Reviews by teamswitzerlandmom
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254688
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

Great chapter!  Seeing into Edward's thoughts and feelings is always so enlightening and amazing. I'm so glad you are posting over here so I can still read this since I didn't get to it before the boycott started. Honestly, I might switch over to this site more except for when I'm on my phone.  

Looking forward to more updates. 

tsm



Author's Response:

Edward is bumming .. you will see in a few chapters what esle is weighing on his little mind .. and why his thoughts go to Mason ... thanks for reading ..louise

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

I already reviewed over on the other site but I wanted to help this review count so wwe can get that outtake with Esme and Bella. ;-)

I love this story and can't wait for each and every update. 

See ya next time. 

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Great chapter. Esme is a hoot. I loved the way it ended. Lots happening and some really funny parts mixed in with the drama. As for who should win the bet - I'm team Bella on this one. She needs to have some bragging rights and she is the current oral record holder at the club!

Until next time. 

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Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Great chapter!  Edward wasn't too hard on her. She was acting like a brat and he had to put a stop to it. He is always consistent. He pushed her in this chapter but abided by her safe words and hard limits. As for the DP and James, you have to wonder if one of the times that he knocked her out if he did share her or use props or DP her and she didn't know it. Or maybe she has blocked it out. He is evil and sick enough to have forced her to do it either way. Edward will remember the van he has seen parked outside of Bella's house before that is like the plumbers' van eventually, I just hope that it is before its too late. I love this story and I look forward to each update, whether it is on this site or FFN (which by the way was not letting us read the update this time). Thanks so much for writing. See ya next time.  

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

Great chapter and I am not surprised that Bella didn't safe word. She wanted to push herself just like Edward knew it was time to push her. The trust and respect they have for their relationship would not be thrown away by her not wanting to disappoint Edward by safe wording.  He would be more disappointed if she didn't when she needed to. I always look forward to each and every update and can't wait for the next week's chapter. See ya then. 

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Wonderful chapter!  I loved it. Thanks for writing and sharing your talents with us. I'll keep y'all in my thoughts and prayers as you recover from the hurricane. Being on the gulf coast, I sympathize. 

Thanks again,

tsm

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Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

Loved the chapter. I don't blame Bella at all for trying to shorten her 'eating of sticks' one bit. I had to eat that crap for a while after I had surgery 'to help return my system to normal' and it was just for a month. I actually dreaded breakfast. 

I don't have words to describe how sick James is. He is disgusting and completely psycho. With that said, I have no idea what he is up to other than trying to get money out of Gerandy to give up visitation to his child. Sick. 

Lim looking forward to the fun at New Moon. See ya next chapter. 

tsm

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Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Wonderful chapter. I loved all the jokes and limericks. I shared them with the hubby. Isabella is not doing so well this evening with staying out of trouble. Dougie just keeps egging her on and she is going to pay for that. Hopefully she will not have to deal with the punishment while the shore is going on. And having those tempting Fruity Pebbles and not being able to indulge for 2 whole months!  That's torture!  I can't wait for the next chapter. 

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

What awl derail chapter. And she get her sugar coated cardboard!  I had to laugh last week when my husband and youngest son started eating giant bowls of Fruity Pebble!  They looked at me like I had lost my mind. :)

Thanks for writing and I love this story, length and all!  See ya next time. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Loved the chapter. Bella's revelation and her punishment for the night before we're fun to read. Edward showed what a wonderful Dom, boyfriend and friend he was through all his actions. I loved the Fruity Pebbles section. It was too hilarious. It would have been funny too if his bowl was the same size as her first one!  His face would have morphed it even more horror! ;) 

I admit that I didn't connect Tanya and Caius to Newton, Stanley and James. I can't wait to learn who Caius claims the "father" of Bella is that left her the inheritance. Somehow I don't see it just being Phil and her mom being the whole connection. If they aren't the connection, does Bella even realize she has the inheritance in question? It wouldn't be the first time that someone had a secret benefactor through some other means of delivery for the funds. Should be fun to read. I quite trying to second guess your plans for this story. I'll just wait for your creative, wonderful mind to shock me once again. :)

Thanks for writing this story and sharing with us. I wish my unbetaed chapters were as we'll written as yours. 

tsm

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Wonderful chapter!  I loved it and you're right, it was jammed packed with a variety of stuff. I can't wait to read more. Hope RL settles down for you soon, I completely sympathize with you on that front. Thanks for writing and see ya next time. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Great chapter. It was filled with a ton of information. So how are Caius and Victor Salvatore related and what is the connection to Phil?  I'm guessing that will give all the answers to why Caius has such a hard on for where Bella got her money. I don't expect an answer to me questions in a review reply. Just wanted to through them out there. I'll just have to wait until the next update. ;)

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923038
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Great chapter and way to go Edward. I just hope the retaliation  toward Bella won't be too intense. I sure hope Jasper can start slipping Tanya some meds to make her lactate soon. See ya next chapter. 

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Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Beautiful chapter and I'm positive Katarina is reading over our shoulders from heaven. Thank you for writing this story. 

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Really enjoying this story. Aro is one sick SOB that is for sure.  I wonder how long it eill tske Edward to figure out eho Alice is?  I hope you update it soon. 



Author's Response:

sorry, I forgot to update. I will update again asap!

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I caught up over on the other site that you posted on. 



Author's Response:

awesome!

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love Jasper!  He and Edward are the only two men on the who island that aren't CooCoo for cocoa puffs. I just hope that eventually Jasper, Alice, Edward, Bella and Tanya all get off that horrible island and James, Dimetri and Aro become someone's prison bitch. I'm sorry was that too harsh. I love the story and look forward to each update. Thanks for writing. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Ok, I almost like Aro in this chapter. After everything that James and Dimetri have done, they definitely have gotten what they deserve. Well almost. Pictures to be shared with all the other men like he did to Bella would be awesome as well. Followed by a slow and painful death, but other than that, great start on revenge. See ya next update!

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

A very sweet chapter indeed!  It is nice that they have a good day for once. They don't get many of those in Nucking Futs Island. 

Thanks for the lovely chapter,

tsm

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I think James protests a bit too much about the whole slash thing. He enjoyed all three times a little too much not to like it. Thank goodness for Alice and Jasper. James is one sick twist individual but I can't imagine he will give up quite so easily. See ya next week for the next chapter, and of course in the wreck room and over with Sir and Butterfly. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I actually feel sorry for Victoria.  I can't imagine having to put up with James all the time, knowing that he is the one who is in charge of me would make me want to blow my brains out.  Better yet, blow his brains out.  James is pure evil. I'm so glad Edward went to Bella's room and saw that it wasn't her after all. Well, and that they had their wonderful citrusy time together. Hopefully he doesn't fall asleep snuggled up to her in bed. That's all they need is for James to find them like that. Great chapter and, as always, I look forward to more. 

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Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Great chapter. Thank goodness it was Jasper that found them. Loved Jasper and Alice's interaction. Jasper and Edward's conversation was very enlightening too good thing that the wait for the marriage is almost over. See you next chapter. 

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Another amazing chapter as always. Jasper is really having to step it up and act like he is buying into all this craziness to protect Bella and Tanya. I wonder if he knows that James plans to marry Alice?  Somehow I think Jasper will kill him first. And leaving it like that!!!!  Who is it?  Please be Edward!  Bella has been through enough torture at the hands of James and Dimetri that she deserves it to be Edward. Edward would be the only one Jasper would tell where she is anyway, right?  Okay, I'll just wait. See ya next update. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Another wonderful chapter. This one was sweet. I feel like you are being awfully nice lately with the content so something is bound to get pretty awful soon. It's kind of been a while since a major warning has been necessary. Not that I'm complaining because they all definitely deserve a break from the freaks on this island. 

Oh, pictures - love them. Always enjoy visual aids but a warning is nice if they are included just in case someone else in around when I'm reading. Reduces the chance of a shock factor while sitting in a fast food place reading on the iPad over lunch, ya know. ;)

See ya next update. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Great chapter. So thrilled that Aro couldn't, and never will, be able to rape another woman again, including Bella. Jasper thinks aof everything. Now if he could just figure out how to get everyone of that crazy island. See you next time

Oh, looking forward to reading your contribution to the SU4K compilation. Such a wonderful cause. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Sweet, happy times for these four and they sooooooo deserve it. Gat chapter andnim looking forward to the next one. 

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Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Great chapter. They deserve some sweet times together before all hell breaks loose later. Gotta love Tanya for her hands on explanation of how Bella felt with everything James has done to her. See ya next update. 

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Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Sweet chapter. They deserved the little glimpse at happiness is the crazy hell hole they live in. See ya next time 

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Another sweet chapter. You're gong to make us forget the horrible place they are in with these sweet, loving chapters. But maybe that's best for all the characters. They deserve sweet and loving. nd the talk between the girls was hilarious, especially the reaction from the guys. Great as always. I look forward to more soon. 

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Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Oh my!  Update soon please. Wonderful chapter and they finally know how each other feels. See ya soon, I hope. 

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Loved this chapter and the pics. They both needed her first time to be like this. They might want to 'practice' even more before the wedding night. See ya next time and Happy New Year. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Great chapter. Loved all the "cherry popping" for everyone involved.  See ya next time. 

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Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Great chapter. I wonder who Bree's guardian is that is a guest. I can't imagine loosing both parents and then being thrown into this situation. I look forward to the next chapter. 

Good luck with your novel. Is it an original Fic or one of your stories that you already posted but are revamping?

See ya next time. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Wow. Bella is one strong woman. I think I'd have found some way to end it a long time ago. Vlad is even more evil than James. What the hell has he done to her?  I can't wait for the next chapter. See ya next time. 

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I just thought Aro and James were sick and twisted. They really need a very large rescue party to come to the island during the wedding so they can serious fuck up some of those sick bastards. Then in prison, they could get a taste of what they dished out. Although this story is tough to read, I enjoy it because it is different than any other. Thanks for writing and including the necessary warnings at the top of the chapters. See ya next time. 

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Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I really enjoy this story. It's so different.  Even though I love the story, the characters piss me off.  Those med are some pretty sick individuals and the hell that they are putting Bella and Edward through makes me want to stake them nude to the ground and pour hone y on their genitals until it's eaten off by ants. Slow and painful, that is the punishment they deserve. 

Thanks for being brave enough to write this. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

I loved this chapter. I hope that they can keep Bree safe while I that nut house. I wonder how Alice will take the news that she is Edward's kidnapped sister?  Can't wait for more. 

Congratulations on publishing. I'll head over and buy one right now. 

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Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Such a tragic, but lovely chapter. At least Bree (mommy) will not have to live with the daily torture from both Peter and Charlotte. I hope that Akice can keep her promise. Beautiful pix. See ys next time. 

Oh, congrats on the book. I'll have to order it. 

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Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Amazing chapter!  They Re all finally safe. I can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 13 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 71: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue

I loved the Seconf Elizabeth story!  Thank you for adding this into this story and filling in the missing pieces. 

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Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 63 (back to IR)

Wonderful chapter. They all have a lot to get a handle on now that they are back to their families and friends. Edward and Bella have got to start talking to each other. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 64

Loved the chapter. Edward and Bella reread need to talk. Maybe everyone can convince him to talk to her when they get back. Update soon. Congrats on the book. 

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Date: 16 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 65

Loved the chapter. I'm glad that all the girls are taken care of. Now if we can just find James and Aro. Then Edward can get his head on straight and actually talk to Bella. See ya next time. 

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Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 66

Loved the chapter. It's nice to be able to laugh with this story. They all deserve happiness. Can't wait for Edward to get his hands on James. 

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 68

Wow!  The trail to finding Aro and James just took one hell of a twist. I can't wait to read more soon. 

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Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 71

Damn it!  Please let Edward be close by and get there before that psycho rapes her. Edward will kill him with his bare hands if he has the chance. Can't wait for the next chapter. 

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Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 72

Way to go Bella. The only thing that would have been better was if she could have cut it off completely and put in in a food processor. Yep, my husband knows not to mess with this Texas woman!  ;)

So, do they notify the Cullen's and the Swans to let them know about the fire and where their children are?  Can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

It's really messed up... not quite food processor, but still bad. And eventually get notified, but Edward and Bella aren't children :)

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

BD Banner

The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I absolutely love Rose!  Now I think I'd rather Rose get her hands on Jacob. She would do so much more damage than Emmett. ;)

 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This one was almost harder to read than the Jacob chapters. Poor Bella has been through hell and back. Thank goodness that rose could talk some sense into her before she made Edward leave. I don't think he would have gone far though. It would get mighty cold in the car with it snowing but somehow I think he would have braced the elements before taking the chance Jacob could get to her again. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved this one. Can't wait for jinks to report back on Jacob and for Bella to hand Jacob his ass on a platter. Somehow I think she will take care of him in the end. See ya next chapter. 

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Date: 21 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Damn it, why couldn't Emmett get Jacob and wring his little neck. Thank god the guys got there when they did. 

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Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Gotta love Emmett. ;)

They are all ode for each other. Fate definitely pulled that group together. 

See ya next round. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Only one word describes this chapter - HOT!  Can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 21 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Still loving Rose. Edward is such a sweetheart. He reminds me of my husband. I have to go to bed now so I'll see you again some time tomorrow. No work but a ton of errands to run. Yuck!

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it!  Can't wait to read the next chapter. I just do not understand why I haven't read this one before. Hope to see Mr. Denali Man in the next chapter. ;)

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved the EPOV. He sounds like a player but I have a feeling Bella can tame him. On to the next chapter. Why haven't I read this already?

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much TSM ... I have to admit to you that I have not been able to get through this story. I am revising it, correcting the typos, grammar and punctuation. The story won't change, so please just know it's my first story, and I think you will like it. And thanks so very much for the tea cups!!!!!!!!!  xoxox

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That kiss just about melted my iPad!  Loved the chapter. Off to bed now. I've got to go to work in the morning. Damn it! ;)

 

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Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Another wonderful chapter. Sitting at work reading it and hoping that I don't get caught adds a whole new dimension to that last part. On to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm pretty sure that Bella will be a screamer before he's finished with her. That was a bit of a cliffie but the anticipation for the contuation is always so worth it. 



Author's Response:

LOL ... I sooooo wish I had me an Edward!!!! I hope you like him, I know I did!!!! Thanks for the TEEEEEEA cups, TSM!!!!!! xoxoo

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Bella. Edward better start talking fast or her past and insecurities are going to break her and ruin their chances together. I can't wait to read more. Oh, guess what?  I don't have to wait because the story is finished!!  :)

See ya next chapter and don't worry about typos, I'm not. 

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Gotta love a little sexting before bed. I like that Edward isn't rushing into anything but Bella may just explode if he doesn't act soon. Well, then again he might spontaneously combust himself if she keeps sending those messages. 

See ya next chapter. I've got to get to bed since 5:00 AM is only 6 hours away. 



Author's Response:

You are the sweetest, TSM!!!! I am so glad you are into this story. I love reading your reviews. I can't wait until I get it revised. I am able to read it and actually enjoy it myself .... finally!!!  Thanks for all those loverly tea cups toooooo!!!! xoxoxox

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

The afternoon sure was better than the morning for little Wisp. Great chapter. I really enjoy this story and always look forward to the updates. It's one of my favorites. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324331
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Our Fallout

Loved the chapter!  Bullies come in all shapes and sizes and Bella experienced some of the worst out there. I loved Mike's reason for it all "their just jealous". I always tell my students that there are only 3 reasons to make fun of or bully someone: 1. Your jealous of them, 2. You feel bad about yourself, or 3. You like them I the boyfriend or girlfriend kind of may. They are fifth graders so that last one usually eats them out. Then they have to write 25 nice things about the person they picked on/bullied by the next day. It usually helps most of them start to change their ways, not all of them though. 

Sorry for the long winded personal experience. Loved the chapter, especially the lemon. Looking forward to more. 

Unlock Your Heart by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 443]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107117
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm really liking this so far. Looking forward to seeing what Bella does to Mike. This should be fun!  

See ya next time,

tsm

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Another great chapter. She really doesn't handle change well does she?  I look forward to the next chapter. 

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

award


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: In Clear Sight

Boy, Edward is having one crappy day. Alice followed Jasper and is going to get one hell of a surprise. Jasper and Bella are too cute but do they really love each other?  Looking forward to what happens when she learns the whole truth. 

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When a secret is revealed, just days before her wedding, Bella leaves her fiancé Edward, as well as her sisters, in a panic, wondering: will she be able to forgive him in time, or leave him standing at the altar. June Drabble War entry.

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MADE BY: MINA R.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20084 Read Count: 104378
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Loved this story. Sorry I didn't review before now but the constant cliffies made me keep reading and not stop to review. Would I like to read the alternate ending?  Hell yes!  Thanks for writing. 

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407788
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Sticks and Stones

I loved this one!  It was wonderful. I didnt review much but it was because I just couldn't stop reading long enough. I'd love to hear what happened inthe 7 missing years and to read a sequel. Both would be wonderful. Looking forward to hearing more from these three. 

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Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028744
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
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Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 297: Chapter 297

Sir is definitely learning more about his butterfly. And she is enjoying every minute of teaching him just how much she loves serving him. Perfect chapter and pics for the chapter. Looking forward to more as well as more of Involuntary Rapture. 

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Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 271: Chapter 271

I loved that line too. One of the absolute best in the story. Looking forward to tomorrow's update. 

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 295: Chapter 295

Beautiful pictures to go with a beautiful chapter. I love delving into Master's mind. Such an erotic and glorious place to be. See ya next time. 

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Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 273: Chapter 273

Wonderful chapter and a beautiful pic. The artist is very talented. 

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

Sir is pushing her a bit and testing her some more. Somehow, I think she will enjoy it. As for me, not something the hubs and I have tried. That's what fan Fic is for ;)

 

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178

Damn, Sir is quite talented with his flogger and his words. Looking forward to more playtime soon. 

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 186

Yes, she cries Rose but only so she won't fail him, not because she doesn't want to experience the pain and pleasure he is providing. Wonder how Sir will respond?  

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 176: Chapter 176

She was pleasantly surprised to find herself on lily too. So how many of us can fit on one flower anyway?

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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173

Another great chapter. He is so head over heals for Butterfly and he still hasn't completely figured it out yet. When he does, wonder what he'll do?  See ya when ya can. Don't ya love technology!

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Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 279: Chapter 279

Oh, I can't wait for the ceremony. It's going to be amazing!  I can't wait for him to call Bella too. I think in her heart she already knows that it is Edward but I don't think she knows the vampire part. She knows he's different but not how different. See you next time. 

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Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 272: Chapter 272

Loved it as always and the pics are just wow!  Soapy Mayhem is so damn talented!  

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Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

No worries. Just means we get to enjoy chapter 149 twice :)

Both chapters were awesome and fantasy inducing. 

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Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Keep 'Em coming. No pun intended. Ok, who am I kidding?  Of course there was. ;)

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Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Mmmm, to wake up to Sir's voice. Lucky girl. 

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Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

Great chapter. The conversation was one of the best so far since he usually just says goodbye. As for the chapter question, I love the phone calls but I would also like to get to their meeting like in the original version. I'm torn. I'll enjoy reading it either way you write it. 

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Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Thebfic and Butterfly will keep coming because Sir wouldn't have it any other way. Right? ;)

Until next time. 

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

Lucky Butterfly!

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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 171

Please. Let's see that would be LILY!  

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 170

Oh Butterfly if you only knew. That scent is meant to do just that and coupled with all his hotness and you would be jello without a word or touch. 

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Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 269: Chapter 269

I loved the last couple of chapters. Sorry I was delayed in reading and reviewing yesterday's post but life was insane. Great pix both days too. ;) Bella is one lucky woman!

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Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 294: Chapter 294

Wonderful chapter. She accepts him as he is because she loves him. I know that I'd only be concerned with the available status if I were in that situation. She had already said that she didn't care what he looked like or if something was physically wrong with him. Didn't surprise me she only wanted to know if he was married. 

See ya next time. Oh, and I loved the pictures as well. :)

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 137

Hello indeed!  So how is his Butterfly doing with all of this?  Sorry I was Mia last might but feeling a bit under the weather. On to the next chapter. 

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Words can be so much more powerful than a single touch. Both sensually and destructively. Sir's words combined with his touch would probably cause spontaneous combustion!  

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Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 270: Chapter 270

Rose is pushing her luck. Sir is not going to put up with much more from her but then again the punishment she will receive from Emmett just MIT be what she is looking for. ;)

Until next time,

Missy

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Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 261: Chapter 261

So is this it?  Will he turn her or is she already turning?  Please update soon. 

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 177: Chapter 177

Damn!  Just...Damn!  

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Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

You better figure something out Butterfly because the rewards are so much better than the punishments. Well, sometimes. ;-)

Sorry I've been MIA but I'm way behind on all my reading and reviewing. Trying to get caught up but trying to find a job and get the kids ready for school to start is kicking my butt. 



Author's Response:

no worries, I was MIA while on vacation. I'll be home this time tomorrow hopefully.

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Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 296: Chapter 296

Great, amazing wonderful, got as hell!  Loved it. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

I think we would all wear a blindfold for him!  I long line of Butterflies lined up wearing blindfolds waiting for their Sir!

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Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Always there. It would still be pretty creepy but Bella craves it from her Sir. 

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Midnight Caller

I'm so glad that you are posting this as a drabble. I loved it in the contest and voted for it as well. I'm thrilled you won all the areas that you did. It was definitely one of the best entries. I look forward to reading more. 



Author's Response:

thanks sooo much!

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So no more Tanya. Time to stalk Bella. 



Author's Response:

yes!!!!!!