Reviews by baxkitty
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh my. Lots to process.  The Major is very sexy though.

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Aww.  How sweet.  I just love how Jasper calls her his little dove.  I really loved this story.  Just wish I could read about what happens in Voltura.  It would be great if Carlisle could get what is coming to him too. Oh well, I can just imagine.  Thanks again for writing such a terrific story.



Author's Response:

You will read about what happens in Italy. That was just the end of the first part of the story. 

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

WHAT!!!  WTH!

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow Bella.  Possessive much?  Can't blame her though.  Wish I was in her shoes.

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Jasper, a motorcycle and the woods.  Need I say more?  Yum!

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Carlisle, James, and now add Jacob to the mix?  Are Jasper and Bella ever going to get some peace of mind?  This is ridiculous.

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh my gosh!  Is EVERYONE in love with Bella?  Poor Jasper must really be a nervous wreck.  I Love it!

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow.  How much more can Jasper take?  It seems eveyrone is a threat to his and Bella's relationship in one way or another.

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow.  He sure is possessive.  How is he even going to handle the ceremony?

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh boy.  First Carlisle, now James.  Can't they just get a break?

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OMG!  Jasper is going to kill him.  Can't wait!

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 I was so glad to find this story on TWC.  I was on story alert when it was on fanfiction.  I am so glad that you have not decided to just give up writing it.  It really made me angry to know that someone else was stealing your story and posting it elsewhere as theirs.  That is just f*cked up!  Anyway, I am rambling.  I cannot wait to read this story again and see what else you have written.  Thanks for continuing it. :)

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh what I wouldn't give to be Bella right now!  It is just as great as I remembered. 

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yep.  Just as great as I remember.  A shower with Jasper...ahhh.  A girl can dream, right?

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Uh oh.  Carlisle is going to be a problem.  I can feel it.  Does he want Bella to himself?  Hmmm.

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Uh ohn, girl talk.  Bella is going to be so embarrassed.  I can't wait.

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I can't wait to see what Carlisle does when he finds out everyone is gone.  He deserves it bastard.  On the plus side though, Bella is very lucky to have Jasper to love her.  Who wouldn't want to fall asleep like that?

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aww.  He feels bad.  I love the part where he was nuzzling her anad whimpering.  That is just too sweet.

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG!  Very Hot!  Great chapter.

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I think I would pass out too.  Jasper is just too yummy!

Reviewer: baxkitty Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow.  Enough said.