Taking place at the 1956 US Open, 20 year-old amateur golfer Isabella Swan becomes the first women to ever compete at a professional golf event. With local caddie Edward Cullen at her side as she makes her attempt at history, she will grow more in the span of this weekend then she has in her entire life as she plays against the best players in the world, battling gender roles and the boys club that is this “gentlemen’s game.” Will she be able to pull out an against the odds victory, or will the prize she wins be even more valuable.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34179 Read Count: 3213
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Historic Journey
I am already in love with story, the way the era is protrayed, just everything about it. Bella is such a strong character but still at the mercy of her mother and society's views.
Chrissie
Author's Response:
Wow...thank you so much! I love this little one~ I know I'm gonna catch heat for the third chapter, but it is worth it in the end. I'm glad to have impressed you that much!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Start of Something
I love the way you descibe the golf, i'm a big fan although not many of my friends share my liking of it. Laurent is wonderful as was Edward until he let his frustrated ambitions get the better of him.
Off to read the next chapter.
Chrissie
Author's Response:
I grew up not really liking golf, but last year I spent time taking care of my grandparents and they both love it so after spending two months watching it I got into it and I love how this was the period where not only the world, but the world of golf were changing. Laurent will be helpful when Edward is out of the game, but he knows just how important it is to make it up to her. Thanks for the love.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Storm on the Horizon
Rosalie and Kate are lovely just like their husbands. I'm glad Esme is able to talk sense into Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter, loving the story so much.
Author's Response:
Rose and Kate are going to continue to help her out and Edward is going to do everything he can to make it right.
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Haven in the Storm
I loved this chapter and will be sad to see the story end. They are moving fast but as you say it is a different time, and war especially can make people see things differently.
Alice is a wonderful character and i can't wait for the next chapter.
Chrissie x
Author's Response:
IT is a quickie and I'm loving the response because I honestly didn't expect it from all of you! I love my Alice in this one and her and Jasper are a trip next chapter. Thanks for the love, Chrissie.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Destiny in the Making
Oh that was so sweet and wonderful. Loved that Bella beat Royce despite all the obstacles put in her way and how she stood up to the president over the issue of Edward and her attending the closing ball.
Literally i could go on all day about all the things i liked about this chapter but i don't want to bore you.
Can't wait for the next one.
Chrissie x