Reviews by Littlefoot18
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Littlefoot18 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Surprises

On the whole I'm enjoying your story. However, your use of the word mongoloid is really quite offensive! It's kind of ruining your characters for me! It would have been better if you stuck to calling him a dog, mongrel, Neanderthal, etc... I'm guessing you don't know what a mongoloid is?