Reviews by teamswitzerlandmom
Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
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Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 188: Chapter 188

What a way to wake up in the morning!  Better than coffee, that's for sure. Definitely makes you need the shower for more reasons than to get ready for the day. Your words were picture enough so your forgiven for no visual today  ;) I think my ipad would have caught on fire if you would have added a pic anyway.  Thanks. 

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

Once again, better than coffee to wake you up and get your juices flowing in the morning. Thank you for that. Too bad the hubs left for work already. Especially since the kids have left for school. ;) Oh well, I'll just have to wait until our chat later tonight before we go to bed I guess. 

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Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 190: Chapter 190

Nice little wrap up of the scene. Isabella really is a natural at being a sub. That will make Sir's training much easier. I wonder if he will have her wear her butterflies to work sometime?

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Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 191: Chapter 191

Wondereful chapter. Poor Edward having to deal with the family when all he wants to do is enjoy his Butterfly. And Alice is up to something. 

No worries about being being AWOL for a little while. SU4K is important so we can wait. 

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Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 192: Chapter 192

I figured Sir would have her wear them all day. Clothing, especially a bra, will be fun with them on. And Edward will know they are there as well. See you when you get more written. 

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 193: Chapter 193

I figured she would have trouble concentrating. Wonder it Sir, I mean Edward, is having as much trouble?  



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next chapter

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 194: Chapter 194

Damn!  Edward almost blew it with the club explosion. And he might blow it anyway with the visual perusal of Butterfly if he isn't careful. See ya next time. 

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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 196: Chapter 196

Oh, we are all still here and if anyone left they REALLY missed out. Great chapter and I don't think I need to say anything about the pic and gif. Thanks. 

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 197: Chapter 197

Great chapter. I loved the reflections Bella had on here day at work and how playful her afternoon working with Emmett and Jessica turned out to be. I look forward to hearing what Sir has to say since I'm sure he will be calling her very soon. 

No worries on the chapters. Keep posting when you can and I'll be here (and over at your other stories) reading. 

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 198: Chapter 198

Great talk with Carlisle. Someone needs to give Edward a little more of a push because for someone so smart, he sure is slow when it comes to figuring out that Isabella is his mate. You'd think with all the mated couples around him and the whole mind reading thing he would have put it together. I guess denial isn't just a river in Egypt. ;-)

I love this story. See ya next chapter. 

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 199: Chapter 199

My goodness Carlisle is a load of information for our Sir. I can't believe he hasn't tried that already. See ya next chapter. 

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 200: Chapter 200

Thanks for the Carlisle/Esme action and the pic. I'm sure that Sir will find it extremely stimulating and helpful.  

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 202: Chapter 202

Hot stuff as usual. Looking forward to reading Butterfly's take on this. And of course more of Sir's as the scene progresses. 

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 203: Chapter 203

Hot! Hot!  Looking forward to the next chapter to see how this goes!  Sir needs a good taste. 

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 204: Chapter 204

Damn!  Sir definitely enjoyed his Butterfly and vise a versa. He is bound to start figuring out that she is his mate soon with all the wonderful flavors and emotions flowing between them. Love the story, the chapter and the pix. 



Author's Response:

closer than u think... originally i thought it took him until the night he let her see him, but i just found out that it was waaayyyy sooner!

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 205: Chapter 205

Butterfly is one lucky dirty girl. Just imagine how much fun they will have when she doesn't need to rest!  see ya soon. 

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 206: Chapter 206

Yes!  Wonder if Carlisle knew that would happen?  My guess is Hell Yes he knew. Great chapter and as always I look forward to more. Great pic also. 

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 207: Chapter 207

Beautiful chapter. How will this change their relationship?  Can't wait to hear his response to Alice. 

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 208: Chapter 208

Gotta love Alice. The pics are so cute. They did look like they were having so much fun. See ya next time. 

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Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 209: Chapter 209

Now if he will just stay calm and listen with his heart, Alice will explain everything. Never bet against Ailce. 

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Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 216: Chapter 216

Great chapter and I think I'm even more in love with Emmett (Kellan Lutz) after the chapter and picture. And what a picture!  Damn!  :)

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 210: Chapter 210

Great chapter. Alice would definitely come in handy when making decisions. Run it by her and make sure the outcome is the best possible one. 

One chapter a day will be fine and even if you need to skip a day or two, we'll all be waiting for the next chapter. No worries. Take care of you, that's what's most important. 

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Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 212: Chapter 212

A little lunchtime delight at the office with Sir. What could be hotter?  I love that garter belt and stockings!  Where do I get it?  My husband would love it too. See ya soon. 

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 217: Chapter 217

Great chapter and I loved the pic!  Hilarious. Congrats on being #1. You deserve it. 

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 218: Chapter 218

Another great chapter and that pic is just wow!  can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 219: Chapter 219

Go Rose!  Now the pic from last chapter would work!  ;) This pic is hot too. 

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 220: Chapter 220

Wow!  Looks like both of them are enjoying this scene. And three pics for us!  Thank you!  

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Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 222: Chapter 222

Holy Hell!  More please!  Great way to wake up on the day we have all been waiting for!  Headed to the Twilight Marathon today. 12 hours of Emmett, Edward, Carlisle and Jasper!  YES!  See ya next time. 

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Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 223: Chapter 223

Great chapter. Thanks for the lemony breakfast. 

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Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 225: Chapter 225

Wow!  I actually had to block the pic so I could concentrate on reading the chapter. Is it hot in here?  Thank you!  I think I need to take a shower or relax in my whirlpool tub. 

I have wanted to know the answer to your question in the beginning AN myself so I sent an email to the admins about it. I have 1 multi chapter story and a few o/s posted here and would like to know how many have added them to their favs. Hopefully I'll get an answer and I'll pass it on to you. 

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 226: Chapter 226

What a wonderful way to wake up. Great chapter as always. Looking forward to more. 

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Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

Damn. Edward is going to freak out now isn't he?  Not only did he hurt her but he called her Bella instead of Butterfly. See ya next time. 

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 228: Chapter 228

Close call there. At least he was able to cover up his true reason for the reaction and nothing is broken. See ya next time. 

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 229: Chapter 229

Short but amazing. Thanks for writing

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 236: Chapter 236

All I can say is DAMN!  

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 237: Chapter 237

Damn again. Next chapter we get Peter's answers right?

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 239: Chapter 239

Great chapter and video!  I wish I had lunch breaks like theirs. 

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Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 241: Chapter 241

Loved the chapter. Gotta love Emmett and the way he jerks Edward's chain. Just not like the picture. ;)

Later

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 242: Chapter 242

Wonderful wake up call this morning. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. 

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Date: 06 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 243: Chapter 243

Wow!  I'm surprised she wasn't already begging for a release between the nipple play and his words. Looking forward to more. 

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Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 244: Chapter 244

Wow! Another iPad melting chapter and pics. See ya next time. 

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Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 247: Chapter 247

Wow! The last three chapters were absolute iPad melting perfection!  I can't wait to read more and hated that I couldn't read this weekend. Thanks for making my iPad smoke so bright and early this morning. ;)

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Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 281: Chapter 281

I love it. I love the collar and engraving as well. See ya tomorrow. 

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Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 248: Chapter 248

What a way to go to sleep. I know what I'll be dreaming about tonight. 

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Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

Whoops. Looks like the left out a little side effect of Edward's yummy goodness on Bella. Sounds like the venom does have a bit of an effect when ingested. Loved it!  See ya tomorrow

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Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 251: Chapter 251

Great chapter and I love the pics. They are sooooooo hot. 

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 260: Chapter 260

Hot damn!  Thank you for that lovely Christmas gift. 

Hope your Christmas was merry and bright and you have a safe and happy new year. 



Author's Response:

awww thanks and Happy Holidays to you too!

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 262: Chapter 262

Great chapter. Looking forward to more soon. 

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Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 264: Chapter 264

Great chapter and pic. Hopefully Alice will have the answers to his questions. 

Sorry your day was so bad yesterday. I hope everything get better soon. 

Thanks for writing and sharing it with us,

Missy

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Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 265: Chapter 265

Very happy new year to you too. Thanks for the long chapter. 

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Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 267: Chapter 267

Great chapter. A little more office fun for Butterfly and Sir. Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter. 

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 275: Chapter 275

Oh no!  The bumpy ride has begun for sure!  At least she safe worded and didn't let it go too far. See ya soon I hope. 

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Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 276: Chapter 276

Great chapter. Looks like they are both going to enjoy themselves. 

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Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 277: Chapter 277

Such a great story and I know it is winding down. I love the story and this chapter is no exception. I love your pics too. I always share those with the hubby. It's our pic of the day moment. ;)

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Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 278: Chapter 278

Somehow I think Sir will like that answer quite a lot. Great chapter and pic. See ya next time. 

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Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 280: Chapter 280

Loved it!  I can't wait for her to go to work and lunch time. See ya tomorrow. 

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Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 282: Chapter 282

I love the interaction between Edward and Alice. They sound like true siblings and they know each other so well. He would never get through this without Alice and being a Dom, I bet that doesn't always sit well with him. I'm sure feeling as insecure as he does right now doesn't sit well either. ;)

Every chapter is amazing and you deserve all our praise. I hope whatever is going on that is making it hard for you to write gets better soon. If you need to miss updating, we will survive and be here waiting when the next chapter comes. Take care of you first!

See ya next chapter,

tsm



Author's Response:

ur awesome, but this story is already done. I've written the last chapter, it's the rewrite that's killing me. :)  

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Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 283: Chapter 283

Wow!  Well worth the wait!  Wonderful, hot chapter and the pics were steaming as well. Thanks for the update. 

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Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 284: Chapter 284

Wonderful chapter. I can't wait until tomrrow. See ya then. 

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Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 285: Chapter 285

Yes!  He understands her feelings now. And I could just imagine the relief he felt knowing she loves her Sir. I loved the pictures. Rob has such a wonderful smile. It lights up his whole face. 

Off topic, sort of, but I had this discussion with a couple of my friends and my hubby. Say in 10-15 years, can you see Rob as James Bond?  I so can. I he would be the only other one I might like since Sean Connery. Just a thought. 

Until next time. 

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Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 286: Chapter 286

I can't wait for the next chapter. I love each and every one of the chapters but I have to say I'm REALLY looking forward to reading what happens next. See ya tomorrow. 

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Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 287: Chapter 287

Great chapter and really amazing photos. He was finally able to hear her thoughts so he knows she loves him and can't live without him, anymore than he could live without her. I look forward to more tomorrow. 

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Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 288: Chapter 288

What a beautiful chapter. I can't wait to read his response. 

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Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 289: Chapter 289

Wow!  I don't know what you were apologizing for the the author note because the chapter and the pix were hot as Hell. Loved it all. 

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Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 290: Chapter 290

Wonderful chapter. I'm glad I was up late and could read it tonight. Thanks for writing such any amazing story and providing all the erotic, beautiful pictures. See ya next update. 

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Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 291: Chapter 291

I loved her reaction to his words and seeing him. So perfect. See ya next update. 

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Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 292: Chapter 292

Great chapter and I loved the pics. See ya when IR is updated to day. 

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Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 293: Chapter 293

Loved the chapter. They have said I love you to each other!  :)

I can't wait for the next chapter. 

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Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 299: Chapter 299

I loved it. His surprise at her strength and being so in the moment that he forgets she can hear him, just perfect. I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

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Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 300: Chapter 300

Yes!  It's here and I'm excited. I can't wait for more tomorrow. 

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Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 301: Chapter 301

Sounds like Master has empowered his butterfly with more strength and confidence than he was prepared for. Another amazing, hot, sensual chapter. I always look forward to these updates and sharing the pics with the hubby. Thanks so much for writing, sharing and giving us such beautiful visual aides for each chapter. 

 

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Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 302: Chapter 302

Amazing, hot chapter and pictures. Definitely sharing this with the hubs!  ;)

 



Author's Response:

tell me all about it... were on fb together right? i forget who is who all the time... sorry

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Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm on Facebook with y'all but I rarely have time to do more than check my notifications. I'll definitely let you know what the hubs reaction is. It'll be a couple of days since he is working 24 hour shifts at the fire station. See ya next update. 

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Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 303: Chapter 303

I love hearing from Bella and her reactions to what Edward does and says. It's amazing that you can display all the emotions they experience in so few words. Oh, and I love the pictures too. More to share with the hubby tonight!  

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 304: Chapter 304

Excellent chapter and pictures. The hubby loved them. Lucky for me. 

As for your next story idea, I'm saying Hell Yes!  

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 305: Chapter 305

Wonderful chapter. He keeps this up and he may find a much more enjoyable way to turn a human into a vampire. Has to be more enjoyable than biting, for her anyway. Although a little nibble now and then doesn't hurt. ;)

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 306: Chapter 306

Wow!  Another wonderful chapter and some amazing pictures. I can't wait to read, and see, more. I'll definitely be here waiting patiently for the next update. Take care of yourself and I'll see ya next time. 

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Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 307: Chapter 307

What a sweet chapter and the pictures are perfect for it. I think this one might be one of my favorites so far. Sweet but still damn sexy. :)

You're already on my favs for the story and author so no worries there. I'll catch anything you send this way. 

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Date: 20 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 309: Chapter 309

What a sweet, loving chapter. And the pics are some of my favorite. So sweet and I loved the honeymoon scene from the movie. Perfection.  

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Date: 22 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 310: Chapter 310

Beautiful chapter and pics as always. I will miss this story but I have you one favs so I'm sure I'll see ya with your next one. Until next time. 

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Date: 02 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 312: Chapter 312

Beautiful drawing and chapter. Your updates will make the weekend even better. See ya soon. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248473
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Another wonderful chapter. I love that he is spending more time with his children, thinking already of how Charles will fit in with his children and hoping the Isabella will want to be their mother. So, if the Queen sees them together, say acting somewhat inappropriately, would that hurry things along? To save his and her reputation?  Just wondering. See ya next time. 

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Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Wonderful chapter. They all deserve happiness, none more than Bella and Charles. I love the research that you put into this story to make it so authentic. Thank you so much for writing and I hope and pray that everything will begin to work out better for you soon. 

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Another wonderful chapter. I love all the details that you put into each chapter. When Esme showed Isabella the library, I thought of the scene in Beauty and the Beast.  Yep, I know. Not your normal thought process for a person who reads NC-17/M rated stories but I do love to watch Disney movies with the family. I could picture the same awe and joy in Isabella's face that Bella had. Anyway, Edward has got it bad for Isabella and Esme is enjoying every minute of it. I just don't see them making it through the whole year of morning. 

Christmas traditions - we have 2 trees at our house. One is all snowmen and the other is a hodge podge of ornaments made by or picked out by my boys. Every year, the day after thanksgiving(starting with black Friday sales so by midnight Thursday), I do all my Christmas shopping. Then I come home and hid the gifts, completely decorate my house (takes me about 8 hours) and then wrap anything not from Santa. All of this is done while my husband and boys are gone male binding with the other men in the family. On Saturday, I decorate the yard and house. The following weekend we all go to the store together and pick out a new ornament for both trees, an snowman that represents our personality and a fun ornament for the other tree. Then on Christmas eve, everyone opens one gift which is always new pajamas to wear that night and the next morning to open presents on Christmas Day. If my husband is not working at the fires station, we will attend midnight mass on Christmas eve as well, but we haven't gone in a few years. We always host Christmas at our house for both sides of the family since we are the only ones with children. So I cook dinner and we watch football (it's Texas of course we watch football). 

Hope you enjoyed my traditions. Not a lot of old fashion ones but they are ours. 

Thanks for writing this story. 

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Another wonderful chapter. Poor Edward has it so bad he already feels the pull of not wanting to be away from her for any amount of time, much less months to deal with business. I loved Carlisle's thoughts about making Isabella and Charlie part of their family. They all love both of them so much already. 

Pas for the outtakes: all the options you mentioned, Jasper finally asking to court Alice, the letter Edward wrote (unless that is the next chapter). Hope those help. 

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: October 7th 1843

I loved this chapter and the teaser. Master Edward learning to milk a cow was too perfect and you wrote it where you could feel the electricity between them. And Lady Esme's comment at the end was just squeal worthy!  I can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Loved it as always. 

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Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Test chapter. Feisty Bella is too cute and it sounds like Edward enjoys that side of her too. See ya next time. 

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Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: September 1st 1843

I'm looking forward to reading more of this one. It sound great. Sad, but wonderful. I love historical fiction. 



Author's Response:

Not too sad, but it will have its moments lol xx

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Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: September 11th 1843

Another wonderful chapter. Isabella is stubborn, but like you said she has to be to shoulder the responsiblities that she does at her age. Even during that time, running a home, farm, caring for an ailing mother and a 4 year old brother was not that common. Not completely uncommon, but not something that every daughter had to look forward to doing so young. I love the way this is written and how wonderful and caring Carlisle and Esme are. As for what Esme has planned for Edward?  Maybe she will try to get him to escort Bella to the dancer?  See ya next chapter. I look forward to the update showing up in my inbox. 

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Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: September 22nd 1843

This glimpse into Isabella's life really showed how hard her day really was and how becoming an adult in her social circles was very different than in Lady Cullen's. At such a young age she has so much resting in her shoulders. In your AN you asked if we thought Renee is going to make it and I don't think so. She (Renee) makes comments like the one in this chapter that indicate she is giving up and knows the end is coming. I think Isabella knows it too. Renee was probably only holding on until Isabella became an adult so that she could keep the farm and would be able to raise little Charles. I love this story and always look forward to the updates. I'm a little confused about when you said the next one would be since you said it will be in 2 days but also that it would be the 19th and it is the 22nd already. Typo I'm guessing but no biggie. I'll just watch that inbox. :)

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: September 13th 1843

I love this Bella and Esme. Bella is resolute in her lot in life and not bitter, just accepting. Esme is stubborn and will not give up trying to bring Bella into society as her daughter of sorts. I think if Renee could express her feelings on the matter, she would encourage Bella to allow Esme's attentions since no mother wants here daughter to live such a hard and isolated life. As for Edward, he will probably be hard-hearted having lost his wife but he will be enchanted by Bella strength and beauty. Maybe?  Guess we will just have to wait and see. Until next time. 

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: September 17th 1843

Poor Edward might have been born with a silver spoon in his mouth but he still has not had an easy life. The expectations placed on him at such a young age, an arranged marriage and then loosing his wife so young would be horrible. Is it any better or worse than what Isabella has gone through?  Whose to say since the situations are so completely different and neither of them know a difference. Renee doesn't sound like she will make it much longer. Maybe a combination of being ill and a broken heart?  But she is trying to hold on for her children?  I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I love this story!

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: September 24th 1843

Another wonderful chapter. Carlisle's plan sounds pretty solid and I hope Isabella will accept it. But like Esme said, she doesn't like town and that will require her to go to town more. Guess we will have to wait and see. See ya on the 29th. :)

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: September 29th 1843

I loved the chapter. The dress is goergeous. I really enjoy all the history behind everything in this story. So looking forward to Edward's reaction to Isabella in her dress. See ya tomorrow. 

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: September 28th 1843

Edward is a good father and loves his children. It shows through his actions, even if they are different than what we would expect today. He does miss Sarah but your right that he misses her more for the children than himself. They should have their mother and it seems he feels he has failed them somehow by her dying. I can t wait for him to meet Isabella. This should be good. Thanks for all the amazing updates so quickly this weekend. 

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Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: September 28th 1843

Another wonderful chapter. I figured he would fall hard and fast. Looks like Esme's work is nearly done with Edward at least. See ya tomorrow. 

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: September 30th 1843

I kind of figured that Renee would pass away before anything could really develop between Edward and Isabella. He will be even more protective of her and with both of them coming to her while she is still freshly dealing with this, she will lean on them more than if she had to deal with it alone from the very beginning. She will appreciate the support with the changes in the farm and the loss of her mother all at the same time. 

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor little Charles. Edward's words were perfect and exactly what Charles needed to hear. He needed to know that crying and mourning the loss of his mother was not a sign of weakness. Edward is a wonderful man, father and will make an amazing husband for Isabella. I know, I'm jumping the gun but little Charles would have children to play with as well as Edward to teach him how to be a gentleman and a wonderful person. Looking forward to reading the chapter with him milking cows. That will be perfect!

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wonderful chapter and a wonderful preview. Edward is so smitten with Isabella already in this chapter that there is no turning back for him. He sure was bitten by the love bug hard and fast. He deserves to be happen. As for who Edward is talking to in the preview, could it be Sarah's mother, so the maternal grandmother? See ya next time.