Penname: babylou23 [Real name: louise
Member Since: 25 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi


I have two stories at the moment, Speak and Please Remember Me.


Speak


banner http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5425903748/in/photostream/


banner2 http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5425300341/in/set-72157625872857657


http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com


Photo of the four of them(who I picture as them)http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5579893843/


Bella's outfit for chapter 2 www.polyvore.com/speak/set?id=24810261


Anthony and Leah outs for chapter 4 http://www.polyvore.com/speak_chapter/set?id=28577883


Anthony and Leah outfits chapter 6 http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=29084404


Bella's outfit for chapter 7 www.polyvore.com/speak/set?id=24801433


Please Remember me


http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com


Banner http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5580523370/in/set-72157626356253592/


characters (before and after)


Edward Cullen aged 19 http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5580494784/


Edward Cullen aged 22 http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5580494954/in/set-72157626356253592, http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5579906639/in/set-72157626356253592/


Bella Swan aged 16 http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5580494706/in/set-72157626356253592, http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5579906513/in/set-72157626356253592/


Edward and Rose http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5579906671/in/set-72157626356253592/


Rosalie Hale aged 16 http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5579934827/in/set-72157626356253592/


Rosalie Hale aged 19 http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5579934723/in/set-72157626356253592/


Jasper Whitlock http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5579934623/in/set-72157626356253592/


Emment Swan aged 19 http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5579935145/in/set-72157626356253592/


Emment Swan aged 23 http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5579935217/in/set-72157626356253592/


Charlie Swan (before Bella disappeared) http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5580533404/in/set-72157626356253592/


Charlie Swan after http://www.flickr.com/photos/54789808@N05/5580523078/in/set-72157626356253592/


Outfits


Edward and Jasper outfits for chapter 1 http://www.polyvore.com/ff_sets/set?id=29120053


Rose and Edward outfits for chapter 2 http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=29121396


Rose and Edward outfits for chapter4 http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=29727773


photos for all stories


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Beta-reader: No
Fanfiction: twilight
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Reviews by babylou23
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108984
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: babylou23 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

aww i love this, so cute



Author's Response:

Thank you =D

Reviewer: babylou23 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

great story, love the ending looking forward to reading more of your work



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! The new story will be up on the website sometime today

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsou

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420500
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: babylou23 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

lol, great ending I have been reading this over the last couple of days and I love how most of the stories is after they are married. A lot of ff stops after thier married and 1st baby then haven the last chapter skip years. Looking forward to the sequel now,

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467100
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: babylou23 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Thump, thump, thump

lol, that was one hell of a thankgiving. gonna love cc

Reviewer: babylou23 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 47: The Best Years

so glad you are doing outatkes, I really want to the story to keeping going with the kids future

Reviewer: babylou23 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue

looking forward to outakes. I really want to see what happen to cc, I think you should write a short story about his life lol I just love that boy lol well done.

Summary:

This is just your basic New York City love story. Crappy apartments, menial jobs, and low standards place Bella Swan in the pathway of love. Rated M. Canon couples with my usual OOC cast. AH. eventually E/B

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 71053 Read Count: 26605
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2011 Updated: 25 Jul 2011
Reviewer: babylou23 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Big Me

lol, she had to puke at the end, love it

Summary: Past Featured Story

rti

After guest hosting on a morning show, Isabella becomes the new co-cost for the show. Her husband James leaves her out of spite and jealousy and Bella swears off men to focus on her new career change. Edward Cullen was known for being a portentous, arrogant, SOB while running a branch of Masen Enterprises. After the death of his grandfather, Edward becomes the new CEO. His soul focus is on the expansion of the company, and to find out who has been stealing from and framing his grandfather. When Edward visits the morning show to defend the honor of his grandfather's legacy, he finds his self extremely attracted to the beautiful co-host Isabella. In the occurrence of unexpected events the pair cannot seem to stay away from each other. How long can they resist the inevitable? Reviews for this story on fanfic 1,672

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Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the lemonade stand

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, The Inevitable, Shena's Storys to Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 306607 Read Count: 206571
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: babylou23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: An ending is just another beginning

Just read this all the way and loved it, I can't wait to start the next one :-)

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ycte

Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104385
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: babylou23 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

aww I loved this story and this is one of  fave edwards ever. He is very realist and I like that, flaws and all. thank you for a wonderful story. I would not normal read this type but I am very glad i did. I can not wait to see what you write. Congrads on baby no.2. bblou :-)

Reviewer: babylou23 Signed
Date: 29 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29- Going home

i dont know y but it will not let me review at the end os story. just wanted to say that i love your wonderful story. I love this edward he's very realist flaws and all :-) congrads on baby no2. I cant wait to see what you write next. take care bblou

Summary:

RN

After ditching her groom at the altar, Bella needs to get as far away from Willow City, TX as possible. The second she meets a hot rodeo star while hitchhiking, Bella knew her life would never be the same. Edward's hot, cocky, and successful and could be just what Bella needs. Rated M for Lemons and Language. Curvy Bella and Cowboyward.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46504 Read Count: 14628
[Report This] Published: 16 Nov 2017 Updated: 01 May 2018
Reviewer: babylou23 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Liquid Courage

just found this story, love these characters cant wait for more