Story is kind of slow,but it is nicethat she isstarting to get better.

Emmett needs to reel it back some.he may think he is her big bro but he isn't.he needs to realize that Jasper is trying to work out his emotions concerning Bella and she is not helping when she won't talk to him.then she pulls thatbonehead stunt with the knife.

sassafrass junction is one of my favorite ones also.i was starting to re-read it when i saw about this story so i went to check it out now i am stuck on it unless it starts to slow down again then i might got back to SJ for a while.

For one thing i don'tunderstand why FF pulled this story? i know there are screwed up people in the world that would probably just report the story because they didn't like the pairings people write about.but what kind of admins would pull them just to make them happy?..OK,thatwas my rant,now for my review....I love the Jasper/Bella pairings,i would love to see agood amateur video made of thisor one of the ohter good stories that are out there with these two.don'tknow if you have written this in the story but iwould love to see Jasper,probably with some help from Em take Anal Eddie apart so he couldsuffer like she did after what the child didi to her.

It will be so nice when Douchward is a smoking pile of ash and Bella is a vampire living her ever after with Jasper.

I think the big bad Major has fallen hard for the little humon.

Oh yeah i keep forgetting your Beta needs a Beta,you keep leaving words out of your sentences or you will add extra ones. i guess some of the mutts are in the parking lot giving Rose some trouble.pretty sure Emmett will try to remove body parts from Golden Boy when he sees him next. nice to see that Rose will be her friend now instead of give her trouble.

I am going to take a break fromthis tory for a while before it puts me to sleep.

Told them what,that they aren't mates and she has seen that him and Bella are.she will realize that she is his mate once she wakes up from the change right? what will be EmoEddie's reaction when he finds out?

Jasper is a whiny baby.

How long will it be before the light bulb goes off over their heads and they realize they are mates,will it take a little push from Alice.wonder when the Red Head will return for round two.what will happen when Eddie shows up.i have a feeling this is the lost story ihave been hunting for for a while.if it is i am so pissed at the smut Nazis for getting the narrow asses on FF to pull the story.i need a few more chapters and i will know for sure.

Ithink i am missing something about this famous idreamofeddy.she has written two stories and neither one of them are finished but eveyone praises her as the second coming because she wrote Peter a that everyone likes and copies,i don't get it.

Vicky is so dead,just a matter of time and she can go to hell and be with James.if that man child wasn't such a little bitch she probably would not have been able to grab Bella.

Glad to see the twins are gone which will piss Aro off to no end which is a good thing.once Bella is brought back from the spirit world she can begin the journey to ending the Volturi once and for all,i know Garrett will enjoy that.

Peter meets his mate,she doesn't believe him,but she would jump his bones in a second after looking in his eyes.he is headed to spend Christmas with his brother who happens to live with the Cullen's just how spastic is she going to get when she finds this out? whatwill Emo Eddie do when she comes walking in with Peter as her mate,should be fun.

Looks like there is more then just Vicky to kill.how long will it be before she will tell Peter about Riley and her daughter and father?