Reviews by Sweetz
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478522
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ugh.....I need more......Where's the rest of it?!!!!! Lol. I love it. Looking forward to the next update and their reactions to each other after the accident. 

Summary:

 

Two lonely people, living in New York City, having dirty conversations via Tumblr. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19361 Read Count: 5125
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2014 Updated: 01 Dec 2020
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Most definitely YAY :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Next chap is on its way!

Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126024
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I like you story and everything but in future if you're going to write a chapter that has anything to do with rape or sexual assault, please give us warning before hand. That way your readers will have the option of skipping or reading said chapter. 

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Thank you for not letting him rape her. Although he did touch her. For that the grabby hand bastard deserves to die a slow and extremely painful death. Maybe you can have Edward peel his skin off of him and pour salt on it, then leave him to die. 

Still curious as to the identity of the guy that came to the door. Plz give us a hint next chapter.

What the heck is with Carlisle greedy ass and always scrounging around the people house for food. He needs to tell Rose to feed him. On second thought never mind that because she might shoot his ass.

Who doesn't love (Edward and Bella) great makeup sex :) 

Thanks for putting my mind and ease. I look forward to reading the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it....... Keep it coming :) 

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

These guys are a riot.....Edward's met his match only for her to run off in a taxi and leave him lol. But not very smart thinking on Bella's part though. If she really wants that annulment, then she'll have to go right back into the lion's den. 

Wonder what's going on between Bella and Charlie, something seems off. Hope you update soon. Loved it as usual. 

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love Carlisle and Rose. Never a dull moment with these two in the same space. She threatens him with a black eye to go with his bloodied nose, and all he took away from the threat is that she call him a "pretty boy." DWL.

One of my many favourite lines from this chapter...Edward "My past experience with those who fight back, they usually end up in the boot and not in the passenger's seat."

Oh E (shakes head) you "kidnap" your wife from her crazy ex, only to bring her home to what is probably your crazy ex tsk tsk. Can't wait to hear you explain your ass out of this one. Good luck with that. Hopefully Bella doesn't make a run for it again. 

p.s

plz don't keep us waiting too long (insert pout face) Love it as usual :) 

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

@ Azlady2003....I totally agree with you. I hope he gets real strong dose of his own medicine. The only thing is men can dish but can't take and the poor guy who she decides to use to exact retribution with, will more than likely end up at the bottom of a lake somewhere.

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh the silent treatment...... works everytime. Boy did Bella bring out the big guns to get Edward to see her point. Can't say I blame her though. He needed to know that he can't just do as he pleases anymore now that he has a wife whose feelings need to be put into consideration.

I feel bad for the two guys in the private room. I hope Edward just rough them up a little bit and let's them go. 

Another great chapter...... Can't wait for the introduction to the patents. P.s can you plz consider making Carlisle and Rose a couple? I love their witty banter. 

Summary:

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Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Regardless of age, the loss of a loved one is always hard on us. You and your family have my sincere condolences. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Drabble Mafia Fic. What is the ultimate act of Betrayal? For Bella is was when her husband and best friend slept together. Find out how she dealt with them and how she plans to turn her life around. Will she find happiness?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22383 Read Count: 139182
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Why do I get the feeling that Bella's going to get grabbed....Which will then cause poor Barbie to get his ass handed to him again for not follow orders. 

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

They need to hurry and get the heck out of there and back to Edward's house where it's safe and pronto. I hope Jasper's reason for turning a traitor is maybe Royce has Alice and he's being forced to do his bidding. If not the he deserves whatever Edward does to him after now. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mister Fancy Pants and Busy Bee are like oil and water, they do not mix. They're competing for top academic spot at Forks HS when fate intervenes. Busy Bee has a secret and when it comes to light it changes everything. Bee's been doing it tough but this girl is no push over. Omniscient 3rd person (wtf that means). There's some humour in here too. AH, HEA, mostly canon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102709 Read Count: 39946
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2020
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - My Dearest Isabella

A tissue warning would have been nice :)........ You just made me cry. Love it.  I hope she goes and find Aro. I hope he's still alive so that we can hear his side of the story.



Author's Response:

I know how you feel.  Nanna Swan was a lovely lady and her story was so full of love.  she didn't sound bitter though, i think she was more regretful that she never confronted Aro. 

Ah well.  thanks for your lovely comment and thanks for reading my story.

cheers, 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113790
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

I'm sorry but Edward is a dumb ass. Just because he grew up without a father, it doesn't mean that he should be Tanya's doormat and have her manipulate him. He should have told her to f**k off and went home on check on his son (clearly something neither of them thought of doing before leaving for their "night out." ) Zero shits should have been given about wanting to go away with her after whatt she pulled knowing Charlie's still not well and what he walked in on during the fake ass photoshoot that she was trying to put on.

If i were Bella, i would ignore him and move out of the house. Make Emmette and Rose live in another wing in the main house and take the pool house for her and Elizabeth. Put some distance between her and Edward. Put the rest of her focus solely on the kids and say to hell with Edwad after what he did.

P.S

Can you please find someone to show a little interest in Bella? Even if its only for her to have a few coffee dates with the person.

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 17 Part 3

I'm sorry but i still can't bring my self to give Edward a break. He can't really be that much of a idiot to believe that Tanya(selfish b***h that she is) would actually care enough to give Bella her number for her to text/call her to update her about Charlie well being. I'm still calling bullshit. We all know what kind of person Tanya is and not to put anything pass her to get what she wants. But even if Edward couldn't find his phone or the battery died, i'm pretty sure the hotel and restraunt has a phone that he could have used to call Bella and check up on Charlie for his own peace of mind instead of just taking the harpies word as gospel.

P.s

I love your story.......just want to kick Edward in the junk right now.

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Both my hands are up. I vote for the same thing to happen to Esme and Felix and all her other minons. Please let the prison wardens turn a blind eye to both of them becoming all the prisoner's new bitch/s. They both deserve to be passed around the prison and so much more.....

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 171242
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I agree with li-spar1.....Bella should play nice since Carlisle is still in charge. But once Edward takes over from him, then all bets are off. As for James, i hope he dies a slow and painful death for thinking that he can come after Bella and for kill poor Princess.

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Balla's right for telling Esme off. She broke what little trust there might have been between them. Edward could have atleast kissed her before he left. Who knows what will happen when he gets to N.Y.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Summary: Edward adopts jennifer and decides to move back home for a new start and family support. He soon after meets his sister's friend Bella who lives by the beat of her own drum. Even though the whole town seems to dislike her, Alice swears she is a great friend. So many questions to be answered so read and found out.

Banner by: Canadiantwilight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63750 Read Count: 54495
[Report This] Published: 14 Nov 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2016
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Dear WeeandJess.....You just made me cry. Edward is a d**k and Alice is a shitty friend. I know Jenny will be happy that Bella's back home....The end.

P.S.

I love and read anything you guys write.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 134997
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter. I'm happy that Jane turned out to be Edward's sister. Maybe Rachel, Emmette and Rose could end up sharing a padded cell together. All of them are crazy.

Thanks for the update. I hope everything goes well with your surgery. Take care.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177627
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - no trucking way

Charlie is an ass. Even with proof he still believes that rat bastard..... Edward should have killed Jacob I don't trust him to not be a shit starter later on... That's if the Irish/ the Russiand don't get to him first.

Summary:

BANNER

Isabella's parents were murdered. Her sister betrayed her and her marriage is on the rocks. Things couldn't get any worse, right? Bratella Mobward - PART TWO - The Ties That Bind


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26487 Read Count: 57115
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2016 Updated: 11 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

One down one more to go. Up next the house keeper. Edward and Bella needs to talk (not shout) and lay everything on the table. Please let what Marcus did earn him some brownie points with Edward and released from prison. He needs to get back to watching out for Bella and sniffing out the rats in the family.

Danger In New York by cristina Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 536]
Summary: Past Featured Story

danger

 

A Corrupt district attorney and his daughter who pays the ultimate price for her father's betrayal. Two brothers at war and a family divided.

Twins Edward/Anthony. Mature content, mention of rape, abuse, drug use, prostitution, human trafficking, crime.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90965 Read Count: 84407
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I like the story but after this chapter, I think I'm going to wait until the story gets a little further along before coming back to it. I'm not feeling Bella fooling around with Anthony. I know Edward isn't entirely innocent in the scheme of things, but maybe he should distance himself from Bella for a little bit after what happened. 

Cullenworth Manor by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 235]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is promiscuous and totally self absorbed. He is the eldest child, the heir to  his father the Duke of Bedford title. Because of this his parents turn a blind eye to his ways. They belief once he's married he will settle down.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44693 Read Count: 47980
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 13 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's clear that Edward hasn't heard the saying "you don't s**t where you eat." Good for Bella for telling James and Victoria to stuff it. I have a feeling that Charlie's death was probably no accident.

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER

Most mothers would do whatever it took to provide for their children, which was exactly what Bella Masen did when she found out her husband had left them. With the walls closing in and the debt collectors on her doorstep, how far was she willing to go?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 85 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45714 Read Count: 124535
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2016 Updated: 29 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I'm not mad at Edward for freaking out on Bella for going out. Garrett was there but at the end of the day, if anything were to happen his first reaction isn't going to be to jump in front of a bullet to protect Bella and the kids. His first reaction is going to be to get to Alice.

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Thank God for Emmett. I happy that Edward opened up a little more to Bella.

Summary:

Banner by StillDreaming85.

Sequel to Danger In New York. 

 

There is no such thing as freedom. 
Marie Cullen: I'm a killer, a criminal, no better than Edward or Carlisle or even Esme. I should feel bad for what I have done. I should mourn for the lives I have taken and probably turn myself in, pay for my crimes. But I felt none of that, I felt nothing in fact. It was them or us, there was no other choice and I made the right choice. I chose him.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85421 Read Count: 50918
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2016 Updated: 09 Jul 2019
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh Edward...... Nobody likes the taste of their own medicine. But right now you deserve a dose size of Texas. After Bella's done serving it to you, i hope she d*ck punches your sorry ass. You're So not my favorite person right now.

Dangerous Woman by hill00 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

I hate these things lol.... Edward Cullen isn't what everyone thinks he is. Isabella Swan isn't as innocent as everyone thinks. This is their story.....


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11586 Read Count: 3279
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2016 Updated: 22 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think James slashed Bella's tires. Also, seems as though Edward wants to die before what he was picturing in the shower becomes a reality 😁😁



Author's Response:

lol Right? Who tells a girls father that?

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 30 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I ❤️ a good Mob story. Especially one that has a bit of everything in it😏😉. I really hope you continue to write this one.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I love mobward stories. I will be finishing this.

Want You Bad by LadyHazelK Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Edward grew up together. They’ve shared a lot of firsts, but never the ones of the intimate sort, both always fearing it would ruin the relationship they had. Now as highly-sought-after, successful adults, neither can take it anymore. One phone call gives them the opening they need, but it’ll be easier than they thinks. Tattella/Tattward; M/NC17 for Language & Adult Activities.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18852 Read Count: 13014
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I need more like right now :( I love it......Can't wait for the photo shoot :)



Author's Response:

Haha! I'm so happy you love it! More coming tomorrow! 

-K 

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Worth the wait :)

Summary:

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Edward and Bella are best friends, have been for years. They'd do anything for each other, but would Edward asking her to help him and his wife, Tanya have a baby be the breaking point? Can she sacrifice herself to help them? Will their friendship be able to survive?


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23857 Read Count: 29173
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2017 Updated: 11 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 28 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I migh be wrong about this, but I think asking Bella to be their surrogate is Tanya's way of driving a wedge between Edward and Bella. I think she knows that their might be feelings of more that just being best friends (at least on Bella's part) so this is her way of pushing them apart. Obviously they probably have money because fertility clinics are not cheap. Why not just pay someone to carry the baby for them? Better yet, doesn't Tanya have any friends of her own that she could ask? 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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A group of college students with clashing personalities win an all-expense paid weeklong vacation at a luxury resort in the Caribbean, thinking it will be spent on the beach in glorious sunshine. However, after landing it becomes very apparent that all is not as it should when the students find themselves alone on the island with only their pilot and one guide. Or are they..?

2nd Place in Favorite Undiscovered Gem category of Twific Fandom Awards 2017

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Mystery, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: Read & Enjoyed, El Jardín Trilogy
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85312 Read Count: 31086
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2017 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Reading this at 3:30 in the morning(when my ass should be 😴) and this story is scaring the ish out of me and it's just two chapters so far. You're doing an amazing job because my ass is hooked.🙂‘. 

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward's nicknames and snappy comeback is giving me life 🤣🤣🤣🤣. Bet you guys regret not believing Bella now huh’. P.s let them please keep the little fox-like animal. He sound adorable 🙂

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I say we leave Peter and let the Sabertooth tiger have his rude ass for dinner, and keep the cute little 🦊. As for Edward, we all have as crush on his fine ass, I don't know if I'm that smitten to follow him into a pitch black cavern(Let me get back to you on that one.) I still think Alice know a bit more than she's letting on”. She can't possibly want to keep the job that badly that she's not only willing to risk her life but everyone else's to keep it. My guess is that Leah took for a flash drive from behind the painting. I say we sue Carlisle for invasion of privacy when and if the ever get off the island and also locate his ass. 



Author's Response: Peter is difficult to handle right now, but I promise he'll be easier to take later on :-P Alice is a bit of an enigma... it'll be clearer what her motives are later as well ;-) Here's the link to the teaser: http://mariecarro.wixsite.com/author/single-post/2017/08/25/Teaser-Thursday-TMOELJ

Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is they type of shit that happens when your "all inclusive" vacation has the words "free or randomly selected" attached to it. I feel bad for Edward,that plane was his livelihood 😕. Please have the MVP of the chapter(Little Blue Fox) turn Carlisle into a frozen popsicle”. I wonder what "wedding" he's talking about? (Bella and Edward) or is it needing two specific people for whatever he had planned origanally to now be moving ahead of schedule??!! After all, it was their hands being placed on the crystal that caused it to glow the way it did, light the torches in mine and make the others to disappear from the room. I feel bad for Edward,that plane was his livelihood 😕. Let's just hope they survive whatever's coming and he still has a few gold nuggets so that he could replace it 😏. I'm confused, I thought Leah was Jane doe since she wasn't originally supposed to be on the trip with them. 

Entrapment by Jemster23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 192]
Summary:

Entrapment

 

For Bella Swan, desperate times call for desperate measures. For Edward Cullen, family is everything. *Voted First place in the Twilight Family Affairs contest


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 180073 Read Count: 44825
[Report This] Published: 05 Nov 2020 Updated: 12 Jun 2021
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Thank you for giving me an escape from my anxiety and the stress of life by sharing your words with us. I loved your story from star to finish :) 

Summary:

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When Edward heard his ex was talking trash about him, he decided to prove her right. Not even the sugar daddy whose arm she dangled from could stop him.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46345 Read Count: 14768
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2021 Updated: 26 Jun 2022
Reviewer: Sweetz Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn, that was hot......to think this is only the beginning. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!