels like there is no substance to connect A/J or B/E to each other. I think that part of your story got lost.

I hope that you take no offense to my ramblings as none was intended. I am really fail at reviewing because I never really know what to say but I just noticed a pattern and thought I would bring it up, mostly to get your thoughts on it.

I truly love reading your fics and salivate at updates. Thank you 8>)

 

 



Author's Response:

When I first started with LA, I never expected the story to go the way it did. But one of the things I wanted to show was that even though it started off with more of a E/B and A/J connection, that they love each other equally. I have found it hard to try to balance out the dynamics of their relationships, but I am really trying to show that they have small connections with each other. A and B are not only lovers but best friends as are E and J. E and A do have that connection because they have a bio child together. That doesn't mean that B and J are any less Whitley's parents but their is that connection, just as their will be if B's baby is J's. Does that make since at all?

Anyway, I appreciate the review, and I love, love, love discussing the content of my stories like this so please don't feel like you are offending me by bringing something up.

Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Its nice to see to finally see Alice with both E and J.

I think if already have a third story floating around in head you should go with it. Your characters want to be heard.

A few titles I think of when I think of this foursome and thier future are:      Mutual Awakings, Collective Awakings, United Awakings, Communal Awakings, Shared Awakings,  ect.  See where I'm going with this?

Cant wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Great update. Happy to read about the tender moments between E and B and that your starting to switch up relationships again. I was kind of getting placid about Bella and Jasper in most of last few chapters. I'm glad to see Alice and Edward back in the picture with the two them again.

I was wondering if the injury to Bella's hip is permanent and if so how severe?

Poor Bella when it rains it pours, lucky for her to have those three at her side.

On with the baby shower. Hopefully that will cheer her up.

 Oh, and do you have a name for the baby yet? I dont recall reading about that. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:) No, Bella's injury to her hip is not permanent. She's just had a couple set backs along the way and with the pregnancy, she has to be careful. Yes, I do ahve the baby's names picked out but I haven't mentioned it yet:)

Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

A sexy finish to a sweet story.

Looking foward to EA!

Any plans for a baby with the Swan family name?



Author's Response:

Thank you:) First chapter of EA just went up.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91318
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A sexy start to what looks like another great story.

I love the E&J sexin! Like B says "SO HOT" and the three on one sexin was even hotter!!!

What is the difference in age between Wit and Mac? I too suffer from CRS.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I enjoyed the sexin myself :) There is about nine months or so difference between the girls.

Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I LOVE DADDYWARD!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)