Reviews by LeslieE
Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 101: Epilogue

Great story !    You have done a wonderful  job  with  this  very  serious  storyline .   

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 84

Great  chapter !    I wondered  what  was going  on  with  Jasper  during all of this .   Can't wait  for  the  trial !    Keep  up  the  great  work !  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 86

Poor  man !   Hard to  imagine  what  it  would  be  like  to  deal  with  all of that . ..

Summary: Past Featured Story

A girl, damaged and lost. A boy, scarred and rejected.

 

"You are confined only by the walls you build yourself." Anonymous

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6257 Read Count: 1356
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2015 Updated: 08 Sep 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful  storytelling ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Jenn

Summary: Past Featured Story

lucky Charm

Edward Cullen's mother taught him that storms are beautiful. They make the air feel clean, while the day is refreshed, and it produces some of the loveliest of rainbows. He will find out they can also bring out your Lucky Charm.    

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10815 Read Count: 16688
[Report This] Published: 01 Oct 2015 Updated: 29 Dec 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Aah him she'll come  back  to  him!



Author's Response:

That will be answered soon. Thank you! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Grrrr!  Why would she assume he understood everything?  Why didn't  she  explain it to him ? 



Author's Response:

She is young & inexperienced. Thank you! :)

Under Construction by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 275]
Summary:

Under Construction

 

Bella Swan, a divorced adoption attorney, is relishing her time with her two hot and attentive boyfriends, Edward Masen and Garrett Keyes. Never in her wildest dreams had she ever considered being with two men, let alone two men who adored her as much as they do. Their relationship is perfection. With all new relationships, they are trying to navigate the ins and outs of being together. Their little bubble of sexual exploration is threatened when Bella is sent to New York City for a high profile adoption proceeding.

With a heavy heart, Bella flies out to New York to meet her new clients, close friends of Aro Volturi, her former boss. Carmen and Eleazar D’Amato are finalizing the adoption of a child that they fostered for almost a year and a half, but dealing with them is easy. Running into her ex-husband is not. He manages to appear everywhere once he found out that Bella was in New York. His new marriage has crumbled and his estranged wife has taken their child, hiding him away from James. His job is hanging by a thread and he now blames Bella for everything.

On a whim, Edward and Garrett fly out to New York to surprise Bella. She loses herself with them, but they had an audience. But, who and to what end?

 

Banner by Mina


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33096 Read Count: 45249
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 16 Dec 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

How big  is  the  dog?

Summary:

Edward witnesses his father’s murder and is seen leaving. Bella is tired of being on the receiving end of her husbands’ fists and words. If they want to stay alive, they’ll have to run for their lives…no matter the cost. Inspired by the Three Days Grace song. M for Language and Adult Situations. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26825 Read Count: 5188
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2015 Updated: 13 May 2018
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 7: I'm Gonna Stand By You

Absolutely!  Couldn't  happen  to  a more  deserving  a_____e!  But the other guys are still looking  for Edward, aren't  they ? 

Home to Stay by Sher Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

h2s

Coming home to Forks after being gone four years, everything looks and feels the same. Edward couldn’t wait to see the love of his life, Bella. She’s the one he left behind, but, first, his attention is captured by a young girl that looks just like him, and the woman with her is just who he came to see. Could the little girl be his?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74811 Read Count: 35754
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2015 Updated: 30 Dec 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Can we say  ,  "Pregnant  "?

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good start!  Look forward to future chapters.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very cute  story  so far  

Keep  up  the  great  work  

Deprivation by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is deprived of Intimacy and Bella something far more private  can fate bring them together or not ?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160365 Read Count: 98047
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Cool!  Great addition!



Author's Response:

Thank you so glad you enjoyed it x

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

This story has really been great. Look forward to sequel!



Author's Response:

Thank you Im so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Yes, there's nothing like Emmett's "extensive knowledge of the female species," is there?  Really like this story.



Author's Response:

Yes it's quite frightening thinking your leaving it to Emmett to sort out .

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Very interesting  and  well-written .   Look forward to  future  chapters . 



Author's Response:

Thank you I hope your enjoying the story

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Great  chapter !  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much x

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Ohhhh  boy, I  can't  wait  for  this  scene !   It is going to  be  a  riot!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Kiss him, you fool!



Author's Response:

Oh she will and the results are hopfeully what you are all a waiting for x

Summary:

cv

 

Summary: Edward Cullen moves home after the mother of his son leaves them. Meeting Dr. Swan is a bit of a shock, because she's not who he was expecting. Edward learns from the new doctor and she enlists his help in starting an informational blog. Charlie's Voice and little Charlie himself bring these two closer than either of them bargained for.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26109 Read Count: 7111
[Report This] Published: 02 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 Erykah good story !   Keep  up  the  great  work !  

Summary:

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What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 173762 Read Count: 87033
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2015 Updated: 06 Nov 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 25: 24:Bad father examples

Much  better  detail  than  the  original  version .    Good  job ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 18: 17: Wedding gifts

Excellent  job , 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 24: 23: Two against One

Good  work on this rewrite    I  am  sure the  next  part  will  be  challenging .   Keep  up  the  great  work !  

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Summary: Edward adopts jennifer and decides to move back home for a new start and family support. He soon after meets his sister's friend Bella who lives by the beat of her own drum. Even though the whole town seems to dislike her, Alice swears she is a great friend. So many questions to be answered so read and found out.

Banner by: Canadiantwilight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63750 Read Count: 54495
[Report This] Published: 14 Nov 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow!  This  storyline  just  keepso getting  better and  better ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter!  Esme seems like an epic bitch.  Poor Jenny 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Suspected something like this.  Curious to know what happened to make her so bitter and angry.  Probaby to do with Renee since she reacts so badly to Esme.  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It was Alice, obviously.  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the sound of this so far.  Interesting prenise.  Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Obviously  you  will  be  telling  us what  is going on between  Bella  and Esme, because that was a strange interaction to  happen  in front of someone  who just  got  there ,   like  Edward and Jennifer .   Look forward  to  your explanation .   Keep up the  great  work ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I have  a  feeling  that  Bella  is not  exactly  what  Esme thinks  she  is .   And Tanya  is the  teacher ?   Bad sign!  Great storyline  so far.  Love the inclusion  of  the  horses.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow!  Very  good  writing  job .    I think  it  is  going  to  take  some  work  to  get  through  to her .  She is pretty  damaged .

Blood and Water by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

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Red Eyed Edward Contest 2 award winner! Edward Masen, an aid worker in Bangladesh, is abducted into a nightmare. Can anyone save him?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6577 Read Count: 126
[Report This] Published: 16 Nov 2015 Updated: 16 Nov 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good story!



Author's Response:

Thank you! And thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Summary:

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Changes occur in your life every day. No one knows that better than Bella. Her life will be forever changed after today. They all will. Warning - this story is about 9/11 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 34421 Read Count: 32844
[Report This] Published: 29 Nov 2015 Updated: 11 Dec 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Love this story!  Take care of yourself.  I have a good friend with fibro and I have severe arthritis, so I understand your limitations.  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. It's difficult on good days. 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Welcome  back ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

So sweet!  This is a great story!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Good chapter !    I suppose  I  should  now go out and replace my  smoke  detector!

Summary: Past Featured Story

SYTYCD

 

The competition is fierce. Dreams are at stake and a budding romance between All-Star, Edward and contestant, Bella are the talk to of the competition. Not to mention jealousy and bitterness from fellow contestants. Will Bella's dream become a reality or will her dreams be dashed before she even gets a chance to compete? Will Edward open his heart to the sweet brunette who captured his attention at the auditions?

 

"And America's Favorite Dancer is..."

 

 

Banner by the talented Mina Rivera

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ON HIATUS


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209773 Read Count: 45853
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2015 Updated: 30 Nov 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Someone to Watch over Me

Good  chapter !  

Summary: Past Featured Story

ship

 

Hedge fund manager Edward Cullen didn't make the Forbes list this year and thinks he's a failure, just like his father and teachers in small-town Forks always told him. Only one person ever believed in him, but he left her behind to chase his fortune in New York City. Can a longtime Seattle holiday tradition bring magic and love back to his life? AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador, who also made the banner. **TOP TEN COMPLETED FICS OF DEC 2015 on TwiFanfictionRecs **

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9047 Read Count: 5238
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2015 Updated: 29 Dec 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Internship for a seventh -grader?  Methinks  Dr. Cullen is a mite pushy!

Tie the Knot by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 372]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Banner made by heartfortwilight

 

 

 


Statistics say arranged marriages have a better chance at lasting. Is that still true if the couple is chosen by a group of experts and married on TV with at least one partner in it for the wrong reasons?

 


A lost bet, the promise of money and a stranger for a bride. Will confirmed bachelor Edward Masen find a match made in heaven or hell?

 


~Inspired by the show Married at First Sight~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117195 Read Count: 55452
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 10 May 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Truth or Dare

This  certainly  doesn't  bode well  for  Edward's ability  to  make  this  work .    Is he really  that immature  and inconsiderate ?   I think  I  would  have  started  divorce  proceedings  by now!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. If they'd start divorcing now, they'd breach their contract. Edward wouldn't get his money and Bella would have to admit defeat. Now, they'll see it through until the bitter end. But things will change next chapter. See you Monday.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Off On The Wrong Foot

I think she needs to let up on him a little.  She DID know what she was getting into when she agreed to marry him.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. She knew she was marrying a stranger, but she couldn't know what he'd be like and there were no requirements about sex or kissing. I promise they'll eventually find some middle ground, but it'll take time. See you Monday with the next update.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Slow and Steady ... Wins the Date

Enjoy  your  trip!



Author's Response: Thanks. I did. But now I'm back and working on the next chapters. See you Monday.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Would You Rather

Loved  the  kitchen  shenanigans !   Keep  up  the  great  work !  



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. Many readers were a little grossed out by the restaurant sex, lol. I'm glad you liked it. See you Monday with the next update.

Restoration by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 372]
Summary:

Restoration

Fear and close-mindedness broke them apart. Will love bring them back together? Will their faith in love be restored? The third installment in the Renovations Trilogy.

Banner by Mina Rivera!


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49186 Read Count: 43911
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2015 Updated: 10 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yay for Marcus giving some good sensible advive!  Love this story!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yay!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Going now!

Love  this  story ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

very sweet.  this is the best Garret I've ever read (picturing Stephen doesn't hurt, either).

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yay!  Reunited, and it feels so gooooood....

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yay!  Finally!  Great  job  on the  proposal  scene !   Gotta  be a first ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OK!  Time to get  two  of  these  three  back together  again ! 

Blood Master by Wonwordful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner

Banner by IpsitaC77

Beta: EdwardsFirstKiss

COMPLETE. When Bella asked the ruby-eyed vampire to end her life, she never expected him to 'kidnap' her instead. Who is he, and where is he taking her? A crazy adventure begins, unravelling unprecedented secrets. World travel. AU/OOC. NC17 for strong language, some violence and mild BDSM.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131671 Read Count: 94015
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2015 Updated: 23 Jan 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum

This  has  been  a  fascinating  story.  You did a great  job  !    I  look  forward  to  future  endeavors!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much Leslie! <3

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 - An Unravelling

I love this story!  Your storyline is fascinating and so different.  Very creative!



Author's Response:

Thank you Leslie! It means so much to me to hear that! :) I hope you'll keep enjoying the story!

Lots of love,

Ara

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24 - Welcome

Holy Moley!  What a wonderful  job  you  did  describing  this  scene!  Great  work ! 



Author's Response:

Hi Leslie,

Thank you so much for your encouraging review! It made my day :-D I'm so thrilled to know that you enjoyed it!

Love,

Ara

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 36 - Two Covens

This  has been   a great  story  with a fascinating  bunch  of  twists !   You have  done  a  great  job  with  it !    Not  being  of the  "baby" persuasion ,  I   would  love  to  see  further  details  about  Edward  and Bella's  life tho ether down the road!  Keep  up  the  great  work !  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words Leslie! I'll keep your request in mind :)) If I manage to write them I'll definitely post them! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10 - Two Histories

This  is  turning  out  to  be  a  very  good  story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Leslie! I really appreciate your support, also on FFn :)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 35 - The Aftermath

Great  chapter !    Keep  up  the  great  work !  



Author's Response:

Thanks Leslie! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks Leslie! :D

Summary:

cmh

 

Edward has been trying to pick up the pieces of his shattered life since Bella left, albeit unsuccessfully. Upon Bella's return to Forkchaun, she hasn't had much luck moving forward either. Will Edward go chasing his 'Lucky Charm' or will he accept she's gone for good?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8997 Read Count: 5170
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 2016 Updated: 03 Jul 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hope  you  are  doing  a  little  better .    This  is  a  cute  story . 

Summary:

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My name is Bella Swan. I'm 32 and still single. While all my friends have settled down and started their families, I'm still hanging around, looking for Mr. Right. I blame books; they've ruined me and gave me unrealistically high expectations of what my perfect man should be like. How am I supposed to settle down when no one I meet matches up to my book boyfriends?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40245 Read Count: 114931
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2016 Updated: 22 Mar 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Very  sweet . 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Uh-oh.  The bastarday is really  playing  hardball now!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Wondered wnhy she didn't call Charlie.  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Wonderful!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Ouch!  Wasn't  expecting  that .   Is this the end forthem?



Author's Response:

Hi! I just want to say thank you for reading and reviewing High Expectations! I appreciate your support xx

Summary:

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The Chicago Fire of 1871, also called the Great Chicago Fire, burned from October 8 to October 10, 1871, and destroyed thousands of buildings, killed an estimated 300 people and caused an estimated 200 million in damages. Can the love of one couple survive the fire or will it be destroyed along with everything else?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18171 Read Count: 7833
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2016 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is excellent so far!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, good!  Excellent  story  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Lovely  story  so far ! 

Summary:

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In her eyes, she was nothing; in mine, she was everything … the only thing missing was her smile. Canon Couples. All Human. Rated for language. Written for FAGE 008 for cruiz107

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6294 Read Count: 8473
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2016 Updated: 15 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue: Smiling Beauty

Very good story!

Summary:

bayou

Former FBI Special Agent Edward Cullen along former LAPD Homicide Detective and his-now-wife Bella Swan-Cullen; Hoodoo Man Sam Uley and his wife Angela Uley, who is a very powerful psychic; former Chicago Police Captain Emmett Cullen and his wife Lauren Cullen, also a very powerful psychic and sister to Angela Uley, have formed a detective agency, The Down on the Bayou Detective Agency.  Come along with them as they investigate the normal, strange and unusual in their files.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31867 Read Count: 13894
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2016 Updated: 17 Jul 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Case File #16 - "Un vampir de energie" Continued

Good story so far. Seems I'll have to go back and read the first one.



Author's Response:

Yes that would be best.  If you'd like to have the first two stories I have pdfs.  Those can be gotten on my Facebook page Dinia Steel Fan Fiction.  Those pdfs contain pictures used during the writing of the story.  :)

Hope you can contunue to enjoy the story.

Look forward to your next comments.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Respite

Interesting ending, but  why did  it  take  a half hour before  Bella and  the  others  met Edward  in the lobby ?   Did  we miss  something ? 



Author's Response:

Sorry you found the 30 minutes confusing.  I felt it would obvious that everyone but Edward was delivering the report the Director was wanting.  I hope you have enjoyed the rest and will stay tuned for the next Case File.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19-An ending. A beginning

Ooh ,  this  sounds  like  a  good  one !   Keep  up  the  great  work !  



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm very pleased you're enjoying this!

See you next chapter. 

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Summary: Past Featured Story

nuight

Megalopyge opercularis. A really cute marvel of nature, which in its wisdom made such a venomous creature come in a rather small package. Until man messed with nature. Now the tiny town of Micanopy is at fate's mercy. Remember, don't touch the puss, it's dangerous.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59771 Read Count: 4917
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2016 Updated: 31 Mar 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Yes, it really is  a  lovely  small  town .  Full of old houses  and  antique  shops  and  not much else  but trees.



Author's Response:

One day I'll go and visit :)

Thanks :)

Mate by she_viking Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

mate

“His gaze travels up and down my body, and I watch as he palms himself through his jeans, almost as if he’s unaware of it, but I can tell he’s straining against the button fly. Then, he leans over me again, and this time I don’t shut my eyes.

 

“Mate.”

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15277 Read Count: 8394
[Report This] Published: 05 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Feb 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good !

Wanted by fyrebyrd89 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 217]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Wanted

When outlaw Edward Cullen is wounded in a gunfight, he never expected to wake up with a double barrel shotgun nestled under his chin.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Western
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7527 Read Count: 20656
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2016 Updated: 10 Mar 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 12 May 2016 Title: Wanted

So now we got "The Cullen Gang,"  I suppose?  Not a bad title!  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Not a bad title at all! Now this gang has a journey to make and meybe someone has some deeper thoughts. Thanks so much! See ya next week :)

Fyre

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2016 Title: Wanted

Like this, though  not  too  sure  about  the  language . Will give  you  the  benefit  of  the  doubt ,  however .  



Author's Response:

Yeah the language is something to adjust to, i understand oif you can't get into it. Thanks for giving it a shot though :)

fyre

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2016 Title: Wanted

Very  good  chapter !  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2016 Title: Wanted

Goody, goody, goody!  Really like this story and am glad that these characters have more to say.  I'll be waitting!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! I'm fixing to post the next chapter now, a day late, sorry! See you soon :)

Fyre

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Wanted

Very  good  story .   Great  job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Fyre

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 134997
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 28 May 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Great  job!  Hopefully  Emmett 's punishment  will  continue  for  an extended  period ,  as he so rightly  deserves ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 06 May 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great  chapter !  Can't  wait  for  Emmett  to  get  his comeuppance !  Should  be  a long  prison  term  just  for  selling  the  house  four times, not  to  mention  all  the  other  activities !   So  glad  Jack and Jill finally  found  each  other . 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Sounds  like  Rose  is as whacky  as Emmett is in this case!  I wasn't  expecting  that  one!  Waiting  for them to start realizing  who the other is.  Yellow  glasses would  not keep  me from recognizing  Rob if he was  my  doctor ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That's  certainly  enough  to make  her get  sick  again !   But I really like this  story !  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This  is  a  very  clever  storyline .  Keep  up  the  great  work !  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Emmett  is obviously  having  a  grand  time  coming  in and  out  of  her house, but they should realize one thing--there are no native WHITE rats in this country ,  so the rat in  the  kitchen  had to come  from  a  pet store and be placed there deliberately   (former  zookeeper  here  ).

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love  to know  what  kind of  evidence  they  had to claim  the  babies  were  his and  who faked that  for  them!    If he really  dosed Rosalie  he should  be  charged  with  murder !   They  should  also file a civil  suit for  her medical  bills  for the  premature  labor and  NICU care.  Great  story ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 May 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great  chapter !  You  have  done  a great  job  with  this story  so  far , and I  am sure  any epilogue  you  write  will  be  excellent .   

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177627
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Not baad at all!  I. Don't normally read mob stories, but this one sounds interesting.  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - no trucking way

  • Great  chapter !  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - New York New York

I  love this  pair  -- they are really a hoot  to read about!  Great  job!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 chink in my armour

A little  more  stupid  than brave  if you  ask  me ! 

Summary:

dog

 

This is a story of how one dog's wire addictions brings about the love of a lifetime

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1641 Read Count: 1260
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2016 Updated: 03 Mar 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute story.  Would definitely like more.



Author's Response:

Thank You! There will be at least another chapter as for when I have no idea. I do have a WIP that I would llike to get finished up as well as another two more chapters for Kiss Cam more then likely. Plus these two and Mysti and Levi haven't been talking to me to get anything down in regards to them.

Awakening by Ren68 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Book 4

Life isn't always what it seems, something I had learned in the past few years. Thinking life was cut and dry... turns out, it wasn't. Astonishing me was the twist and turns life takes, unexpectedly.  

Edward Cullen  

 

This book is were I go off the rails from Twilight. This is the book I was disappointed with when I read the series and also the one that forced me to write the story in the first place.

I warn all who read, I will not follow BD, this is the story as I saw it happen. Some may like it. Some may not, but this is what starting me on my journey of writing and I wouldn't have it any other way. At the present time I have four chapters of this story written and will try my hardest to keep at it and finish it within a reasonable time frame.

Hope you enjoy!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12079 Read Count: 542
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2016 Updated: 01 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Wedding

Wow!  See what  you  meant  about  going  off  the  rails!  Never expected that.  But look forward  to  seeing  your  own  take



Author's Response:

Hope my take isn't disappointing. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 PRELUDE TO A WEDDING

This is very good so far.  Keep up the great work.  Look forward to future chapters.




Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I hope I don't disappoint.

Southpaw by SouthrnContest Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A friendship on a precipice, divided by time and sprawling state lines. Bella travels to southern Louisiana to find what has been missing and in the process, is swept away by the mysterious baseball player who encompasses everything she thought she knew about the concept of ‘home’.

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4589 Read Count: 366
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2016 Updated: 18 Mar 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good!

Summary:

Life of a high school teacher is never boring. At least that’s what she thought until he came along. He made her question everything. A revision in the curriculum was in order. CharmingWard and TeacherElla. All Human. Rated for language and adult situations.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20882 Read Count: 17417
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter-10: Swiss Heart

I think  I  would  have  done  the  exact  same  thing ! 

Summary:

BANNER

Isabella's parents were murdered. Her sister betrayed her and her marriage is on the rocks. Things couldn't get any worse, right? Bratella Mobward - PART TWO - The Ties That Bind


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26487 Read Count: 57115
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2016 Updated: 11 Sep 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

She is  one stupid  gigt!!  She needs  to  grow  up  and  fast!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I  think  I  would  have  fainted, too!  Keep  up  the  great  work ! 

Summary:

LMDC

 

They met at Emerson University, fell in love and began their journey. Four years after the release of their first single, Edward and Bella Cullen are still going strong and happy with their lives. Breaking Midnight, the band that had brought them together is on top of the music charts, winning numerous accolades and awards.

Nothing can stop them.

Or so it would seem …

Ghosts from their past rear their ugly heads and will it be too much for this couple? Will their fairy tale happily ever after crumble? Only time will tell, but one thing is steadfast...

Sequel to La Cantante

Banner by Clo Rodeffer

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 208407 Read Count: 33672
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2016 Updated: 30 Jul 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Absolutely  wonderful  story, all the  way  from  the  first story through this one!  I can tell that  this  is VERY   close to your heart .  Great work!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: And the Grammy Goes to ...

Yay!  So glad this finally debuted.  Four years?  I must have read it on repost, then. I am awfully late to fanfiction, though.  But I loved. La Cantante.  Great start!  Emmett's ass is grass!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Beantown

Very good. Chapter!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: ... Two Steps Back

Love this  story !    I think  it  is  James ,  by the way, there  is  no  "s" in   "Madison  Square  Garden ."  There  is  only one  Garden .    Keep  up  the  great  work !  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Interview with a Pair of Rock Stars

Great chapter !    But why does the main panel for the story  say, "on hiatus  "?



Author's Response:

Thanks for pointing that out. I thought I'd gotten all of them. It's no longer 'on hiatus.' :-)

Danger In New York by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 536]
Summary: Past Featured Story

danger

 

A Corrupt district attorney and his daughter who pays the ultimate price for her father's betrayal. Two brothers at war and a family divided.

Twins Edward/Anthony. Mature content, mention of rape, abuse, drug use, prostitution, human trafficking, crime.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90965 Read Count: 84407
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

OK, glad  you  put  that  "maybe  " in there ,  because  now  I  want  to  know  more ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Esme is right !   A whole  family  of idiots !