Reviews by LeslieE
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1081949
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

Finally!  Yay!  Great job as usual.  really loving this story!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Oh, this one made me cry.  She doesn't know how to deal with this, and I don't blame her.  There has got to be a way to connect thisto James and Renee!  Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Oh-oh!  Things don't sound good for him. Ewww!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Hang in there!  We're still with ya!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 02 May 2015 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Welcome back!  Good chapter.  Time to getthese two back together again.

Summary:

lwoc

Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66591
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I wondered  what  happened  to  this  story .   Glad  you  are  back ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Emo is putting it mildly!  Oy vey!  Wedding will probably be a disaster!  Looking forward to it!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Good.  Glad you are sticking with this one.

Summary:

Dove medium

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Are you trying to be funny, Alice? I wanted to kill her." Strawberry. Lavender. Freesia. The earth after it rains. Ambrosia. The blood the blood the blood the blood the blood... 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 348935 Read Count: 33097
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2011 Updated: 26 Feb 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48: Fogbow

I don't  know  how  I missed  this story but   I  have  now read it  from the  beginning  and it is  superb.  I  think I   was initially  misled by the summary and didn't  realize  that  you  were  basically  retelling  the entire  Twilight  saga with a lot more interesting  details and explanation  of  Edward'a character  and thought  processes .    I love it.  You have done  a  fabulous  job so far .    I  also see from  your  author notes that you have already continued this saga in other stories, so I  guess I  need to find  your  website and  read the others.  Keep  up  the  great  work ! 



Author's Response:

Sorry I didn't respond sooner. Joys of email.

Thanks so much for your praise. Yes, I have a whole bunch of stories in this series. Almost all of them are on TWCS, but the remainder are posted on FFN. I normally post everything here but I haven't had time, so I hope you'll catch up with me eventually.

Happy reading!

Make Haste My Beloved by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

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Make Haste, My Beloved Book 7 in the 'Unforeseen Events' Series. If you have not read 'I Hunger for Your Touch' (Book 6), you won't understand this. Please read it first. You may start at Book 6 and follow this story without difficulty. Rated NC-17 for lemons (including some of other flavours than vanilla), coarse language, violence, occasional brutality, and adult situations.

 

Special thanks to my new team of Betas: 2old2care, Room340C, and prettyflour

And to Raum (Banner Maker).

 

To my readers: love.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 211199 Read Count: 4662
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 18 Dec 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Halloween II

Really  like  this  story  so far !  Need  to  go back  and  read the  first installment . 

Star Crossed by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 418]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She was the leader of her people. 

He was a gruff, by-the-book star ship captain. 

An interstellar war, negotiations for a peace treaty gone wrong and a taboo relationship between two species. 

Captain Edward Cullen was in charge of the starship, Volvo. He, along with his crew, were given a mission to deliver Empress Nirabelle of the Cygnarian people to the nearby planet of Lapus, to negotiate a treaty between their two worlds. For over a millennia, they have been fighting a vicious battle. For what? They don’t even know. It’s ingrained in their minds and their history. 

The Empress is to meet with the Crown Prince of Lapus, Jakob. The Volvo is transporting her and her envoy, Maralice to the planet. There are strict rules in place for the Empress’s transport. She is to not have any contact with any males on the ship, per the cultural norms of Cygnarian society. The trip should take as little time as possible and if no headway has been made within one day of being in orbit, Captain Cullen is to transport the Empress from the planet’s surface. 

However, something goes terribly wrong on Lapus. One communication to the Volvo and a brief face-to-face conversation forever changes the future of the Empress and Captain Cullen. 

Will they survive this threat or are the Star Crossed lovers doomed before they even have a chance?

SC

Banner by Chandrakanta!!

 

Star Crossed

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Banner created by Mina Rivera! Thank you!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206436 Read Count: 82045
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wonderful chapter.  So glad you were able to return to this after all your trauma with your mother .   Just lost  my husband so I understand.  Anyway ,  sorry to lose N'essie--I thought she was an interesting  character  

Look forward to future chaps now that you are back . 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oooh!  Pictures of the execution?  With spurting blood?  Just like Game of Thrones?  Kidding!  This is a great story.  Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter, even with the cliffie!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter!  Hang in we're still with you.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter !    I know  it must  be  difficult  to  write  a  battle  scene  like  that ,  but  you  did  a great  job  with  it .  Keep  up the  great  work !  

Summary:

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Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yes--go back to LA unless Mom is going to get involved and put a muzzle on Rose.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Very good!  I have to wonder if T really does have something on Rose to make her keep acting like that.  Look forward to nex t chapter.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

She's  a  bitch.  Not fooled at all.  Glad you'really back!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Twenty five years ago the quiet town of Forks witnessed the massacre of the Cullen's cult. Now the FBI has a new lead, and rookie agent Isabella Swan comes to investigate. What will she find?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46161 Read Count: 21802
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2014 Updated: 24 Feb 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Yeah, I would have hit him, too.  Harder.



Author's Response:

Hi!

I want to thank you for your patience, I owe you the answer to another review :( But about this chapter, well the line to kick Jacob's ass is on the left :)

May

 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This could probably be an interesting story; the premise is good.  But please proofread better or get a beta--the grammatical errors and misused words make thestory hard to read.



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving me your opinion. I'm really trying, and I hope you'll notice the difference in the next chapters. I don't like to make excuses but please, consider english it's not my first language and the girl who promised to beta for me just dropped me before giving me her input. I'll look for another one. 

:) May

Murder in Forkshire by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary:

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England, 1926. Edward just came back after his father's death. Isabella Higginbotham just finished her education. Both came back to the little town of Forkshire to begin what they consider will be a boring life, or so they believe...


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31537 Read Count: 9580
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2014 Updated: 16 Jan 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love the story, but you could really use a proofreader.  Please consider it.  Incorrect word usage, misspelled words and incomplete sentences make a story hard to read and enjoy.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like the premise and the story so far.  Pleaseconsider getting a beta or a helper for the grammar; the grammatical errors arevery distracting.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I'm working with someone, I hope the next chapters will get better. :)

Summary:

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When an amazing opportunity finally comes up to have everything they want, will they take it? Can they remain professional for the sake of success? Celebrating never felt so good.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56096 Read Count: 22641
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2014 Updated: 28 Aug 2018
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ Opportunity Knocking

I really like this!

Summary:

He knew she wasn't his type, but he can't shake her.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2196 Read Count: 415
[Report This] Published: 31 Aug 2014 Updated: 31 Aug 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice story!  Good writing job!

Summary:

I was content in the limelight until a coffee girl flipped my world upside down. Titles like 'Academy Award Winner' and the 'People's Choice' used to mean everything, but it's my newest title that I cherish the most...the Hollywood Dad.

 

*The True Confessions of a Coffee Girl Sequel*

 

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*Banner by Mina*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52074 Read Count: 39331
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2014 Updated: 13 Jun 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen

Great story so far.  I love these two!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight

Wow!  Only way he could treat her!  Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven

Wow,  GREAT JOB! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen

Very sweet!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty

I think they should sue Alice for the hospital bill amount!

Summary:

It's a combination of flash fics for the Twilight25 Challenge, Round-9. There is going to be 25 flash fics all having the same main character - Edward Cullen.

 

All chapters will be independent flash fics.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13562 Read Count: 7316
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2014 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Ancient

Like the start of this one!



Author's Response:

Thanks and thank you for reviewing.

The next flash is coming up soon. ;)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter-8: Disheveled

Definitely light and fluffy.  I like a little more meat!



Author's Response:

Lol. Whether you intended the 'meat' to be a pun or not, I'm taking it as that. ;)

Thank you for reviewing.

I'm glad you're enjoying this.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter-11: Forbidden

Cute!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Thank you for reviewing.

I'm glad you're enjoying these little flashes. 

The next flash will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter-5: Covert

Ooh, yeah!  This would makea good longer story.



Author's Response:

Hmm ... I'll see what I can cook up in long distant future. ;)

If you're interested in an action-packed story, try my other WIP, The Perfect Light. :D

Thank you for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter-7: Desecrate

This has good potential for alonger story!



Author's Response:

Thanks. :D

For now, it'll remain a flash, until I finish my current WIP. But after that, who knows when inspiration might knock my socks off? ;)

Thank you for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter-4: Complications

Nice one!



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Thank you for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter-12: Forgotten

Nice shortie!



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter-13: Hunger

Sweet one!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'm hoping you're enjoying these little flashes. :D

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter-19: Pristine

No, sorry, don, care for this one.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter-20: Serendipity

OK, this one was just lovely!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter-24: Waffle

Nice one!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter-25: Worthless

Like this one--very good potential for further development.

You have done a goid job on all of these.  Congratilations!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Going for a swim and then walking into the wrong shower sets up for an interesting start for our favourite couple. One-shot.

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5644 Read Count: 1843
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2014 Updated: 10 Sep 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good and clever!

Getting Blitzed by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

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The continuing adventures of Cockyback and Reed Girl. College is over and real life awaits. How will they handle the ups and downs thrown their way as Edward enters the NFL and Bella approaches graduation? Rated R for Rainbow. Sequel to Sideline Collision

 

Accidentally deleted and reposted on 2/7/16


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 299975 Read Count: 38949
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 08 Feb 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Perfect ending, except no RAINBOW ! !!!!



Author's Response:

haha TY!  Didn't make sense for them to haul her down :)

Montana Rose by jkazzie Rated: T [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Post Shadow Kissed. Rose Hathaway's life changed forever that day in the caves when the Vampire Academy guardians launched a rescue mission. No one expected what actually happened, least of all Dimitri Belikov. He thought his life was over, and Rose's life was changed forever. Four years later, the two lovers get a second chance when they are reunited. Vampire/Human. OOC.


Categories: Vampire Academy
Characters: Dimitri Belikov/Rose Hathaway
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1751 Read Count: 65
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2014 Updated: 15 Sep 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Waiting

Hey, how can you start a .new storywhen you have not finished my favorite, "Wrecked with Bella"?

Summary:

Lady Isabella Swan finds herself in an impossible situation after the death of her father, Charles. With the estate in desperate need of repair, will an arrangement made with the wealthy Edward Cullen provide a solution to Isabella's money worries or create more anguish and heartache for our heroine?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9048 Read Count: 5838
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2014 Updated: 22 Sep 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like this so far.  Interested to see  where you go with it.  Looking forward to lemonade!



Author's Response:

Hi LesieE,

 

Lemonade in abundance soon.

Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review.

 

LD

Summary:

lci

 

Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192167
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Welcome  back !   This story  is  really  something  else ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Very hot!  I m really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow!  Very hot!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OK, this is really interesting and good so far.  I am looking forward to where you can go with this!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun. I hope you continue to enjoy it :)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I really like this so far!  I did not read the first version, so it is all new to me.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Don't worry, the chapter was great even without the pics.  Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow!  Hot!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Oh, I think that would be lovely, especially with the pictures.  This story is a joy!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Welcome  back !    Very good  chapter .    I wondered what  happened  to  this  story . 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A/U AH - Three Witch sisters move from Salem, MA to Houston TX where they rent to own the ancestral home of one Edward Cullen. For some reason Edward has a dream about a dark haired beauty that he has yet to meet. Does Bella already have Edward under her spell? What mayhem will the Witch Sisters bring into the lives of Edward, his family and his friends?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47434 Read Count: 30293
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very interesting so far!  I like it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Have you joined the Facebook page for this story?  Lots of pictures of things relating to chapters there.

See you next chapters

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Planning

Absolutely.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Very interesting so far!  Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like this so far.  Keep up the great work!

Summary:

New probee officer Bella Swan is put on the Molten, Washington Detective squad. Once her probation period is over she gets assigned to pull duty with the narcotics squad. Will her direct supervisor Edward Cullen treat her like all other detectives, or will she have a lot to prove? What kind of trouble will happen when Edward's own life is in her hands. All Human.

BANNER BY: CaiteexxGraphics


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20896 Read Count: 44718
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Better and better!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Cute ending!

Summary: Past Featured Story

The Mother of Books

 

Summary: A/H: Mature: Supernatural/Drama: Canon to a point: Bella and Edward are in training in the School of Alexandria when events that would shape history begin to occur. Esme, The High Priestess and Head of the School takes Bella as her student to train to become the next High Priestess.   

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14741 Read Count: 4602
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2014 Updated: 06 Mar 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Arrival

Great and fascinating story!  Love how you worked in the actual history.  Look forward to possible future story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Hopefully I'll be able to do that in the near future.  Mean while I have a pdf with some pitures if you'd like to have that email me at gardiniasteel@gmail.com

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Warning and Betrayal

Wonderful Renee!  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your time and reveiw of my story.  When you said, "Wonderful Renee"  I'm not sure what you meant.

I look forward to hearing more from you.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Prologue

Oh,  I really like the start of this!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Would love to have you continue Bella and Edward's story.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I have hopes of comeing up with another 10 chapters in their journey, but at this point, I can't promise.  The characters have shut up for now, and let's face it, I'm just the typist.  :D 

I'm very happy that you've enjoyed the story.  If I do get more chapters, I'll post to this story line.  

Thanks again.

Hard Hugs

dinia

Summer Storm by cathyL Rated: NC-17 starstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A story about two young people desperately in love with each other but deeply insecure. They let their insecurities take over and end up separated. 18 years later the past starts unravelling and a storm of emotions, past lies and untold truths blows through their lives and the lives of the ones close to them.

 


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Alternate Universe
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14170 Read Count: 1068
[Report This] Published: 10 Nov 2014 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 The wind of change

Interesting start!  Keep up the good work.  Curious to see where you take this.



Author's Response:

Hi Leslie, 

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Cathy

Regardless by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

 

When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15519
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Doesn't there have to be some sort of a ceremony officiated by someone to complete the marriage and certify it?

Summary:

When fate stepped in and changed Bella's life, she hid from the pain. What happens when she has to face that pain? Does she find more trouble coming home or will she find forever? Contest Entry 13 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Get Your Southern On Contest
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4234 Read Count: 185
[Report This] Published: 20 Nov 2014 Updated: 20 Nov 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautifully done!

Summary:

Bella works for a wealthy CEO, Edward Cullen, but her first job isn't what she wanted to be when she grew up

 

Author is www.fanfiction.net/u/4985819/bonadea777


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Get Your Southern On Contest
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3336 Read Count: 583
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2014 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really like this one!

Summary:

 

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Sometimes secrets aren’t meant to be hidden. Maybe it’s for the best that they are out in the open.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8372 Read Count: 2465
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2014 Updated: 02 Dec 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: For The Best

I liked this very much.  Good work.

Summary:

A runaway bride with a broken heart, a woman desperately in love with a man. What if the man was too much of a gentleman to whisk her away from her wedding? Will she find her happy ending? Or will her tears be the only reminder of what could have been? AH, E/B. Rated for language and adult situations.

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5390 Read Count: 1497
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2014 Updated: 02 Dec 2014
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good!  Very "Jane Austen" in style.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mister Fancy Pants and Busy Bee are like oil and water, they do not mix. They're competing for top academic spot at Forks HS when fate intervenes. Busy Bee has a secret and when it comes to light it changes everything. Bee's been doing it tough but this girl is no push over. Omniscient 3rd person (wtf that means). There's some humour in here too. AH, HEA, mostly canon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102709 Read Count: 39946
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2020
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 aftermath

Great chapter,  I don'tthink she will get over this quickly.

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Esme

Great chapter.  Loved the hot coffee trick.  Only saw one "oops,"  when Esme was talking to police, she never told them her location...

Keep up the great work!

Summary:

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All of Bella's memories have been erased. She knows nothing about herself or the two men that are holding her captive. The only thing she can recall is a feeling of urgency ... Danger. She knows that she needs to escape ... Run ... While she still can. ***DRABBLE***


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23513 Read Count: 41755
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2014 Updated: 06 Feb 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Very good story and excellent writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for all of your reviews and for taking this journey with me. Your support is highly appreciated. x x

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

NOW we are getting somewhere!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

A ballerina figurine and a pair of sad brown eyes change Christmas for Edward in ways he never imagined.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14186 Read Count: 46989
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2014 Updated: 25 Jan 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh, this is good, but I can tell it is gonna be a tearjerker!

Summary: Past Featured Story

I was irredeemable. I was lost, and then ... she found me. A story of discovering yourself ... a story of resumption. OOC vampires, Canon couples. Edward x Bella. Rated for language and adult situations.

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74961 Read Count: 22725
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2015 Updated: 09 Oct 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 17 May 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter-16: Bleeding Hearts

Good chapter!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter-27: Game Plan

Good  chapter .  I'm  curious  to  see  who  the  stalker is.  Keep up the  great  work !  

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter-15: Dead Heart Beating

Good chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Thank goodness!  What a horror to go through.  I never knew what "high-dose chemotherapy" actually meant, and it was much worse than the two rounds of regular chemo my sister went thru for her ovarian cancer.  I can sure understand people wanting to quit while going thru that! 

Great writing job!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a very good start!  I like the sound of it.  I can handle the angst, especially if I know there is a HEA.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope you continue to enjoy it.  Glad to meet a fellow angst fan!  ;)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good, because this looks like it is going to be a major tearjerker, but I can take it if you can write it!  Good work!



Author's Response:

Yes, I'll admit that this was a tearjerker for me at a few points, and I've already written it, so hang on to your hat!  Thank you for reading, and reviewing!  :)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Wow,  Excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Oh, you really got me going when you brought in Sebastian!  I never expected a cat!  But it makes so much sense for someone like him.  I have 11 rescues and one "boarder" myself!  What a great story so far!



Author's Response:

LOL!!  Everyone is going nuts over the cat!  This is awesome!  I'm so glad it works for everyone!  So glad you're enjoying the story!  :)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

This is an absolutely wonderful story!  You are doing a greatjob.  Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much!  I'm so happy you're enjoying it!  :)

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

So sad!



Author's Response:

I know.  I'm sorry!  :(  Things will get better!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Sad.



Author's Response:

I know.  :(  It'll get better though!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 05 May 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

The first time he has actually realized that he might want to live after all...!



Author's Response:

Oh boy, almost everyone is thinking that Edward’s little brush with death by choking made him think about not wanting to die, and maybe wanting to live, and that’s why he was so freaked out.  I know how badly everyone wants this, but it’s going to take more to get him to truly reconsider what he’s doing.  In fact, there’s only one thing I can think of that might make him reconsider.  Can you guess what that might be? 

Something happened in that room at the end there, but what was it that made him stop and think--the choking, or something else?  Thursday isn't too far off!  ;)

 

 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Such a sweet  chapter !   You are  doing  a  great  job  on  this  story .    Keep  up  the  great  work !  



Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review, I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113792
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 19 Part 13

Yes!  Finally!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 5 (part 2)

Beautiful picture of Rob included here.  Reakly liking this story more than I expected to.  Good job!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 12 Part 3

Why hasn't he kicked her ouut of there yet?

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

Excellent!

 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 8 Part 2

Aww!  Great pictures.  Wish chapters were longer.



Author's Response:

Me too!!!!!! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 8 part 7

Bye, Tanya!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 8 Part 8

Loving this!  Can't wait until Tanya comes home (hee hee).

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 10 Part 4

So sweet!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

Whoopee!  Love these two pictures of Rob!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 11 Part 6

Love the meatball scene.  "Gluten-free pasta"  but what about the breadcrumbs in the meatballs?  What a riot!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 20 Part 1

Welcome  back!  I  missed  you  and  this  story ! 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 20 Part 6

I  really  love  this  story  and I am  so  glad  you  are  continuing  it!  Keep  up  the  great  work !